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"aur chammak challo idhar to aana"ek 43 varshiya aadmi red light area ke ek kothe me aurat ke saath tha
"Chodd saale,pehle to hafte me ek baar aata tha,ab har din a raha hai??kya baat hai lottery lag gayi kya??"aurat ne poochha
"Yahi samjho seth ne paise diye the ek aadmi ko udane ke liye,lekin saala bach gaya"sharab ki botal aur us aurat ko baahon me lete hue shaks bola
"Kitne paise mile the??"ek awaz ne chaunka diya dono ko
"Koun hai??"aadmi ne poochha
"Mujhe kya pata ??"aurat ne darte darte poochha
"Maine poochha kitne paise mile??"aadmi ka collar pakadkar yug bola
Kab saamne a gaya achanak se us shaks ko samajh me nahi aaya
"KYAAAAAA??YE TU ANDER KAISE AAYA???AUR KOUN HAI T....."
DHADDDDDDD
aadmi chitakkar door ja gira
"Y y ye wahi hai jo akhbaron me chaya hua hai.khooni hai ye jaan leta hai sabki"aurat apne kapde pehente hue bhaag gayi
"Hmm teri chamiya ne sahi suna"yug bola
KHACHHHHHHHHHH
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAT MARO MAINE KUCH NAHI KIYA MAINE KUCH NAHI KIYA"gala
kunai ghasti chali gayi us aadmi ke jaangh me
Yug chup raha aur apne pair ke joote ki nok us aadmi ke seene par rakhkar bola
"Naam aur pata"yug ne poochha
"Batata hoon batata hoon.wo..."
KHACHHHHHHHHHHHH
door se aayi ek teer ka nishana bana us shaks ke gala.
"AHHHHGGGGG"gala pakadkar wahi dher ho gaya wo shaks
yug ne peeche mudkar dekha.khidki ke glass ko todti hui wo teer kahin se chalaya gaya tha.zahir hai chalane wala bhi pehchan wala tha.
Sura ne apna dhanush wapas kandhe par rakh diya
"Abhi tak itne kabil nahi hue ho jo mera Saamna kar sako"man hi man kaha sura ne.aur saamne ki aur chal pada.lekin do teen pair aage badhaye hi the ki thithak gaya.saamne ek shaks khada tha wahi mask wala shaks
"Us din sabak nahi mila jo dubara a gaye?"sura bola
"Mujhe is shaks na naam chahiye jisne accident karwaya tha"yug bola
"Pehle mujhse to bach le fir baat karna"sura bola
SWOOOOOSH SWOOOOOSH
yug baal baal bacha.iski shakti iska dhanush hai.lekin dhanush kaafi strong hai.is par kai vaar kiye the yug ne.lekin fayda nahi hua
"Is dhanush ke baare me soch raha hai??iska tu kharoch tak nahi laga sakta"sura hanskar bola
"Mai jaanta hu "bol shuriken hawa mu uchal diya yug ne
SWOOOOOSH
KAT
"Y y ye to mere dhanush ki dor toot gayi"sura bola lekin tab tak
DHADDDDDDD
Ek punch sura ke kandhe par pada.aur chitakte hue door ja gira wo.lekin fir foorti ke saath khada bhi hua wo aur apne hont ke khoon ko pochne laga
"Dhanush ka to pata nahi lekin fir kamzor hai"sura bola
"Not bad.aaj tak mere saamne itni der tak koi nahi tika, congratulation tune sura ko takkar di hai"sura bola aur dhanush ke ek sire se doosre sure ko chu liya.aur dhanush fir taiyyar ho gaya
Swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh
Teero ki bauchar ho rahi thi.aur yug ke liye mushkil ho rahi thi unse bachana
KHACHHHHHHHHHHHH KHACHHHHH
Do teer yug ke pet me aur pair me ghans gaye.aur yug isi ke saath gir pada
Swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh
KHACHHHHHHHHHHHH KHACHHHHH
Do teer aur lage usko.lekin muh se ek awaz bhi nahi aayi.
"Ha ha bas thodi der tak aur khel ke dost fir sab khatam"bol sura apna dhanush taiyyar karne laga.lekin ek nazara dekh uski aankhen badi hoti gayi
"Y ye to ye to.....y y ye mask jo tune pehna hai ye sadharan sa mask hi hai na??"sura ghabrate hue bola
Yug chup tha.lekin mask ajeebogareeb tarike se chamak rahi thi.aur apna rang badalne lagi.yug ke sharir me ghanse teer apne aap bahar nikalne lage aur ghaav bharne laga
Swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh
ghabrate hue sura ne do teen teer chala diya .lekin tabhi
"Ye ye ye impossible.aisa aaj tak aisa nahi hua ki..."sura apni baat poori nahi kar paaya .yug ne hawa me hi teer pakad liye the
Swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh
Sura ne dar ke maare do teer chodd diye.
