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He does. After all it's his responsibility to look after her especially knowing what he did to her that night.Well written sir
Kaera ka past to really dark and sadhai
Love the way you you showed us and that maze part was really great. veer ek legendary skill Bina second thought ke he used for kaera showed us how much he care for her
Kaera was not shown on purpose. She'll be seen later and whole update will be on her. That's the reason I didn't bring her in this update.I thought is update me we'll see some glimpse of kaera and her reaction her emotions but yea ik we'll see much of her and Trinity in future!
We'll see this in next update.Bhumika what has she decided? She want to talk to veer? I guess business related?
Ab jo sach hai usse toh maan'na hi padega na.Bhavana is watching raghini pretty closely!
Veer showing his cocking skill lol even sonali ko bhi tareef krni pad gai haha![]()
Thank you!"I’ll revolutionize the whole food industry."
Hell yea this line was very impactfull.
We'll see! Update will come tonight.God you always left us on a cliffhangeris this MSG from Karan related to kaera
or THE MAN has strike his first blow
It's okay. Don't take it to your heart. Yaha par ye sab masti mazak chalta rehta hai. Thanks a lot for your lovely revo.Once again great update and yea sorry about that "ear" thingsomeone pointed that
Keep supporting as usual. 
Update 5.3 words ki thi. Badu thi kaafi normal update se.Yar ye updates perhny ma itni jaldi khatum kyun ho jati hay or phir next update itny time k baad aati hay, lagta intizar ka arsaaa boht hi taweel hota abb hopefully saterday ko update mil jaye gi

Wahhh Warewolf bhai, dil khosh ker diyaaUpdate 5.3 words ki thi. Badu thi kaafi normal update se.
Agla update aaj raatri aa jayega.![]()
Labyrinth and Invitation update ka naam tha bhaaya. Skill nahi.Update mix tha
Main update ko 3 part main batunga
A. Browine point
B. Spollier
C.achivment of update
A. Browine point.
1. Labyrinth and Invitation yah naya skill add huva jo apne main behhad hi mysterius hai
Yes! Also, bina Pari ke usne uss labyrinth ko paar kiya.2. Yaha veer ki tarif banti hai. Lhudka fayda chodke usne kaira ko uper rakha.
Hmm!3.veer business ke sath ab use bada kar raha hai. Yeh uski soch ke karan log motivete ho rahe hai.
Bilkul!4. Veer ke rishte ab bhumika ke sath sonoli ke sath bhi sudhar rahe hai.
Kaera bachpan me alag thi. Usse ab ek robot ki tarah bana diya gaya hai.5. Kaira ka mission apne aap main bahot hi khas tha . jo keaira dikhti hai. Kya wah wasi hai jo.duniya janti hai. Per veer ko chodker.
Mystery wala person aisa kyu likhega ki I need you?B.Spoller
1. Yaha abhi wah mistry person ki call ho sakti ya karan ya kaira
2. Shayad kaira ke emotion balace huve hai.
Maybe? Or maybe not?3. Tamana ek to kisi veer ke rival ki khas ha jo veer ka business kharab karna chahti hai.our veer ki signature dish copy karna.
Call? Kaun sii call?4. Kya yeh call soniya ki thi jise kiara ne bulaya . ho. Pahle dosti phir pyar.
Next update me pata chalega.5. Kya bhumika ab khulana chahti hai. Ya veer se apne hise ka bhai ka pyar .lena chahti hài.
5000 points kahi aur waste hue hai bhai.C.achivment of update
1. Veer physicaly strong hai.per yeh skill jo motion ka chakrawieh hai. Use par kar ne ke liye veer ko apni bhawana pe control karna tha. Jo usne kiya ager nahi karta to wah kaira ko kho deta .sath main 5000. Point . bhi wast hote.
Kaera ke emotions jaag gaye honge toh mission ka notification aa jayega. Parantu aisa hua nahi hai abhi.2. Ab veer.kaira ki inteligent ko match kar raha hai. Jo uane business badhane ki soch baya karti hai.
3.Staff main vishwas paida kar raha hai.
4.sonali , ragani , bhumika our tej ab veer ke liye ab soch rahi hai. Jo veer ke hith main hai.
5. Yeh to. Conform huva ki ab kaira ke motion jag gaye hai.
Dekhte hai hum aage.6. Ab ase hai to wah kaira ko shayad veer ke prati pyar ka ahsas ho gaya ho.
7. Ya yeh call karan hai. Jo apni khushi batna chahta ho . ki use bahan mil gayi.
Harr legendary skill ke kuch nuksaan bhi hote hai.Hmm to ye hai seer vision ye to badi complicated skill hai yaar Wese to is ka fayda hi fayda hai but disadvantage bhi hai iske koi nahi sahi hai

