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CHARACTER INTRODUCTION:-

Dada :- yogesh singh(age-76)

Ye dil ke ache insan hai or ye ek pehelwan the magar abhi ek accident ke waja se ye paralysis hogaye abhi ye phir haal ek ashram me hai, inko log bohot ijjat karte hai ye apne bade pote se bohot pyar karte hai……

Dadi :-yoshada singh(dead)

Ye bhi dil ki ache insan the kalib 10 saal pehere inki dead hogai

Inki do bete or teen beti hai

Bada beta:-akash singh(dead)

Ye ek sintist the or dil ke ache the lab mein aag lagne ke waja se inki mout hogai sab ko pta hai

Wife:-shalini singh

Ye bhi inki husband ke jese sintist the ye dil ki bhot ache the apne family se bhot pyar karte hai or ye bhag ke shadi kiye the kyunki inki gharware inki pyar ke khiraf the isliye inki gharware ne inke sath rishta tod diya

Inka ek beta hai

Abhi(mein):- (age-20 )

Meri pitaji or mata ji ki mout ki khabar sunke mein teen saal sadme mein chere gaya tha isliye aaj bhi mein school mein hu Mujhse ghar mein sab pyar karte hai sibaye meri 2nd bua ke alawa wo mujhse jada baat nahi karte or mujhse dur he rehete hai kyu pta nahi, iske alawa meri sirf ek he jigri yaar hai ravi, or mere dada ki ijjat ke karan gaon mein sab mujhse bhi ijjat se baat karte hai






Chota beta :- dharam singh (age-38)

Ye dil ke saaf hai inki abhi tak koi alad nahi hai inhone abhi tak 3 shadi kar chuke hai, apne patni ko gali dete hai ekere mein koi alad na janam dene ke kalan …..

1st wife:-suman singh(age-32)

Ye dil ke ache hai chachaji ke aur dono patni ko apne chote behan mante hai or ye mujhe apne bacha mante hai or mujhse bhot jada pyar karte hai agar mujhe kabhi bukhar ajata hai to raat bhar jaag ke mera khayal rakhte hai , inki koi aulad na hone ke karan ye chacha se roj gali khati hai

2nd wife:-seema singh(age-29)

Ye bhi dil ke ache hai sabhi se masti majak karte rehete hai ye suman ko apni badi behan mante hai inke pariwar ke eklote aulad hai magar galibi ke karan inke family ne chacha ji se shadi kaladi inki bhi koi aulad nahi hai

3rd wife:-meena singh(age 26)

Ye dil se jitna ache hai dimag se utna shatir hai ye suman or seema ko apni badi behan mante hai unko bachane ke chakar mein ye kabhi kabhi unke gali bhi chacha se khati hai Abhi tak unka bhi koi aulad nahi hai

1st beti :-pooja chohan(age-42)

Ye bhi dil ke achi hai inki pati bahar job karne ke karan ye jadatar pyasi he reheti hai inke do beti or ek beta hai

Husband:-nikhil chohan(age-49)

Ye bhi dil ke ache hai ye dubai me job karte hai saal me ek mahine ke liye gaon aate hai

Badi beti:-sweta chohan(age-22)

Ye bahar sahar mein reheke pdhai karti hai or festival mein ghar aati reheti hai inka b.f tha jis se inka break up hogya

Choti beti:-shital chohan(age-20)

Ye bhi didi ke sath reheke pdhai karti hai dil ki achi hai humesha masti majak karti reheti hai

Beta :- raaj chohan(age-18)

Bachpan me ek accident ke karan iska dimag thoda bachpan jesa hai, ye bohot masoom hai….

2nd beti:- neha kulkalni(age-36)

Ye bhi dil ki achi hai magar humare hero se nafrat karti hai ye apni badi beti se apne jaan se jada pyar karti hai inki do beti hai




Husband:-jatin kulkalni(age-46)

Ye bhi dil ke ache hai ye bhi dubai me job karte hai saal me 1 mahine ke liye gaaon aati hai

Badi beti:-komal kulkani(age-19)

Ye dil achi hai or bohot he masoom hai aaj tak koi bhi byfriend nahi bnaya ye bhi meri sath ek he schoor aur class mein padhti hai

Choti beti:-kavita kulkani(age-18)

Ye bohot natkhat hai hero se majjak karti reheti hai dil ki achi hai

3rd beti:-neeta kulkani(age-36)

