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Fantasy Arav ~ The Impact of System

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Nahi hogi restart jitni likhni thi likh di isne....
Adha adhura novel hoga shayad bs yahi tak hoga shayad ja fir writer ko dobara se woh novel hi nahi mila hoga translate krne ke liye
Yaa maan nahi hai likhne ka aata to roj hu site per but life thoda busy bhi hu or rahi baat iss novel ki to ye running main hai novel bin per

Novel ka name - I FOUND 100 MILLION IN MY RENTED APARTMENT .

Jisko read karna hai waha Jake read kar lo bahot achi novel hai 900 tak maine khud padhi hai but college of classes ke Karan na time milta hai or maan kar raha hai likhna .

Mai koi false hope nahi dunga ki aage likhunga ye bolke but kabhi mera maan Kiya ya likhne ka maan hua to zaroor likhunga .

And sorry guys disappoint karne ke liye .
 
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First of all congrats on starting a new story. pehly pese miley phir villa again pese, car and black card etc. dont you think, arav is getting things very easily without any struggle. ab ya to esa ho sakta hai character ne past mein bohat struggle ki hai to us k kisi action ki wajah se usey system mil geya jo us k liye sab easy kar rha hai ya phir hero ki base bnane k liye story fast forward chal rhi hai. aur hero ka kisi bhi character k sath esa interaction nai hua jis se lage k yeah this is a real conversation xia(jo bhi us ka name tha the popular singer) waley case mein bhi yehi hua why didnt she get suspicious about arav after that explosion. why didnt she think how arav came to know about blast. i hope you will understand what i'm trying to say. zeyada to kuch nai bas ye kahun ga k koshish karna apne agly updates ko polish karne ki jis se sabhi ko ap ki mehnat nazar aye aur ye story forum ki top stories mein shamil ho sakke. agar meri koi bhi baat buri lagey to treat it as healthy criticism and you can ignore it completely.

keep :writing:

waiting for the next update :dost:
 

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Update 11

Xia invitation

~

Ferrari Enzo and god-level driving skills




Road per chalte huye arav system ke reward ke bare main soch Raha tha tabhi usko ek Jani pehchani awaj aai .


Ding !


[ Congratulations arav for completing the navigation: you have been rewarded with Ferrari Enzo . It has been parked in your villa's garage. ]


Reward ! Wo bhi sports car ?


Fuck ?

Arav surprise ho gaya tha iss baar .

Har kisi ko ladkiya pasand hai sports car main , waise hi arav ko bhi hai .

Waise bhi arav ko sports car ka bada saukh hai or khash krr Ferrari series.

Enzo series, ye series Ferrari ke owner ke dwara design or name Diya Gaya tha jinka name Enzo Ferrari hai .

Pura vehicle carbon fiber se bana hua hai or honeycomb aluminum sandwich plates ye sab hand mades hai .

660 ka terrifying horsepower hai jo is car ko kuch hi second main 362 kilometres per hour le jati sakti hai .

Wahi ye model pure would main sirf 400 hi hai or iska price Kam se kam 30 million hai.

Waise to isse paiso se nahi kharida Jaa sakta hai kyuki isko sirf well-deserved king of Ferrari hi le sakte hai .

Arav ne nahi socha tha ki wo aise sports car ko own karega wo bahot excited tha isko chalane ke liye .

….

10 minutes baat .

Arav apne villa ke underground parking mai khada tha .

Uske samne black colour ki sports car khadi thi uss car per bahot hi cool light lage the .


2004-Ferrari-Enzo1313965

“ kya hi sandaar gaadi hai ” arav khud ko rok nahi paya ye bolne se .

Wo bahot satisfied tha iss car se Bina ki jhijak ke wo car chalate huye villa se nikla.

2 months pehle arav ne apna driving licence banwaya tha per ye uski pehle sports car thi or pata nahi kyu wo bahot smooth chala raha tha .

Abhi wo yahi soch Raha tha tabhi ek notification aaya system ki taraf se .

Ding !

[ You have been rewarded with God-level driving skill to improve you driving experience]

To iss skills ki wajah se ye ho raha tha .

Usne system ko thumbs up Kiya or phir apni car ko rental house ki taraf le liye .

Usne socha tha pehle 8 million cash ko apne villa main transfer karega phir wo apne hostel jayega kuch samaan ko lane jo uska hai .

Waise to aab uske pass paiso ki koi Kami nahi per wo kisi chij waste nahi krna chahata tha jo uske kaam aa sake .

….

