Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Awara]

UPDATE 11 ~
(ARRIVAL)​

*Ughh*


Badan me uthti ek tez lehar ne Urvi ko ankhe kholne per majboor ker dia, Chaaro taraf andhera chaya huwa tha roshni naam ki koi cheez bhi nahi-


*Thump* *Thump*


Har taraf se zordar kadmo ki awaze aa rahi thi, Urvi ko kuch samajh nahi aa rahi thi ke ye kia ho raha hai akeli andhere me doobi wo larki dar se kaanpne lagi thi-



“Urvi mere paas he rehna! Main tujhe kuch nahi hone du ga”


Us andhere me ek Apni awaz sun Urvi ko kuch sakoon huwa, Urvi ne sar utha ker saamne daikha to usse uss ka bhai dikhne laga, Lekin jaise he uss ki nazar uss ke khoon se latpat kapro per gayi Urvi ka dil dehal gaya.


Aarav Zanjeero se bandha ek Talwar haath me pakre khara tha, Shareer per jagha jagha Ghaav chehre per bhi jagha maas phata huwa Ankhe khoon se bhari huwi, Aarav khara mushkil se saans le paa raha tha.



Urvi: (Groan) Bhayiaaa!


Urvi ki dard se bhari halki si awaz nikli aur jaise uss ke paas se andhera hatne laga, Jaise he andhera hat ker saamne ka drishya Urvi ke saamne aya uss ki bachi huwi himmat bhi jawab dene lagi.


Un ke saamne hazaro rakshas the jo dono behan bhai ko lalchai nazro se daikh rahe the, Jahan Dard se latpat Urvi zameen per giri huwi thi wanhi Aarav un rakshaso ke saamne talwar liye khara huwa tha.


Lekin un rakshaso se larna Na-Mumkin tha ye Aarav ko bhi pata tha, Uss ke chehre per wo guilt uss ka pura dard bayan ker raha tha.


Aarav (shivering): Mujhe Maaf karna Urvi! Tera bhai kabhi ek acha bhai na ban saka.


Aarav ki awaz me dard tha jis ko sun Urvi ka mann baith raha tha, Wo bolna chah rahi thi lekin dard se uss ki awaz bhi nahi nikal rahi thi wo hilna chah rahi thi lekin uss ka badan uss ka saath chorr chuka tha. Aur tabhi-


*Groowwwrrrr*


Ek Rakshas ne daharte huwe apne haath se Aarav ko chehre se pakra aur Uss ke shareer ko beeche se cheerte huwe 2 tukro me bant dia, Apne saamne apne bhai ko aise daikh Urvi ki zindagi he khatam ho gayi-



Kuch pal khamooshi se wo samajhne ki koshis karti rahi ke abhi huwa kia hai? Kuch Palo baad jab usse ehsaas huwa to uss ke pure shareer me ek sard sihran phirne lagi, Uss ki ankhe khulne lagi aur wo puri awaz se cheekhte huwe apne bhai ko pukarne lagi.


Urvi (Scream): Bhayia!!! Bhayia!!! Bhayia!!!


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“Urvi! Uth Urvi”


Urvi ko apne bhai ki awaz ayi to wo darte huwe Achanak uth ker baith gayi, Uss ke saamne uss ka bhai chinta bhari nigaho se uss ko daikh raha tha, Apne bhai ko Apne saamne sahi salamt daikhte he Urvi uss se lipat gayi.


Aarav (Frightened): Arrey! Kia ho gya hai tujhe? Neend me chila rahi thi tu.


Aarav ne Urvi ke sar per haath pherate huwe kaha, Urvi ko jab apna bhai sahi halat me hone ka yaqeen ho gya to usse ehsaas huwa ke wo iss waqt kahan hai?


Dono iss waqt America ki flight me the, Baki passengers bhi dono ko heraani se daikh rahe the, Aarav ne to Urvi ki health ke liye usse araam karne ko kaha tha lekin Urvi ki halat aur bhi kharab ho gayi thi.



Urvi: Dobara ek bura khawab daikha!



Urvi ko roz raat ko aise khawab ane lage the, Shuru me to Aarav ne kuch khaas dhayan nahi dia lekin ab usse bhi chinta hone lagi thi.


Aarav: Hum aj Araam karne ke baad kal seedhe Doctor ke paas jane wale hai! Aur iss baar main koi bahane nahi sun'nne wala.


Aarav ne sakhti se kaha to Urvi ne hami bhar li, Sab passengers abhi bhi unhe he daikh rahe the to Urvi ne scene na banane ke liye dobara laitna he sahi samjha, Adarsh ne unn ke liye First Class ticket karwai thi jis se unhe separate cabin jaisi seat mili thi.

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Aarav ko abhi bhi apni behan ke liye chinta ho rahi thi, Lekin uss ka wanha khara rehna bhi sahi nahi tha iss liye Aarav wapis apni seat per aa ker baith gaya, Lekin abhi bhi wo Urvi ke baare me soch raha tha.



Tabhi Aarav ko apne paas rakhi ek magazine dikhi to Aarav ne usse parhne ke liye utha lia, Magazine me likhi zada cheezo ke baare me Aarav ko pata nahi tha lekin wo phir bhi sab kuch dhayan se parh raha tha-


Aise he page palatate palatate ek page ne Aarav ko rukne per majboor ker dia-



“New young businessperson on the rise”


“Akash Sayani”

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Akash Adarsh ka pehla beta matlab Vansh ka bara bhai tha, Aarav ke andar aur bhi jan'nne ki curiosity jagne lagi to uss ne apna mobile nikal lia aur Wifi se connect ker lia, First Class me Aarav ko Onboard Wifi bhi mil raha tha.


First Class jitni mehngi thi utne he uss ke privilege bhi the, Accelerated check-in and security service, First class walo ko sab se pehle board kia jata jis ki wajha se Urvi zada pareshaan nahi huwi, Kisi bhi normal insaan ke liye ye sab kuch bohat extraordinary experience tha.


Aarav ko bhi acha lag raha tha lekin wo ye nahi bhool raha tha ke ye privilege uss ke apne kamaye nahi hai, Dil me ek khawaish ke kisi din apni mehnat se iss experience ko enjoy kare ga.


Mobile se Aarav ne internet per Akash ke baare me search kia to jaise jaise wo uss ke baare me janta ja raha tha waise waise uss ke andar Akash se milne ki chahat barhti ja rahi thi, Sirf 20 ki Age me he Akash ne business ki duniya me kadam jama liye the aur ab wo apne pita ki tarha he ek successful insaan tha.



Akash ki wajha se Adarsh ko bhi bhi bohat faida huwa tha, Jahan Akash saphalata ki unchayio ko chu raha tha wanhi ek aur Naam bhi uth raha tha.


“Rivalry Between Akash Sayani VS Veer Singh”


Veer ek Hindustani larka tha jo Akash ka rival kaha ja raha tha, Veer ki family bhi achi khaasi thi aur kaha ja raha tha ke agar veer aise he chalta raha tha wo Big 4 family me le ja sakta tha apni family ko.


Big 4 Family sirf paise ki wajha se Big family nahi thi, Big 4 family ke paas power thi jo kisi bhi desh ko puri tarha hila sakti thi, Pichle 25 saal se Big 4 Family change nahi huwi thi lekin Veer ke ane ke baad kaya palatati huwi dikhayi de rahi thi.



Kuch der aur aise he browse karne ke baad Aarav ne mobile wapis rakh dia aur aage kia karna hai uss baare me sochne laga, Aarav ne saamne daikha to uss ke saamne window khul gayi jis per Time chal raha tha.



[21 Days Hours 55 Minutes]


Ye Agli baar jaane ka waqt bacha tha, Urvi ki tabiyat ki wajha se Aarav ko Nigeria me zada waqt rehna per gaya tha, Aarav ko jald he khud ko tayar karna tha agli larayi ke liye Daisuke ke kehne ke mutabik Aarav ko ek naya Trainer milne wala tha jis se Aarav Takatwar ho sakta hai.


Aarav ki zindagi me bohat kam waqt me bohat se badlav aa rahe the, Lekin un sab me Aarav ko sirf ek baat ki Khushi thi ke wo apni behan ka treatment karwa sakta hai aur usse khush rakh sakta hai.


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JFK International Airport, New York
USA ~ 4:34 PM



“Dhayan se Urvi!”


Aarav ne aage barh Urvi ka haath pakar ker usse Sahara dia jis se wo gire na, Dobara Flight me Urvi ki tabiyat kharab ho rahi thi pichli baar ki tarha zada kharab nahi thi lekin sar dard se wo khud ko sambhal nahi paa rahi thi.



Aarav uss ka haath pakar ker usse liye baahir aa gaya, Idhar udhar nazre ghooma ker Aarav saamne khare logo me apne Naam ka board dhoondne laga-



Lekin jab Aarav ki nazar saamne khare shaks per gayi to usse board daikhna he nahi para, Kuch waqt pehle jis Insaan ke baare me Aarav Article parh raha tha wo khud Aarav ke saamne tha-


“Akash!!!”


Aarav ne Naam pukara to Akash bhi Aarav ki taraf daikhne laga, Aarav ki daikhte he uss ne haath hila ker usse Greet kia.



Akash (Smile): Mujhe nahi laga tha ke tum mujhe pehchan pao gye! Tumhe kaise pata main he tumhe lene aya hu? Mere paas to koi board bhi nahi hai.



Aarav (Awkward): Flight me Magazine me parh raha tha ap ke baare me!



Akash Aarav ki baat sun ker hansne laga, Akash wahan kuch special nahi ker raha tha lekin uss ki har harkat me ek Elegance thi, Urvi ne bhi haath jor ker Namaste kaha to Akash ne uss ka jawab de dia.


