First of all congrats on starting a new story.
Thank you brother
pehly pese miley phir villa again pese, car and black card etc. dont you think, arav is getting things very easily without any struggle.
Bro arav ke past ko dhire dhire dikhai jayegi jo haa sad to hai per aage pata chal jayega
ab ya to esa ho sakta hai character ne past mein bohat struggle ki hai to us k kisi action ki wajah se usey system mil geya jo us k liye sab easy kar rha hai ya phir hero ki base bnane k liye story fast forward chal rhi hai.
Rahi system ki baat to abhi tak iss novel ke writers ne bataya nahi may be aabhi or aage chal ke batayega kyu he Puri story Chinese novel ko Hindi translation jis mai bhi kuch kuch add karunga jaise isme sex nahi hai bss kahi kahi romance hai or flirt hai per haa female character bahot si hai iss story main
aur hero ka kisi bhi character k sath esa interaction nai hua jis se lage k yeah this is a real conversation xia(jo bhi us ka name tha the popular singer) waley case mein bhi yehi hua why didnt she get suspicious about arav after that explosion.
Aage hoga per koi Shak to zaroor karega kis anjan sa ladka aake bacha le just Marne se pehle
why didnt she think how arav came to know about blast. i hope you will understand what i'm trying to say.
Bss bhai arav per sab shak krte hai kyu har baar arav hi sahi jagah per hota hai jo aage pata chalega
zeyada to kuch nai bas ye kahun ga k koshish karna apne agly updates ko polish karne ki jis se sabhi ko ap ki mehnat nazar aye aur ye story forum ki top stories mein shamil ho sakke. agar meri koi bhi baat buri lagey to treat it as healthy criticism and you can ignore it completely.
keep
waiting for the next update 
Bhai mai bss novel ke hisab se chal Raha hu kyu mai abhi aise nahi change krr sakta bich Mai per change bhi wahi karunga jisse aage kisi or chij per impact na pade story main or jaha tak maine padi hai waha tak ye novel abhi ek chij ke aass pass ghumti hai jo aage pata chalegi aane wala kuch update main
Criticism naam ki bhi koi chij hoti hai nah mujhe koi suggestion deta hai to mai sochta zarur hi ek baar and kash mai abhi clear krr pata thoda bahot iske system ke bare mai.
And ek or baat ye Puri story bss treasures ke aass pass ghumti hai kaise arav ko sab kuch milega kaise arav ek aam ladke se billionaire or uske aage Tak jayega haa haa ismain fight bhi hai medical bhi business bhi hai to just stay tune brother