Incest BHAI BAHEN KI SHAADI (incest)

[Sweetboy232]

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Important Note

Main all Readers se bolna chata hu ke jo jo bhi readers bol rahe hai ke main unke nagative comment ke wajah se story aage nahi likh reha to vo sab galt soch rahe hai.....mujhe apke comments se koi dikkat nahi hai....mujhe khud hi lagta hai ki mujhe ikk baar kush der break lena chahiye or fir se story ko samajh kar aap sab ki baaton ko dhiyan mein rakh kar ache se continue karna chahiye......main bahut jaldi fir se new update le kar aauga....yeh story close nahi hui....abi mujhe story ko samajne ke liye toda time chahiye.....koi bhi Reader yeh na soche ke maine nagative comment ke karan likhna band kar diya hai.....ab yeh Mera last massage tha umeed hai aap sab samaj gye hoge.....ab kush din mera koi massage nahi ayega....aap apni achi ja buri kush bhi baat rakh sakte ho.....main fir se bol reha hu main nagative comment ke karan story stop nahi kar reha....khud se kush din break lena chata hu.... thanks

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[Luckyloda]

To
Sweetboy232 bhai

bhaiya yeh mera last massage hai abb mai story complete hone ke baad hi continue karunga sorry for that.

1 : bhaiya apki story bhot hi aachi, yeh story padhte padhte mai kai baar emotional huai (literally roya huu). bhai boht hi achi story hai.

2 : meri ekk riya hai future update ayenge story agge badhe gi too hosake to RAVI aur KOMAL ko separate mat karna, matalb mai yeh nahi kaha raaha ki dono me duriya, jhagada, love , romance sab hona chaiya tabhi too story best or exceptional bane gii.
bus end of the story dono koo saat hi rakha naa.

3: bhaiya mera story ko yaha se update by update wait kar ke continue naa karne ka reason hai apne iss story bohot hi bhaidya likhe appne isse bohot eomtion dal diya. padhte waaqt emotion bahar nikal dete ho bhai app, mai apki story koo bohat hi passionately padhta huu aur mai kai baar ussi me khosa jaata huu. agge kya hoga soche lagta huu.

4 : mai thoda jarurat se jada hai seriously lete huu aur Next upadate ka eagrly wait karta huu.

5: kisi karno se aggar app update nahi dete too mai thoda disturb saa ho jata huu.

6 : App ko lage gaa mai just fiction story boht hi jada serious le rahu but bhaiya story litearlly bohot acchi hai aur story slowly slowly boht achi hote jaa rahe hai aur mai kahunga ki iss hi pace se story chalu rahane dijiye, rahi baat meri mai boht jaruart se jada hi emotional person huu.

7 : Mai unn logo se nahi huu ki update padha aur apne apne kaam me lag gai. mai soche lagta hu agge kya hoga , iss wajah se mai thoda distrub hojata huu.

8: Aur apka update me delay karna aur bhi jada disturb karta hai.

appko best of luck hai bhaiya app ki story complete kijiye, jis speed se update aarahe hai yeh story 1 ya 2 saal me complete hogi tab mai milita hu bhaiya.

mera satth yehi tak thaa,

I'm really sorry for that and thank you to entertain us.

thank you so much

yours good story reader.

भाई तेरा review भी शानदार है इस कहानी की तरह......


Waise सच कहूँ तो मुझे भी मजा 1 साथ padhne में ही आता है.... 1 2 writer ko छोडकर बाकी की कहानी नहीं padhta......जब तक कम से कम 15 20 update na आ जाए

 

[Sweetboy232]

भाई तेरा review भी शानदार है इस कहानी की तरह......


Waise सच कहूँ तो मुझे भी मजा 1 साथ padhne में ही आता है.... 1 2 writer ko छोडकर बाकी की कहानी नहीं padhta......जब तक कम से कम 15 20 update na आ जाए

 

[Sweetboy232]

Aaj Ghar mein Diwali ki taiyari chal rahi hai....to aaj mein toda busy hu Isliye shayad hi Aaj update de pau.... isliye aaj wait mat karna....kyuki update abi incomplete hai...aaj main pura din busy rahne wala hu to update complete nahi kar pauga..... update kal ayega.... Thanks

 

[park]

Aaj Ghar mein Diwali ki taiyari chal rahi hai....to aaj mein toda busy hu Isliye shayad hi Aaj update de pau.... isliye aaj wait mat karna....kyuki update abi incomplete hai...aaj main pura din busy rahne wala hu to update complete nahi kar pauga..... update kal ayega.... Thanks

intezaar rahega....

 

[Monkey D. Dragon]

Plot is very nice like legitimate incest story. There needs to be some improvements if u don't mind I can give some suggestions not to change the story or any requests like that.
I have read till the last update and here is what I observed.
Some emotional scene were very unrealistic like crying over simple things. Or childish ideologies of komal. Amature Ravi lacking man's material. And unnecessary stretching of incidents.
Keep the emotional scene logical and realistic.
As a hero humbleness is good but Ravi is too much humble hope soon he will grown into a man not physically I mean mentally.
If it's a long story then make more incident in an epesode differently or detailed incident. Dont waste words on daily chores unless it's needed. Make the incident connection logical and in an order.
Well I guess I said too much, but I only said above lines cause I liked the story and want to see it completed amazingly (Tragedy or happy ending it's your choice )otherwise I would just skip it. Havvq good day

 

[kas1709]

Aaj Ghar mein Diwali ki taiyari chal rahi hai....to aaj mein toda busy hu Isliye shayad hi Aaj update de pau.... isliye aaj wait mat karna....kyuki update abi incomplete hai...aaj main pura din busy rahne wala hu to update complete nahi kar pauga..... update kal ayega.... Thanks

intezaar rahega....

