Fantasy The Untold Story of Devil ( Romance,Nafrat,Thrill)

[Siraa]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Story Collector

I will take bro don't worry about it...

 

[Siraa]

Waiting for next. ......

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[Siraa]

Nice update

Thanks bhai

 

[Siraa]

Nice

Thanks bhai

 

[Siraa]

Nice update bro

Thanks bro

 

[Siraa]

Superb update bhai
Lagta hai vihan ki patinio ki list achi hi hai
Keep posting

thanks bro.
List ka tho aage pata chalega kitni lambi hai.
esehe sath bane rahie...

 

[Siraa]

Update 12:​

Vihaan bhar nikal kar Car mai baitha hai aur car start karke Mumbai k eek sunsan ilake mai chala jata h. Waha jake who kisi ka intazar karta h par uska koi shuru ke he picha kar raha tha.

ab aage:


Vihaan ko aae kuch der he hui thi wha pa eek kala dhuna hota haur jab wo chtta hai usme se Kalkol niklta h.


Kalkol: aaj tum mere hath aa he gye?


Vihaan: aao Kalkol mai tumhari he partiksha kar rha tha.


Kalkol: phalli baar dkh raha hu koi apni maut ki partiksha kar raha hai.


Vihaan: ye tho samya he bataega.


Vihaan ke itna khte he Kalkol ek aag ka gola Vihaan pe chorta hai.Vihaan wha se jump kar deta hai aur jal ka avhan karta h, kuchi shan mai uske hath mai jal aa jata hai aur Vihaan usko ek talwar ke roop mai dalkar kalkol par parhar karta hai.


Wo talwar Kalkol ki trf badti hai aur jab tak Kalkol kuch karta wo talwar aake usko lagti hai aur wo udta hua bhut dur girta hai.


Kalkol punah kahada hota h aur iss bharwopure gusse mai apni shakti ko yaad karta hai, tabhi uske hath mai ek laal rang ka gola aa jata aur uske much par muskaan aa jati hai aur wo uss gole ko Vihaan ki traf chor deta hai.


Jaise jaise wogola Vihaan kitraf aa raha thaw o aur bada ho rha tha uski cahpet mai jo kuch bhi aa raha tha wo usse apne ander samet raha tha. Parntu vihaan apni jagah se nhi hil raha tha aur nahe kuch kar rha thaw o gola Vihaan ke lagne wala he tha Vihaan apna hath aage karta h.


Wo gola Vihaan ke hath mai sama jata hai jisse dkh kar kalkol bhokla jata hai aur bolata hai.


Kalkol: ye kaise ho sakta hai. Koi bhi Manushya, Devil aur Angel uski puri shakti ka samna nahi kar skata aur tumne sirf apne hatho se rok diya.


Vihaan: Kalkol tumari shkati mere samne kuch bhi nhi ai abhi bhi samya h chle jao.


Kalkol: mai tme marityu diye bina yaha se nahi jauga.


Vihaan ke kuch bolne se phle Kalkol ke maan maiRudra ki ek awaj aati hai(tum isse shakti se nhi hara skte tum isse talwar yudh ki chanoti do hume pura vihwas h ye usme parast hoga tumare hatho se mara jaega)


Kalkol: parntu agar maine esa kiya tho iski talwar?


Rudra: humne batayana iski talwar Ninder awasta mai hai.


Kalkol: thik hai.


Fir Rudra ki awaj nhi aati aur Kalkol Vihaan ki tarf dkh kar:


Kalkol: Thik h vihaan mai yaha se Chalajauga parntu usse phale mai tumne talwar yudh ki chonti deta hu.


Ye sun kar Vihaan ke mukh pe bhi muskurahat aa hai.


Vihaan: kyu apni Marityu chate ho kalkol chale ao yaha se.


Vihaan ki ye baat sunke Kalkol ki ankho mai gussa utar aata h aur wo apni talwar leke Vihaan ki traf daud laga deta. Vihaan pni garden halki si naa mai hilakar kuch mantar padta hai aur apni sari vidya bhula deta h aur apne hath mai bhi ek talwar le aata hai.


