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Fantasy AJNABEE (completed)

Naina

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pehle shlok aur ab Aakash ke sath ulajhne wali ek hi ladki hain joh aakash ki bahan hain... Aakash ab pehle jaisa nirday naa raha.... maa ki mamta aur bahan ki pyar ne badal ke rakh diya hain usko... ab woh bhi aam insaan ki tarah jina chaahta hain... hmm dish ki saktiya jaagrit ho rahi hain par yeh usko pata hi nahi
Waise ush ladki ka naam kya hain.... aur woh aadmi joh anju ke paas khaana mangne gaya tha.. Khair...
Btw brilliant update Swaraj ji... Bahot achhe likh rahe hai aap...
 

Swaraj

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pehle shlok aur ab Aakash ke sath ulajhne wali ek hi ladki hain joh aakash ki bahan hain... Aakash ab pehle jaisa nirday naa raha.... maa ki mamta aur bahan ki pyar ne badal ke rakh diya hain usko... ab woh bhi aam insaan ki tarah jina chaahta hain... hmm dish ki saktiya jaagrit ho rahi hain par yeh usko pata hi nahi
Waise ush ladki ka naam kya hain.... aur woh aadmi joh anju ke paas khaana mangne gaya tha.. Khair...
Btw brilliant update Swaraj ji... Bahot achhe likh rahe hai aap...
Aakash koi bohut acha to tha nahi ye to abhi tak aap ko pata chal hi gaya hoga
Abhi wo yahan ek aam insaan ki tarah jeena chahta hai
Lekin kya uske dushman aisa karne denge??
Use akela chor denge???
Aur anju ke paas gaya wo aadmi bhi aap ko jald pata chal jayega
Saath rahiye
 

Naina

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Aakash koi bohut acha to tha nahi ye to abhi tak aap ko pata chal hi gaya hoga
Abhi wo yahan ek aam insaan ki tarah jeena chahta hai
Lekin kya uske dushman aisa karne denge??
Use akela chor denge???
Aur anju ke paas gaya wo aadmi bhi aap ko jald pata chal jayega
Saath rahiye
atit..... insaan lakh chaahe bhulne ki ya bhagne ki kosish kare... par samne aa hi jaate hain.. kahin na kahin.. kabhi na kabhi.. yeh atit...... n aakash ke sath bhi wohi ho raha hain.... ab yeh uske upor hain ki woh kya karta hain...
 

Mbindas

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Very nice update bhai.
 
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Swaraj

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"tumne us ladke par hamla kyun kiya pavitra??"guruji ne ladki se poochha

"Kyunki use abhi ke abhi nahi kuchla to mere maalik ko apna badla poora karne ka mauka nahi milega,uski jaan nahi loongi lekin adhmare karungi"pavitra naam ki ladki boli

"Uske saamne baar baar aana kya sahi hai??"guruji ne poochha

"Us raat ko itna shaktiheen hone ke bawjood wo mujhe hara hi deta,lekin mai bach gayi .us ladki ke birthday party me hi use harana chahti thi"pavitra fir boli

"Fir kal usse takrayi kyun wapas??"guruji ne poochha

"Yaad dilane ki ladai khatam nahi hui hai"pavitra boli aur chali gayi

Ye ladki mere kiye karaye par paani fer degi.kuch to karna hi hoga guruji sochne lage
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"Are tumhara naam hi nahi poochha tha kal,kya naam hai??"anju ne poochha

"Shyam bula sakti hai mujhe"raat ko bhook mitane ke baad anju ne us aadmi ko apne paas rakh liya tha staff ke roop me

"Waise shyam khana kaafi acha bana lete ho"anju kheer khate hue boli

"Waise aap bohut achi hai,warna bina jaane pehchane kisi ko yun rakh lena..."shyam bola

