Erotica मेरी रूपाली दीदी और जालिम ठाकुर..

[boss8308]

Mene do update de diye hai or koi likes or comments nahi diya hai to fir muje pata kaise chalega ki iss story me koi interested hai ki nahi agar next update chahiye to like or cmnts kro jo muje likhne me motivate karega

 

[krit68]

Bhai in my opinion don't continue this story, kahi bhi fit nhi ho rhi story me, rupali ka character ab wo deserve nhi karta, aap chaho to isi ka naya part bana ke continue kar skte ho ya ek naya kahani likho.
same aisi hi story shohar bechare jo golu something ka h usme protagonist ya antagonist jo bhi boli ek hi h, do teen rkhoge to wo feel nhi rhegaa kahani ko lekar.
Baki jaisi aapki marzi

 

[kasi_babu]

Ekdam mast update. Agla update ka intezar hai

 

[boss8308]

Ekdam mast update. Agla update ka intezar hai

Yeh story continue krna band ki hai , mene apna new forum start kiya jaha pr new story start ki hai

https://xforum.live/threads/malkin-%F0%9F%91%B8banne-ke-liye-ki-apne-hi-bete-se-shaadi-%F0%9F%91%B0%E2%80%8D%E2%99%80.209523/page-15#post-11958177

 

[Mahesh007]

Nice update and wating next

 

[Ashiq Baba]

Ye kahani aapne kafi pahle likhna band kiya to bada dukh hua tha magar ab dubara chalu kiya to achha laga. Bahut achhi kahani hai. Isko continue karo aur jaldi update dijiye. Mere jaise purane fans fir se ayenge aur satayenge. Congratulations.