Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)

[Swaraj]

Nice update

Thanks bro

 

[Swaraj]

Bahut khub to sab ne mil kr is bar Yug ko target kiya hai. Badhiya hai.
Ab to yasodo ko ladka bhi or wo khud bhi maidan mai aa gya hai. Yug abhi bhi bahut kamjor lag raha hai jo kuch hai uska mask hi hai.

Idhar ab kahi uski khud ki bahan hi na target ban jai in logo ka.
Dekhte hai kya hota hai.
Subham abhi bhi mistry bana hua hai.
Yug ne jo abhi in students ki bate suni hai uspe koi actit lega ya abhi use or bhi pta karna hai dekhte hai kya hota hai.
Fabulous update.

Thanks bro
Yug akela to hai lekin abhi tak poori tarah se haar nahi gaya hai
Mickey ka khel hai ye sab aur yug isme fansta ja raha hai
Use har tarike se todne ki koshish ho rahi hai
Eagle clan ko khud lead kar raha hai wo
Shiksha par daanv khelar kahi Mickey ke dil me sachmuch jagah na bana le yug ki behen
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Ab lagta h ki Yug ko shayad uski behen ke through majbur kiya jayega. Or yahi kam karne Mikey ko bheja h.
Awesome update bhai

Thanks bro
Dekhte hai kya hota hai
Lekin yug ko kya itni aasani se jhukaya ja sakta hai??
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Awesome update waiting for next update

Thanks bro coming up soon

 

[Swaraj]

Sorry to say apki har story me hero ke pass sab kuch hone ke bad v bechara sa rahta hai av dekh lo micky laghbhag iski bahan ko pata hi liya ye kar kya lega kuch nahi bas phir jake rone lagega hero ko itni power hone ke bad v bechara dukhate ho kuch hero type lage aisa dikhao

Thanks bro
Sabse pehle to meri har story padhne ke liye thanks
Lekin meri har story me meri kuch distinctiveness rehti hai
Sabse pehle to mai khud kabhi story me hero nahi banta hoon, doosri mai villains ko hamesha hero se ek degree upar rakhta hoon. Kyunki bina villain ke hero kuch bhi nahi
Aur sabse important ek hero tabhi hero khelata hai jab wo sab odds ke khilaf jaakar villain ko harata hai
Agar ek hero sabko maarkar todkar villain ko khatam kar dega to story me kya maza aayega???
Saath rahiye

 

[Swaraj]

Is story ki ending v mujhe aapki har story ki tarah av se saf najar aa raha hai hai sab mar jayenge hero akela bach ma chudayega

Thanks bro
Anjnabee 1 me maine kisi ko nahi maara hai

 

[Sakal]

Micky to lattu ho gaha Shiksha pr....ya isme bhi koi chal hai iski...
Yug ki soch badli tohi wo badal payega...use jald hi mask pr control krna hoga varna bahot der ho jayegi...uske apne khatre me aa jayenge.
Yashodo kafi acchi planning kr raha hai sb clan ko apne mutthi m karne ke liye .
shandar update bhai

 

[Anky@123]

Thanks bro
Sabse pehle to meri har story padhne ke liye thanks
Lekin meri har story me meri kuch distinctiveness rehti hai
Sabse pehle to mai khud kabhi story me hero nahi banta hoon, doosri mai villains ko hamesha hero se ek degree upar rakhta hoon. Kyunki bina villain ke hero kuch bhi nahi
Aur sabse important ek hero tabhi hero khelata hai jab wo sab odds ke khilaf jaakar villain ko harata hai
Agar ek hero sabko maarkar todkar villain ko khatam kar dega to story me kya maza aayega???
Saath rahiye

Bat to aapki sahi hai swraj bhai lekin hero ke hero hone ka bhi kya matlab jab wo itna besahara ho ,har baar koi topi pehna ke chale hi jata hai ,specialy aap ki kahani me hero ko to pyar Naseeb hota hi nahi h chahe aap agent series hi dekh lo. Usme bhi bada dukh hua tha. Ham sabko ek Nayak ki aavashyakta hai jo role model bane .is liye chahe vilen kitna bhi takatwar kyu na ho.samaz hamesha hero ki taraf hi dekhta hai . Isliye nivedan h yug ko thoda strong dikhaye ki ek bar to vilan ki bhi ruh kaap jaye .abhi to yoshodo hi nahi Mikey bhi yug k sath khel rha hai..?

 

[Shyam Singh]

Nice update

 

[Beast]

very nice update bhai pr kafi time ho gya koi action nhi wgara nhi jis ki waga sa story thori si dull ho gyi ha