Akash: Sorry Dad thore busy the to wo khud nahi aa sake! I hope you don't mind.


Aarav: it's okay! Yahan tak ke ap itne vyast hone ke baad bhi hamare liye yahan aye ye he bohat hai hamare liye.


Akash ne Urvi ki halat daikhi to uss ne wahan khara rehna sahi nahi samjha, Uss ne apna haath utha ker ishara kia to uss ke saath 2 guards ne aage barh Aarav aur Urvi se un ka samaan le lia.


Wo jaise he aage barhe Akash ke guards me un ke liye Raasta banana shuru ker dia, Sabhi log unhe he daikh rahe the to wanhi kuch Dur se Akash ki picture le rahe the, Akhir itne guards ke saath koi Sadharan Insaan to ho nahi sakta tha.


Wanhi Aarav khud ko aur Urvi ko sab ki nazro se bachana chah raha tha, Daisuke ne usse Low profile rakhne ko kaha tha lekin Akash ke saath Low Profile rakhna mushkil tha.



Airport se baahir ate he Aarav ko saamne Gariyo ki line lagi dikhayi di, Akash ne aage barh Aarav ke liye ek Car ka darwaza khol dia, Aarav ko chinta ho rahi thi ke Urvi ko shak na ho ke Akhir ek Bodyguard ki job ke liye aye insaan ko itni izaat kiu mil rahi hai.


Lekin Akash iss baat se Anjan tha ke Urvi ko yahan ane ki asli wajha nahi pata, Aarav Urvi ko le ker Car me baith gaya Akash bhi Ussi Car me aage baith gaya, Aur Car chalne lagi New York ki sarko per-


Shaam ka waqt ho raha tha to bohat si Buildings ki roshni uss drishya ko khubsoorat bana raha tha, Aarav barfeele Area me chote gharo wale shehar me rehne wala larka tha, Iss tarha bari bari buildings wo bhi pehli baar daikh raha tha.

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Bhale he uss ne jo kuch bhi experience kia tha lekin shehar ki khubsoorti uss ko apni taraf Akarshak ker rahi thi, Urvi dobara neend ki halat me thi to wo kuch bhi nahi daikh rahi thi, 45 Minute ke lambe safar ke baad wo pohanch gye apni manzal per-


“Sayani Mansion”

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White Color ka wo Mansion lights me jagmagata kisi ko bhi apni khubsoorti me dooba sakta tha, Wahan rakhi har cheez me ek khubsoorti jhalak rahi thi uss ko maintain karne ke liye kitne log lagte ho gye ye sochna bhi mushkil tha.


Car ruki to Sab baahir aa gy, Sabhi Gariya wahan se jaane lagi Akash muskurate huwe Aarav ko daikh raha tha Jo Mansion ki khubsoorti ko apni ankho me kaid karna chah raha tha.


Akash: Sorry Aarav! Main to tumhe Main House me rakhna chahta tha, Lekin Daisuke ke orders hai ke tumhe baki servants ki tarha he alag rakha jaye.



Aarav ko samajh aa raha tha ke Daisuke ne uss ki bhalayi ke liye he ye kaha tha, Waise bhi Aarav un ke saath rehta to comfortable nahi rehne wala, Akash unhe le ker Servant Quarter ki taraf le gaya.

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Servant Quarter Mansion ki tarha bare to nahi the, Lekin Aarav ke liye wo he bohat luxury House ki tarha ke the, Aarav aur Urvi ko separate Quarter dia gaya tha.



“Ye bachi ko kia huwa?”



Peeche se Chinta bhari ek awaz ne sab ka dhayan apni taraf kheench lia, Aarav ne peeche ghoom ker daikha to ek Aurat Saari pehne chalte huwe un ki taraf aa rahi thi, Wo Aurat seedhe Urvi ke paas aa gayi jo Aarav ke sahare khari huwi thi.


Aurat (Softly): Kia huwa hai bachi ko? Akash tumhe Aqal hai kia? Iss halat me bachi ko khara kia huwa hai!!!


Uss Aurat ne Urvi ke mathe ko haath laga ker Fever check kia, Wo gusse se Akash ko bole ja rahi thi wanhi Akash bhi chote bache ki tarha khara daant kha raha tha.


Koi bhi iss waqt ye nahi keh sakta tha ke iss Larke se bare bare businessman darte hai, Lekin Uss Aurat ko daikh Aarav apne mann me uth rahe tofan ko shaant ker raha tha.



“Maa!”


Aarav ke mann me ek he shabd goonj raha tha, Maa! Ek pal ke liye Aarav ko uss aurat me apni Maa dikhi jo Urvi ke bimaar hone per aise he dar jati thi, Lekin ye uss ki Maa nahi thi lekin uss Aurat se mehsoos hori wo mamta Aarav ko bikher rahi thi.



Akash: Main andar he le ker jaa raha tha! Ab ap aa gayi ho to khud he sambhalo.



Akash ne muskurate huwe uss Aurat se kaha Aurat ne side se ghoorte huwe Akash ko daikha, Phir ek female servant ko apne paas bula lia.


Aurat: Julia, Bachi ke Araam karne ke liye tayari karo! Jet Lag huwa hai mere khayal se to Aj raat tum iss ka khayal rakhna, Aur Doctor ko bula lo wo bhi ek baar check ker le, Tab tak main kuch halka sa khaane ke liye bana ker laati hu.



Aurat ne Julia ko instruction diye, Abhi tak uss ne Aarav aur Urvi se naam tak nahi poocha tha, Usse sirf Urvi ki fikar ho rahi thi uss ki iss harkat se he uss ka saaf dil ka ehsaas ho raha tha sab ko-



Akash: Mom! Ap ko nahi lagta ke ap ko pehle khud ko introduce karwana chahiye?


Aurat: Main to bhool he gayi! Maaf karna beta, Main Archana Sayani, Adarsh Sayani ki patni aur iss jhalle ki Maa, Mujhe bata dia tha mere husband ne ke tum dono aa rahe ho lekin tumhari behan ki halat daikh ker main khud ko control nahi ker saki, Main tumhe dhanyavaad kehna chahti hu ke tum mere bete ke liye yahan tak aye.


Archana ne halka sa sar jhukate huwe pyaar bhare andaz se kaha, Uss ki ankho me nazar aa raha tha ke wo apne bacho se kitna pyaar karti hai, Jo dusre bacho ki halat daikh ker itna dar rahi thi wo apne bete ke gayab hone se kitna dar gayi ho gi ye lafzo me nahi bayan ho sakta tha.



Aarav: Dhanyavaad ki kaisi baat! Ulta shukriya to mujhe kehna chahiye jo ap logo ne mere liye itna kuch kia, Main ne kuch selfish wishes bhi ki thi lekin ap ne wo bhi puri ki uss ki mujhe bohat khushi hai.


Archana ne aage barh Aarav ko sar per haath pher usse saraha aur dobara Servant ko instruction dene shuru ker diye dono ke liye, Aarav ko Urvi ki chinta nahi karni per rahi thi Archana ne usse sab zimedari apne upar chorrne ka keh dia.



Julia ne Aarav se Urvi ko le lia aur usse andar le gayi, Urvi abhi bhi hosh me nahi thi puri tarha un ke jaane ke Baad Archana bhi wahan se chali gayi-



Akash (Sigh): Huh! Maa hamesha se he aisi hai, Un se kisi ko takleef me nahi daikha jata un ki kisi baat ka bura mat Man'nna.



Aarav: Bura kiu Man'nna? Mujhe to Khushi ho rahi hai ke yahan mere sivaye bhi meri behan ki fikar hai kisi ko!



Akash: Waise Aarav! Agar tum zada thake nahi ho to mere saath aoo gye kuch der ke liye?



Aarav flight se thora thak to gaya tha leki. Wo Akash ko mana nahi karna chahta tha iss liye haan keh dia, Akash usse apne saath dusri taraf le gaya wahan ek bara kamra tha, Akash ke ishare se uss ko khol dia gaya.



Akash andar chala gaya Aarav bhi uss ke saath andar aa gaya, Baki sab log baahir ruk gye sirf 1 un ke saath andar aya aur Darwaza band ker dia, Ye kamra ek gym ki tarha ka tha jahan sabhi Gym equipment the.



Wanhi dewar ke upar kuch katana aur different weapons bhi lage huwe the, Beech me he fight ke liye ke Mat bhi bicha huwa tha-


Akash: Aarav galat mat samajhna! Lekin main ek baar tumhe Test karna chahta hu, Agar koi aur hota to main ye na karta lekin baat mere chote bhai ki hai, Can you spar with Barbie for me?


Akash ne apne saath khare Admi ki taraf ishara kia, Naam Barbie tha lekin built-up uss ka hulk ki tarha ka tha, Aarav samajh sakta tha Akash ye kiu chahta hai.



Aarav (Nod): Theek hai!



Aarav ke Hami bharte he Akash ne Barbie ko ishara ker dia, Dono Mat ki taraf chale gye Aarav apne shoes utarne laga-


Aarav: Kia ye Barbie trust Worthy hai? Daisuke ne mujhe kisi ke saamne bhi apni power Use karne se sambhalne ko kaha hai!



Akash: Tum fikar mat karo! Barbie mere sab se Loyal servant me se ek hai.



Aarav tayar ho ker Mat ke beech me chala gaya, Barbie ne Wooden Training Sword utha li aur ek Aarav ki taraf barha di, Aarav ne Sword ko pakar lia aur khara ho gya.



Barbie: I’ll try to go easy on you!


Barbie ne Sword pakar ker apne Stance me khara ho gya, Aarav bhi ane wale Attack ke liye tayar ho gya.


Akash: Pehle Attack ko tum sirf block karo gye!


