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Hahaha bhai hone ko kuch bhi ho sakta h__Lo ji hiyan to kahani hi kuchh or nikli Baap ki photo pe haar chadha hua hai or Maa ka pata nahi waiting for next
Hahaha bhai hone ko kuch bhi ho sakta h__Lo ji hiyan to kahani hi kuchh or nikli Baap ki photo pe haar chadha hua hai or Maa ka pata nahi waiting for next
Ye thik kaha tumne __ jaise apni jindgi twist se bhari hoti h vaise hee ye kahani bhi hArmy per hi to bharosa bacha hai per tum per thoda dout hai kya pata kuch nayabtwist le aaye![]()
Hahaha ttarayi karte h bhaiYe bhibadhuri kahani hai bhall ne mara hai biwi ko fasa kar bhalla ko maro or uski 4 betiya hai r ko nanga karo
Abb kya kaha jaaye mahoday __ badi dukhbhari kahani hDekha bola tha na twist ayega bahut emotional twist hai 2-2 maa hai mujhe lagta hai uski maa mahal se hi related hai shayad waiting for next amazing update![]()
Hahaha woh toh aage hee maloom hoga kaun villein kaun hero __ isiliye toh kaha h " Parde mey rahne do__ parda na uthao"Wah guru wah ab 2 Maaa aagyeee Kahani me very good esa lagata hai mujhe pakka dosri wale villain hogi Hero ki Maa![]()
Congratulations for your storysbse pahle to sbko hii/hello_
Mai iss forum pe new hoon__aur maine 1-2 hi story padhi h _jyada nahi padhi __wo kya h na mere ander karne ka keeda kuch jyada hee h__ toh padhne se accha maine likhne ka socha__kyuki mujhe spclly ye lagta h ki dekhne se accha karna chahiye __toh maine bhi khud pada writers ki line mey__
ab pandit ji ka beta hoon_obviously pandit ji ka hee beta hoon mai isiliye ye title rakha __kisi ko kast dene ka mera aissa koi intention nahi tha__mai to apni story mey wo likhna chahta hoon jo pandit ji ke bete ne kia__
ye poori story meri imagination pr based h__na ki kisi ki personal life se inspired h__koi bhi personally na le__ye story lust ke aath sath bahot kuch sikhayegi bhi... Kisi ko koi pareshaani ya dikkat ho toh uske liye__mazrat![]()
mujhe pata tha wo abhi nahi aayega __ kyuki abhi toh month ki starting h__
aur mandakini ne already ek kaam de rakkha h__ par waqt kab karwat le le uska koi bharosa nahi__
chalo sab uske bharose__ dopaher ho chuki thi mai abhi bhi rastey mey tha__ tabhi mujhe ek call aaya __ phone nikaal ke dekha toh koi naya nmbr tha __
me-- hello hnji kaun
udhar se-- kaise ho mere gudd ke laddu __ kab se phone nahi kiya __ abb koi aur mil gayi hai na chodne ke liye toh meri kya zarurat bhala__ accha suno na aa jao aaj bahot khujla rahi h __ khujli mitaa do na aake uuhhunnnhh
maine phone kaan se hata ke uske speaker pe hath rakha aur ( ye kaisi asleel baatain kar rahi h kaun hai ye aur aise log kanha se aate h)
me-- haa toh ichgaurd laga le na jnha khujli ho rahi h bencchoo mere kyu kanghi kar rahi h__ rakkhhh teri maaa kaaaa raakkhhh..