Neha or ye dono judwa hai in dono me pyar bohot jada hai ye dil ki achi hai inka do judwe bache hai

Husband:-jitendar kulkani(age-45)

Ye or jatin dono bhai hai ye bhi dubai mein job karte hai saal me ek baar ek mahine ke liye gaon aate hai

Beti:-leena kulkani(age-18)

Ye or kavita dono behan kaam dost jada hai ye dono behan milke saralat karte reheti hai

Beta :-rajesh kulkalni(age-18)

Ye or leena dono judawa hai ye hostel reheke pdhai karta hai

Ravi:- (avi ka dost)(age 20)

Abhi ka dost hai badmash hai ye gaon me awara galdi karta hai iska baap nahi hai, ye apni maa or badi behan sath reheta hai

Maa:-sumitra rao(age-42

Ye abhi ke khet mein kaam karta hai or dil se achi hai apne bet eke karan pareshan reheti hai




Badi behan:-gayatri rao(age-24)

Ye dikhne mein bohot hot hai jawani ke karan ye bohot pyasi hai
Nice and beautiful introduction of the story.....
 

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Ye ek gaon jiska naam ****** usme Thakur ka raaj chalta hai Thakur ke bad humara raaj hai humare yaha thukuro ke jese jamin hai or gaon mein dada ji ke ijjat ke karan humara bhi gaon me sab ijjat karte hai dada ji or Thakur dono ache dost hai dada ji apne betiyo se bhot jada pyar karte the isliye unhone teen anath se meri teno bua ki shadi karadi or wo bhi humare ghar ke pas rehete hai or humlogo ka aana jana laga reheta hai

Humare gaon mein he ek school hai jisme mera dakhira hogya tha humare yaha gaon mein ladkiyo ko 3 saal late school mein join karate hai





Do floor ghar jisme niche teen room or ek store room hai or upper 4 room hai usme se ek kamre me ek ladka soraha tha dikhne mein bohot masoom tha kuch time baad us ladka ka door open karke ek aurat andar aayi aur pyar se ladke ke sir me hath firate huye uthane lagi…..

Aurat:-abhi beta uth ja subha hogai tujhe school jana hai

Ladka:-ji chachi uth gaya mein

Ji haa dosto wo ladka abhi matlab mein he hu or wo aulat badi chachi hai, phir mein uth ke fresh hoke washrom ke andar chere gaya jab mein washroom gaya to chachi ne mera kapde nikal ke bed ke upper rakh diya phir kamre se chere gaye phir mein fresh hoke niche aaya or kapde pehen ke niche chele gaya


Kitchen mein choti chachi or sema chachi khana bna rahe the aur badi chachi mere liye khana lake dining table ke upper bethe the mein badi chachi ke paas chara gaya or unke paas ek table pe beth gaya phir b.chachi ne mujhe badi pyar se khana khilane lage mein khana khake school ke liye nikal gaya…

Jab mein school ke gate ke paas pohanch gaya to koi aake mere pith pe mukha mara jab mein piche palat ke dekha to wo mera jigri dost ravi tha

Ravi:-kese hai yaar

Main:- mein acha hu, tu bata kesa hai

Ravi:-mein acha hu,tujhe pta hai kiya aaj humara internal exam ka mark btane ware hai

Mein:-haa pta hai mujhe isliye mein tension me hu agar acha mark na aaya to chacha khamkha mujh pe chilayenge aur tera bta tera mark kesa ayega

Ravi:- baas mera paas layak mark ajaye itna kafi hai

Ese he hum log baat karke school ke andar agaye jab hum log class ke andar entry huye to meri najar class me pehere chair pe bethe komal pe chali gayi kuch time usko dekhne baad humlog last banch aa gaye or udhar bethgaye……

Ese he ek ek sir aur madam aaye or hum logo ka mark btane lage akhiri class mein humara school ka math ka madam aaye or unhone sab ka malk btne lage mera math me highst mark 92 tha humara school ka tooper komal tha magar uska math me kaam mark aaya uska math me aaya tha 62 . ese he aaj ka pura class khatam hogya phir hum log ghar cheregaye…..