Akash ne Aarav se kaha to Aarav ne haan ne sar hila ker hami bhar di.



Akash: Hajime!



Akash ke signal dete he Barbie ne apni sword se perfect defense banate huwe attack kia, Wanhi Aarav Orc King aur Alpha jaise beast se lar ke aya tha uss ke liye Barbie ka Attack bohat Easy tha, Bina zada struggle kiye Aarav ne apni sword se Barbie ki Sword per Slash Use ker dia.


Aarav ki speed Aur power dono he inhumam thi, Barbie Aarav ko underestimate nahi ker raha tha lekin usse bhi aise strong block ki umeed nahi thi, Barbie ki sword uss ke haath se nikalte huwe peeche ja giri.


Jahan Barbie heran tha wanhi Akash chehre per muskurahat sajaye Aarav ko daikh raha tha, Aarav block ke baad ab Attack karne ke liye tayar ho raha tha.



Akash: Itna bohat hai! Main jo daikhna chahta tha main ne daikh lia hai!


Aarav: Per main ne to Attack kia he nahi!!!


Akash: Us ki zaroorat nahi hai! Tum Vansh ko protect ker sakte ho, Mujhe kuch bhi aur daikhne ki zaroorat nahi hai.


*Knock* *Knock*


Abhi wo baat aage barha paate uss se pehle hw darwaze per dastak huwi, Barbie ne ja ker darwaza khola to ek guard ne usse kuch kaha to Barbie ne Akash ko ishara ker dia.


Akash: Tum soch rahe ho gye Aarav ke tumhara Trainer kahan hai?


Akash sahi keh raha tha, Daisuke ne Aarv se kaha tha ke uss se pehle he uss ka trainer wahan ho ga lekin abhi tak Aarav ko wo kanhi nahi dikh raha tha-



*Screech*


Barbie ne darwaza khola to ek larki andar aa gayi, Itni sardi me bhi uss ka badan paseene se bhara huwa tha jaise bohat zada bhaag ker ayi ho, Kaano se earplugs nikalte huwe wo Aarav ke paas aa gayi.

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Akash: Ye hai Tsubame! Tumhari Trainer!!!


Aarav herangi se Akash ko daikhne laga, Abhi uss ke saamne he Aarav ne Barbie jaise pehelwan ko haraya tha, Wanhi uss ke saamne ab larki khari thi jo Aarav ki trainer thi.


Tsubame wanha khari kuch der kamre ko daikhti rahi, Uss ki nazar neeche rakhi Wooden swords per gayi to uss ne unhe utha lia aur ek Aarav ki taraf uchaal di.



Tsubame: Akash! Get Out.



Tsubame Japanese thi lekin uss ne ye English me kaha to Akash ko samajh aa gayi, Wanhi Aarav samajhne ki koshis ker raha tha ke wahan ho kia raha hai?


Akash: Theek hai! Waise bhi mujhe ek important Dinner Attend karna hai, Excuse me.


Akash Barbie ke saath baahir chala gaya peeche se Aarav usse jata huwa daikhta raha, Ab kamre me Aarav aur Tsubame akele the Aarav aj tak aisi situation me nahi aya tha iss liye wo Awkward feel ker raha tha.



Tsubame: Tumhari Skill 2 fold hai na?



Tsubame sword ko halka hawa me lehrate huwe boli, Aarav ko yaad aa gaya ke Daisuke ne Aarav ko uss ka status sirf khud ko ya Tsubame ko batane ka kaha tha, Iss liye he uss ne Akash ko baahir bhej dia tha.



Aarav: Ji Haan! Pehli simple Slash aur dusri Deathly Slash.



Tsubame: Hmm! Deathly Slash se mujh per hit lene ki koshis karo.



Tsubame apni jagha per khare hote huwe boli, Aarav ka muh khul gaya jis Slash se uss ne Orc King aur Alpha ko maar giraya tha uss se wo ek larki ko kaise hit ker sakta tha?



Tsubame: Main ne kuch kaha hai! Deathly Slash?



Aarav (Confused): Lekin Deathly Slash khatarnak hai! Main usse Use nahi ker sakta.



Tsubame (Sigh): Huh! Aarav, Tumhe kia lahta hai? Daisuke ne mujhe yahan kiu bheja hai? Main yahan tumhe train karne ayi hu, To apne ye chonchle band karo aur jo kaha hai wo karo.



Aarav (Frightened): Lekin Deathly Slash bohat zada risky hai!!!



Tsubame: Uss ki Responsibility main khud leti hu! Yahan agar mujhe kuch huwa bhi to tumhe koi doshi nahi maane ga, Ab aur koi baat nahi seedhe se apni skill Use karo.



Aarav abhi bhi hichkicha raha tha lekin Daisuke ne kisi psycho ko to nahi bheja ho ga, Tsubame ko Aarav ki skill ka pata tha matlab usse skill ke khatre ka bhi andaza tha.



Aarav ne akhir Deathly Slash Use karne ke faisla ker lia, Lekin wo Tsubame ke kandhe ko Target karne wala tha, Aarav ne apni Sword Stance le lia.



[Skill (Deathly Slash) Activated]



*Crack*



Aarav ne apni Sword se attack kia lekin jaise he Sword Tsubame ke shoulder se connect hone ko huwi to Tsubame ne apne ussi kandhe ke haath se Aarav ki sword ko beech me he halka sa slide kia jis se Aarav ko sword ka pura Angle change ho gaya, Aarav ki sword seedhe zameen me ghus gayi.



*Thud*



Aarav khud ko sambhal pata uss se pehle he Tsubame ne apni Sword se Aarav ke chehre per zordar vaar ker dia, Aarav ke muh se khoon behne laga Tsubame ke attack me power thi jis ne Aarav ko buri tarha jhunjla dia tha.



Aarav (Groaning): Per kaise? Deathly slash ka angle sirf khali haath se kaise change ker dia ap ne.



Tsubame: Simple! Tumhare attack me sirf monstrous strength thi koi bhi technique nahi, Mujhe sirf halka si movement dene ki zaroorat thi aur jaise he main ne di tumhara attack tumhare liye he khatra ban gaya.


Tsubame apni technique chupa nahi rahi thi Aarav ke puchte he uss ne sab kuch saaf saaf bata dia-


Tsubame: Dobara tayar ho jao! Deathly Slash to nahi Use ker sakte lekin Normal slash se Hit lene ki koshis karo.



Tsubame ne apni sword rakh di, Lekin Aarav ab Usse halke me nahi le raha tha, Uss ki sixth sense cheekh cheekh ker usse bata rahi thi ke “She's Strong”



Aarav ne sword se stance lia aur kuch kadam peeche ho gya, Dono bina hile ek dusre ko daikh rahe the Aarav ne khud ko Ready kia aur Achanak dobara attack karna chaha-


*Grip*


Iss baar Tsubame ne sword ki jagha Aarav ke baazo ko kisi saanp ki tarha jakar lia tha, Dusre haath ko Aarav ke kandhe per rakhte huwe Aarav ko gulati dete huwe zameen per patak dia.



Tsubame: Jaldi utho! Puri raat nahi hai hamare paas.



Tsubame apne shabdo ko sugarcoat nahi ker rahi thi, Jo baat thi seedhi muh per ker rahi thi Aarav ne bohat si jalli kati suni thi jis se uss ko farak bhi nahi parta tha, Lekin abhi usse har cheez frustrate ker rahi thi.



Aarav dobara khara ho gya aur apni Sword utha li, Aarav kuch kadam peeche huwa aur dobara tezi se aage barhte huwe Slash Use karna chaha per Tsubame ne sirf apni index finger ko sword per maarte huwe sword ki disha badal di.



*Thud*


Jaise he Sword side per huwi Tsubame ne apne ghutne ko Seedhe Aarav ke pait per Maar dia wanhi na rukte huwe apne paon se ek kick seedhe Aarav ki gardan per de maari, Aarav ke hosh urr chuke the.


Kahan wo Beast ko maar ker aya tha kanha ek larki usse kutte ki tarha dho rahi thi-


Tsubame: Dobara!



Tsubame ne ek aur baar Aarav ko bulaya, Lekin phir Aarav muh ki kha ker neeche gir gaya-


“Dobara”

“Dobara”

“Dobara”

“Dobara”

“Dobara”



Aise he wo na jaane kitni der tak lage rahe lekin Aarav 1 bhi hit nahi le saka, Wanhi Tsubame ne Aarav ki maar maar ker halat patli ker di thi, Aarav ka pura badan dard ker raha tha Endurance se wo seh to paa raha tha lekin dard tha to abhi bhi wanhi-


Aarav thak ker zameen per gir ker saans lene laga, Tsubame bhi uss ke paas khari ho gayi.



Aarav (Moaning): Kaise? Kaise baar baar tum ye ker paa rahi ho? Kia tum bhi ek Player ho?



Tsubame (Sigh): Huh, Player! Main Player nahi hu, Lekin ek player na hone ka ye matlab nahi ke main kamzoor hu.



Aarav ko ek umeed dikhi thi ke Tsubame ke player hone ki wajha se wo haara hai, Lekin aj uss ki kismat bhi uss per hanste huwe keh rahi thi ke wo ek sadharan larki se haar gaya hai.



Aarav: Phir kaise? Main kiu 1 hit bhi nahi le saka?



Tsubame: Kiu ke tumhe apni power ki keemat ka nahi pata!!!



Aarav: Keemat???



Tsubame: Haan Keemat! Tumhare paas jo power hai wo tumhe bina kisi mehnat ke mili hai, Ye nahi ke tum Deserve nahi karte lekin tumhe ye bohat easily mil gayi hai, Aur jo cheez itni Asani se mil jaye insaan ko kabhi uss ki qadar nahi hoti, Waise he tum apni power ki real Potential nahi daikh paa rahe.



