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[AP 316]

Love 1994

 

[Agasthya]

Jeet toh tu bhi nahi shakta bhosdk
Yaa alias se Postega?

Naahh post karunga toh issi id se..kam se kam mod id dekh ke 4 log review toh denge..

 

[AP 316]

Usc ke baad ayega update tab tak baki update ke review dedo

Tu story bhi likhta hai bhosdk

 

[Love 1994]

Love 1994

update kyu nhi diya aaj

 

[Agasthya]

Wo married hai ​

Maja bhabhiyo ke saath he aata h be..

 

[Love 1994]

Tu story bhi likhta hai bhosdk

Better than Evry insect writer here

 

[Lilith]

Doesn't matter ,99 xxx or 1 percent plot ho toh bhi jeet shakte hain. plot according to me sabse jyada important nahi hota story mein Emotions hone chahiye narration on point honi chahiye dialogues timing impeccable honi chahiye . Plot toh in general lagbhag same he hotey hain baaki sabpe kaam karo

Itna sab kuch 8k words mein likhne mein bahut kuch condense karna padta hai...1-2 update ke size mein Puri story likhna is a real challenge kabhi... ending ko itne jaldi justify karna mushkil hai mere liye toh

You been writing since years aapke liye easy hai yeh sab

 

[Aakash.]

Maja bhabhiyo ke saath he aata h be..

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[AP 316]

Naahh post karunga toh issi id se..kam se kam mod id dekh ke 4 log review toh denge..

Aji lund bc 4 review k liye likhun ab.
Abe kuch bhi likhde ye gandu log review toh de he denge unhe story se thodi matlab hai best reader award se matlab hai bhencho aise waahiyat reviews de rahe hain ki puch matt 90% story padh bhi nahi rahe honge

 

[AGENT x SHADOW]

Maja bhabhiyo ke saath he aata h be..

Are bhai jyada bhabhiyo mai bhi mat ghus Jana