Hamara school subha 7 baje se 11:30 baje tak hota hai, jab mein ghar gaya to dekha hall mein c.chachi bethe the unhone mujhe dekha or mujhe unke paas bulaya mein c.chachi ke paas chelegaya tab chachi ne pucha

c.chachi:-aaj ka din kesa tha aur school mein kya hua

mein:-chachi aaj ka din acha tha or aaj humara internal ka mark btaya or meine wo mark chachi ko btaya

c.chachi:- bohot ache ese he ache se pdhai karo or English subject me thoda dhyan do(kyunki meri english mein bohot jada kaam mark aaya tha)

mein bhi ok bolke khana khake room me chera gaya or jake sogya saam ko mein akhda (jaha kusti sikhate hai) chere gaya or 5:30 baje taak ustad se kusti sikhta raha or 5:30 baje mein akhda se ghar ke liye nikal gaya jab mein ja raha tha to dekha ek toota hua ghar mein do ladke ek ladki ko andar jatee huye meine bhi utskha bash kuch duri bnake unke piche chera gaya meine us ghar ke andar jake dekha

(mere ghar se akhda 1 ghante duri ka hai aur akhda sunsan area mein hai aur akhda mein paid bhot hai or udhar thandi thandi hawa aati reheti hai akhda ke piche ek toota hua ghar tha wo jada koi use nahi karta)


Us ghar ka chhat bich bich mein toota hua tha us toota hua chhat se roshni aarahi thi mein dhyan se dekha un teeno ko dekha wo teeno mere school ke kapde pehene the wo ladki humare scool ke mere next sec. ki mona thi or wo dono ladke se ek uska bada bhai or ek uska boyfriend(jiske sath mona ka bachpan se shadi tay hogya tha
 
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park

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CHARACTER INTRODUCTION:-

Dada :- yogesh singh(age-76)

Ye dil ke ache insan hai or ye ek pehelwan the magar abhi ek accident ke waja se ye paralysis hogaye abhi ye phir haal ek ashram me hai, inko log bohot ijjat karte hai ye apne bade pote se bohot pyar karte hai……

Dadi :-yoshada singh(dead)

Ye bhi dil ki ache insan the kalib 10 saal pehere inki dead hogai

Inki do bete or teen beti hai

Bada beta:-akash singh(dead)

Ye ek sintist the or dil ke ache the lab mein aag lagne ke waja se inki mout hogai sab ko pta hai

Wife:-shalini singh

Ye bhi inki husband ke jese sintist the ye dil ki bhot ache the apne family se bhot pyar karte hai or ye bhag ke shadi kiye the kyunki inki gharware inki pyar ke khiraf the isliye inki gharware ne inke sath rishta tod diya

Inka ek beta hai

Abhi(mein):- (age-20 )

Meri pitaji or mata ji ki mout ki khabar sunke mein teen saal sadme mein chere gaya tha isliye aaj bhi mein school mein hu Mujhse ghar mein sab pyar karte hai sibaye meri 2nd bua ke alawa wo mujhse jada baat nahi karte or mujhse dur he rehete hai kyu pta nahi, iske alawa meri sirf ek he jigri yaar hai ravi, or mere dada ki ijjat ke karan gaon mein sab mujhse bhi ijjat se baat karte hai






Chota beta :- dharam singh (age-38)

Ye dil ke saaf hai inki abhi tak koi alad nahi hai inhone abhi tak 3 shadi kar chuke hai, apne patni ko gali dete hai ekere mein koi alad na janam dene ke kalan …..

1st wife:-suman singh(age-32)

Ye dil ke ache hai chachaji ke aur dono patni ko apne chote behan mante hai or ye mujhe apne bacha mante hai or mujhse bhot jada pyar karte hai agar mujhe kabhi bukhar ajata hai to raat bhar jaag ke mera khayal rakhte hai , inki koi aulad na hone ke karan ye chacha se roj gali khati hai

2nd wife:-seema singh(age-29)

Ye bhi dil ke ache hai sabhi se masti majak karte rehete hai ye suman ko apni badi behan mante hai inke pariwar ke eklote aulad hai magar galibi ke karan inke family ne chacha ji se shadi kaladi inki bhi koi aulad nahi hai

3rd wife:-meena singh(age 26)

Ye dil se jitna ache hai dimag se utna shatir hai ye suman or seema ko apni badi behan mante hai unko bachane ke chakar mein ye kabhi kabhi unke gali bhi chacha se khati hai Abhi tak unka bhi koi aulad nahi hai