Diary ka raaz baad me. Yes! Agle se Crimson festival shuru.Par bhai abhi bhi us dairy main kya tha uska raaz raaz hi hai wo kab khulega wese ye wala last daily routine update tha ab lagta hai agle update se crimson festival ka main part shuru hoega
Ladke se ladki bann jaaye?Wese ye tamanna hai kon sali aayi khayi sunayi or nikal li pehle to sala msg dekha to laga ki wo unknow person hi to nahi tha wo tamanna jiska system itna levelup hai ki wo shayad roop badal sakta hai
Jalan?Wese ye bhumika ke man main bhi apni maa ki tarah jalan bhar gayi lagta hai pehle to nahi thi kya iska jawab mil sakta hai broo
nahi toh? Bhumika ke andar kaha jalan dikh rahi hai? Aisa toh kisi ne bhi point out nahi kiya abhi.
Bhavna kuchi kuchi ku waali aurat na hai. Kuchi kuchi ku Kavya, Sonali, Aabha, Shreya jaisi ladkiyo ke saath ho sakta hai. Bhavna intellectual hai bhai. Woh fizool baate nahi karti. Usne pehli baar me Purvi ke ghar par Veer ke perro me gir kar usse apni orr karna chaaha tha. Par jab se usse pata chala hai ki wo approach galat thi.Or ye veer or bhavna ka kuch to kuchi kuchi ku wala thoda scene banao yaar warna veer uske badle sonali ki chuchiya daba daba kar suman se bhi badi kardega pehle
Wese bro veer or sonali ke rista bada hi ajeeb lagta hai mujhe or kya pata aage chal kar dono ke dill main kya feeling jaage agar pyaar wali feeling janam leti hai tab to ghar main ghamasan pakka hai jo mera manna ha
Nahi! Sonali ke sang kitna hi kyu na pyaar ho jaaye. Rahegi woh daasi hi. Suman ne pehle hi kaha hua hai ki uska parivaar Veer ke parivaar ki seva karne ke liye baadhya hai. Agar Sonali Veer ki premika banti hai, uss se shaadi karti hai. Toh uska auhda Veer ke barabar ka ho jayega. Jis se ye pratha toot jayegi.Mein bollywood movies nahi dekhta bhai.Baki superb and mind blowing update bhai
Wese pathaan dekhi kya kesi hai mene to nahi dekhi agar acchi ho to batana to dekhne jaounga warna nahi
Bohut hi kam dekhta hu. In fact mein movies wala banda nahi hu utna.

