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[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Aisa kuchh to apne Nainu bhaya ne kiya tha, pr ho sakta hai ki apne werewolf bhaya ka bhi man hone lga ho...

Nainu unkil ki wajah se hi to kaha tha.. Shadi ke baad karib 1 saal tak hame update ke liye tarshate rahe... Wahi dar tha yaha bhi ki kahi werewolf bro bhi dulhan dhudhne to nahi nikal gaye !

 

[Abhinav chahan]

Hmm sahi...kaha but abhi veer Vegas se lauta hn to author ko story ko connect karne mein time lagega ki story Kahn se aage badahyen...so we have to wait and support the author....

Koi baat nahi itni dhasu story ke liya itnaa to chalta hai....

 

[Hiran]

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Apun bhi Mr.Xf ke contest me khada hoega guys. Ju log apne ko vote diyo. Fir milke naye naye arcs bhi shuru aur khatam karne hai. Bhulna mat.

Bhai vote kaise Dena Bhai ??

 

[Werewolf]

Ye kya tha???? Kya tha ye???
Goodbye title kaun rakhta h??? Title padh k hi meri himmat nhi ho rahi thi update padhne ki...
mujhe laga aapne hamari Suhana ko tata bye bye kar dia... who does that? Uske baad little suhana dikha di... Pakke se laga tha mujhe Suhana will be no more... But thankfully.... Finally you saved her... Thank you!!! Usse kahani se na hatana k liye... Warna meri gun taiyaar thi aap k liye...

Pehle poora update toh padh liya kar nadaan ladki.

This update!!! Ohh god!!! This update...! It had everything I wanted... Sab kuch jo main dekhna chahti thi Suhana k baare me isme wo sab dikha dia aapne... And how beautifully you showed it...

Poora dikhaya hai apun ne.

Aur sabse khaas baat kya thi pata h? That butterfly.... Omg!!! You came out of your comfort zone and tried to implement something new. Aisa pehle kisi update me dekhne ko nhi mila hume...

Shuruaat me aapne butterfly ko dikhaya. Par wo aise hi nhi tha... Har ek scenes me butterfly ka reference beech beech me baar baar aata raha... You compared her life with that butterfly... See! This is what impresses me most. The little details....

Yes you are right! I tried something different here. Don't know how it came out but I did best from my side.

Aap baar baar uss butterfly word ko beech me laate rahe suhana ki situations se compare karne k liye... This is a technique... Jidhar aap upar ek particular chiz mention karte ho aur update k khatam hote hote aap uss chiz ka use karte ho mainly for the comparison or to express it to the readers more. H na??? Kya main sahi hu?? Werewolf Sir???

You are almost right.
Damn! You are knowledgeable!

Little Kaera sonia and Ava... So cutee...
yaha pe aapne kitni cleverly wo scene dikhaya. Readers ne ye notice ni kia ki aap ne na sirf butterfly ko baar baar use kia balki... Teeno friends k beech ki personal life bhi dikhaayi h...
sonia ka reaction butterfly dekhne k baad... Uske baad Kaera ka reaction... It shows that how matured she was at that time. Aur kyu thi woh? Because Kishor's influence was already at the beginning stage in her life... Uss fake baba ki teachings follow kar Kishor ne already Kaera ko dheere dheere ek machine banana shuru kar dia tha...

Ohhh! You noticed that too. Good job.

Even ava was so innocent then... She asked 'Will it die too?' Awww my heart...
Lekin Kaera ko dekho... Usse pata bhi ni tha ki wo kya ban ne jaa rahi h... My heart aches for her so much... This scene had so many information which readers might have missed. Aur yahi aapki khaas baat h...

Meri baat se shayad most of the audience agree karegi ki flashbacks are the most irritating and borings part of the story... Right? Ab maano na maano yaar... But we all know it bores us. Par iss story k saath kabhi aisi koi dikkat aai hi nhi mere saath.... Pata nhi aisa kya h... Are hum toh Villains k past dekhe baithe h.. aur wo bhi itne sad the ki unke liye tak ro diye... There's one thing out of numerous many things that you know how to do it well Sir is how to show flashbacks...