1st beti :-pooja chohan(age-42)

Ye bhi dil ke achi hai inki pati bahar job karne ke karan ye jadatar pyasi he reheti hai inke do beti or ek beta hai

Husband:-nikhil chohan(age-49)

Ye bhi dil ke ache hai ye dubai me job karte hai saal me ek mahine ke liye gaon aate hai

Badi beti:-sweta chohan(age-22)

Ye bahar sahar mein reheke pdhai karti hai or festival mein ghar aati reheti hai inka b.f tha jis se inka break up hogya

Choti beti:-shital chohan(age-20)

Ye bhi didi ke sath reheke pdhai karti hai dil ki achi hai humesha masti majak karti reheti hai

Beta :- raaj chohan(age-18)

Bachpan me ek accident ke karan iska dimag thoda bachpan jesa hai, ye bohot masoom hai….

2nd beti:- neha kulkalni(age-36)

Ye bhi dil ki achi hai magar humare hero se nafrat karti hai ye apni badi beti se apne jaan se jada pyar karti hai inki do beti hai




Husband:-jatin kulkalni(age-46)

Ye bhi dil ke ache hai ye bhi dubai me job karte hai saal me 1 mahine ke liye gaaon aati hai

Badi beti:-komal kulkani(age-19)

Ye dil achi hai or bohot he masoom hai aaj tak koi bhi byfriend nahi bnaya ye bhi meri sath ek he schoor aur class mein padhti hai

Choti beti:-kavita kulkani(age-18)

Ye bohot natkhat hai hero se majjak karti reheti hai dil ki achi hai

3rd beti:-neeta kulkani(age-36)

Neha or ye dono judwa hai in dono me pyar bohot jada hai ye dil ki achi hai inka do judwe bache hai

Husband:-jitendar kulkani(age-45)

Ye or jatin dono bhai hai ye bhi dubai mein job karte hai saal me ek baar ek mahine ke liye gaon aate hai

Beti:-leena kulkani(age-18)

Ye or kavita dono behan kaam dost jada hai ye dono behan milke saralat karte reheti hai

Beta :-rajesh kulkalni(age-18)

Ye or leena dono judawa hai ye hostel reheke pdhai karta hai

Ravi:- (avi ka dost)(age 20)

Abhi ka dost hai badmash hai ye gaon me awara galdi karta hai iska baap nahi hai, ye apni maa or badi behan sath reheta hai

Maa:-sumitra rao(age-42

Ye abhi ke khet mein kaam karta hai or dil se achi hai apne bet eke karan pareshan reheti hai




Badi behan:-gayatri rao(age-24)

Ye dikhne mein bohot hot hai jawani ke karan ye bohot pyasi hai
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park

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Ye ek gaon jiska naam ****** usme Thakur ka raaj chalta hai Thakur ke bad humara raaj hai humare yaha thukuro ke jese jamin hai or gaon mein dada ji ke ijjat ke karan humara bhi gaon me sab ijjat karte hai dada ji or Thakur dono ache dost hai dada ji apne betiyo se bhot jada pyar karte the isliye unhone teen anath se meri teno bua ki shadi karadi or wo bhi humare ghar ke pas rehete hai or humlogo ka aana jana laga reheta hai

Humare gaon mein he ek school hai jisme mera dakhira hogya tha humare yaha gaon mein ladkiyo ko 3 saal late school mein join karate hai





Do floor ghar jisme niche teen room or ek store room hai or upper 4 room hai usme se ek kamre me ek ladka soraha tha dikhne mein bohot masoom tha kuch time baad us ladka ka door open karke ek aurat andar aayi aur pyar se ladke ke sir me hath firate huye uthane lagi…..

Aurat:-abhi beta uth ja subha hogai tujhe school jana hai

Ladka:-ji chachi uth gaya mein

Ji haa dosto wo ladka abhi matlab mein he hu or wo aulat badi chachi hai, phir mein uth ke fresh hoke washrom ke andar chere gaya jab mein washroom gaya to chachi ne mera kapde nikal ke bed ke upper rakh diya phir kamre se chere gaye phir mein fresh hoke niche aaya or kapde pehen ke niche chele gaya


Kitchen mein choti chachi or sema chachi khana bna rahe the aur badi chachi mere liye khana lake dining table ke upper bethe the mein badi chachi ke paas chara gaya or unke paas ek table pe beth gaya phir b.chachi ne mujhe badi pyar se khana khilane lage mein khana khake school ke liye nikal gaya…

