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ABHI ----- THE WARRIOR



Dosto Yeh kahani hai ek aise yodha ki jisko kalug mein iss srihsti k santulan ka baar saupa gaya hai.

yeh puri tarah kalpanik hai

Friends mein koi writer nahi hu isiliye galtiya toh hogi , unko najarandaj karke
kahani ka aanand uthaye

yeh meri pahli kahani hai , friends aap apna saath banaye rakhe

Humari duniya badi rahsyamayi hai, iss poore brahmand mein 14 lok hai

prithvi se upar 7 lok

भूलोक, भुवलोक , स्वर्गलोक, महर्लोक, जनलोक , तपलोक और
सत्यलोक

Aur prithvi k niche 7 lok,

तललोक, अतललोक, वितल, सुतललोक, तलातल, रसातल और पाताललोक

इस ब्रह्मांड का रक्षक वो ही बन सकता है , जिसके पास इन 14 लोको की शक्तियां हो

इन 14 लोको मे कुछ स्थुललोक है कुछ सूक्ष्म

स्थूल का मतलब जिन्हे हम आंखो से देख सकते है
और सूक्ष्मलोक वह जिन्हे केवल दिव्य दृष्टी से और सिद्धियो से देखा जा सकता है

इन 14लोको से उपर 3 लोक और है

ब्रह्मलोक, वैकुण्ठलोक , शिवलोक जो इस सारी सृष्टी का संचालन करते है


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Update 1

अब आते है कहानी पर---------
Roopnagar k ek hospital k Operation theter ek bahar 4 log intezar kar rahe the, sab ki aankon mein aansoo the, unn k chehro ko dekhkar lagta hai ki koi unka apna Operation thetor mein maut se lad raha hai

unme ek 22 saal ki ladki ki toh haalat aisi hai k baar baar rote rote behosh ho rahi hai aur 45 saal k lagbhag ek aurat aur 55 k karib ek aadmi usse sambhalne mein lage hai aur unke saath khada tha koi 20 saal ka yuvak jo apne dukh ko dil mein dabaye intejar kar raha tha

aurat -- ladki se --- beta uth jaa na, kyu aisa kar rahi hai, dekh tu bhi aise karegi toh hum kya karenge kuch nahi hoga hamare abhi ko, uth jaa naa laado apne bhai ki khatir , agar tuzhe kuch hua toh hum abhi ko kaise sambhalenge, uth jaa na Ritu


Haa yeh hamare hero ki family hai

Short intro -----

Rana Vikram singh -- age 60 Hero's dad, lekin dikne mein 40 k lagte hai
yeh Roopnagar k raja , India k top most business man hai

Naina devi -- hero's mom 45 yrs , ekdum rajsi look aur chehre par ek alag tej

Ritika singh --- badi behan 22yrs bhut hi beautiful, bilkul apni maa ki tarah isski jaan apne bhai mein basti hai

Adira singh --- Choti behan abhi hostel mein padti hai bahut hi cute aur bachpane se bharpur

aur jo ladka hai woh Rakesh sharma hero ka frnd hai

yeh ek chotta intro tha poora intro Hero ki jubani milega

Yaha ritu ki haalat bigati jaa rahi thi
(ab naina devi ko maa kahunga)

maa -- dekho meri beti bhi dur jaa rahi hai agar isse kuch ho gaya toh sab khatam ho jaayega jaldi doctor ko bulaaeye

rakesh doctor ko bulane chala jaata hai

maa - itna kuch ho gaya aur aap but bankar khade ho, na kuch bolte ho na kuch kar rahe ho, kya itne patthar dil ho.

apne patni ki baatein sunkar Vikarm singh k dhyra ka baand tut gaya aur rote hue bolne laga

R.V.S -- naina muzhe kuch samz nahi aaraha hai kya karu , ek taraf toh mera abhi maut se lad raha hai, aur dusri taraf ritu ki aisi haalat aur ab toh Adira ko bhi sambhalna padega kyu ki woh aarahi hai,

maa -- aap usse rok lo yaha aane se nahi toh pata nahi kya ho jaayega

R.V.S -- Kaise roku kal 2 din se uski ph par abhi se baat nahi hui aur tum jaanti ho ,abhi se baat kiye bagair woh nahi rah sakti
tabhi Rakesh doctor ko leke aagaya ,Ritu ko check karke ICU mein le gaye

operation chalte hue 4 ghante ho gaye the ,aur teeno intezhar kar rahe the apne pyare abhi k wapas lautne kaa .....

