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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,446 82.6%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.5%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 239 13.7%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 38 2.2%

  • Total voters
    1,750

Werewolf

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Naina

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Agla scene yahi tha ki sabhi hall me baithe hue the aur ek ajeeb sii khaamoshi chhaayi hui thi.

Na koi kuch bol paa raha tha na hi kar paa raha tha. Mahaul behad hi awkward ho chuka tha.

Aur ye ajeeb sa sannaata jese uss awkwardness ko aur badhaata jaa raha tha.
ab ye kya hai :bat:
are kam se kam us sumitra ka gala kaat deti raagini :bat: khoon hi khoon chaaro aurr .... phir ye dekha vivek gusse mein aag babula hoke raagini ko jaan se maar deta, phir veer vivek ka gala daba deta .... phir........ to maujja hi maujja :D

naa... main maanti ye baat ki aise khamosh rahenge sabhi..... are koi to ek kulhadi laake do raagini ko :chop: taaki ek do kirdaaro ko bali chadha de :chop:
 

Naina

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You were sad last night. Kyuki aap apni Mom ki train ka naam nahi padh paaye the. And aapko laga ki ab aap na jaane fir kabhi mil paoge ya nahi. So don't worry! Aapne bhale hi read na kiya ho but I read it. Train ka naam xxxxxxxxxxxxx hai. Ab aapko sirf unn stations par dhyaan dena hai jaha wo train rukti hai. Unhi kisi stations par aapki Mom utri hogi.]
dekha naina ka khauf..... :laugh:
kaise tote ki tarah bolne lag gayi . ... lo ji bhaavna jis train mein thi wo information bhi mil gayi hhai :D
Lekin.... Lekin.... Lekin...
Lekin Iska hargiz ye matlab nahi ki ye bach gayi hai mere revos se... :evillaugh:

Pari teri to aisi taisi :chop:
 
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Naina

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Fuck you chor.... Marr jaa tu... Tere muh me keede pade... *Sniff* Dad ne itna daanta mujhe ughhhuuuu...."

*Slaaaaammmm*

*Baaaangggg*

*Dhhhiiiiiiiiiisshooommmm"
ab ye kaisi aawaazien hai :laugh:
Btw wo teddy 🧸 thodi na lohe ya wood se bana hai jo aisi aawaaz nikle :D
I think writer Werewolf ko khush karne ke liye suhaana ko abhi ke abhi kisi lohe ya wood se bane cheej pe waar karni chahiye taaki aisi aawaazien aaye ,chaahe iske chalte suhaana ke hath hi kyun na tut jaaye :D
 
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Vivek ne ragini ko insult karna chaha lekin suman ne pure situation badal diya.veer ring lautane gaya he wahan suhana ki gussewali avtar delhi kar wo pareshan ho gaya .Diamond ko leke ranga aur atish dono pareshan he..
 

Sauravb

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Vivek ne ragini ko insult karna chaha lekin suman ne pure situation badal diya.veer ring lautane gaya he wahan suhana ki gussewali avtar delhi kar wo pareshan ho gaya .Diamond ko leke ranga aur atish dono pareshan he..
 

Naina

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1) galti to raagini ne bhi ki thi.... Shaadi se pehle, shaadi ke baad itne din sath rehne ke baad bhi ushe pata nahi chali kya ye baat ki uska pati kus type ka kamina hai....thik hai mana ki uske samne natak kiya hoga ..par Jo wo khud ke hi bhai veer ke sath kiya tha aur sab kuch uske saamne hi ho raha tha phir bhi usko ek baar khayal nahi aaya ki vivek uske sath kuch galat kar sakta hai.... kyunki vivek ka ravaya dekh koi bhi keh de ki wo kitna laalchi aur matlabi kisam ka insaan hai.... jab apne bhai ka saga na hua to musibat waqt khak apni biwi ke sath deta wo....
raagini pehle se savdhan rehti aur uspe viswas na karti to aisi situation ka saamna karna na padta...