Two hour later

Uske paise car mai rakhne main time nahi laga per owner ke sath baat krne main tima lag gaya.

Pehle to landlord nahi Maan Raha tha , arav ko ki ghar chore per jab usne ye suna ki arav refund nahi lega to kamine pann ki hashi ke sath Maan Gaya .

Ye kaam arav ke liye bahot thaka dene wala tha .

Sare paise ko storage room main rakhne ke baad wo sofe per let gaya or sochne laga paiso ke sath kya kare .

Tabhi uska phone baza .

Ek unknown number se call tha.

“ hello ” arav ne jawab diya " who is this?”

“ hello , are you Mr arav ? ”

Arav ko ye awaj Jani pehchani lagi to usne jawab diya , “ are you miss Xia ? ”

“ Haan , waise Arav kya tum aaj raat free ho ? ” “ main tumhe Aaj raat dinner treat Dena chahati hu resturant main . ”

Ye sunn krr Arav thoda surprise hua .

Usne socha tha Xia bss uske sath ache se treat krr rahi hai per usne ye nahi socha tha wo sach main invite karegi .

“ itni khubsurat ladki main kaise mana krr sakta hu , Yes I'm free .” usne Xia ke sath flirt krte huye bola .

“ Grand Phoenix Hotel , Arav tum University main ho na tu kya mai tumhare liye car bhej du . ”

“ pareshan hone ki zarurat nahi hai , mai khud se aa sakta hu waise Kab aana hai .”

“ mai sister Wang se bol dungi tumhe 6 pm pick krr le . ”

" Thik raat ko milte hai .”

“ Ok ”

Phone rakhne ke baad arav ne time dekha .

Abhi to sirf saam ke 4 hi baje the .


Abhi to 2 gante bache hai , arav bore hone laga .

Achanak se usme apne kapde dekhe , in kapdo main Milne Jana Xia se acha nahi lagega .

To usne socha shopping karne chalte hai . Wo uthh krr apne garage main aa gaya , tabhi uska phone phir se Baza .

Uske call dekha to uske dost ka call tha jo uske sath Hostel main rehta tha .

Fatty chu , ajib name hai na actually main uska name chu Bawang hai wo thoda mota hai issiliye arav usko fatty bulata uske weight bhi 200 pound se jyda hai .

Fatty arav se thoda rich tha per ek loyal friend tha jo hostel main sath rehta hai .

Jab usne dekha uska call hai to Bina kisi dikkat ke usne utha liya . “ haa fatty bol kya hua . ”

“ Brother arav , kya tumne ghar ghund liya rent ke liye . ”

" Ha mujhe mil gaya . ”

“ ye to achi baat hai waise arav kya tum aaj hostel aane wale ho kyu ki lee aaj kisi ladki ko pick krne Jane wala hai or shayad wo aaj raat nahi aane wala . ”

Lee ka name sunn krr arav gali diye Bina reh na saka .

Lee or arav ke bich kabhi nahi bani . Lee ke hisaab se wo hamesha se sab se better hai kyu usko family sabse rich hai . Wo har waqt fatty or ek roommate ko nicha dikhata tha . Sabse jyda fatty ko kyu wo thoda rich tha per lee se jyda nahi .

Or in sab ke bich arav hamesha uske khilaf rehta tha uske Karan lee sabse jyda arav se hate krta tha .

Arav ye ek or karan tha jiske chalte usne rent house main rehne ke liye Deside Kiya tha kyu wo aab uske sath ek chhat ke niche nahi reh sakta tha .

Arav ne fatty ko mana krr diya aane se jab wo hosh main aaya.

Uske pass already itna bada villa hai to wo phir uss chote se hostel main kyu jaye .

“ brother arav waise tumne kaha ghar rent liya hai . ”

“ University se jyda dur nahi hai.”

“ phir mai kisi or din tumhare ghar aaunga to sath main videogames khelenge . ”

“ no problem fatty ” arav ne bola.

“……”

Phone rakhne ke baad arav apne Ferrari Enzo leke nikal gaya villa se .

Aaj road per jyda bhid nahi tha issliye arav 10 minute main would city pahuch gaya .

Apni car park krne ke baad wo chalte huye mall jane laga .





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guys second update saam ko aayega
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai rocket league bhai.....
Nice and beautiful update.....
 