"Mera luck bhi kuch zyada acha nahi hai shyam,papa ke jaane ke baad maa.bhi chal basi.papa ka ye dhaba mai hi chala rahi hoon.aaye din gunde yahan se hafta le jaate hai aur baju wale dhaba ke maalik zabardasti yahan se customer le jaate hai,soch rahi hoon band kar doon,lekin papa ka ye dhaba unki jaan se bhi zyada pyari thi...isliye....."Bolte Bolte aankhen nam ho gayi anju ki

Shyam chup chap apna kaam karne laga

"Oye apni maalkin se bol paise nikale"bahar chillane ki awaz aayi

Anju daudkar gayi aur dekha ki uske staff ko gunde berahmi se pit rahe hai

"Are are kal hi to paise lekar gaye the ,fir aaj??"anju boli

"Arey birju??anju ji ko bol de wo kal tha,aur aaj naya din hai,hafta to dena hi padega"ek gunda bola

"Lekin mere paas paise nahi hai"anju boli

"Hmm"bol achanak birju ne anju ke baal pakad liye aur kare me le gaya.baaki gunde bhi wahi gaye

"Aaj sirf hamari pyaas bujha de bas.....baaki sab hafta maaf tera"birju bola aur anju ke kapdo ko nochne laga

Shyam sab dekh raha tha lekin kuch kar nahi raha tha
Ye uska kaam nahi hai
Iske liye wo aaya nahi tha
Lekin.....


Us ladki ne bina soche samjhe vishwas kiya tha us par


Aur aaj

Jab wo musibat me hai tab ...

Shyam ne apna apron utar fenka aur ek laat se darwaza khola

"Tu koun hai be??bhag yahan se"birju bola aur anju ko waise hi thame raha

"Chor do ise"shyam ka sakht chehra pehli Baar anju ne dekha

"Teri to aise nahi maane Ga"bol ek gunde ne haath lehraya hawa me

Shyam hat gaya aur ek mukka maara us gunde ke pet me

DHAMMMMMM


"Akkk"gunde ki aankhen badi ho gayi.muh se paani nikalne laga
Aur wahi neeche gir gaya

Shyam ne apna gardan ghumaya aur aas paas dekha

Ek saath 6 gunde toot pade us par

DHAAMMM THADD. TAAD

saare gunde chitt the

"Anju ji abhi tak in logo ne kitna hafta liya tha???"shyam ne bhauchakki si dekh rahi anju se.poocha

Anju abhi bhi hairani se dekh rahi thi

"Anju ji"shyam.ne fir poochha

"D d dedh lakh"anju boli

"Sun,dedh aur baaki saman todne aur staff ko maarna ka ek lakh aur total dhai lakh nikal warna yahi marenge sab"shyam bola

"D d de de birju"main gunda bola

Aur fir sab paise lekar shyam bola

"10 hazar kam hai,ja jakar apne aaka ko bol de kaise pita yahan,agar wo yahan aaya to usse baaki ke paise le lunga,ja bhag"bol shyam ne bhaga diya sab ko

Anju dheere dheere baitha gayi zameen par
Aaj uske izzat par haath daala gaya tha
Apne aankhon ke aansu rok na paayi wo,bas behti hi ja rahi thi

Shyam paas aaya,use pata nahi tha ki aise me kya karna chahiye,seekha nahi tha usne
Achanak shyam.ke seene me apna chehra chupa kar rone lagi anju,bohut aansu baaki the uske

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Disha aaj POORE saj kar ja rahi thi
Aaj party me aakash bhi aayega

"Apne aap ko pehchano "ek awaz se ruk gayi disha

Saamne ek vriddh a rahe the saamne se

"A aap ne kuch kaha mujhse??"disha ne poochha

"Yahi ki apne aap ko pehchano"vriddh fir bole

"Aap koun??mai aapko jaanti hoon??"disha ne poochha

Vriddh muskuraye,disha ko cheenk a gayi

A A ATISHOOOOO

disha ne cheenkne ke baad saamne dekha ,koi nahi tha,yahan wahan dekha,koi nahi tha

Ye uska bhram tha ya....

Khair party time
 
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