agla update jald hi......
Very nice update bhai
 
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Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 25th March ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th April 2025 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

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3rd Runner-Up 500 ₹ + 3000 Likes
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Update - 26

ab tak aapne dekha......
Abhi ka Sweety aur Divya ki khij mein jaana....
khandhar mein manav bhediyo se saamna.....
aur ek saaye ka pragat hona..
ab aage.....aur aawaj

Mahakaal ka ansh hu mein
kaal hu mein
Shaitan dhyan se dekh muzhko
maut hu mein...


jaise hi Dad ne uss saye ko dekha aur aawaj suni toh unke chehre par halki muskurahat aagyi
mein soch mein tha ki ab yeh kaun aagaya....

Jaise hi uss bhediye ne
Kaal (rakesh ka asli rup) ka naam suna usski hasee ruk gay ....thodi der k kiye dar gaya...lekin phir...

bhediya - kaal tu bhi aagaya......
ab pahele tuzhe ki khatam karunga..
phir inn macharo ko masulnga bada maza aayega.....
tab tak mom ko hosh aagaya tha
mere paas aakar.....

mom - Betu tu thik toh hai na .....
dehko ji maine pahle hi iss outing k liye aapko mana kiya tha....dekho kitni chot lagi hai isse.....
phir maa ne muzhe gale lagaya...

aisi hi hoti hai maa ..khud toh dard mein thi aur mere chot ki chinta kar rahi thi...

mein - mom muzhe kuch nahi hua hai ....dekho mein bilkul thik hu....

dad - Naina kuch nahi hua hai isse
mere sher beta hai .......

ab dad k 5 agents bhi sambhal gaye the woh bhi humare paas aagye .....

Tabhi woh Mahabhediya bade krodh se daudta hua aaya aur kaal par humla kar diya ...lekin uss tak pahunchta usse pahele hi kaal ne ek energy beam uss par chodi ...aur woh uchalta hua dur jaakar gira...

ab usska krodh bahut bad haya tha ...
usne haath upaar kiye aur ek chamkti hui bijli jaise urja usske haath mein aagayi...aur ussne ..kaal par humla kar diya...... tabhi badla kaal ka roop
aur badal gaya uska chehra bhayankar sher k roop mein.....

aur gunji bhayankar dahad ....uss dahad ....ki urja se woh biji jaane kaha gayab ho gayi

palak zhapkte hi kaal pahunch gaya uss k paas aur garden se pakadkar

kaal - bahut hua khel tera.....
itna kahkar kaal ne apna panja ghusa diya uske chati mein aur dil bahar

dekhte hi dekhte woh khatam hua aur uske sharir k tukde ho gaye...

kaal wapas apne yoddha rup mein aaya aur ek nazar meri taraf dekha aur muskurate he waha se adrishya ho gaya..

jaane kya usski aankon mein tha ...
jo muzhe kuch apnapan se laga

tabhi dad ki aawaj se mera dhyan tuta

Dad - agents inn sab bhediyo ki bodies ko khatam kar do..

abhi chalo ander dekhte hai

jab hum ander tahkhane mein pahunche....toh waha dekha kareeb 50 ladkiya badi buri condition mein thi sabhi behosh thi.....unke haath aur pair bandhe hue the unhi mei muzhe
Divya bhi dikhi aur wahi paas ek kone mein jakhmi haalat mein sweety padi hui thi .....usske sir se khoon bahraha tha.....meine check kiya toh ...uski saanse badi dheemi dheemi chal rahi thi .......dad ....yaha aao dekho isse

tabhi bahar se chopper ki aawaje aane lagi......jo shayad papa ne hi bulaye the ...
ab tak un sabhi ladkiyo ko khol diya gaya tha .....lekin hosh nahi aaya tha shayad....koi drugs diya gaya ho

tabhi waha kuch doctors ki team aagayi .. sab ladkiyo ko waha se Hospital le jaaya gaya....Sweety ka bhi first aid kar k hospital le jaaya gaya..

ab dad , mom aur mein waha pahunche ,jaha di , addu aur saare frnds the ...waha sabhi tense the addu bar bar mere baare mein puch rahi thi aur di usse sambhal rahi thi .....

commandos apna kaam kar rahe the
Rimpy aur sabhi frnds humara intejar ka rahe the....

tabhi sab ne muzhe dad aur mom k saath aate dekha ....Addu daud kar mere gale gayi ....