Swooooooooooooooooooooooooooshhhhhhhhhhh
Swooooooooooooooooooooooooooshhhhhhhhhhh
Yug ne do shuriken usi disha me chodd diye
Sura ke fati fati aankhon ke saamne yug ke shuriken ne teero ko hawa me hi kaat apna raasta sura ki aur bhadhate hue....
KHAAAAAAAAAACHHHH KHAAAAAAAAAACHHHH
"AHHHHHH"ek aur shuriken kandhe ko aur ek seene ke ande se hoti hui bahar nikal kar paas diwar me ghans gayi
DHADDDDDDD
ek punch fir se kabse par padi aur sura ke hont fat kar khoon se bhar chuki thi
DHADDD
Ek aur punch naak par aur naak bhi fat chuki thi.chehra poora khoon se nahaya hua tha sura ka
"B batata hoon batata hoon"sura bola
Aur fir tote ki tarah sab batane lag gaya
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"Uff bas karoge tum dono ka jhagda"poly bol padi.harish lagbhag thik ho gaye the.aaj discharge ka din tha aur yug aur shiksha me jung chidi hui thi ki asha bua se saath kaha jaana hai
Tabhi prakash a gaya.
"Are prakash aao aao, achanak abhi??"harish ne poochha
"Aapse akele me kuch baat karni hai"prakash bola
"Thik hai aap log baatein kijiye,aao bachhon aao asha"bol poly sabke saath nikal gayi
"Accident se pehle kya hua tha harish bhaiya??"prakash bola
"Kuch nahi prakash bas shayad meri hi galti thi ki raasta galat tarike se Cross kar raha tha"harish bola
"Agar aap kuch batana chahte hai to bata sakte hai bhaiya, police aapki poori madad karegi"prakash bola
"Thanks prakash lekin usme police kya karegi jab galti meri hi thi??"harish bola
"Thik hai apna khayal rakhna"bol prakash uthkar chala gaya
Prakash ke jaate hi harish ne lete lete aankhen band kar li
"Chodd saale,pehle to hafte me ek baar aata tha,ab har din a raha hai??kya baat hai lottery lag gayi kya??"aurat ne poochha
"Yahi samjho seth ne paise diye the ek aadmi ko udane ke liye,lekin saala bach gaya"sharab ki botal aur us aurat ko baahon me lete hue shaks bola
"Kitne paise mile the??"ek awaz ne chaunka diya dono ko
"Koun hai??"aadmi ne poochha
"Mujhe kya pata ??"aurat ne darte darte poochha
"Maine poochha kitne paise mile??"aadmi ka collar pakadkar yug bola
Kab saamne a gaya achanak se us shaks ko samajh me nahi aaya
"KYAAAAAA??YE TU ANDER KAISE AAYA???AUR KOUN HAI T....."
DHADDDDDDD
aadmi chitakkar door ja gira
"Y y ye wahi hai jo akhbaron me chaya hua hai.khooni hai ye jaan leta hai sabki"aurat apne kapde pehente hue bhaag gayi
"Hmm teri chamiya ne sahi suna"yug bola
KHACHHHHHHHHHH
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MAT MARO MAINE KUCH NAHI KIYA MAINE KUCH NAHI KIYA"gala
kunai ghasti chali gayi us aadmi ke jaangh me
Yug chup raha aur apne pair ke joote ki nok us aadmi ke seene par rakhkar bola
"Naam aur pata"yug ne poochha
"Batata hoon batata hoon.wo..."
KHACHHHHHHHHHHHH
door se aayi ek teer ka nishana bana us shaks ke gala.
"AHHHHGGGGG"gala pakadkar wahi dher ho gaya wo shaks
yug ne peeche mudkar dekha.khidki ke glass ko todti hui wo teer kahin se chalaya gaya tha.zahir hai chalane wala bhi pehchan wala tha.
