Indian10inch
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Maja aa raha hai....nice story going....give some more taste to story by adding gif and pics....superb writing any way...
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e apne idea se story ko aage badhao bahut badhiya likh rahe ho sab k man ke likhoge to kuch bhi dhang ka nahi likh paogeThanks.
Aap logo ke feed back ke liye.
Yaha tak story padhi hai tho kuch suggestion de sakte ho ki kya story me ahe hona chaiye or konse scene.