Addu - arre bhai aap kaha gaye the
mein kab se didu ko puch rahi thi ...woh muzhe bata hi nahi rahi thi....

mein - kahi nahi betu mom & dad hume surprise karne aarahe the...
toh unhi ko receive karne gaya tha...

Addu k gale lagte hi jaane kaise mera saara dard chala gaya tha......

phir di aur saare frnds muzhe puchne lage ....betu yeh kya ...mom dad yaha kaise......aur Divya aur Sweety ko dhundne gaya tha kya woh mili......
aur tere saath jo comm gaye the woh kaha hai....

ab mein kya batata di ko....toh dad ki taraf dekha.....

Dad - arre arre ...beta ...ek saath ...kitne sawal
woh baat aisi hai ....humne socha ki tum sabko join kar ke surprise du
abhi hum yaha pahunche hi the ki muzhe Abhi ka ph aagaya ..tab meine
comm k chief se baat ki ...
jungle mein dhundne par woh dono mil gayi bas behosh ki....

toh comm unhe apne saath hospital
le gaye jab abhi wapas aaraha tha toh yeh hume yahi mila..

cahalo ab so jaao kal subah dekhte hai.....

subah hui hum mein se kisi ka mann nahi tha enjoy karne ka .....
leki mom , dad aur addu k kahne par thoda bhaut ghume aur sham ko wapis laut gaye..

Ghar pahunch ka Rimpy ne apni frnds ko milne ki iccha ki ...toh Dad ne kal saath chalbe ka wada kiya

di addu ko lekat room mein chali gayi aur mein mom aur dad k room mein

mein - ab dad aap dono mein se koi muzhe batayega ....ki yeh dab kya ho raha hai ...aur mom aapke paas yeh super powers..

Dad - aane wale samay mein ek mahayudh honewala hai yeh ussi ki tayyari samaz lo.....

aur beta humari family koi sadharan nahi tum , mein, naina ritu aur addu
sab mein kuch na kuch powers hai...

lekin saati baate jannane ka abhi samay nahi aaya hai....

mein - uff yeh sahi samay ...sahi samay.....kab aayega woh..

dusre din hum sabhi hospital mein unn sabhi ladkiyo ki tabiyat dekhne gaye Rimpy bhi saath thi

sab hosh mein aagayi thi sirf sweety hi behosh thi....dad k kahne se Dsp sahab bhi aaye the aur sabhi ladkiyo
se unke ghar ka pata puch rahe the.

phir hum Sweety k paas gaye jo abhi tak behosh thi...Usse dekhkar Rimpy ko bahut bura lag raha tha

Addu - bhai yeh Rimpy di ki frnd hai na kys hua hai isse.....

mein - kuch nahi betu bas thodi bimar hai..
addu - Shayad ibnhe bukhar hai mein dekhu ...itna kahkar addu ne apna haath usske maathe par rakha...aur tabhi usse hosh aagaya ....

innko yahi chodte hai dekhte hai villan party kya kar rahi hai......

Durmukhasur bade krod se. ----
nahii ...yeh tune....accha nahi kiya kaal......meri pooja mein tune vighna daala hai
pitashri toh tap kar rahe hai aur mein kanyamedh yagya k dwara Ham sabke maalik Eblis ko ko prasanna karke aur shaktiyo ko prapt karna chahta tha....

aaj ki aahutiya aakhri thi...tune accha nahi kiya....

DA - snenapati Durjaya prithvi par jo hum burai paap...aur nasha gailarahe hai woh kaisa chal raha hai....

senapati - yuraj.....waha pata nahi Sangharah nasm se koi hai jo hamare
karyo ko rok raha hai ......

DA - toh pata kari usska...kaun hai woh.....ek manav humare karyo mein badha pahuncha raha hai aur tum shaktishali asur hokar kuc nahi kar rahe ho ..

dhyan rahe iss shristi k 7 lok poore hamare adhin hai ...unn ka upayog karo....