Aarav: To main kaise daikh sakta hu Real Potential?



Tsubame: Hmm! Sab se pehle tum apni power ko samajhna seekho, Sirf ye mat socho ke tum ye ker sakte ho, Ulta ye socho ke tum ye kaise ker paa rahe ho?




Tsubame ki baat Aarav samajh pa raha tha, Lekin wo ye nahi samajh paa raha tha ke wo ye kaise kare, Tsubame ne wanhi se ek black shirt utha ker Aarav ke paas rakh di, Kiu ke Aarav ki shirt per khoon laga huwa tha.



Tsubame: Daisuke ne mujhe bataya ke tumhari Ankhe Neeli roshni me chamak rahi hai! Bohat Koshis ke baad bhi tum apni ankho ko badal nahi paa rahe, Lekin iss ko alag nazariye se daikho usse band karne se pehle ye samjho ke wo ankhe chamak kiu rahi hai? Apni power samajhne se pehle khud ko samjho!


Tsubame khari ho gayi aur wahan se jaane lagi, Aarav kuch waqt pehle he iss larki se mila tha lekin ache se dhulayi hone ke baad Aarav uss larki ko samajh paa raha tha, Bhale he wo lightly baat ker rahi thi lekin uss ki in sab technique ke peeche bohat zada mehnat thi, Jo Aarav abhi samajh nahi sakta tha.


Tsubame shuru me ek souless larki lagi thi, Lekin wo souless nahi sirf passionate thi jis ki Aarav Respect ker raha tha, Tsubame darwaze ke paas gayi aur wahan ruk ker dobara Aarav ki taraf daikhne lagi.



Tsubame: Subha 5 baje ready rehna tumhari training kal se shuru ho gi, Aur haan mujhe Sensie keh ker bulana next time.


Tsubame baahir nikal gayi, Wanhi Aarav peeche zameen per laita Tsubame ke akhri baato ko sun heran tha “Sensie?”


Aarav ko khud per hansi ane lagi, Aarav ne wanhi lagi ghari ki taraf daikha to 10 bak rahe the, Larte huwe kab waqt guzar gaya Aarav ko uss ka ehsaas he nahi huwa, Aarav khara huwa uss ke wounds fast healing ki wajha de heal ho chuke the bus halke nishaan he rehte the.



Aarav ne apni shirt utaar ker wahan rakh di aur Tsubame ki di shirt ko pehan lia, Aarav kamre se baahir aya to wahan koi bhi nahi tha, Aarav baahir aa gaya Temperature gir raha tha aur thand ho rahi thi lekin itni thand to Aarav easily seh sakta tha, Aarav Servants Quarter ki taraf chalne laga.




“Mom Mera jaana zaroori hai! Ap samajh kiu nahi rahi?”



Aarav abhi raaste me he tha ke ek larki ki meethi Awaz ne uss ka dhayan apni taraf kheench lia, Wo awaz Garage se ayi thi wanha andhere me 2 saye dikh rahe the 1 ko to Aarav pehchan gaya Archana lekin dusri ko wo theek se daikh nahi paa raha tha.



Archana: Vanshika! Sabhi Driver tumhare bhai aur papa ke saath gye huwe hai, Tum akele kaise jao gi?



Aarav ko andaza tha ke ye kon hai, Vansh aur Akash ki behan Vanshika Sayani, Vanshika ke baare me internet per kuch khaas nahi mila tha, Vanshika sirf ek Insta model ke naam se jaani jati thi.



Vanshika (Frustrate): Mom Please! Mujhe jaana ho ga, Meri Zindagi ka sawal hai!



Archana: Lekin akele kaise beta?



Vanshika: Agar koi mere saath chala to theek hai na phir! Let's see unhhhh, Hey Black Shirt!!!
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[Aj ke liye itna he umeed karta hu ap ko update pasand aye ga, Thore ADS ka issue ho gya tha jis se update late ho gya, Ye update 5.5K Words ka tha Next Update aye ga Saturday night Ya Sunday Evening me, Agar update acha laga ho to like karne ka aur pyaare pyaare reviews dene ka, Main chala sone milte hai agle Update per tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!!]

Navi heroien

 

[Raju0053]

Aeee bhai update dedena jaldi se

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Aeee bhai update dedena jaldi se

What?

 

[Chinturocky]

Hey everyone! I promised to post update 84 on September 5th if update 83 got 150 likes, and you all really did it


Let’s pretend we didn’t notice that _ABHAY might have a few alias accounts in the mix


Since we hit that target, I’ll be posting update 84 on September 5th at 11:30 PM


Alright, I have a question for you all! How would you like future updates to come?


Here are three options:


1) Target-Based:- Let’s say we go with the target! For this arc, the like target will be 120 likes Once we hit that target within 48 hours, I’ll post the update.

But keep in mind, if we reach the target late, the update will be late too


2) Scheduled:- We’ve been using a schedule system, so you know how that works


Just a heads-up: having a scheduled date doesn’t guarantee the update will be posted on that day


I set the date based on when I plan to post, but things can come up! So please don’t blame me if there’s a delay


3) Mood-Based:- This option is all about my mood! I might post updates every day, or it could be weeks between posts.

Just a warning: I can be pretty lazy so I’m not always in the mood! ​

So, which system do you think would work best for updates?

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Schedule system best hai

 

[Avir]

Hey everyone! I promised to post update 84 on September 5th if update 83 got 150 likes, and you all really did it


Let’s pretend we didn’t notice that _ABHAY might have a few alias accounts in the mix


Since we hit that target, I’ll be posting update 84 on September 5th at 11:30 PM


Alright, I have a question for you all! How would you like future updates to come?


Here are three options:


1) Target-Based:- Let’s say we go with the target! For this arc, the like target will be 120 likes Once we hit that target within 48 hours, I’ll post the update.

But keep in mind, if we reach the target late, the update will be late too


2) Scheduled:- We’ve been using a schedule system, so you know how that works


Just a heads-up: having a scheduled date doesn’t guarantee the update will be posted on that day


I set the date based on when I plan to post, but things can come up! So please don’t blame me if there’s a delay


3) Mood-Based:- This option is all about my mood! I might post updates every day, or it could be weeks between posts.

Just a warning: I can be pretty lazy so I’m not always in the mood! ​

So, which system do you think would work best for updates?

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02 option

 

[Sushil@10]

UPDATE 9 ~
(Decision)​

*Kabooooom*


Shadow ki shoot ki huwi urja se Orc King wanhi ek ped se ja takraya, Wanhi Aarav herani se shadow ko daikh raha tha aur Shadow gusse se Orc King ko ghoor raha tha, Orc King ke shareer me abhi bhi harkat ho rahi thi.


Lekin Shadow ne pehli baar urja ko iss tarha shoot kia tha jis ki wajha se uss ki halat bhi kharab ho chuki thi, Wanhi Aarav bhi ghutno ke bal baitha lambe lambe saans bhar raha tha jaise hazaro kilometer bhaag ker aya ho, aise Yun Achanak apne stats ko boost se itne barhane ki wajha se Aarav ki body wo pressure bardasht nahi ker paa rahi thi.



Aarav andar se jaise cut raha tha uss ke paas khare hone ki bhi himmat nahi thi wanha Orc King ko final attack karna to na mumkin tha uss ke liye, Daisuke abhi bhi Isabelle ko pakre khara tha jo aise boost dene ki wajha se Unconscious ho chuki thi.


[Remaining Time: 4 Second]


*Swisshhh*



Aarav abhi apni nazre ghooma he raha tha ke Yoo-Jung ne ek Arrow shoot kia jo seedhe Orc King ke kate huwe gale me ghus gaya, Orc King ka shareer mazboot tha Yoo-Jung ka arrow use cheer ker andar nahi ja sakta tha.


Lekin Orc King ki gardan ki puri chamri Aarav ne apne claws se ukhar li thi, Iss liye Yoo-Jung ne Arrow wanha shoot kia jis se Orc King neeche gir gaya.


[Quest Completed]

[You have successfully killed the Orc King]


Sab ke saamne Notification aya to sab ki saanso me saans ayi, Akhir unho ne apni Quest puri ker he li jahan apne saathi ko khoone ka dukh tha wanhi khud ke zinda hone ki kanhi na kanhi rahat bhi thi.



*Aaaahhhhh*



Peeche se kisi ke chilane ki awaz ayi, Sab ne uss taraf daikha to saamne se Vansh bhaagte huwe aa raha tha ankho me khoof chehra aise safed jaise koi bhoot daikh lia ho, Lekin sab ko kuch sochna nahi para kiu ke agle he pal unhe uss ke bhaagne ki wajha dikh gayi.



Vansh ke peeche Orc's ki puri Army aa rahi thi, Bakiyo ki ankho me bhi wo khoof ate waqt nahi laga jahan wo abhi khush huwe he the un ke saamne ek nayi problem aa chuki thi.




*Grrooowwwrrrr*



Jungle ke ped ke beech me se sabhi Demon Wolves bhaagte huwe Aarav ko gher ker khare ho gye, Un sab ka ek he maqsad tha apne Alpha ko bachana lekin itne Orc's ke saamne un ka tik pana bhi Na-Mumkin tha.



[Everyone will now receive their reward]


[20 stat Points Added]


[You can now return home]


[Yes~No]


Sab ko un ke Rewards ke notification ane lage aur ab wo wapis ja sakte the, Sab ne bina waqt lagaye Yes per click ker dia aur sabhi ke neeche dobara wo circle ban'na shuru ho gya.


“Bhaago!!!”



Aarav ne dheeme se kaha uss ki ankho ke aage andhera ho raha tha, Wo zada waqt hosh me nahi rehne wala tha lekin wo aise Demon Wolves ko khatre me bhi nahi chorr sakta tha iss liye uss ne unhe bhaagne ka keh dia.