Jab mein school ke gate ke paas pohanch gaya to koi aake mere pith pe mukha mara jab mein piche palat ke dekha to wo mera jigri dost ravi tha

Ravi:-kese hai yaar

Main:- mein acha hu, tu bata kesa hai

Ravi:-mein acha hu,tujhe pta hai kiya aaj humara internal exam ka mark btane ware hai

Mein:-haa pta hai mujhe isliye mein tension me hu agar acha mark na aaya to chacha khamkha mujh pe chilayenge aur tera bta tera mark kesa ayega

Ravi:- baas mera paas layak mark ajaye itna kafi hai

Ese he hum log baat karke school ke andar agaye jab hum log class ke andar entry huye to meri najar class me pehere chair pe bethe komal pe chali gayi kuch time usko dekhne baad humlog last banch aa gaye or udhar bethgaye……

Ese he ek ek sir aur madam aaye or hum logo ka mark btane lage akhiri class mein humara school ka math ka madam aaye or unhone sab ka malk btne lage mera math me highst mark 92 tha humara school ka tooper komal tha magar uska math me kaam mark aaya uska math me aaya tha 62 . ese he aaj ka pura class khatam hogya phir hum log ghar cheregaye…..


Hamara school subha 7 baje se 11:30 baje tak hota hai, jab mein ghar gaya to dekha hall mein c.chachi bethe the unhone mujhe dekha or mujhe unke paas bulaya mein c.chachi ke paas chelegaya tab chachi ne pucha

c.chachi:-aaj ka din kesa tha aur school mein kya hua

mein:-chachi aaj ka din acha tha or aaj humara internal ka mark btaya or meine wo mark chachi ko btaya

c.chachi:- bohot ache ese he ache se pdhai karo or English subject me thoda dhyan do(kyunki meri english mein bohot jada kaam mark aaya tha)

mein bhi ok bolke khana khake room me chera gaya or jake sogya saam ko mein akhda (jaha kusti sikhate hai) chere gaya or 5:30 baje taak ustad se kusti sikhta raha or 5:30 baje mein akhda se ghar ke liye nikal gaya jab mein ja raha tha to dekha ek toota hua ghar mein do ladke ek ladki ko andar jatee huye meine bhi utskha bash kuch duri bnake unke piche chera gaya meine us ghar ke andar jake dekha

(mere ghar se akhda 1 ghante duri ka hai aur akhda sunsan area mein hai aur akhda mein paid bhot hai or udhar thandi thandi hawa aati reheti hai akhda ke piche ek toota hua ghar tha wo jada koi use nahi karta)


Us ghar ka chhat bich bich mein toota hua tha us toota hua chhat se roshni aarahi thi mein dhyan se dekha un teeno ko dekha wo teeno mere school ke kapde pehene the wo ladki humare scool ke mere next sec. ki mona thi or wo dono ladke se ek uska bada bhai or ek uska boyfriend(jiske sath mona ka bachpan se shadi tay hogya tha
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Ye ek gaon jiska naam ****** usme Thakur ka raaj chalta hai Thakur ke bad humara raaj hai humare yaha thukuro ke jese jamin hai or gaon mein dada ji ke ijjat ke karan humara bhi gaon me sab ijjat karte hai dada ji or Thakur dono ache dost hai dada ji apne betiyo se bhot jada pyar karte the isliye unhone teen anath se meri teno bua ki shadi karadi or wo bhi humare ghar ke pas rehete hai or humlogo ka aana jana laga reheta hai

Humare gaon mein he ek school hai jisme mera dakhira hogya tha humare yaha gaon mein ladkiyo ko 3 saal late school mein join karate hai





Do floor ghar jisme niche teen room or ek store room hai or upper 4 room hai usme se ek kamre me ek ladka soraha tha dikhne mein bohot masoom tha kuch time baad us ladka ka door open karke ek aurat andar aayi aur pyar se ladke ke sir me hath firate huye uthane lagi…..