In my stories, past plays an important role. Always!

Literally suhana ki pokri history dikha daali aapni iss ek update me... Pushkar ka bhi poora scene aa gya .. uski family issues ka nhi tha but I don't think it matters anyway... Suhana ko DID hua... Like you went into everything... Even shaadi bhi dikhayi aapne... Scene shifting ka toh kuch pucho hi mat... Mujhe pta hi nhi chalta ki scene shift kab ho gya .. itna smooth rehta h...

Thanks!

Udhar aapne divya ki shadi ki baat ki aur fir next line me mumbai me shehnaiya dikhaate hue vegas se mumbai aa gaye aap. The switch here... aap back and forth do places me itni smoothly switch karte ho ki mujhe pata hi nhi chalta... Woh toh accha h ki aap **** laga dete ho... Warna pata hi na lage aur...

Apni baat hi alag hai.

ab thoda update k baare me bhi keh du...
Suhii ka past bohut kharab tha... Sach me... Siblings k saath comparison itna relatable tha mere liye... Suhi k liye jitna appreciate karu utna kam h... Sab kuch pta hone k baad bhi wo sonu ko support karti rahi aur literally usne 1% bhi jealousy nhi dikhai .. like 1% bhi nhi... Ittu sii bhi nhi ... Main hoti to main sonu k upar kood jaati sach me... Respect to Suhiii for loving her sisoo soo much... She's the best sis you can have... Upar se itne time tak wo usse protect karti rhi... Sonu ko jis din pata chalega to kya reaction hoga uska?

Indeed. Suhana is the best sis you can have. But I'll say one of the best sis.

Ek aisa update jisme main character ki presence tak nhi thi... Poora update ek side character ki story pe tha... And look at the people... And responses... Aise develop kiya jaata h ek side character... Main 99% sure hu agar same chiz kisi dusri kahani me hui hoti... Log bhaag gaye hote ... It's a fact.... I'm reading stories here for 2 years... And I can say I've noticed such things... People don't like to be on flashbacks that much. But here... Ahem ahem....

Now that you've mentioned it. Yeah! You're right. Isme Veer tha hi nahi.

we got to see Suhi's grandfather... Kitne pyaare insan the wo... Shayad ab wo present me nhi h Suhi k liye... His teaching... 'samay ghav ko thik nhi karta. Wo sirf hume unke sang jeena sikhata h.' Wowww!!!

Yeah! Unfortunately he's no more.

These line are actually very very deep. Time doesn't heal wounds. It only teaches us how to live with them.

we got to know that Kaera doens't likes butterflies... Although she loves flowers. We saw it in her past... But my question is that... Does she still loves them? Kya Veer Kaera ko flowers gift karega to wo usse accept karegi?

We'll have to see. Kya hoga Veer Kaera ko flowers de. Ye dekhna padega ki uska kya reaction rehta hai.

I also want to point out two more things... Again the detailing... Aap aisa har baar kyu karte ho?

bullet description again... Bullet andar jaati toh shrapnels me break ho jaati h... Suhana lucky thi jo uski arteries aur bone me bullet hit nhi ki... Who does that? Aap ye bhi likhte ki suhana bas bach gayi. Are baba toh bhi koi kuch nhi bolta .. but you went all that far to bring out the logic too... Wo bachi to kyu bachi... The in-depth detailing we have here...

Aww! Thanks! But you know , I love to put details.

Pushkar scenes. The fight .. it was very simple yet so engaging... Kuch khaas action nhi tha uss scene me... Lekin khaas kya tha? The atmosphere!!! Suhii ka pushkar ko confront karna... Literally main soch rahi thi ab kya hoga... Ab kya hoga... Kya suhi ne hi maara h pushkar ko... Wo ek secret iss poore scene ko kheechta gaya ... Action ki zaroorat hi nhi thi...

and then their trafic fate... Black sheep tha Department me... I knew it .. i just knew it... Koi na koi hoga hi yaha pe... Aur main guess kar rhi hu veer ne hi iska khulasa kia hoga jaane se pehle...