Kalkol Vihaan pe hamla karta haijisse Vihaan rok deta h aur shrur hota h dono mai yudh. Kalkol Vihaan pe bari pad raha tha kyuki Vihaan ne apni Vidya bula di thi. Kalkol apni puri takat se Vihaan par parhar karta hai aur Vihaan ki talwar tut jai hai.


Vihaan ki talwar tute he Kalkol Vihaan ke sine par talwar marta hai aur Vihaan ki chike nikal jati hai.


Dusri taf:


Aishani apne bed par leti so rahi thi usko kuch bechani si hone lagti hai. Usse kuch samj nhi aa raha tha ki kya ho raha hai uske sath. Jaise he kalkoln Vihaan pe hamlan karta hai uske muh se chik nikal jata hai “Vihaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnn”


Aditi bhi uske paas he baithi thi wo bhi chonk jati hai aur bhag kar Aishnai ke paas jati hai aur bolti hai:


Aditi: kya hua Aishani?


Aishani kuch hi bolti aur jor jor se rone lagti hai par Aditi ke dobara puchne pe dihre se boltihai.


Aishani: unko kuch ho gaya hai.


Aditi: kisko Aishani?


Aishni: Vihaan ko....


Aditi: Vihaan ko kuch nahi hua wotho kaam se office gaya h uske.


Aishani: Nahi Aditi maine abhi Mahsos hua h ki unke upa hamla hua ha.


Aditi: Aishani shant ho ja mai usko call karti hu.


Aishani kuch nhi bolti aur Aditi Vihaan ko call karti hai aur call pick ho jata hai.


Aditi: tum kaha ho?


Samne se: office hu. Bataya tho tha kyu kya hua?


Aditi: kuch nhi bas ghumne jana tha bhul gaye?


Samne se: Ha yaad hai 45 mins mai aa raha hu.


Aditi: thik hai.


Aditi call disconnect kar deti hai aur Aishani ki tarf jati hai aur bolti hai.


Aditi: office he h wo aur kuch hua usse aur wo Aihani ko lita deti hai usko kambal de kar bhar aa jati hai aur sochti hai.


Aishaniman me) tum kaha ho unki madat karo....


Aditi: kahi usse kuch yaad tho nahi aa gaya? Nahi par Vachan? Kya karu kuch samj nahi aa rha kahi sachmai Vihaan par Rudra ne? Nhi esa bhi nhi ho skata kya karu kuch samj nhi aa raha.....


Back to hero side:


Kalkol Vihaan par har tarhse war karta h aur Vihaan ko lahu luhan kar deta h, ant mai Vihaan apne gutno par baith jata hai aur Kalkol Vihaan ki neck par hamla karne wala h tha tabhi suraj ko badlo ne gher liya aur bijli chamkti hai aur asman se ek talwar rafter se niche aati hai aur Kalkol ki garden uske dahad se alag kar deti hai aur jamin mai gad jati hai.


Duri trf:


Jo saya Vihaan ka picha kar raha tha wobhi ab waha se gayab ho jata hai aur khi punchta hai.


Saya: Bhai wo lout aayi uske paas..


Rudra: kya kah rahe ho Ragav. (apne sahi socha wo saya Ragav tha)


Ragav: ha bhai mai sach kah raha hu maine apni aankho se dkha h usse kalkol ki garden katte hue.


Rudra: kahi usne thon hi?


Ragav: ha bhai mujhe bhi yhi lagta hai.


Back to hero side:


Vihaan abhi bhi apne ghutno par baitha tha par uske chahre par smile aa jati hai aur wo talwar ab ek akriti mai badne lagti hai aur sunder si ladki mai badal jati hai.


Wo chalti hui Vihaan ki tarf jati hai aur usko uthati hai. Vihaan usko dkhta h aur wo ladki Vihaan ko apne gale laga leti h aur Vihaan bhi usko apne aagosh mai le leta hai aur bolta hai.