 

[Sweetboy232]

Plot is very nice like legitimate incest story. There needs to be some improvements if u don't mind I can give some suggestions not to change the story or any requests like that.
I have read till the last update and here is what I observed.
Some emotional scene were very unrealistic like crying over simple things. Or childish ideologies of komal. Amature Ravi lacking man's material. And unnecessary stretching of incidents.
Keep the emotional scene logical and realistic.
As a hero humbleness is good but Ravi is too much humble hope soon he will grown into a man not physically I mean mentally.
If it's a long story then make more incident in an epesode differently or detailed incident. Dont waste words on daily chores unless it's needed. Make the incident connection logical and in an order.
Well I guess I said too much, but I only said above lines cause I liked the story and want to see it completed amazingly (Tragedy or happy ending it's your choice )otherwise I would just skip it. Havvq good day

Bhai main aapki baat ko samaj gya ...but mein ikk baat bolna chata hu ke main har time komal or Ravi ke bare mein hi nahi likh sakta...jadi mein sirf komal or Ravi ke bare mein hi likhuga to agle 2 update mein story end ho jayegi....or maine kabi kush faltu nahi likha sab character ka apna apna role hai...or har character ko apni baat rakhne ka mokka milna chahiye.....mai bus main charector par hi focus kar reha hu....Maine kush faltu conversation add nahi kiya.....kya aap mujhe private mein bata sakte hai ke aapko story mein kya faltu laga...ta jo mein next update mein kush sudhar kar pau....jadi aap story ko padoge to mujhe acha lagega nahi to aage aapki marji aap story ko padana chate ho ja skip karna chate ho.... thanks for visiting my Story

 

[StrongBoy05]

To

Thank a lot bhai...jo aapne story ko itna pasand kiya....mujhe pata hai aap us din se gussa ho....ikk baar private mein aao mujhe aapse kush baat karna hai....once again thanks for your compliment..

Sweetboy232 bhai

# Bhai mai Ekk positive note pe yeh story ko update by update discontinued kar raha thaa.

# But mujhe laga apse kuchi kadhwi (Negative) baate share karni chahiye. Aur kuch personal suggestion dena chahiye.

# Mujhe pata hai apko negative baate acchi nahi lagti par sabkuch Mitha mitha rahe gaa ya phir sab log ache hi comment karne gee too apki story me jo potential hai iss flatform ki BEST ya ONE Of BEST story banne kaa woh story ek Average naa ban jaye. Hamari story sabse best bane yehi ekk TRUE fan ki cahata hoti hai apni story keliye.

# Rahi baat meri iss Story ko Update by Update discontinued karne ka true reason hai.

# Apka Tadapa-Tadapa ke update dena.
Mai ekk emotional person hu bhai mujse bardash nahi hota.
( Apke bhi kuch personal reason hai update ko Delay karne ke I'understand)
par delay se mai disturb Hojata hu, that' why I discontinued.

# 1 ya 2 saal bad jab story complete hogi tab milunga for me this is emotional exist


# Maine first comment kaha tha mai apko story ko bohot pasand karta hu aur bohot hi passionately padhataa huu.

# Apki story fiction hai but shuru se story realistic way me aur logically gradually agge badhi hai.

# Apne story ka Bar High sate kar diya hai. too story ke character ka kuch illogical act apne characteristics se opposite behaviour without any reason woh ununderstanble hai.

# Hosake to future me iss suddenly changes ke reason likho yaa phir yeh agar koi mistake hai too repeat na hoo.

This is my only negative criticism

Agar meri baat ka bura lage to I'm sorry

Mai yeh sab iss liye likha raha hu kyu ki mai iss story ko apna manta huu.


Again I'm really sorry Bhai

Best of luck

 

[Rajesh0091]

भाई तेरा review भी शानदार है इस कहानी की तरह......


Waise सच कहूँ तो मुझे भी मजा 1 साथ padhne में ही आता है.... 1 2 writer ko छोडकर बाकी की कहानी नहीं padhta......जब तक कम से कम 15 20 update na आ जाए

Bhai mera bhi same hai

 

[Sweetboy232]

Sabi reader se meri request hai... Sab readers comment mein pta nahi kya kya bol rahe hai....kush samaj nahi aa reha kiski sunu kiski na sunu.... Next update adha likh to Diya hai...or kal complete kar ke update dene ke bare mein socha tha but comment padh padh ke mera dimag puri tarh disturb ho gya.... isliye main story se kush din break Lena chata hu.....ab kush din next update nahi ayega..... aapko sab ke jese jese comment karne hai kar lo main kush nahi boluga..... thanks