Indeed. Veer caught the black sheep.

pictures were as always... Too accurate... Ye aap kon se keywords daal k dhundhte ho pictures?? Haaaa??? Bata bhi do... Aapne apni jaadu tona wali baat to batai nhi... Yahi bata dijiye...

That's a secret.

Aur ye kya? Break le liye? aise time pe kon story leave karta h... what will happen to us? Next update k liye main kitna wait me hu... But aap to... Nikal liye...

Naye arc ke liye sochna padega na. Kyuki uske baare me kuch bhi nahi socha tha. So, path banaane me samay lagega.

leave it... Thank you for Saving suhii... I'm happy for this at least... waiting for update 110. Veer's return to home. Please show kaera and arohi more now. Bbye.... Care... And... Love your work...

Thanks a lot dear.
Itna bada revo. Damn!!! Kaafi mehnat se ju ne kaafi cheeze point out kii hai likh ke. Thanks! Keep supporting dear!

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai vote kaise Dena Bhai ??

Abhi nahi. Kuch din baad aaega contest. Lounge me. Tab waha jaa ke vote dena.

 

[Amitgupta]

ये कहानी कहा से ली गई है किसी को मालूम है क्या अगर किसी को मालूम है तो प्लीज़ लिंक forward kro

 

[Death Kiñg]

ये कहानी कहा से ली गई है किसी को मालूम है क्या अगर किसी को मालूम है तो प्लीज़ लिंक forward kro

Apne dimaag ka link dene ka Werewolf.

 

[@Shadow]

Werewolf Brother, I have read all the updates of this story of yours. Mere Paas Kehne Ko Jayada Kuch Nahi Hai. Or Mene Kabhi Kisi Forum Par Koi Review Nhi Diya, Isiliye Koi Baat Galat Lage To Mind Mat Karna.
Tumhari Ye Story Waqai Kabile Tareef Hai.
Jis Tarah Se Tumne VEER Jaisa EK Sadharan Ladka Jo Bachpan se Hi Har Kisi Se Dutkaara Jata Raha, JisKe Apne Usko Ek Useless Person Samjhte HAI. Use Apne Raste Ka Kaata Samjhte Hai. Uske Jariye Sari Jameen Jaydaad Hadapna Chahte Hai. Or Ye Sab Paane Ke Liye Bo Kisi Bhi Had Tak Jaane Ko Taiyar Hai.

To Wahi..

Veer Jo Ek Sharirik Or Mansik Roop Se Abhi Bhaut Durbal Hai Ki, Bo Agar Kuch KrnA Bhi Chahe To Kuch Kar Nhi Sakta. Usko Ye Bhi Nhi Pata Ki Kyu Uske Ghar KE Log Hi Usse Itni Nafrat Karte Hai Ki Use Apni Aankho Ke Saamne Tak Nhi Dekhna Chahte. Humesha Uske Sath Geroon Ki Tarah Vyavahar Karte Hai ,Uski Apni Sagi Maa Jo Bachpan Me Hi Use Akela Chhod Kar Chali Gayi Or Kabhi Usko Dekhne Tak Na Aayi. Uska Pita Jisne Kabhi Usko Samay Nahi Diya Bas Apni Jhooti Shaan Ko Badhane Me Laga Raha. Uske Ghar Me Keval Kavya, Or Uske Dada Jaise Ek Do Log Hi Hai Jo Usse Humdardi Rakhte Hai. Baaki Ragini, Aarohi, Uski Sauteli Maa Shweta OR Behen Bhumika Jinhe Koi Fark Nhi Padta Bo Mare Ya Jiye.

Uske Dono Chachere Bhai Uske LIYE Har Baar Naya Shadyantra Rachte Rahte Hai. Use Kisi Bhi Tareeke Se Ghar Or Jayadad Se Bedakhal Karna Chahte Hai. Or Usme Bo Bahut Had Tak Kamayab Bhi Ho Jaate Hai..