(kon h wo ladki aur kya rista hai Vihaan ka usse aur Aihani ka kya Rista h Vihaan ke sath, jaane ke liye sath bane rahie and sorryb for late reply)

 

[Radhe]

Nice update bro Maza aa gya dekhte hai kaun hai wo lafki

 

[Pintupaul]

Superb update bro. Keep posting

 

[John Cena]

Update 12:​

Vihaan bhar nikal kar Car mai baitha hai aur car start karke Mumbai k eek sunsan ilake mai chala jata h. Waha jake who kisi ka intazar karta h par uska koi shuru ke he picha kar raha tha.

ab aage:


Vihaan ko aae kuch der he hui thi wha pa eek kala dhuna hota haur jab wo chtta hai usme se Kalkol niklta h.


Kalkol: aaj tum mere hath aa he gye?


Vihaan: aao Kalkol mai tumhari he partiksha kar rha tha.


Kalkol: phalli baar dkh raha hu koi apni maut ki partiksha kar raha hai.


Vihaan: ye tho samya he bataega.


Vihaan ke itna khte he Kalkol ek aag ka gola Vihaan pe chorta hai.Vihaan wha se jump kar deta hai aur jal ka avhan karta h, kuchi shan mai uske hath mai jal aa jata hai aur Vihaan usko ek talwar ke roop mai dalkar kalkol par parhar karta hai.


Wo talwar Kalkol ki trf badti hai aur jab tak Kalkol kuch karta wo talwar aake usko lagti hai aur wo udta hua bhut dur girta hai.


Kalkol punah kahada hota h aur iss bharwopure gusse mai apni shakti ko yaad karta hai, tabhi uske hath mai ek laal rang ka gola aa jata aur uske much par muskaan aa jati hai aur wo uss gole ko Vihaan ki traf chor deta hai.


Jaise jaise wogola Vihaan kitraf aa raha thaw o aur bada ho rha tha uski cahpet mai jo kuch bhi aa raha tha wo usse apne ander samet raha tha. Parntu vihaan apni jagah se nhi hil raha tha aur nahe kuch kar rha thaw o gola Vihaan ke lagne wala he tha Vihaan apna hath aage karta h.


Wo gola Vihaan ke hath mai sama jata hai jisse dkh kar kalkol bhokla jata hai aur bolata hai.


Kalkol: ye kaise ho sakta hai. Koi bhi Manushya, Devil aur Angel uski puri shakti ka samna nahi kar skata aur tumne sirf apne hatho se rok diya.


Vihaan: Kalkol tumari shkati mere samne kuch bhi nhi ai abhi bhi samya h chle jao.


Kalkol: mai tme marityu diye bina yaha se nahi jauga.


Vihaan ke kuch bolne se phle Kalkol ke maan maiRudra ki ek awaj aati hai(tum isse shakti se nhi hara skte tum isse talwar yudh ki chanoti do hume pura vihwas h ye usme parast hoga tumare hatho se mara jaega)


Kalkol: parntu agar maine esa kiya tho iski talwar?


Rudra: humne batayana iski talwar Ninder awasta mai hai.


Kalkol: thik hai.


Fir Rudra ki awaj nhi aati aur Kalkol Vihaan ki tarf dkh kar:


Kalkol: Thik h vihaan mai yaha se Chalajauga parntu usse phale mai tumne talwar yudh ki chonti deta hu.


Ye sun kar Vihaan ke mukh pe bhi muskurahat aa hai.


Vihaan: kyu apni Marityu chate ho kalkol chale ao yaha se.


Vihaan ki ye baat sunke Kalkol ki ankho mai gussa utar aata h aur wo apni talwar leke Vihaan ki traf daud laga deta. Vihaan pni garden halki si naa mai hilakar kuch mantar padta hai aur apni sari vidya bhula deta h aur apne hath mai bhi ek talwar le aata hai.