Sahi kaha hai. Par ye sirf maamuli cheezein hai. Asli struggles tab hi maalum padte hai jab aap vaastav me likhne baitho. Khaas kar jab kahani lambi ho. Kherr koi baat nahi.Mast update bhai
Aap ki kahani padke meravi kahani likhne ka maan kar rahahe. Chaha or likh diya yea sirf kahani me hotahe asliyat me iska ulta gand fat jatihe pehle concept chuno fir ghatnaoko time ke hisabs serial wise bithao fir un ghatnao par jojo jije istemal horehine un ka detai wo koi insan, jaga, bastu kuchvi ho saktahe detai karna kiuki kahani matlab kalpana jab yea kalpana bastab kesath jurta he tab banti he ek achhi kahani. Or itana sabke lia time kahahe bhai. Use bhi barke ek chis chahiye wo he patience jo mere pas nehi he.
Dhanyavaad bhai.Hats off to you bhai aap ne to itni lambi kahani likhihe hats off bhai hats off.
Intezar rahega agle update ka.
:Munch:I'm not only someone but also small brother of werewolf.
Setting kar rela hai?Dekho pahla vakya angregi me likha or vo bhi galat ho gya,
Aapke abhi tk 6 msg hai forum pr, Mai Aapko btana chahunga, yha pr ham sab ek dusre ki tang khichte rahte hai masti majak me, Kabhi Aapko lage ki jyada ho rha hai to aap usi wakt direct msg ya usi jagah pr bol digiyega ki jyada ho rha hai ab Ruk jao ham Ruk jayenge, pr naraj mat hoiyega future me, Sabhi yha dost hi hai...
Or Ha revo badhiya tha aapka
Dekhte hai.Ya sonu bhi ho sakti hey baki ka bacha huva point mey se![]()

I think I was right about kaera. Mind blowing update
Thanks man.Abha ne veer ko ladkhda kr aate huye dekh liya tha or usne veer ko Bol bhi diya ki vo jhuth bol rha tha, jiske evaj me use ek Badhiya smooch mila with some fear flavor.
Idhar Sonali madam ke sath veer ka breakfast conversation or uske baad food truck ke karmchariyo ko motivate karna va khud se khana bnakr logo ko show karvana ki chef hota kya hai or Kaise kaam karta hai Jabardast tha...
Abhi ye nahi keh sakte ki wo enjoy kar rahi hai. Kya pata wo gussa ho.Sonali ko pichhe se hug karke veer ne Aaj pahli baar uske ango ko chhua unhe masla, bhale hi Sonali veer ko kahti kuchh bhi rahe pr Vo vastav me veer ke Har action ko Injoy karti hai ab Dekhte hai veer ke is action pr kya reaction deti hai...
Naam wahi se liya gaya hai.Ye food critic tamanna (kahi ye apni actress tamanna bhatiya to nhi hai)

Aisa kya hua usse jo bhaag gayi?isne Bharat ke food ko 4th no. me rakha hua hai, veer ko parakhne ke liye usko walk pr le gyi pr veer ne use hi shock de diya yah kahkr ki vo ek din food industry me revolution le kr aayega or sabse last me use apni signature dish bnakr di, vo khate hi aise stabdh hui jaise kisi ne use aina dikha diya ho ki Indian food kya hota hai, vo to ek bite lekr hi bhag gyi baki bacha Apne sath lekr...
Aaj pata lag hi jayega.Yha veer use aise jata dekhta rah gya pr ye ASAP kya hota hai bhaya mere dimag me Iska koi full form nhi aa rha Abhi, or I need you! Kaera kah sakti hai sonia kah sakti hai or to or arohi va shreya bhi kah sakti hai na bhule to Sayad karan bhi Bol hi dega, pr veer ke mathe me Chinta ki lakire is samay kaera or US unknown person ke bare me soch kr hi ubhar sakti hai..
Tabhi toh Pari usse kind soul kehti hai. Apna munna Veer baakiyo se alag hai.Veer ne legendary skill istemal kiya tha seer vision jiske side effect bhi hai is duniya ke niyamo se alag hone ke chalte, pr jis tarah se aapne dairy or kaera ki memory ko retrieve karne ka dikhaya hai hat's off bhai superb amazing lajavab update, veer ne kitna pain saha kaera ke imotion ko vapas lane ke liye, kya aaj ke jmane me koi istarah se risk le sakta hai, jvab hai nhi, log dusro ke liye aise risk Bilkul bhi nhi uthata pr apna veer veer hai...
Thanks a lot bhai.Awesome writing skills bhaya superb lajvab amazing wonderful
Keep supporting just like this. 
Smart choice
Aisa nahi bhai. :shook: Shabd nahi rahenge toh sab nice update likhne lagenge. Fir mera kya hoga?![]()