Vansh ke peeche ate Orc's ne uss per Attack karna chaha per wo circle ke andar nahi ja paa rahe the, Ye daikh Wolves ko apne Alpha ki safety ka confirm ho gya.



*Owwoooo*



Sabhi Wolves ne ek saath Howl kia jaise Aarav ko Alvida keh rahe ho, Howl karne ke baad sab wahan se bhaagne lage jin ko Aarav peeche se daikhta raha.


*Crack* *Crack*


Abhi Demon Wolves wahan se nikle he the ke Aarav ko apne kareeb hadiya tootne ki awaz ayi jis ne uss ke kaano se le ker pairo tak rongte khare ker diye, Aarav ke mann me ek he baat thi ke jo wo soch raha hai wo sach na ho!!!


Aarav ne dheeme se apni gardan ghooma ker Awaz jidhar se aa rahi thi uss taraf daikha, Saamne ho rahe scene ko daikh Aarav ki ankhe num ho gayi pura jisam kaanpne laga, Jo takat uss me bachi thi wo bhi khatam hone lagi.



Uss ke saamne iss waqt Orc's ek jagha jhund banaye baithe the, Wanhi Orc's ke saamne Andrew ki laash thi jis ka ek haath aur dono paon Andrew ke badan se alag Orc's ke haatho me the jin ko wahan baithe chaba rahe the.



Daisuke bhi peeche khara apni haath ki muthi banaye apne gusse ko bardasht karne ki koshis ker raha tha, Orc's Andrew ki body ko kaat ker khate ja rahe the un ke muh se ati wo awaz sab na chahte huwe bhi saaf sun paa rahe the.



Aarav ki ankho se ansoo behne lage, Andrew ek soldier tha lekin ek soldier bhi aisi moat deserve nahi karta tha, Aarav ka dil zor se dharakne laga badan pura paseene se bheeg gaya saanse tez chalne lagi aur wo apni band hoti ankho se apne rakhsak ko danavo ka khaana bante daikh raha tha.



“I'm Sorry!!!”



Aarav ne rote huwe kaha aur agle he pal Circle me se aag ki lapte bharki aur Aarav ko apne andar lapaitne lagi, Aarav ne nazre utha dobara ek baar apne saamne tukro me bante huwe Andrew ko daikha aur agle he pal uss ki ankho ke aage andhera chaa gaya.






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Manali ~ 7:37 AM


*Beep* *Beep* *Beep*


Aarav ne dheeme dheeme apni ankhe kholni Shuru ki, Ankhe khulte he use apne saamne Ceiling per laga chalta pankha dikha, Aarav ke kaano me kisi Machine ki awaz aa rahi thi uss ne uss taraf daikha to ek monitor per Uss ki Heart rate dikh rahi thi.



“Kia main wapis aa gya hu?”


Aarav ne khud se sawal kia 7 Din ek alag duniya me survive karne me kia wo kamyaab ho gya hai? Pichle 7 Dino me uss ne jo kuch daikha tha wo sab daikhne ke baad usse yaqeen nahi ho raha tha ke wo wapis aa chuka hai apni duniya me.



Aarav ko ye pata lag gya tha ke wo iss waqt kisi hospital me hai, Lekin abhi bhi wo apni body ko hila nahi paa raha tha boost ke pressure se uss ki body abhi bhi pressure me thi, Aarav ne apni saamne devar per lagi ghari ko daikha to 7:36 ho rahe the.



Aarav ne thori himmat ker ke baithna chaha to usse apne baazo per Wazan mehsoos huwa, Aarav ne apne Baazo ki taraf daikha to Usse uss insaan ka chehra dikh gaya jo daikhne ke liye wo pichle 7 din se har takleefo se lar ke wapis aya tha.



“Urvi!!!”

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Apni behan ko daikha Aarav ke chehre per muskurahat aa gayi, Urvi kisi bache ki tarha Aarav ke haath ko pakre bed ke saath rakhi chair per baithi huwi soo rahi thi, Aarav apne dusre haath ko Urvi ke chehre ke paas le ker gaya aur uss ke chehre per ate baalo ko side per ker ke uss ke chehre ko daikhne laga.


Wanhi apne chehre per kuch mehsoos ker ke Urvi ki bhi neend khul gayi, Ankhe kholte he usse sab se pehle jo chehra dikha wo uss ke bhai ka tha jo chehre per muskurahat liye usse daikh raha tha, Urvi ke chehre per muskurahat aur ansoo ek saath aa gye.

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Urvi aage barh seedhe apne bhai ke seene lag gayi, Dono me se koi kuch nahi bol raha tha sirf ek dusre ko bahoon me bhare ek dusre ko mehsoos ker rahe the, Jaise unhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat he Nahi thi.


Aarav: Kaisi hai tu?


Aarav ne Urvi ke baalo me haath pherate huwe kaha, Urvi peeche seedhe ho ker baith gayi aur apne haatho se ankho me aye ansoo ko saaf ker ke Aarav per nazre jamaye baith gayi.



Urvi: (Smile) Kaisi lag rahi hu ap ko?



Urvi apne haath khole khud ko Aarav ko dikhate huwe boli uss ki ye harkat daikh Aarav hans dia, Aarav ko sab samajh aa rahi thi Urvi iss waqt sirf Aarav ke saamne Normal behave karne ki koshis ker rahi thi.



Akhir bina Makeup ke khubsoorat dikhne wali larki aj kiu apne chehre per make up ker ke baithe gi? Urvi apni ankho per aye dark circles aur kamzoori ko uss make-up ke peeche chupana chahti thi.


Aarav: (Sigh) Huh!!! Tujhe sach me lagta hai tu halka sa makeup ker ke mujh se jhoot bol sakti hai?



Aarav ne Urvi se kaha to wo nazre jhuka ker baith gayi jaise uss ki chorri pakri gayi ho, Aarav Bed per sarak ker thora aage huwa aur Urvi ko pakar ker dobara apne seene se laga lia.



Aarav: Tujhe mere saamne Strong bann'ne ki zaroorat nahi hai!!! Tu toot sakti hai mere saamne main har baar tujhe sametne ke liye tere paas rahu ga.


Apne bhai ki baat sun Urvi ki ankho me ruke huwe ansoo dobara behne lage, Uss ne dobara Aarav ko jakar lia aur Rona shuru ker dia uss ki pakar mazboot thi uss ke andar dabe huwe sab emotions ab baahir aa rahe the.

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Urvi: (Crying) Main dar gayi thi!!! Bohat zada dar lag raha tha mujhe, Aisa dard jo main kabhi bhi dobara nahi mehsoos karna chahti.


Urvi apne ap ko Aarav ki bahoon me aur bhi ghuste huwe bolna shuru ker dia, Uss ka bura badan kaano raha tha wo Aarav ko ek pal ke liye bhi nahi chorr rahi thi jaise agar uss ne chorra to Aarav dobara kanhi chala jaye ga.


Aarav: sorry!!! Main bhi tujhe yun akela nahi chorrna chahta tha, Lekin pata nahi kismat ko mujh se kia dushmani hai jo mujhe tujh se dur ek alag dunia me bhej-



Urvi: Shhhhh! Mujhe sab pata hai wo sab yaad ker ke khud ko aur takleef mat do ap khud ko.


Urvi ne Apna chehra upar ker Aarav ko daikhte huwe kaha to Aarav herani se usse daikhne laga, Aarav ko yun Confuse daikh Urvi ne side table per rakhe Letter ki taraf ishara ker dia.


Aarav ko puri baat samajh aa gayi, Jo letter uss ne Urvi ke liye apne akhri lafzo ke roop me likhe the, Un se Urvi sab kuch jaan chuki thi wo sirf letter nahi un 7 dino ki puri kahani thi.


Lekin agle he pal jab un letter ke beech rakhe ek letter per Aarav ki nazar gayi to uss ki ankho ke saamne dobara wo khofnak manzar aa gye, Wo letter tha Andrew ka jo uss ne apne akhri lamho me Aarav ko de dia tha.



Urvi: Bhayia!!!


Urvi ne Aarav ko pukara to Aarav dobara hosh me aya, Uss ke gaalo per kuch geela geela tha chune ke baad uss ko ehsaas huwa ke wo roo raha hai.


Aarav: Bohat dardnak waqt tha wo!!! Bhulana bhi chahu to shayad kabhi un zakhmo ko bhula nahi saku ga.



*Click*


Kamre ka darwaza khula aur Manohar andar aa gaya, Uss ne jab Aarav ko hosh me daikha to muskurate huwe wo un ke paas aa gaya.


Manohar: Ab kaise ho larke???


Manohar ke ane se wahan ka mahool thora light ho gya, Aarav aur Urvi bhi seedhe ho ker baith gye-


Aarav: Namaste Uncle!!! Main theek hu, Ap kaise ho?



Manohar: Main bhi Acha hu!!! Dukan me sab larke bhi tere Liye prarthana ker rahe the.



Aarav aur Manohar aise he kuch der ek dusre se baate karte rahe, Manohar khud ko rok raha tha aisa koi bhi sawal karne se jis se Aarav ko takleef ho Aarav bhi ye samajh paa raha tha.



Manohar: Ye tumhari behan bhi bohat dar rahi thi tere liye! Na-Jane kitni baar isse theek se khane ko kaha lekin ye bina kisi cheez ki parwah kiye pura din tujhe dhoondne ke liye sehar me ghoomti rehti thi, Ab tu aa gaya hai to khud sambhal iss ko.


Urvi: (Shout) Uncle!!!


Manohar ki baat sun Urvi ne chilate huwe kaha aur muh phula ker baith gayi, Jis ko daikh Manohar aur Aarav dono ki hansi nikal gayi.


