Coolraj839
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धन्यवादवेलकम बैक नेहा जी।
हम तो गोसिप के समय से ही आप के प्रशंसक है। आप की कहानी को बहुत ही मिस किया हमने। बहुत बढ़िया लगा आप को फिर से लिखते हुए देखकर।
वैसे फायरफाक्स भाई तो महिनों से फोरम से अन्तर्ध्यान है इसलिए नेगेटिव कमेन्टस नहीं ही देखने को मिलेगा । पर kamdev99008 भाई अभी भी यहां अपना जलवा बिखेर रहे हैं । मुझे विश्वास है आप भी उन्हें जरूर याद करती होंगी।
कहानी की शुरुआत बहुत बढ़िया है। हीरो शुरू में कमजोर या शर्मिले टाइप के ही होते हैं। लेकिन जैसे जैसे कहानी परवान चढ़ते जाती है वैसे वैसे वो सबकी खटिया खड़ी करते हुए अपनी एक अलग इमेज क्रिएट कर लेता है।
सोनू की स्थिति भी यही है। उसे एक बार खून का स्वाद चखने की देर है और मुझे लगता है सीमा इसके लिए परफेक्ट किरदार रहेगी।
सभी अपडेट्स बहुत ही बेहतरीन थे।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट।
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agle din main college pahuncha to sagar mujhe bahar hi mil gaya
"to phir kiske bare me socha tune" usne puchha
"waise to sabhi achhi hai lekin mujhe sima sabse thik lagi" maine bataya
"wow yaar.......tune bhi kya patakha maal chhata hai, sala uske liye to maine bhi bahut koshish ki thi lekin sali pati hi nahi, waise tujhe ummid hai ki wo tujhse pat jayegi" wo bola
"yaar usne ek do baar baat karne ki koshish ki thi lekin maine hi usse bhav nahi diya tha to shayad kaam ban jaye" main bola
"to chal use dhundhte hai" sagar bola
aur phir hum dono sima ko dhundhne lage koi 10 minute baad wo hame canteen ki taraf jate dikhai di to hum bhi wahan pahuch gaye.
wo abhi apni ek friend ke sath kone wali table par baithi thi aur waiter ko order de rahi thi. sagar ne mujhe dekha aur phir mera hath pakad kar sima ki taraf chal diya to kisi ladki ke paas jane aur usse baat karne ka sochte hue hi meri fatne lagi thi lekin ab kiya bhi kya ja sakta tha main jaise khichte hue sagar ke sath chalne laga
"hi girls....." sagar sima ke paas pahuch kar bola
"hello..." jawab sima ke sath baithi ladki jiska naam nilu tha ne jawab diya jabki sima to sagar ko dekh kar hi naak sikodne lagi thi kyonki wo janti thi ki sagar use patana chahta hai
"kya hum yahan baith sakte hai" sagar ne puchha
"kyon aur koi table khali nahi hai kya...." sima charo taraf nazre daudate hue thoda rudely boli kyonki bahut si table khali thi
sagar samajh to gaya ki sima nahi chahti hai ki hum wahan baithe lekin meri khatir wo bechara jyada nahi bola
"wo kya hai na sima ki sonu tumse kuchh baat karna chahta hai isiliye hum yahan aaye hai" sagar bola
ab pahli baar sima ne notice kiya ki main bhi wahan hu
"ohh....hi sonu, kya baat karni hai tumhe" wo boli
"wo....wo...." mere muh se itna hi nikal paya
"ye wo...wo...kya kar rahe ho, achhe se baith kar baat karo" sima boli to main aur sagar baith gaye
"ab bolo kya baat hai..." sima boli
ab main kya bolta meri to waise hi fati padi thi tabhi sagar ki kohni meri pasli se takrai aur jaise main hosh me aaya
"wo...us din tum mujhse kuchh kahna chahti thi aur main bina baat kiye nikal gaya tha na to mujhe baad me achha nahi laga to bas wahi puchne aaya tha" himmat karke maine bol diya
"achha wo.....are wo to bas aise hi roka tha tumhe waise koi baat nahi thi" wo boli
"ok to hum chalte hai phir..." kahte hue main khada ho gaya
"are baith na yaar kuchh kha kar chalte hai bahut bhukh lagi hai" sagar jabardasti mera hath pakad kar mujhe baithate hue bola
main bhi chupchap baith gaya thodi der baad hi waiter order laga kar chala gaya ab sagar to sima se baat kar nahi sakta tha aur mere muh me to jaise jubaan hi nahi thi to sabhi log chupchap nashta karne lage is bich maine do tin baar sima ki taraf dekha to uski nazre mujh par hi thi to har baar maine sharma kar nazar jhuka li.