Aurat:-abhi beta uth ja subha hogai tujhe school jana hai

Ladka:-ji chachi uth gaya mein

Ji haa dosto wo ladka abhi matlab mein he hu or wo aulat badi chachi hai, phir mein uth ke fresh hoke washrom ke andar chere gaya jab mein washroom gaya to chachi ne mera kapde nikal ke bed ke upper rakh diya phir kamre se chere gaye phir mein fresh hoke niche aaya or kapde pehen ke niche chele gaya


Kitchen mein choti chachi or sema chachi khana bna rahe the aur badi chachi mere liye khana lake dining table ke upper bethe the mein badi chachi ke paas chara gaya or unke paas ek table pe beth gaya phir b.chachi ne mujhe badi pyar se khana khilane lage mein khana khake school ke liye nikal gaya…

Jab mein school ke gate ke paas pohanch gaya to koi aake mere pith pe mukha mara jab mein piche palat ke dekha to wo mera jigri dost ravi tha

Ravi:-kese hai yaar

Main:- mein acha hu, tu bata kesa hai

Ravi:-mein acha hu,tujhe pta hai kiya aaj humara internal exam ka mark btane ware hai

Mein:-haa pta hai mujhe isliye mein tension me hu agar acha mark na aaya to chacha khamkha mujh pe chilayenge aur tera bta tera mark kesa ayega

Ravi:- baas mera paas layak mark ajaye itna kafi hai

Ese he hum log baat karke school ke andar agaye jab hum log class ke andar entry huye to meri najar class me pehere chair pe bethe komal pe chali gayi kuch time usko dekhne baad humlog last banch aa gaye or udhar bethgaye……

Ese he ek ek sir aur madam aaye or hum logo ka mark btane lage akhiri class mein humara school ka math ka madam aaye or unhone sab ka malk btne lage mera math me highst mark 92 tha humara school ka tooper komal tha magar uska math me kaam mark aaya uska math me aaya tha 62 . ese he aaj ka pura class khatam hogya phir hum log ghar cheregaye…..


Hamara school subha 7 baje se 11:30 baje tak hota hai, jab mein ghar gaya to dekha hall mein c.chachi bethe the unhone mujhe dekha or mujhe unke paas bulaya mein c.chachi ke paas chelegaya tab chachi ne pucha

c.chachi:-aaj ka din kesa tha aur school mein kya hua

mein:-chachi aaj ka din acha tha or aaj humara internal ka mark btaya or meine wo mark chachi ko btaya

c.chachi:- bohot ache ese he ache se pdhai karo or English subject me thoda dhyan do(kyunki meri english mein bohot jada kaam mark aaya tha)

mein bhi ok bolke khana khake room me chera gaya or jake sogya saam ko mein akhda (jaha kusti sikhate hai) chere gaya or 5:30 baje taak ustad se kusti sikhta raha or 5:30 baje mein akhda se ghar ke liye nikal gaya jab mein ja raha tha to dekha ek toota hua ghar mein do ladke ek ladki ko andar jatee huye meine bhi utskha bash kuch duri bnake unke piche chera gaya meine us ghar ke andar jake dekha

(mere ghar se akhda 1 ghante duri ka hai aur akhda sunsan area mein hai aur akhda mein paid bhot hai or udhar thandi thandi hawa aati reheti hai akhda ke piche ek toota hua ghar tha wo jada koi use nahi karta)


Us ghar ka chhat bich bich mein toota hua tha us toota hua chhat se roshni aarahi thi mein dhyan se dekha un teeno ko dekha wo teeno mere school ke kapde pehene the wo ladki humare scool ke mere next sec. ki mona thi or wo dono ladke se ek uska bada bhai or ek uska boyfriend(jiske sath mona ka bachpan se shadi tay hogya tha
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Ye ek gaon jiska naam ****** usme Thakur ka raaj chalta hai Thakur ke bad humara raaj hai humare yaha thukuro ke jese jamin hai or gaon mein dada ji ke ijjat ke karan humara bhi gaon me sab ijjat karte hai dada ji or Thakur dono ache dost hai dada ji apne betiyo se bhot jada pyar karte the isliye unhone teen anath se meri teno bua ki shadi karadi or wo bhi humare ghar ke pas rehete hai or humlogo ka aana jana laga reheta hai

Humare gaon mein he ek school hai jisme mera dakhira hogya tha humare yaha gaon mein ladkiyo ko 3 saal late school mein join karate hai





Do floor ghar jisme niche teen room or ek store room hai or upper 4 room hai usme se ek kamre me ek ladka soraha tha dikhne mein bohot masoom tha kuch time baad us ladka ka door open karke ek aurat andar aayi aur pyar se ladke ke sir me hath firate huye uthane lagi…..