Urvi Ko Manohar apni bari beti samajhta tha kiu ke uss ki khud ki bhi ek beti thi to jo bhi wo uss ke liye lata Urvi ke liye bhi 1 saath me lata, Iss liye Urvi bhi Manohar ki ladli ban ker uss se larti thi jis ke Manohar bhi pure maze leta tha.



Aarav: Ap fikar mat kare! Ab main aa gaya hu na mil ker iss ki Class le gye.


Aarav ne bhi muskurate huwe kaha to Urvi muh khole uss ko daikhne lagi, Aur muje bana ker uss ke kandhe per maarne lagi.


Urvi: Gande bhai, Gande bhai, Ahhhhh!!!


Achanak Urvi ke muh se dard se halki si cheekh nikli to Aarav uss ke haath pakar ker usse dhayan se daikhne laga, Achanak uss ko khoon ki buu ayi jo wo soongh paa raha tha.


Aarav: Teri kamar per kia huwa hai? Khoon kiu beh raha hai wahan se?


Aarav se apni injury ka sun Urvu herani se uss ko daikhne lagi, Bina daikhe Aarav ko pata tha ke Urvi ke kahan Chot lagi hai.


Urvi: Wo kal raat jab khana kha ker waapis aa rahi thi to raaste me gir gayi thi.


Aarav: (Frowns) Waapis aa rahi thi? Main kitne din se Unconscious tha?



Manohar: 3 Din se!!!


Manohar ka jawab sun Aarav heraan ho gya, Wo pichle 3 se behosh hospital me tha Aarav ko ehsaas tha ke Boost se wo buri halat me tha lekin itni buri halat me tha iss ka usse nahi pata tha.



Aarav: Hmm!!! Wo sab chor Urvi tu ne Doctor ko check karwaya hai kia?



Aarav ne dobara Urvi per dhayan dete huwe kaha to Urvi ne nazre jhukaye huwe Naa me sar hila dia, Aarav ke chehre per gussa ane laga tha agar ek cheez usse sab se zada Na-pasand thi to wo thi Urvi ki la parwahi.


Urvi kabhi bhi apni health ko serious nahi leti thi jis per wo bohat baar Aarav se baate sun chuki thi-


Aarav: Chal mere saath Doctor ke paas!


Manohar: Ruko larke! Abhi tumhe bhi check karna hai Doctor ne, Urvi ko main le jata hu tu doctor se check up karwa le pehle.


Aarav ne Manohar ki baat maan li kiu ke agar Manohar ne zimedari le li thi to wo Urvi ka complete check-up he karwaye ga iss ka yaqeen tha Aarav ko.


Urvi: Ohh Haan! Bhayia Kal se kuch log baahir baithe huwe hai wo ap ke hosh me ane ka wait ker rahe the, Uncle ne pata karwa lia hai wo koi Businessman hai.



Urvi ki baat sun Aarav sochne laga ke wo kon ho sakta hai, Lekin uss ko koi bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha jo businessman ho aur Aarav se milne ke liye kal se intezar kare.


Aarav: Mujhe nahi pata wo kon hai? Lekin agar Uncle ap ne pata ker lia hai to unhe andar bhej do unn se mil ker he pata chale ga!


Manohar: Theek hai! Doctor ke Check-up ke baad wo aa jaye gye, Main Urvi ko bhi doctor ko dikha lata hu tab tak.


Aarav ne hami bhar di to Manohar Urvi ko pakar ker baahir le gaya, Kuch waqt ke baad he doctor bhi aa gye Aarav se uss ki halat ke related kuch sawal ker ke kuch necessary test ker ke wo wahan bhi wahan se nikal gye.



Un ke jaane ke foran baad 2 log kamre me aa gye, Un me se ek 40 ke kareeb ka Admi tha jo Suit pehne huwe chehre per ek tej sajaye khara tha, Uss ke khare hone ke andaz me he ek Confidence jhalak raha tha, Wo dikhne me Indian lag to raha tha lekin uss me se wo feeling nahi aa rahi thi.

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Wanhi dusra Admi ek Middle age Mazboot insaan lag raha tha kapro se wo dusre Admi ka bodyguard maloom ho raha tha Shakal se wo bhi Chinese ya Japanese dikh raha tha-

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Aarav: Namaste!



Un ke andar ate he Aarav ne unhe greet kia to uss suit wale Admi ne bhi haath jor ker uss ke jawab me namaste keh dia aur wanhi Aarav ke paas rakhi chair per aa ker baith gaya bodyguard uss ke peeche khara ho gya.



Aarav: Meri behan bata rahi thi ke ap kal se mere hosh me ana ka intezar ker rahe the! Uss ki wajha jaan sakta hu kia main?



Aarav ne seedhe point per ate huwe kaha, In 7 dino me Aarav bohat badal chuka tha, Agar pehle wala Aarav hota to wo abhi dar raha hota lekin itna kuch daikhne ke baad Aarav thora nidar ho gya tha.

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Admi: Mera Naam Adarsh Sayani hai! Main kal he America se india aya hu tum se milne.


Adarsh ka pura Naam sunte he Aarav ko thora andaza ho gya situation ka, Sayani naam Vansh ka bhi surname tha matlab ye insaan Vansh se related he koi tha, aur jaise Adarsh bhi Aarav ke expression ko samajh gaya tha.



Adarsh: (Smirk) Sahi soch rahe ho, Main Vansh ka Father hu! Aur mujhe sab kuch pata hai dusre world ke baare me.


Adarsh ne thori Ahista awaz me kaha jis se uss ki awaz baahir na jaye, Aarav ne bhi apna guard up ker lia agar koi America se usse yun milne aya tha to sirf uss ki haal puchne to nahi aya ho ga.


Adarsh: Main tumhe apne bete ki protection ke liye Hire karne aya hu.


Adarsh ki baat Aarav samajh paa raha tha, Wo apne bete ko khud dusre world me protect nahi ker sakta tha, Aur jaisa daisuke ne kaha tha 1 Maheene baad wo sab dobara wahan teleport hone wale hai, iss liye wo Aarav ko apne bete ko dusre world me protect karne ka kaam dene aya tha.


Aarav: Aur ap ko kiu lagta hai ke main he best person hu iss kaam ke liye?



Adarsh: Actually!!! Yahan main sirf apne bete ko protect nahi ker raha Tumhe hire karne se main tumhe bhi yahan intelligence ke pinjre se bachao ga, Yahan ane se pehle main ne tumhari puri information nikalwayi hai. Information se pata lagaya ja sakta hai ke tumhare liye sab se important kon hai.



Adarsh kanhi se bhi ye nahi show karwa raha tha ke yahan wo zaroorat per hai, Ulta wo ye ehsaas dilwa raha tha ke wo Aarav per Ehsaan ker raha hai usse ye job de ker.


Aarav: Kia matlab ap mujhe Government se bacha rahe ho?


Adarsh: Main ne tum se pehle Daisuke se contact kia tha puri information ke liye! Aur uss ne he mujhe tumhara naam recommend kia hai, Jahan tak mujhe pata laga hai jaise he Government ko tunhare Player hone ki khabar huwi to wo tumhe apne under le le gi ye pata karne ke liye ke tum khatra ho ya phir saathi, Aur yaqeen karo agar unhe tum khatra lage to wo tumhe khatam karne ke liye kisi bhi had ko paar ker jaye gye.




Adarsh ki baat Galat nahi thi, Aarav ke paas abhi bhi uss ki Player wali Power thi jis se agar wo chahta to bohat bara khatra ban sakta tha, Aur aise khatre ko koi bhi ignore nahi karne wala tha.



Adarsh Aarav ko soch me dooba daikh muskura utha jaise us ka teer seedhe nishane per laga ho.



Adarsh: Aur agar tum khatra nahi bhi huwe to wo tumhe apne saath le jaye gye, Tumhari behan bimaar hai socho tunhare jaane ke baad uss ki kia halat ho gi?



Adarsh apne lafzo se Aarav ko pura pressure me daal raha tha, Adarsh ki har baat me wazan tha Aarav chah ker bhi argue nahi ker sakta tha, Lekin wo puri tarha Adarsh per trust bhi nahi ker sakta tha.


Adarsh bohat purana businessman tha usse saamne wale ko apni baato me lena ata tha, Aarav per apni baato ka asar hota daikh uss ne garam lohe per akhri hathora maar dia.



Adarsh: Yang daisuke ko call karo, Daisuke se baat ker ke iss larke ka shak bhi dur ho jaye ga


Aarav: Wait! What???


Aarav apne saamne Adarsh ko seedhe apna plan batata daikh herani se uss ko daikhne laga, Wanhi Adarsh bhi heraani se usse daikhne laga aur agle he pal wo hans dia.


Adarsh: Shit!!! Main bhool gaya ke tum log sab language ko samajh sakte ho, Aur main yahan Chinese me order de ker soch raha tha tumhe samajh nahi aye gi.



Adarsh ne Yang ko Chinese me kaha tha lekin Ability ki wajha se Aarav sab Language ko hindi me sun sakta tha, Sirf kuch specific cheezo ko chorr ker Adarsh ki baat sun Aarav bhi hansne laga.


Adarsh: Per iss se koi farak nahi parta! Meri daisuke se baat ho gayi hai tum bhi uss se baat ker ke sure ho jao.



Yang ne apne phone se Video Call ker ke Mobile Aarav ko pakra dia aur dono baahir chale gye, Aarav ne saamne daikha to video Call me daisuke dikh raha tha usse.



Daisuke: (Smile) Hey!!! Wapis ane ke baad kaise halat hai ab


Aarav: Hmm! Sab kuch unreal lag raha hai lekin abhi Araam karne ka time nahi hai.