Krodhasur, lobhasur aur mohasutum jaskar manushya k man badlo

aur maya sur tum waha jaakar waha k vigyan ko dekho ......

phir sabha samapt hui.....

abhi k liye itna hi.....
agla MEGA UPDATE aaj raat ko...
Update - 26

ab tak aapne dekha......
Abhi ka Sweety aur Divya ki khij mein jaana....
khandhar mein manav bhediyo se saamna.....
aur ek saaye ka pragat hona..
ab aage.....aur aawaj

Mahakaal ka ansh hu mein
kaal hu mein
Shaitan dhyan se dekh muzhko
maut hu mein...


jaise hi Dad ne uss saye ko dekha aur aawaj suni toh unke chehre par halki muskurahat aagyi
mein soch mein tha ki ab yeh kaun aagaya....

Jaise hi uss bhediye ne
Kaal (rakesh ka asli rup) ka naam suna usski hasee ruk gay ....thodi der k kiye dar gaya...lekin phir...

bhediya - kaal tu bhi aagaya......
ab pahele tuzhe ki khatam karunga..
phir inn macharo ko masulnga bada maza aayega.....
tab tak mom ko hosh aagaya tha
mere paas aakar.....

mom - Betu tu thik toh hai na .....
dehko ji maine pahle hi iss outing k liye aapko mana kiya tha....dekho kitni chot lagi hai isse.....
phir maa ne muzhe gale lagaya...

aisi hi hoti hai maa ..khud toh dard mein thi aur mere chot ki chinta kar rahi thi...

mein - mom muzhe kuch nahi hua hai ....dekho mein bilkul thik hu....

dad - Naina kuch nahi hua hai isse
mere sher beta hai .......

ab dad k 5 agents bhi sambhal gaye the woh bhi humare paas aagye .....

Tabhi woh Mahabhediya bade krodh se daudta hua aaya aur kaal par humla kar diya ...lekin uss tak pahunchta usse pahele hi kaal ne ek energy beam uss par chodi ...aur woh uchalta hua dur jaakar gira...

ab usska krodh bahut bad haya tha ...
usne haath upaar kiye aur ek chamkti hui bijli jaise urja usske haath mein aagayi...aur ussne ..kaal par humla kar diya...... tabhi badla kaal ka roop
aur badal gaya uska chehra bhayankar sher k roop mein.....

aur gunji bhayankar dahad ....uss dahad ....ki urja se woh biji jaane kaha gayab ho gayi

palak zhapkte hi kaal pahunch gaya uss k paas aur garden se pakadkar

kaal - bahut hua khel tera.....
itna kahkar kaal ne apna panja ghusa diya uske chati mein aur dil bahar

dekhte hi dekhte woh khatam hua aur uske sharir k tukde ho gaye...

kaal wapas apne yoddha rup mein aaya aur ek nazar meri taraf dekha aur muskurate he waha se adrishya ho gaya..

jaane kya usski aankon mein tha ...
jo muzhe kuch apnapan se laga

tabhi dad ki aawaj se mera dhyan tuta

Dad - agents inn sab bhediyo ki bodies ko khatam kar do..

abhi chalo ander dekhte hai

jab hum ander tahkhane mein pahunche....toh waha dekha kareeb 50 ladkiya badi buri condition mein thi sabhi behosh thi.....unke haath aur pair bandhe hue the unhi mei muzhe
Divya bhi dikhi aur wahi paas ek kone mein jakhmi haalat mein sweety padi hui thi .....usske sir se khoon bahraha tha.....meine check kiya toh ...uski saanse badi dheemi dheemi chal rahi thi .......dad ....yaha aao dekho isse

tabhi bahar se chopper ki aawaje aane lagi......jo shayad papa ne hi bulaye the ...
ab tak un sabhi ladkiyo ko khol diya gaya tha .....lekin hosh nahi aaya tha shayad....koi drugs diya gaya ho

tabhi waha kuch doctors ki team aagayi .. sab ladkiyo ko waha se Hospital le jaaya gaya....Sweety ka bhi first aid kar k hospital le jaaya gaya..

ab dad , mom aur mein waha pahunche ,jaha di , addu aur saare frnds the ...waha sabhi tense the addu bar bar mere baare mein puch rahi thi aur di usse sambhal rahi thi .....

commandos apna kaam kar rahe the
Rimpy aur sabhi frnds humara intejar ka rahe the....

tabhi sab ne muzhe dad aur mom k saath aate dekha ....Addu daud kar mere gale gayi ....