khair nashta khatam hua to maine bill diya aur sagar aur main jane lage to picche se sima ki aawaj aai
"sonu tum kya bike se aaye ho" sima boli
"ha...haan" main pichhe mud kar bola
"to pls yaar college ke baad mujhe ghar tak drop kar dena na, actually meri scooty kharab ho gai hai to subah bus se aana pada tha" wo boli
ab main kya bolu mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha kyonki ek parayi ladki aaj tak bike me mere pichhe nahi baithi thi
"haan...haan...chhod dega ye" mujhe chup dekh kar sagar bola
"maine tumse nahi sonu se puchha hai, samjhe" sima tunak kar boli
"ok main tumhe drop kar dunga" achanak mere muh se nikla
"thik hai phir college ke baad parking me hi milte hai, bye" kahte hue wo aur nilu wahan se chale gaye
"le bhai tera to kaam ho gaya, ab ghar jate wakt raste me acche se bate kar lena sima se" sagar bola
aur phir hum bhi apni class me aa gaye aur main aage ke bare me sochne laga
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to dosto mere papa ki age 50 years aur mummy ki 48 hai mere chacha 35 jabki bua 28 years ki hai to sabse pahle aapko bua se hi milwata hu
to ye hai meri bua jinka naam LILA hai aur ye 28 years ki ekdum gori aur hasin aurat hai shadi ke baad inka badan bahut bhar gaya hai koi bhi ise chodne ke bekarar ho sakta hai iska figure 34 32 34 hai
ab number hai meri badi didi VANDANA ka jise ghar par sabhi log `vandu` bulate hai
iski age abhi 23 hai lekin apni age se kuchh jyada hi badi lagti hai kyonki iski hight aam ladkiyo se jyada hai aur iska badan bhi bahut bhara hua hai janghe moti hai aur boobs aur gand bhi bahut bhari hai iska figure 36, 28, 36 hai ye graduation kar chuki hai aur filhal me computer course kar rahi hai waise iski shadi ki bhi taiyari hai lekin abhi wo mana kar rahi hai
iske baad aati hai meri chhoti didi SANJANA jise pyar se sanju kahte hai
ye abhi 21 ki hai aur bahut hi pyari aur cute ladki hai ye ekdum slim badan ki hai lekin gand aur boobs iske bhi mast hai iska figure 32 26 34 hai ye abhi graduation kar rahi hai aur college jati hai
ab bari hai meri to main hu SONU main abhi 19 ka hu aur isi saal se college jane laga hu
main dikhne me good lucking aur handsome hu padhai me bhi achha hu aur paiso ki to kami hi nahi hai mere aujaar ka size koi 8 inch hoga aur mota bhi mast hai jo kisi randi ke bhi aansu nikal sakta hai
waise to bahut si ladkiya mujhse dosti karna chahti hai lekin main thoda shy kism ka hu isliye ladkiyo se thoda dur hi rahta hu lekin iska matlab ye nahi hai ki mujhe sex ya chudai me koi interest nahi hai jabki wo to mera sabse fevorite hai isliye main jab bhi mauka milta hai ya phir raat me aksar hi porn dekha karta hu, aur ladkiyo ki gand meri bahut badi kamjori hai mujhe har ladki ki gand dekhne me bahut maja aata hai lekin manine aaj tak apne ghar ki ladkiyo yani bahno ya bua ko is nazar se kabhi nahi dekha tha na hi unke bare me mere dil me kuchh galat tha lekin honi ko kon taal sakta hai na chahte hue aakhir me mujhe incest ke daldal me dhasna hi pada aur uski shuruat mere chacha ki shadi se hui jo abhi 35 ke hone ke baad bhi kuware hi baithe the...