Daisuke: Yahan bhi sab aise he hai! Chalo ab kaam ki baat per ate hai, Adarsh se to mil liye ho gye tum.


Aaarav me haan me sar hila dia-


Daisuke: Yahan ane ke baad meri pehli koshis thi ke main tumhe apne paas bula saku lekin abhi ke liye ye mumkin nahi hai, Lekin main tumhe wahan akela bhi nahi chorr sakta wahan agar kisi ko bhi tumhare player hone ki khabar huwi to tumhare liye bara khatra ban sakti hai ye baat.



Aarav: Aur ap ko kia lagta hai Adarsh sahi insaan hai kia?



Daisuke: Main sure to nahi hu, Lekin agar iss waqt koi kisi bhi desh ki government se kisi player ko koi bacha sakta hai to Adarsh un me se ek hai, Main phone per sab details nahi de sakta bus itna kahu ga trust me hamare paas koi aur choice nahi hai.


Aarav kuch der khamooshi se puri situation ko dobara samajhne ki koshis karne laga, Daisuke ne bhi usse waqt de dia Aarav ke paas koi aur choice nahi thi to akhir me usse haan kehna he para.


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Manohar Shop ~ 3:29 PM



“Aur yahan per akhri signature!!!”


Iss waqt Manohar apni dukan per apni kursi per baitha huwa tha, Uss ke saamne Adarsh baitha huwa tha aur hospital se discharge ho ker Aarav bhi wanhi tha.



Manohar ko bhi sab kuch bata dia gaya tha jis per Manohar ne Aarav ko jaane ke liye kaha, Aarav heraan tha ke Manohar ne usse rokne ki koshis kiu nahi ki ulta wo he tha jis ne Urvi ko bhi manaya tha.



Lekin Manohar har tarha ki confirmation chahta tha jis ke liye uss ne ek contract banwaya jis ke mutabik Adarsh Aarav ko as a Bodyguard hire ker raha tha.


Manohar: Hmm!!! Theek hai to iss Contract ke mutabik Aarav ki salary decide ho chuki hai, Saath me Aarav ke traveling expenses bhi ap ke upaar he ho gye.



Adarsh: Bilkul Aarav ke sab kharche hamari company uthaye gi.



Manohar: Urvi bhi Aarav ke saatb jaye gi aur saath me Urvi ke Treatment bhi ap wahan ke hospital se karwaye gye.


Aarav ke liye ye sab se bari opportunity thi apni behan ka ilaaj karwane ke liye, Agar Urvi ke ilaaj ke liye usse aise hazaro khatre bhi jhelne pare to wo uss ke liye tayar tha aur Adarsh ne uss se wada kia tha ke wo wahan ke best hospital se Urvi ka treatment karwaye ga.


Adarsh: Yes!!! Ap befikar ho jaye Mr. Manohar Aarav ko wahan kisi cheez ki fikar nahi ho gi.



Manohar ne bhi Witness ke roop me me sign ker diye jis ke baad Adarsh wahan se nikal gaya Aarav aur Urvi ko apne saath le jaane ke liye sab kuch ready karwane ke liye.



Manohar ne bhi wanhi dukan ke ek larke ko bhej dia contract ki photo copy karwane ke liye, Manohar aur Aarav dono dukan ke baahir nikal gye aur chalne lage, Manohar ne ek cigarette nikali aur uss ko jala lia.


Aarav: (Frowns) Uncle!!!



Manohar ne Ungli ke ishaare se Aarav ko chup rehne ka ishara ker dia, Aarav bhi chup ho gya aj tak Manohar ne uss ke saamne cigarette nahi pee thi jis se Aarav ko cigarette ki buri adat na lage.



Aj pehli baar Manohar Aarav ke saamne cigarette pee raha tha, Manohar wanhi ek park me chala gaya aur bench per baith gaya uss ke chehre per ajeeb se udaasi thi.



Manohar: Tu ye he soch raha hai na ke main ne tujhe jaane ki permission kiu de di.



Manohar ne ek gehra kash lagate huwe kaha-


Aarav: (Nods) Haan ji!



Manohar: (Smile) Tujhe yaad hai Aarav jab tu uss aag ke ghere ke beech me phansa huwa tha, to tu kis tarha mujhe madad ke liye pukar raha tha.



Manohar ne dobara ek kash bhar ke kaha, Lekin ab uss ki ankho me wo lamhe yaad ker ke ansoo ane lage the aur uss ki awaz bhaari hone lagi thi.



Manohar: Uss waqt main ne khud ko kitna bebas mehsoos kia tha wo lafzoo me nahi bata sakta, Main puri koshis ker raha tha ke tujhe bacha saku lekin nahi main kuch nahi ker saka, Tere jaane ke baad har rooz uss jagha per jaata aur yaad karta ke yanhi main ne tujhe khoya tha.



Manohar ki baat sun Aarav ko bhi ehsaas hone laga ke subha se Manohar bhi sirf uss ke saamne he Normal rehne ki koshis ker raha tha, Andar se Manohar bhi puri tarha se toot chuka tha.


Manohar: Mere paas wi takat nahi hai jis se main tujhe bacha saku! Lekin Adarsh ke paas wo takat hai main itna selfish nahi hu ke sirf apne ego ki wajha se tujhe yahan roku, Mere liye sab se important teri safety hai, Mere bete ki safety.



Manohar hamesha se Aarav ko apna beta samajhta tha lekin aj pehli baar uss ne Apne muh se beta bulaya tha, Aarav ki ankho me bhi ansoo aa gye Manohar ne ek haath uss ke kandho per rakhte huwe usse apne gale laga lia.



Manohar: Mujhe nahi pata tu mujh se kitna dur hai! Lekin tu hamesha khud ko aur Urvi ko safe rakhna mere liye jitni Akanksha pyaari hai utne he tum dono mere liye pyaare ho.


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National Intelligence Service Main Building
South Korea ~ 11:24 PM




*Thump* *Thump*


Tez kadam uthate huwe building ke hall me ek admi bhaag raha tha, Uss ke chehre per pareshani ke expression the jaise wo abhi jahan ja raha tha wahan jana nahi chahta tha.


Hall se hote huwe wo main entrance se baahir nikal gaya, Baahir nikalte he use apne saamne ek Black Mercedes khari dikh gayi wo seedha uss ke paas chala gaya, Car ke andar peeche wali seat per ek larka baitha huwa tha jo Car ke andar se use daikh raha tha.

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“Mr. jinhoo ap ka aise front gate se ane ki zaroorat nahi thi!!! Agar kisi ne daikh lia to fazool me Rumors phel jaye gye”



Bahir khare Admi ne car ke andar baithe Jinhoo se kaha, Uss ki nazre abhi bhi chaaro taraf ghoom rahi thi ke kanhi koi unhe daikh to nahi raha.



*Slaammm*



Jinhoo Car se bahir aya aur apne Suit ko set karne laga, Wanhi uss ko iss tarha relax daikh Admi herani se use daikhte ja raha tha.

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Jinhoo: (Smirk) Yoon Kijoong tumhe meri fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai!!!



Yoon Kijoong Umar me Jinhoo se bara to tha he saath me wo Senior Intelligence Officer bhi tha, Lekin Jinhoo ki tone me Kijoong ke liye thori bhi respect nahi thi.


Kijoong ko gussa to aya lekin wo khud bhi ache se jaanta tha ke wo Jinhoo ka kuch nahi bigar sakta iss liye wo uss gusse ko bardasht karne laga.





Jinhoo: (Sigh) Huh!!! Main ne pehle he yahan ke pure Area ko scan ker lia hai Raat ke iss waqt yahan per koi bhi civilian nahi hai, Ab mera Waqt barbad mat karo aur seedhi tarha batao ke iss waqt mujhe yahan kiu bulaya hai? Tumhare paas sirf 30 minute hai uss ke baad chahe jo bhi ho jaye main yahan se nikal jao ga, Morning me Shoot hai meri.


Jinhoo ne apni Wrist watch me time daikhte huwe kaha, Kijoong ne saamne se hat ker Jinhoo ko raasta dia to wo andar ki taraf chal dia uss ke saath he Kijoong bhi andar jate huwe usse situation samjhane laga.


Kijoong: Aj hamare paas ek larki ayi hai jo claim ker rahi hai ke wo ek Player hai!!!



Kijoong ka itna kehna tha ke Jinhoo ke kadam kuch pal ke liye ruke wo Kijoong ki taraf daikhne laga jaise puch raha ho ke wo sach keh raha hai kia?


Kijoong: Hume abhi confirm nahi hai!!! Iss liye tumhe yahan bulaya hai.



Jinhoo: Mujhe kiu??? Soo-hyun kahan hai???



Kijoong: Hum ne Soo-hyun se contact kia tha, Lekin wo iss waqt Out of country ek business trip per hai, Situation serious thi iss liye hamare paas Tumhe bulane ke siwaye koi option nahi tha!!!



Jinhoo: (Shout) Are you fucking serious!!! Koi bhi tum logo se aa ker kahe ga ke wo Player hai to tum log mujhe bula lo gye kia? Tumhe pata hai kitni der ki drive hai shooting location se yahan ki?


Jinhoo ne gusse se chilate huwe kaha to paas khare sab staff wale herani se apne Senior ko baate sunte huwe daikhne lage, Unhe samajh nahi aa rahi thi ke ye kon hai jo iss tarha Department me khare ho ker chila raha hai.



Kijoong: Calm Down Jinhoo!!! Hum ne aise he nahi bulaya hume uss larki ki baato me kuch sachayi dikhi hai to tumhe bulaya hai, aur tum ye mat bhoolo ke tumhara Acting Career hum ne sirf tumhe araam dene ke liye nahi set karwaya, Tumhe uss ke liye kaam bhi karna ho ga!!!