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First of all congrats on starting a new story.
Thank you brother
pehly pese miley phir villa again pese, car and black card etc. dont you think, arav is getting things very easily without any struggle.
Bro arav ke past ko dhire dhire dikhai jayegi jo haa sad to hai per aage pata chal jayega
ab ya to esa ho sakta hai character ne past mein bohat struggle ki hai to us k kisi action ki wajah se usey system mil geya jo us k liye sab easy kar rha hai ya phir hero ki base bnane k liye story fast forward chal rhi hai.
Rahi system ki baat to abhi tak iss novel ke writers ne bataya nahi may be aabhi or aage chal ke batayega kyu he Puri story Chinese novel ko Hindi translation jis mai bhi kuch kuch add karunga jaise isme sex nahi hai bss kahi kahi romance hai or flirt hai per haa female character bahot si hai iss story main
aur hero ka kisi bhi character k sath esa interaction nai hua jis se lage k yeah this is a real conversation xia(jo bhi us ka name tha the popular singer) waley case mein bhi yehi hua why didnt she get suspicious about arav after that explosion.

Aage hoga per koi Shak to zaroor karega kis anjan sa ladka aake bacha le just Marne se pehle
why didnt she think how arav came to know about blast. i hope you will understand what i'm trying to say.
Bss bhai arav per sab shak krte hai kyu har baar arav hi sahi jagah per hota hai jo aage pata chalega
zeyada to kuch nai bas ye kahun ga k koshish karna apne agly updates ko polish karne ki jis se sabhi ko ap ki mehnat nazar aye aur ye story forum ki top stories mein shamil ho sakke. agar meri koi bhi baat buri lagey to treat it as healthy criticism and you can ignore it completely.

keep :writing:

waiting for the next update :dost:
Bhai mai bss novel ke hisab se chal Raha hu kyu mai abhi aise nahi change krr sakta bich Mai per change bhi wahi karunga jisse aage kisi or chij per impact na pade story main or jaha tak maine padi hai waha tak ye novel abhi ek chij ke aass pass ghumti hai jo aage pata chalegi aane wala kuch update main

Criticism naam ki bhi koi chij hoti hai nah mujhe koi suggestion deta hai to mai sochta zarur hi ek baar and kash mai abhi clear krr pata thoda bahot iske system ke bare mai.

And ek or baat ye Puri story bss treasures ke aass pass ghumti hai kaise arav ko sab kuch milega kaise arav ek aam ladke se billionaire or uske aage Tak jayega haa haa ismain fight bhi hai medical bhi business bhi hai to just stay tune brother
 

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Update 11

Xia invitation

~

Ferrari Enzo and god-level driving skills




Road per chalte huye arav system ke reward ke bare main soch Raha tha tabhi usko ek Jani pehchani awaj aai .


Ding !


[ Congratulations arav for completing the navigation: you have been rewarded with Ferrari Enzo . It has been parked in your villa's garage. ]


Reward ! Wo bhi sports car ?


Fuck ?

Arav surprise ho gaya tha iss baar .

Har kisi ko ladkiya pasand hai sports car main , waise hi arav ko bhi hai .

Waise bhi arav ko sports car ka bada saukh hai or khash krr Ferrari series.

Enzo series, ye series Ferrari ke owner ke dwara design or name Diya Gaya tha jinka name Enzo Ferrari hai .

Pura vehicle carbon fiber se bana hua hai or honeycomb aluminum sandwich plates ye sab hand mades hai .

660 ka terrifying horsepower hai jo is car ko kuch hi second main 362 kilometres per hour le jati sakti hai .

Wahi ye model pure would main sirf 400 hi hai or iska price Kam se kam 30 million hai.

Waise to isse paiso se nahi kharida Jaa sakta hai kyuki isko sirf well-deserved king of Ferrari hi le sakte hai .

Arav ne nahi socha tha ki wo aise sports car ko own karega wo bahot excited tha isko chalane ke liye .

….

10 minutes baat .

Arav apne villa ke underground parking mai khada tha .

Uske samne black colour ki sports car khadi thi uss car per bahot hi cool light lage the .


2004-Ferrari-Enzo1313965

“ kya hi sandaar gaadi hai ” arav khud ko rok nahi paya ye bolne se .

Wo bahot satisfied tha iss car se Bina ki jhijak ke wo car chalate huye villa se nikla.

2 months pehle arav ne apna driving licence banwaya tha per ye uski pehle sports car thi or pata nahi kyu wo bahot smooth chala raha tha .

Abhi wo yahi soch Raha tha tabhi ek notification aaya system ki taraf se .

Ding !

[ You have been rewarded with God-level driving skill to improve you driving experience]

To iss skills ki wajah se ye ho raha tha .

Usne system ko thumbs up Kiya or phir apni car ko rental house ki taraf le liye .