Aurat:-abhi beta uth ja subha hogai tujhe school jana hai

Ladka:-ji chachi uth gaya mein

Ji haa dosto wo ladka abhi matlab mein he hu or wo aulat badi chachi hai, phir mein uth ke fresh hoke washrom ke andar chere gaya jab mein washroom gaya to chachi ne mera kapde nikal ke bed ke upper rakh diya phir kamre se chere gaye phir mein fresh hoke niche aaya or kapde pehen ke niche chele gaya


Kitchen mein choti chachi or sema chachi khana bna rahe the aur badi chachi mere liye khana lake dining table ke upper bethe the mein badi chachi ke paas chara gaya or unke paas ek table pe beth gaya phir b.chachi ne mujhe badi pyar se khana khilane lage mein khana khake school ke liye nikal gaya…

Jab mein school ke gate ke paas pohanch gaya to koi aake mere pith pe mukha mara jab mein piche palat ke dekha to wo mera jigri dost ravi tha

Ravi:-kese hai yaar

Main:- mein acha hu, tu bata kesa hai

Ravi:-mein acha hu,tujhe pta hai kiya aaj humara internal exam ka mark btane ware hai

Mein:-haa pta hai mujhe isliye mein tension me hu agar acha mark na aaya to chacha khamkha mujh pe chilayenge aur tera bta tera mark kesa ayega

Ravi:- baas mera paas layak mark ajaye itna kafi hai

Ese he hum log baat karke school ke andar agaye jab hum log class ke andar entry huye to meri najar class me pehere chair pe bethe komal pe chali gayi kuch time usko dekhne baad humlog last banch aa gaye or udhar bethgaye……

Ese he ek ek sir aur madam aaye or hum logo ka mark btane lage akhiri class mein humara school ka math ka madam aaye or unhone sab ka malk btne lage mera math me highst mark 92 tha humara school ka tooper komal tha magar uska math me kaam mark aaya uska math me aaya tha 62 . ese he aaj ka pura class khatam hogya phir hum log ghar cheregaye…..


Hamara school subha 7 baje se 11:30 baje tak hota hai, jab mein ghar gaya to dekha hall mein c.chachi bethe the unhone mujhe dekha or mujhe unke paas bulaya mein c.chachi ke paas chelegaya tab chachi ne pucha

c.chachi:-aaj ka din kesa tha aur school mein kya hua

mein:-chachi aaj ka din acha tha or aaj humara internal ka mark btaya or meine wo mark chachi ko btaya

c.chachi:- bohot ache ese he ache se pdhai karo or English subject me thoda dhyan do(kyunki meri english mein bohot jada kaam mark aaya tha)

mein bhi ok bolke khana khake room me chera gaya or jake sogya saam ko mein akhda (jaha kusti sikhate hai) chere gaya or 5:30 baje taak ustad se kusti sikhta raha or 5:30 baje mein akhda se ghar ke liye nikal gaya jab mein ja raha tha to dekha ek toota hua ghar mein do ladke ek ladki ko andar jatee huye meine bhi utskha bash kuch duri bnake unke piche chera gaya meine us ghar ke andar jake dekha

(mere ghar se akhda 1 ghante duri ka hai aur akhda sunsan area mein hai aur akhda mein paid bhot hai or udhar thandi thandi hawa aati reheti hai akhda ke piche ek toota hua ghar tha wo jada koi use nahi karta)


Us ghar ka chhat bich bich mein toota hua tha us toota hua chhat se roshni aarahi thi mein dhyan se dekha un teeno ko dekha wo teeno mere school ke kapde pehene the wo ladki humare scool ke mere next sec. ki mona thi or wo dono ladke se ek uska bada bhai or ek uska boyfriend(jiske sath mona ka bachpan se shadi tay hogya tha
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Ye ek gaon jiska naam ****** usme Thakur ka raaj chalta hai Thakur ke bad humara raaj hai humare yaha thukuro ke jese jamin hai or gaon mein dada ji ke ijjat ke karan humara bhi gaon me sab ijjat karte hai dada ji or Thakur dono ache dost hai dada ji apne betiyo se bhot jada pyar karte the isliye unhone teen anath se meri teno bua ki shadi karadi or wo bhi humare ghar ke pas rehete hai or humlogo ka aana jana laga reheta hai

Humare gaon mein he ek school hai jisme mera dakhira hogya tha humare yaha gaon mein ladkiyo ko 3 saal late school mein join karate hai





Do floor ghar jisme niche teen room or ek store room hai or upper 4 room hai usme se ek kamre me ek ladka soraha tha dikhne mein bohot masoom tha kuch time baad us ladka ka door open karke ek aurat andar aayi aur pyar se ladke ke sir me hath firate huye uthane lagi…..