Sura ne apna dhanush wapas kandhe par rakh diya
"Abhi tak itne kabil nahi hue ho jo mera Saamna kar sako"man hi man kaha sura ne.aur saamne ki aur chal pada.lekin do teen pair aage badhaye hi the ki thithak gaya.saamne ek shaks khada tha wahi mask wala shaks
"Us din sabak nahi mila jo dubara a gaye?"sura bola
"Mujhe is shaks na naam chahiye jisne accident karwaya tha"yug bola
"Pehle mujhse to bach le fir baat karna"sura bola
SWOOOOOSH SWOOOOOSH
yug baal baal bacha.iski shakti iska dhanush hai.lekin dhanush kaafi strong hai.is par kai vaar kiye the yug ne.lekin fayda nahi hua
"Is dhanush ke baare me soch raha hai??iska tu kharoch tak nahi laga sakta"sura hanskar bola
"Mai jaanta hu "bol shuriken hawa mu uchal diya yug ne
SWOOOOOSH
KAT
"Y y ye to mere dhanush ki dor toot gayi"sura bola lekin tab tak
DHADDDDDDD
Ek punch sura ke kandhe par pada.aur chitakte hue door ja gira wo.lekin fir foorti ke saath khada bhi hua wo aur apne hont ke khoon ko pochne laga
"Dhanush ka to pata nahi lekin fir kamzor hai"sura bola
"Not bad.aaj tak mere saamne itni der tak koi nahi tika, congratulation tune sura ko takkar di hai"sura bola aur dhanush ke ek sire se doosre sure ko chu liya.aur dhanush fir taiyyar ho gaya
Swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh
Teero ki bauchar ho rahi thi.aur yug ke liye mushkil ho rahi thi unse bachana
KHACHHHHHHHHHHHH KHACHHHHH
Do teer yug ke pet me aur pair me ghans gaye.aur yug isi ke saath gir pada
Swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh
KHACHHHHHHHHHHHH KHACHHHHH
Do teer aur lage usko.lekin muh se ek awaz bhi nahi aayi.
"Ha ha bas thodi der tak aur khel ke dost fir sab khatam"bol sura apna dhanush taiyyar karne laga.lekin ek nazara dekh uski aankhen badi hoti gayi
"Y ye to ye to.....y y ye mask jo tune pehna hai ye sadharan sa mask hi hai na??"sura ghabrate hue bola
Yug chup tha.lekin mask ajeebogareeb tarike se chamak rahi thi.aur apna rang badalne lagi.yug ke sharir me ghanse teer apne aap bahar nikalne lage aur ghaav bharne laga
Swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh
ghabrate hue sura ne do teen teer chala diya .lekin tabhi
"Ye ye ye impossible.aisa aaj tak aisa nahi hua ki..."sura apni baat poori nahi kar paaya .yug ne hawa me hi teer pakad liye the
Swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh
Sura ne dar ke maare do teer chodd diye.
Swooooooooooooooooooooooooooshhhhhhhhhhh
Swooooooooooooooooooooooooooshhhhhhhhhhh
Yug ne do shuriken usi disha me chodd diye
Sura ke fati fati aankhon ke saamne yug ke shuriken ne teero ko hawa me hi kaat apna raasta sura ki aur bhadhate hue....
KHAAAAAAAAAACHHHH KHAAAAAAAAAACHHHH
"AHHHHHH"ek aur shuriken kandhe ko aur ek seene ke ande se hoti hui bahar nikal kar paas diwar me ghans gayi
DHADDDDDDD
ek punch fir se kabse par padi aur sura ke hont fat kar khoon se bhar chuki thi
DHADDD
Ek aur punch naak par aur naak bhi fat chuki thi.chehra poora khoon se nahaya hua tha sura ka
"B batata hoon batata hoon"sura bola
Aur fir tote ki tarah sab batane lag gaya
-------------------------------------------------------------------
"Uff bas karoge tum dono ka jhagda"poly bol padi.harish lagbhag thik ho gaye the.aaj discharge ka din tha aur yug aur shiksha me jung chidi hui thi ki asha bua se saath kaha jaana hai
Tabhi prakash a gaya.
"Are prakash aao aao, achanak abhi??"harish ne poochha
"Aapse akele me kuch baat karni hai"prakash bola
"Thik hai aap log baatein kijiye,aao bachhon aao asha"bol poly sabke saath nikal gayi
"Accident se pehle kya hua tha harish bhaiya??"prakash bola
"Kuch nahi prakash bas shayad meri hi galti thi ki raasta galat tarike se Cross kar raha tha"harish bola
"Agar aap kuch batana chahte hai to bata sakte hai bhaiya, police aapki poori madad karegi"prakash bola
"Thanks prakash lekin usme police kya karegi jab galti meri hi thi??"harish bola
"Thik hai apna khayal rakhna"bol prakash uthkar chala gaya
Prakash ke jaate hi harish ne lete lete aankhen band kar li
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Nice and fentastik update bro ye haris bhi phonchi huvi chij lagta he bro or yug ke mask me pavar woww majha aayega waiting for next update