Lekin Ye Sab Ye Nahi Jante The Ki 'VEER' Ki Kismat Ko Kuch OR Hi Manjoor Tha. Yaha Entry Hoti Hai Ek Ese Character Ki Jo Anjane Me Uski Poori Life Ko Badal Kar Rakh Deti Hai. Wo Ladki Sonia, Jiski Gaadi Se Veer Ka Accident Hota Hai. Yahi Veer Ko LIFE Naya Mod Milta Hai, Jab Bo Gaadi Ke Sath Sath Ek System "Pari' Se Bhi Takra Jata Hai. Or Yahan Se Aage Uski Zindagi Me Nidhi Ek Inocent Lady Jo Veer Ko Us Waqt Sahara Deti Hai Jab Uske Sage Akela Chhod Dete Hai. Yahan Se Aage Ka Safar Jisme. Veer Ki Zindagi Me Shreya,Juhi, Kaira, Suhana, Sonia, Divya, Natalia, Aarohi, Kavya, Tejal, Bhawana, Aatish,Slogan Nik, Mike, Aadi... Characters Aate Hai Jo Is Story' Ko Romanchak Bana Dete Hai. IS Kahani Ka Har Update Or Character Apne Aap Me Kaafi Dilchasp Hai. Aapne Jis Tarah Se Is Story Me Jeevan Ke Har Pehlu Ko Dikhane Ki Kosis Ki Hai , Isko Padkar Kabhi Lagta Hi Nhi Ki Hum Koi Kahani Pad Rahe Ho Balki, Aisa Lagta Hai Jaise Ye Humare Saamne Ho Rahi Ghatna Ho. Kahani Ke Har Character Aisa Hai Ki , Jane Se Pehle Apni Ek Chhap Chhod Jata Hai.

Aisaa Bahut Kam Hota Hai Ki Kisi Kahani Ko Padne Ke Baad Usse Ek Judav Mahsus Ho. Kayi Baar Hum Story Pad Kar Do Chaar Din Yaad Rakhte Hai Or Phir Bhool Jate Hai.

Abhi Tak Maine Jitni Bhi Kahaniya Padi Hai. Is Forum Par Tumhari Ye Kahani Un Khas Kahaniyo Me Se Ek Hai. Jise Padne 'Me Is Forum Par Aata Hu. Is Forum SE Pehle Me Xossip Par Stories Read Karta Tha. Wahan Bhi Kuch Hi Story Or Writers The. Jo Apni Kahani Ko Aise Likhte The Ki Apko Kahani Kam Kisi Ki Beeti Hui Zindgi Zyada Lage , Unme Se Kuch Hi Naam Or Kahani Ese Hai Jinhe Me Abhi Tak Bhool Nhi Paya Hu. Jaise "SGP. 2009 "The Incomplete Intention' ,. Agni Das , Or Is Forum Par Anandsngh12 Ki Saajan , Saand Or Tumhari Ye Story "Baadshah - The Tales Of Debauchery. Jo Baaki Sab SE Alag Hai. Dusri Stories Me Jahan Writer Ek Dusre Ki Kahaniyon Ko Copy Ki Kosis Karte Hai. Wahi Aapne Is Story Me System "Pari' Jaisi Ek Taakat Ko Darsaya Hai Jo Apki Is Kahani Ko Baakiyon Se Alag Banati Hai. Shuruaat Me Jab Mene He Story Padi Thi To Aisaa Hi Laga THA Jaise Ye Bhi Baakiyon Ki Tarah Hu Hogi. Jisme Hero Manhoos Banke Paida Hota Hai Or Uske Maa Baap Uske Bhai Behen Use Kutte Ki Tarah Marte Peethte Rehte Hai. Or Phir Writers Story Ko Chhod Kar Bhaag Jata Hai. Or Kahani Khatam.