Addu - arre bhai aap kaha gaye the
mein kab se didu ko puch rahi thi ...woh muzhe bata hi nahi rahi thi....

mein - kahi nahi betu mom & dad hume surprise karne aarahe the...
toh unhi ko receive karne gaya tha...

Addu k gale lagte hi jaane kaise mera saara dard chala gaya tha......

phir di aur saare frnds muzhe puchne lage ....betu yeh kya ...mom dad yaha kaise......aur Divya aur Sweety ko dhundne gaya tha kya woh mili......
aur tere saath jo comm gaye the woh kaha hai....

ab mein kya batata di ko....toh dad ki taraf dekha.....

Dad - arre arre ...beta ...ek saath ...kitne sawal
woh baat aisi hai ....humne socha ki tum sabko join kar ke surprise du
abhi hum yaha pahunche hi the ki muzhe Abhi ka ph aagaya ..tab meine
comm k chief se baat ki ...
jungle mein dhundne par woh dono mil gayi bas behosh ki....

toh comm unhe apne saath hospital
le gaye jab abhi wapas aaraha tha toh yeh hume yahi mila..

cahalo ab so jaao kal subah dekhte hai.....

subah hui hum mein se kisi ka mann nahi tha enjoy karne ka .....
leki mom , dad aur addu k kahne par thoda bhaut ghume aur sham ko wapis laut gaye..

Ghar pahunch ka Rimpy ne apni frnds ko milne ki iccha ki ...toh Dad ne kal saath chalbe ka wada kiya

di addu ko lekat room mein chali gayi aur mein mom aur dad k room mein

mein - ab dad aap dono mein se koi muzhe batayega ....ki yeh dab kya ho raha hai ...aur mom aapke paas yeh super powers..

Dad - aane wale samay mein ek mahayudh honewala hai yeh ussi ki tayyari samaz lo.....

aur beta humari family koi sadharan nahi tum , mein, naina ritu aur addu
sab mein kuch na kuch powers hai...

lekin saati baate jannane ka abhi samay nahi aaya hai....

mein - uff yeh sahi samay ...sahi samay.....kab aayega woh..

dusre din hum sabhi hospital mein unn sabhi ladkiyo ki tabiyat dekhne gaye Rimpy bhi saath thi

sab hosh mein aagayi thi sirf sweety hi behosh thi....dad k kahne se Dsp sahab bhi aaye the aur sabhi ladkiyo
se unke ghar ka pata puch rahe the.

phir hum Sweety k paas gaye jo abhi tak behosh thi...Usse dekhkar Rimpy ko bahut bura lag raha tha

Addu - bhai yeh Rimpy di ki frnd hai na kys hua hai isse.....

mein - kuch nahi betu bas thodi bimar hai..
addu - Shayad ibnhe bukhar hai mein dekhu ...itna kahkar addu ne apna haath usske maathe par rakha...aur tabhi usse hosh aagaya ....

innko yahi chodte hai dekhte hai villan party kya kar rahi hai......

Durmukhasur bade krod se. ----
nahii ...yeh tune....accha nahi kiya kaal......meri pooja mein tune vighna daala hai
pitashri toh tap kar rahe hai aur mein kanyamedh yagya k dwara Ham sabke maalik Eblis ko ko prasanna karke aur shaktiyo ko prapt karna chahta tha....

aaj ki aahutiya aakhri thi...tune accha nahi kiya....

DA - snenapati Durjaya prithvi par jo hum burai paap...aur nasha gailarahe hai woh kaisa chal raha hai....

senapati - yuraj.....waha pata nahi Sangharah nasm se koi hai jo hamare
karyo ko rok raha hai ......

DA - toh pata kari usska...kaun hai woh.....ek manav humare karyo mein badha pahuncha raha hai aur tum shaktishali asur hokar kuc nahi kar rahe ho ..

dhyan rahe iss shristi k 7 lok poore hamare adhin hai ...unn ka upayog karo....

Krodhasur, lobhasur aur mohasutum jaskar manushya k man badlo

aur maya sur tum waha jaakar waha k vigyan ko dekho ......

phir sabha samapt hui.....

abhi k liye itna hi.....
agla MEGA UPDATE aaj raat ko...
A good story, interesting one
 
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