Aurat:-abhi beta uth ja subha hogai tujhe school jana hai

Ladka:-ji chachi uth gaya mein

Ji haa dosto wo ladka abhi matlab mein he hu or wo aulat badi chachi hai, phir mein uth ke fresh hoke washrom ke andar chere gaya jab mein washroom gaya to chachi ne mera kapde nikal ke bed ke upper rakh diya phir kamre se chere gaye phir mein fresh hoke niche aaya or kapde pehen ke niche chele gaya


Kitchen mein choti chachi or sema chachi khana bna rahe the aur badi chachi mere liye khana lake dining table ke upper bethe the mein badi chachi ke paas chara gaya or unke paas ek table pe beth gaya phir b.chachi ne mujhe badi pyar se khana khilane lage mein khana khake school ke liye nikal gaya…

Jab mein school ke gate ke paas pohanch gaya to koi aake mere pith pe mukha mara jab mein piche palat ke dekha to wo mera jigri dost ravi tha

Ravi:-kese hai yaar

Main:- mein acha hu, tu bata kesa hai

Ravi:-mein acha hu,tujhe pta hai kiya aaj humara internal exam ka mark btane ware hai

Mein:-haa pta hai mujhe isliye mein tension me hu agar acha mark na aaya to chacha khamkha mujh pe chilayenge aur tera bta tera mark kesa ayega

Ravi:- baas mera paas layak mark ajaye itna kafi hai

Ese he hum log baat karke school ke andar agaye jab hum log class ke andar entry huye to meri najar class me pehere chair pe bethe komal pe chali gayi kuch time usko dekhne baad humlog last banch aa gaye or udhar bethgaye……

Ese he ek ek sir aur madam aaye or hum logo ka mark btane lage akhiri class mein humara school ka math ka madam aaye or unhone sab ka malk btne lage mera math me highst mark 92 tha humara school ka tooper komal tha magar uska math me kaam mark aaya uska math me aaya tha 62 . ese he aaj ka pura class khatam hogya phir hum log ghar cheregaye…..


Hamara school subha 7 baje se 11:30 baje tak hota hai, jab mein ghar gaya to dekha hall mein c.chachi bethe the unhone mujhe dekha or mujhe unke paas bulaya mein c.chachi ke paas chelegaya tab chachi ne pucha

c.chachi:-aaj ka din kesa tha aur school mein kya hua

mein:-chachi aaj ka din acha tha or aaj humara internal ka mark btaya or meine wo mark chachi ko btaya

c.chachi:- bohot ache ese he ache se pdhai karo or English subject me thoda dhyan do(kyunki meri english mein bohot jada kaam mark aaya tha)

mein bhi ok bolke khana khake room me chera gaya or jake sogya saam ko mein akhda (jaha kusti sikhate hai) chere gaya or 5:30 baje taak ustad se kusti sikhta raha or 5:30 baje mein akhda se ghar ke liye nikal gaya jab mein ja raha tha to dekha ek toota hua ghar mein do ladke ek ladki ko andar jatee huye meine bhi utskha bash kuch duri bnake unke piche chera gaya meine us ghar ke andar jake dekha

(mere ghar se akhda 1 ghante duri ka hai aur akhda sunsan area mein hai aur akhda mein paid bhot hai or udhar thandi thandi hawa aati reheti hai akhda ke piche ek toota hua ghar tha wo jada koi use nahi karta)


Us ghar ka chhat bich bich mein toota hua tha us toota hua chhat se roshni aarahi thi mein dhyan se dekha un teeno ko dekha wo teeno mere school ke kapde pehene the wo ladki humare scool ke mere next sec. ki mona thi or wo dono ladke se ek uska bada bhai or ek uska boyfriend(jiske sath mona ka bachpan se shadi tay hogya tha
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