Lekin Isme Aisa KUCH nhi Hua. Ye Kahani Apni Raftaar Se Aage Bhadti Ja Rahi Hai. Jo Ki Ye Darshata Hai Ki Aap Ke Liye Ye Story Kitna Maayne Rakhti Hai.
Story Ke Kuch Last Wale Update Kafi Emotional The Khaskar Suhana Wala Update Jisme Uski Jaan Jaate Jaate Bachi Hai. Is Update Me Hume Pata Chala Ki Uski Beeti Hui Zindagi Apne Andar Bahut Dard Samete Hue Hai. Jo Veer Ke Aaane Se Bahut Had Tak Kam Ho Chuka Hai. Veer Uske Liye Uski Life Me Ek Naya Savera Bankar Aya Hai.

Me Apni Vaani Ko Yahi Viram Deta Hu.
Intzar Rahega Naye Updates Ka Jisme Village Arc. Ke Sath Sath Ye Bhi Pata Chalega Ki Naya System Wala Vyakti Kon Hai???

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

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Apun bhi Mr.Xf ke contest me khada hoega guys. Ju log apne ko vote diyo. Fir milke naye naye arcs bhi shuru aur khatam karne hai. Bhulna mat.

Sahi decision liya hai aap ne. Maine kaha hi tha ki aap ko es contest me hissa lena chahiye.
Apne saare readers ko private message kar dijiye contest ke air hone se pehle.

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Ye kya tha???? Kya tha ye???
Goodbye title kaun rakhta h??? Title padh k hi meri himmat nhi ho rahi thi update padhne ki...
mujhe laga aapne hamari Suhana ko tata bye bye kar dia... who does that? Uske baad little suhana dikha di... Pakke se laga tha mujhe Suhana will be no more... But thankfully.... Finally you saved her... Thank you!!! Usse kahani se na hatana k liye... Warna meri gun taiyaar thi aap k liye...

This update!!! Ohh god!!! This update...! It had everything I wanted... Sab kuch jo main dekhna chahti thi Suhana k baare me isme wo sab dikha dia aapne... And how beautifully you showed it...

Aur sabse khaas baat kya thi pata h? That butterfly.... Omg!!! You came out of your comfort zone and tried to implement something new. Aisa pehle kisi update me dekhne ko nhi mila hume...

Shuruaat me aapne butterfly ko dikhaya. Par wo aise hi nhi tha... Har ek scenes me butterfly ka reference beech beech me baar baar aata raha... You compared her life with that butterfly... See! This is what impresses me most. The little details....

Aap baar baar uss butterfly word ko beech me laate rahe suhana ki situations se compare karne k liye... This is a technique... Jidhar aap upar ek particular chiz mention karte ho aur update k khatam hote hote aap uss chiz ka use karte ho mainly for the comparison or to express it to the readers more. H na??? Kya main sahi hu?? Werewolf Sir???

Little Kaera sonia and Ava... So cutee...
yaha pe aapne kitni cleverly wo scene dikhaya. Readers ne ye notice ni kia ki aap ne na sirf butterfly ko baar baar use kia balki... Teeno friends k beech ki personal life bhi dikhaayi h...
sonia ka reaction butterfly dekhne k baad... Uske baad Kaera ka reaction... It shows that how matured she was at that time. Aur kyu thi woh? Because Kishor's influence was already at the beginning stage in her life... Uss fake baba ki teachings follow kar Kishor ne already Kaera ko dheere dheere ek machine banana shuru kar dia tha...

Even ava was so innocent then... She asked 'Will it die too?' Awww my heart...
Lekin Kaera ko dekho... Usse pata bhi ni tha ki wo kya ban ne jaa rahi h... My heart aches for her so much... This scene had so many information which readers might have missed. Aur yahi aapki khaas baat h...

Meri baat se shayad most of the audience agree karegi ki flashbacks are the most irritating and borings part of the story... Right? Ab maano na maano yaar... But we all know it bores us. Par iss story k saath kabhi aisi koi dikkat aai hi nhi mere saath.... Pata nhi aisa kya h... Are hum toh Villains k past dekhe baithe h.. aur wo bhi itne sad the ki unke liye tak ro diye... There's one thing out of numerous many things that you know how to do it well Sir is how to show flashbacks...