2) vivek to tha hi laalchi matlabi insaan,,ab kamina pan pe utar aaya....
waise yahan ek confusion hai.... agar usko apni biwi pe viswas hi nahi hai to sasuraal aaya kyun hai .... kya is dar se ki raagini yun ghar chhod ke apne mayke rehni lagi, iske chalte kahi log baatein banane na lag jaaye..... ya aur hi kaaran hai.....

3) :D waise mana ki vivek raagini pe shaq kar raha hai ... ki kahi veer aur raagini ke bich kuch hai to nahi.....
waise der saber hi sahi uske is shaq ko yakin mein jarur tabdeel karegi wo tharki alien pari :laugh:

4) veer ko Alpha male hi kyun...ek hi baar mein direct sigma male bana deti kamini pari.... :lol: tab tharak ka level aur zyada high hota us pari ke hisap se :laugh: ab bichari raagini ko koi karishma hi bachaye us tharki pari se :D

5) suman ki baatein aur jis tevar ke sath wo bol rahi thi... isse to hargiz na lage ki koi aam aurat hogi... I mean to say.. lage ki jarur koi amir aur rashuk wale gharane se belong karti ho...
waise usne bahot achha kiya.... jis tarah se aain mauke par aake bilkul muh tod jawab deke vivek ki bolti bandh kar di thi. .. sach mein Prashansaniya tha.... tarif karne ko jee kare uski
lekin ......
ye bhi ek sach hai ki agar us waqt vivek, sumitra aur karunesh ko pata lag jata ki veer aur suman ke bich kya kya hua tha... tab kya hota :lol:
Hey Werewolf kuch bhi karke veer aur suman ke bich jo hua tha, uski jaankari vivek & family de diyo yaar.... maja aayega phir to :D

btw is update mein kuch aisi baatein bhi jikar huyi hai ,jisse lage ki suman bahot si baatein chupaye baithi hai....
ye suman jarur bhaavna ko bhi jaanti hogi... bach na pehchanne ka dikhava kar rahi hai...

5) lagta hai suhaana pagal ho gayi hai...ab ring chori hone ki wajah se ya apne dad se gaaliyaan khane ki wajah se ye to wohi jaane... lekin veer galat waqt pe waha jaa pahuncha.... even uske hath mein wo ring... ye sone pe suhaga hai... aur udhar soniya bhi nahi hai :D
dekha main keh rahi thi na ye dono behne veer ki sehat ke liye haanikarak hai... :D ab ye pagal kya karegi uske sath?

6 ) sabse interesting part is update ka..... Thodi bahot thill, phir suspense ... aur murder bhi add kiya hai write sahab ne.... Yehi to mujhe chahiye... :yesss:

so atish ko pata chal gaya ki teen teen baar uske kaam mein rukawat banne wala insaan aur koi nahi balki veer hai...
Lekin ranga ko pata nahi tha.... upar uski galti ye ki usne koi khoj khabar liye hi nahi.... natiza saza mein maut mili ushe...
Lekin us din club mein to atish bhi tha... uske naak ke niche se us ladki ko bachake le gaya tha veer..... To ye galti to atish huyi na.... :D
to ushe bhi to saza milni chaahiye....
ya phir uske hisap wo koi galti kare lekin saza uske niche kaam karne walo ko hi milegi....
aur ye kaisa nautanki baaz villian hai jo baat baat par mouth organ bajane lag jata hai :roflol:
itna thrilling mahol hai, kisiko maarne wala hai... is damn serious situation ko aur khaufnaak banane ke bajaye ye mouth organ bajake sare mood ka satyanaash kar deta hai :doh:

yahan ek sawal hai.... aisa kya hota tha us jalsa building mein ,,jiska jikar aate hi waha sare gundo ki ruh tak kaanp gayi ... ??
waise atish veer ka shikar karne wala hai, gaur karne wali baat ye hai ki atish shikar karta hai ki khud hi shikar ban jaane wala hai veer ka hi....

kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
romance ke sath sath thrill aur suspense ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ... kuch cheejo se shayad dhire dhire raaz ka parda hatenge... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa rahe hai.. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mil rahi hai... joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe hai kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro bin mul kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye...

yaha update mein do hints .... Suman koi high profile Lady hogi ...

jalsa builder mein jarur kuch khaufnaak ghatanaayen ghat chuki hai....

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 
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