pata nhi knha knha se aa jaatey h__ abb pata nahi knha ki hogi aur mai abb wnha jaau mera vaise bhi mood kharaab h upar se ye husn ki mallika__ par ek minute aakhir ye nmbr h kiska kai baar msg aaye h par dlt bhi ho gaye h__ phle check karta hoon kis kameene ne gift kiya h ye phone __ pr aise kaise pata chalega kiske naam pe h ye sim ghar mey pata karta hu jaake__
mai abb gaadi dauda dee__ kareeb aadhey ghantey mey mai ghar pe tha aur roz ki tarah __ ek minute roj dopaher ko mai toh hota nahi toh mujhe kya maloom kya hota h ghar pe__
mai ander aaya ander sab sannata aunty ke room se cooler chalne ki aawaaz aa rahi thi__ halke se kholl ke dekha aunty masst so rahi h thi toh aise par vaise dekha nahi har waqt tharak acchi nahi hoti mitwa__
Isliye mai bhi apne room mey aa gaya__ dhatt tere ki aunty ka phone lena bhool gaya chalo chodo abb gaya toh wo galat samjhengi uth jayengi wo alag se mujhe bhi neend lagi thi__
tabhi wtspp pe ek msg aaya _ wo hee nmbr tha__ sabb english mey likha tha toh maine bhi same 2 uhh likh ke rply kar diya__ abb maine saare contacts khole wtspp wale dost toh theyy hee unki family members bhi theyy mera cmpny manager HR head mandakini 2 bhabhiyaa bhi judd chuki thi wo 5 ladkiyaa bhi mtlb ki sab ki sab women's hee h__ dosto ko chod ke abb inse kya hee baat karu abhi ek msg karu raat bhar toh ye sone nahi dengi__ isiliye sabko avoid kiya aur phone side mey rakha aur fan chaalu krke mai bhi late gaya bed pe__
jab aankh khuli toh shaam ho chuki thi ghadi sawa 6 baja rahi thi__
Mai bahar nikal ke chatt pe Aya toh andhera hone laga tha__ tabhi
snjv snjv knha ho aa jao khana kha lo aake __ ye aunty neechey se bula rahi thi__
mai neechey gaya bhook toh mujhe wakai lagi thi__ sab garma garam tha aaj bhook kuch jyada hee thi toh khoob kha liya__
me-- aunty abb mai thoda tahel ke aata hoon __ vaise uncle kya vnhi rukk gaye aaye nahi tabse__
aunty-- Arre nahi beta woh toh apne baccho ke paas gaye h wnha bhi dekhna padta h na __tum jao jyada door mt jaana thik h __
me-- haa thik h_
maine phone liya aur bike nikaali aur bahar road pe aake 30ki speed mey mast chalne laga__
tabhi peechey se ek car sarr se nikal ke aage ko gayi__ skoda ki thi aayi toh peechey se hai hoga koi mujhe kya kaun sa mai usse pakad lunga bike dauda ke__
aise hee gaadi chalatey hue highway tak pahunch gaya___ wnhi aage se ek cut tha jo idhar neechey ko aata h_ vaise toh expressway pe har jagah cut nahi hote aisi jagah toh bilkul nhi jnha aaspaas kuch na ho ajeeb baat ye thi kii cut pe aane jaane walo ke liye koi toll naka nahi tha __ isi se pata chalta kitni ki wo mantri h andhera full ho chuka tha__
maine samne upar dekha toh wohi car khadi h upar uski saari lights jal rahi h par andhera tha aur upar bhi itni h toh kuch dikh nahi raha tha__
maine apni bike mudai aur ghar ki taraf chal diya par aage se hee bhanu ke gaon jaane ki rasta hai__ aur wo gaon bhi jyada bada nahi tha 20-25 gharo wala gaon tha__ pahle toh socha chalte h par mai apna hathiyaar lana bhool gaya aur khali hath jana bewakoofi se badh ke aur kuch nahi h__
Mai seedha ghar aa gaya__ aunty abhi bhi baramdey mey baithi thi__
Unhone mujhe dekha pr bola kuch nahi__ maine bhi kuch nahi bola__ aur apne room mey aaa gaya aaj kuch khaas nahi hua yrr bas normal hee raha sab kuch__
Maine mandakini ko cll laga di__ par usne call uthaya nahi__ ek do baar aur lagaya par usne koi answer nahi diya__ huuhh jarur koi baat h_