Kijoong jo tab se beizati bardasht ker raha tha ab apne staff ke saamne dobara beizati ko bardasht na ker saka aur Jinhoo ko uss ki aukat dikhane laga, Kijoong ki baat sun Jinhoo gusse se uss ki taraf daikhne laga.


Lekin wahan logo ko daikh wo khamooshi se dobara chalne laga, Kijoong ne staff ki taraf daikha aur unhe un ka kaam karne ka bol ker Jinhoo ke saath chalne laga.


*Click*


Kamre ka darwaza khola aur dono andar aa gye, Ye ek meeting room tha un ke saamne he ek chair per ek larki haath me ek paper pakre baithi huwi thi, Unhe andar ata daikh uss ne apna chehra utha ker unhe daikha aur greet ker ke wapis paper ko table per rakh ker uss per kuch likhne lagi.



Jinhoo: (Sigh) Huh!!! To tum ho jo khud ko Player keh rahi ho???


Jinhoo ka sawal sun larki ne dobara nazre utha ker haan me sar hila dia, Uss ke chehre per mask tha to uss ki sirf ankhe dikh rahi thi, Jinhoo aur Kijoong bhi wahan chair per baith gye.



Kuch Seconds ke baad he darwaza khula aur ek larka un ke liye coffee le ker andar aa gya aur sab ko coffee de ker baahir chala gaya, Jinhoo ne apna cup uthaya aur nazre uss larki per garate huwe Coffee ka ghoont bharne laga.

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[Ability (Intimidating Presence) Activated]


Jinhoo ke saamne Notification aya uss ne apni Ability on ker li thi, Jinhoo bhi ek Player tha jo Earth ke sab se pehle players me se ek tha-


*Crack*


Jinhoo ke ability on karte he Kijoong ke haath se coffee ka cup zameen per gur gaya, Kijoong apne haatho se Chair ko pakre khud ko Jinhoo ki taraf daikhne se rok raha tha, Kijoong ka badan AC chalne ke bawajood paseene se bheeg chuka tha.


Jinhoo chehre per shetaani muskurahat sajaye usse daikh raha tha, Uss ki nazro me saaf likha tha ke wo Kijoong se puch raha hai ke ab bol jo baahir bol raha tha.


“Agar tum ne apni Ability se khel lia ho to kaam ki baat per aye kia???”


Jinhoo ko apne saamne se awaz ayi, Uss ne saamne daikha to wo larki uss ki ankho me ankhe daale daikh rahi thi uss ki ankho me wo nidarta daikh Jinhoo heran tha, Aj tak koi insaan bhi uss ki ability ke saamne khara nahi reh saka tha.



Lekin aj ek larki uss ki Nazro me Nazre garaye usse ghoor rahi thi, Jinhoo apni Ability se uss larki ko darana chahta tha lekin wo larki Jinhoo ke pure badan me rongte khare ker rahi thi.

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[Ability (Intimidating Presence) Deactivated]


*Slide*


Larki ne apne haath me pakra paper Kijoong ke Normal hote he uss ki taraf khiska dia, Wanhi Jinhoo ke haatho me Coffee ka cup kaanpne laga.



Larki: iss me meri sab demands likhi huwi hai!!! Agar ap meri sharte maano gye to main ap ke saath pura cooperate karu gi.


Kijoong ne Jinhoo ku taraf daikha Jinhoo se nazre milte he iss baar Kijoong ne apne chehre per muskurahat le ayi, Iss muskurahat ne Aag me ghee ka kaam kia Jinhoo apni beizati ko bardasht karne ki koshis karte huwe dono ko gusse se goorne laga.



Kijoong: Mujhe ap ke player hone ka confirm ho gya hai!!! Intelligence ke head ke saath sab kuch discuss karne ke baad main ap ko jawab de du ga, tab tak ke liye ap Dorm me rest ker sakti hai.



Kijoong ne dobara Jinhoo ki taraf daikhte huwe sab lafzoo ko noch noch ker kaha, Larki bhi Kijoong ki baat maan ker jinhoo ko ignore karte huwe khari ho gayi Kijoong usse le ker baahir ki taraf nikal gaya.

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Jinhoo unhe jaate huwe ghurta raha, Un ke jaate he Jinhoo ne table per Punch maar dia jis se table me Crack aa gaya, Tabhi Jinhoo ki nazar uss paper per gayi to uss ne uss ko utha lia aur upar likhe naam ko ghoorne laga.



Jinho: (Furious) Sirf intezar karo tum, Aj huwi meri beizati ka badla to tum se le ker he rahu ga main, Kim Yoo-Jung!!!
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[Ye update bhi 6.5k Words ka tha aur built up ke liye bohat important update tha ye wala agle update aur bhi maze ke hone wale hai to saath bane rahiye ga, Main target deta to nahi hu lekin agar 30 likes ho gye to next Update wednesday Night ko post ker du ga, Milte hai agle update per tab tak ke liye Sayonara!!!]

Lovely update

 

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Hey everyone! I promised to post update 84 on September 5th if update 83 got 150 likes, and you all really did it


Let’s pretend we didn’t notice that _ABHAY might have a few alias accounts in the mix


Since we hit that target, I’ll be posting update 84 on September 5th at 11:30 PM


Alright, I have a question for you all! How would you like future updates to come?


Here are three options:


1) Target-Based:- Let’s say we go with the target! For this arc, the like target will be 120 likes Once we hit that target within 48 hours, I’ll post the update.

But keep in mind, if we reach the target late, the update will be late too


2) Scheduled:- We’ve been using a schedule system, so you know how that works


Just a heads-up: having a scheduled date doesn’t guarantee the update will be posted on that day


I set the date based on when I plan to post, but things can come up! So please don’t blame me if there’s a delay


3) Mood-Based:- This option is all about my mood! I might post updates every day, or it could be weeks between posts.

Just a warning: I can be pretty lazy so I’m not always in the mood! ​

So, which system do you think would work best for updates?

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Option 1

 

[DeepHeart💘]

Hey everyone! I promised to post update 84 on September 5th if update 83 got 150 likes, and you all really did it


Let’s pretend we didn’t notice that _ABHAY might have a few alias accounts in the mix


Since we hit that target, I’ll be posting update 84 on September 5th at 11:30 PM


Alright, I have a question for you all! How would you like future updates to come?


Here are three options:


1) Target-Based:- Let’s say we go with the target! For this arc, the like target will be 120 likes Once we hit that target within 48 hours, I’ll post the update.

But keep in mind, if we reach the target late, the update will be late too


2) Scheduled:- We’ve been using a schedule system, so you know how that works


Just a heads-up: having a scheduled date doesn’t guarantee the update will be posted on that day


I set the date based on when I plan to post, but things can come up! So please don’t blame me if there’s a delay


3) Mood-Based:- This option is all about my mood! I might post updates every day, or it could be weeks between posts.

Just a warning: I can be pretty lazy so I’m not always in the mood! ​

So, which system do you think would work best for updates?

​

 

[DeepHeart💘]

Hey everyone! I promised to post update 84 on September 5th if update 83 got 150 likes, and you all really did it


Let’s pretend we didn’t notice that _ABHAY might have a few alias accounts in the mix


Since we hit that target, I’ll be posting update 84 on September 5th at 11:30 PM


Alright, I have a question for you all! How would you like future updates to come?


Here are three options:


1) Target-Based:- Let’s say we go with the target! For this arc, the like target will be 120 likes Once we hit that target within 48 hours, I’ll post the update.

But keep in mind, if we reach the target late, the update will be late too


2) Scheduled:- We’ve been using a schedule system, so you know how that works


Just a heads-up: having a scheduled date doesn’t guarantee the update will be posted on that day


I set the date based on when I plan to post, but things can come up! So please don’t blame me if there’s a delay


3) Mood-Based:- This option is all about my mood! I might post updates every day, or it could be weeks between posts.

Just a warning: I can be pretty lazy so I’m not always in the mood! ​

So, which system do you think would work best for updates?

​

Bohot ahi game khel rhe ho salty bhai
U have given us wonderful option but i would say option 1 and 2 are excellent as we readers are in huge number so 120 likes are not a big deal for us but some of us reads update after a quite a time if readers are busy so i would like to go with option 1 baki or bhai logo ki marzi
Enjoy ur holidays brother
Come back with a thrilling arc
Jai mahismati......

 

[DeepHeart💘]

Hey everyone! I promised to post update 84 on September 5th if update 83 got 150 likes, and you all really did it


Let’s pretend we didn’t notice that _ABHAY might have a few alias accounts in the mix


Since we hit that target, I’ll be posting update 84 on September 5th at 11:30 PM


Alright, I have a question for you all! How would you like future updates to come?


Here are three options:


1) Target-Based:- Let’s say we go with the target! For this arc, the like target will be 120 likes Once we hit that target within 48 hours, I’ll post the update.

But keep in mind, if we reach the target late, the update will be late too


2) Scheduled:- We’ve been using a schedule system, so you know how that works


Just a heads-up: having a scheduled date doesn’t guarantee the update will be posted on that day


I set the date based on when I plan to post, but things can come up! So please don’t blame me if there’s a delay


3) Mood-Based:- This option is all about my mood! I might post updates every day, or it could be weeks between posts.

Just a warning: I can be pretty lazy so I’m not always in the mood! ​

So, which system do you think would work best for updates?

​

Bohot ahi game khel rhe ho salty bhai
U have given us wonderful option but i would say option 1 and 2 are excellent as we readers are in huge number so 120 likes are not a big deal for us but some of us reads update after a quite a time if readers are busy so i would like to go with option 1 baki or bhai logo ki marzi
Enjoy ur holidays brother
Come back with a thrilling arc
Jai mahismati......