Literally suhana ki pokri history dikha daali aapni iss ek update me... Pushkar ka bhi poora scene aa gya .. uski family issues ka nhi tha but I don't think it matters anyway... Suhana ko DID hua... Like you went into everything... Even shaadi bhi dikhayi aapne... Scene shifting ka toh kuch pucho hi mat... Mujhe pta hi nhi chalta ki scene shift kab ho gya .. itna smooth rehta h...

Udhar aapne divya ki shadi ki baat ki aur fir next line me mumbai me shehnaiya dikhaate hue vegas se mumbai aa gaye aap. The switch here... aap back and forth do places me itni smoothly switch karte ho ki mujhe pata hi nhi chalta... Woh toh accha h ki aap **** laga dete ho... Warna pata hi na lage aur...

ab thoda update k baare me bhi keh du...
Suhii ka past bohut kharab tha... Sach me... Siblings k saath comparison itna relatable tha mere liye... Suhi k liye jitna appreciate karu utna kam h... Sab kuch pta hone k baad bhi wo sonu ko support karti rahi aur literally usne 1% bhi jealousy nhi dikhai .. like 1% bhi nhi... Ittu sii bhi nhi ... Main hoti to main sonu k upar kood jaati sach me... Respect to Suhiii for loving her sisoo soo much... She's the best sis you can have... Upar se itne time tak wo usse protect karti rhi... Sonu ko jis din pata chalega to kya reaction hoga uska?

Ek aisa update jisme main character ki presence tak nhi thi... Poora update ek side character ki story pe tha... And look at the people... And responses... Aise develop kiya jaata h ek side character... Main 99% sure hu agar same chiz kisi dusri kahani me hui hoti... Log bhaag gaye hote ... It's a fact.... I'm reading stories here for 2 years... And I can say I've noticed such things... People don't like to be on flashbacks that much. But here... Ahem ahem....

we got to see Suhi's grandfather... Kitne pyaare insan the wo... Shayad ab wo present me nhi h Suhi k liye... His teaching... 'samay ghav ko thik nhi karta. Wo sirf hume unke sang jeena sikhata h.' Wowww!!!

These line are actually very very deep. Time doesn't heal wounds. It only teaches us how to live with them.

we got to know that Kaera doens't likes butterflies... Although she loves flowers. We saw it in her past... But my question is that... Does she still loves them? Kya Veer Kaera ko flowers gift karega to wo usse accept karegi?

I also want to point out two more things... Again the detailing... Aap aisa har baar kyu karte ho?

bullet description again... Bullet andar jaati toh shrapnels me break ho jaati h... Suhana lucky thi jo uski arteries aur bone me bullet hit nhi ki... Who does that? Aap ye bhi likhte ki suhana bas bach gayi. Are baba toh bhi koi kuch nhi bolta .. but you went all that far to bring out the logic too... Wo bachi to kyu bachi... The in-depth detailing we have here...

Pushkar scenes. The fight .. it was very simple yet so engaging... Kuch khaas action nhi tha uss scene me... Lekin khaas kya tha? The atmosphere!!! Suhii ka pushkar ko confront karna... Literally main soch rahi thi ab kya hoga... Ab kya hoga... Kya suhi ne hi maara h pushkar ko... Wo ek secret iss poore scene ko kheechta gaya ... Action ki zaroorat hi nhi thi...

and then their trafic fate... Black sheep tha Department me... I knew it .. i just knew it... Koi na koi hoga hi yaha pe... Aur main guess kar rhi hu veer ne hi iska khulasa kia hoga jaane se pehle...

pictures were as always... Too accurate... Ye aap kon se keywords daal k dhundhte ho pictures?? Haaaa??? Bata bhi do... Aapne apni jaadu tona wali baat to batai nhi... Yahi bata dijiye...

Aur ye kya? Break le liye? aise time pe kon story leave karta h... what will happen to us? Next update k liye main kitna wait me hu... But aap to... Nikal liye...

leave it... Thank you for Saving suhii... I'm happy for this at least... waiting for update 110. Veer's return to home. Please show kaera and arohi more now. Bbye.... Care... And... Love your work...

Yaad rakhna aap ko bhi contest me participate karna hai.