Usne socha tha pehle 8 million cash ko apne villa main transfer karega phir wo apne hostel jayega kuch samaan ko lane jo uska hai .

Waise to aab uske pass paiso ki koi Kami nahi per wo kisi chij waste nahi krna chahata tha jo uske kaam aa sake .

….

Two hour later

Uske paise car mai rakhne main time nahi laga per owner ke sath baat krne main tima lag gaya.

Pehle to landlord nahi Maan Raha tha , arav ko ki ghar chore per jab usne ye suna ki arav refund nahi lega to kamine pann ki hashi ke sath Maan Gaya .

Ye kaam arav ke liye bahot thaka dene wala tha .

Sare paise ko storage room main rakhne ke baad wo sofe per let gaya or sochne laga paiso ke sath kya kare .

Tabhi uska phone baza .

Ek unknown number se call tha.

“ hello ” arav ne jawab diya " who is this?”

“ hello , are you Mr arav ? ”

Arav ko ye awaj Jani pehchani lagi to usne jawab diya , “ are you miss Xia ? ”

“ Haan , waise Arav kya tum aaj raat free ho ? ” “ main tumhe Aaj raat dinner treat Dena chahati hu resturant main . ”

Ye sunn krr Arav thoda surprise hua .

Usne socha tha Xia bss uske sath ache se treat krr rahi hai per usne ye nahi socha tha wo sach main invite karegi .

“ itni khubsurat ladki main kaise mana krr sakta hu , Yes I'm free .” usne Xia ke sath flirt krte huye bola .

“ Grand Phoenix Hotel , Arav tum University main ho na tu kya mai tumhare liye car bhej du . ”

“ pareshan hone ki zarurat nahi hai , mai khud se aa sakta hu waise Kab aana hai .”

“ mai sister Wang se bol dungi tumhe 6 pm pick krr le . ”

" Thik raat ko milte hai .”

“ Ok ”

Phone rakhne ke baad arav ne time dekha .

Abhi to sirf saam ke 4 hi baje the .


Abhi to 2 gante bache hai , arav bore hone laga .

Achanak se usme apne kapde dekhe , in kapdo main Milne Jana Xia se acha nahi lagega .

To usne socha shopping karne chalte hai . Wo uthh krr apne garage main aa gaya , tabhi uska phone phir se Baza .

Uske call dekha to uske dost ka call tha jo uske sath Hostel main rehta tha .

Fatty chu , ajib name hai na actually main uska name chu Bawang hai wo thoda mota hai issiliye arav usko fatty bulata uske weight bhi 200 pound se jyda hai .

Fatty arav se thoda rich tha per ek loyal friend tha jo hostel main sath rehta hai .

Jab usne dekha uska call hai to Bina kisi dikkat ke usne utha liya . “ haa fatty bol kya hua . ”

“ Brother arav , kya tumne ghar ghund liya rent ke liye . ”

" Ha mujhe mil gaya . ”

“ ye to achi baat hai waise arav kya tum aaj hostel aane wale ho kyu ki lee aaj kisi ladki ko pick krne Jane wala hai or shayad wo aaj raat nahi aane wala . ”

Lee ka name sunn krr arav gali diye Bina reh na saka .

Lee or arav ke bich kabhi nahi bani . Lee ke hisaab se wo hamesha se sab se better hai kyu usko family sabse rich hai . Wo har waqt fatty or ek roommate ko nicha dikhata tha . Sabse jyda fatty ko kyu wo thoda rich tha per lee se jyda nahi .

Or in sab ke bich arav hamesha uske khilaf rehta tha uske Karan lee sabse jyda arav se hate krta tha .

Arav ye ek or karan tha jiske chalte usne rent house main rehne ke liye Deside Kiya tha kyu wo aab uske sath ek chhat ke niche nahi reh sakta tha .

Arav ne fatty ko mana krr diya aane se jab wo hosh main aaya.

Uske pass already itna bada villa hai to wo phir uss chote se hostel main kyu jaye .

“ brother arav waise tumne kaha ghar rent liya hai . ”

“ University se jyda dur nahi hai.”

“ phir mai kisi or din tumhare ghar aaunga to sath main videogames khelenge . ”

“ no problem fatty ” arav ne bola.

“……”

Phone rakhne ke baad arav apne Ferrari Enzo leke nikal gaya villa se .

Aaj road per jyda bhid nahi tha issliye arav 10 minute main would city pahuch gaya .

Apni car park krne ke baad wo chalte huye mall jane laga .





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guys second update saam ko aayega
Out standing update brother
 
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