Kalkol Vihaan pe hamla karta haijisse Vihaan rok deta h aur shrur hota h dono mai yudh. Kalkol Vihaan pe bari pad raha tha kyuki Vihaan ne apni Vidya bula di thi. Kalkol apni puri takat se Vihaan par parhar karta hai aur Vihaan ki talwar tut jai hai.


Vihaan ki talwar tute he Kalkol Vihaan ke sine par talwar marta hai aur Vihaan ki chike nikal jati hai.


Dusri taf:


Aishani apne bed par leti so rahi thi usko kuch bechani si hone lagti hai. Usse kuch samj nhi aa raha tha ki kya ho raha hai uske sath. Jaise he kalkoln Vihaan pe hamlan karta hai uske muh se chik nikal jata hai “Vihaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnn”


Aditi bhi uske paas he baithi thi wo bhi chonk jati hai aur bhag kar Aishnai ke paas jati hai aur bolti hai:


Aditi: kya hua Aishani?


Aishani kuch hi bolti aur jor jor se rone lagti hai par Aditi ke dobara puchne pe dihre se boltihai.


Aishani: unko kuch ho gaya hai.


Aditi: kisko Aishani?


Aishni: Vihaan ko....


Aditi: Vihaan ko kuch nahi hua wotho kaam se office gaya h uske.


Aishani: Nahi Aditi maine abhi Mahsos hua h ki unke upa hamla hua ha.


Aditi: Aishani shant ho ja mai usko call karti hu.


Aishani kuch nhi bolti aur Aditi Vihaan ko call karti hai aur call pick ho jata hai.


Aditi: tum kaha ho?


Samne se: office hu. Bataya tho tha kyu kya hua?


Aditi: kuch nhi bas ghumne jana tha bhul gaye?


Samne se: Ha yaad hai 45 mins mai aa raha hu.


Aditi: thik hai.


Aditi call disconnect kar deti hai aur Aishani ki tarf jati hai aur bolti hai.


Aditi: office he h wo aur kuch hua usse aur wo Aihani ko lita deti hai usko kambal de kar bhar aa jati hai aur sochti hai.


Aishaniman me) tum kaha ho unki madat karo....


Aditi: kahi usse kuch yaad tho nahi aa gaya? Nahi par Vachan? Kya karu kuch samj nahi aa rha kahi sachmai Vihaan par Rudra ne? Nhi esa bhi nhi ho skata kya karu kuch samj nhi aa raha.....


Back to hero side:


Kalkol Vihaan par har tarhse war karta h aur Vihaan ko lahu luhan kar deta h, ant mai Vihaan apne gutno par baith jata hai aur Kalkol Vihaan ki neck par hamla karne wala h tha tabhi suraj ko badlo ne gher liya aur bijli chamkti hai aur asman se ek talwar rafter se niche aati hai aur Kalkol ki garden uske dahad se alag kar deti hai aur jamin mai gad jati hai.


Duri trf:


Jo saya Vihaan ka picha kar raha tha wobhi ab waha se gayab ho jata hai aur khi punchta hai.


Saya: Bhai wo lout aayi uske paas..


Rudra: kya kah rahe ho Ragav. (apne sahi socha wo saya Ragav tha)


Ragav: ha bhai mai sach kah raha hu maine apni aankho se dkha h usse kalkol ki garden katte hue.


Rudra: kahi usne thon hi?


Ragav: ha bhai mujhe bhi yhi lagta hai.


Back to hero side:


Vihaan abhi bhi apne ghutno par baitha tha par uske chahre par smile aa jati hai aur wo talwar ab ek akriti mai badne lagti hai aur sunder si ladki mai badal jati hai.


Wo chalti hui Vihaan ki tarf jati hai aur usko uthati hai. Vihaan usko dkhta h aur wo ladki Vihaan ko apne gale laga leti h aur Vihaan bhi usko apne aagosh mai le leta hai aur bolta hai.

(kon h wo ladki aur kya rista hai Vihaan ka usse aur Aihani ka kya Rista h Vihaan ke sath, jaane ke liye sath bane rahie and sorryb for late reply)

Boht khoob yar hero ko talwar mil gai