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"akele akele kya kar raha hai bhaiya??"ragini ne terrace par aakar poochha
"Bas tahal raha tha"aakash bola
"Darr nahi lag raha hai tujhe??pehle to andhere se darta tha"ragini boli
"Tujhe darr lagta hai ragini??"aakash ne poochha
"Haan andhere se to sabko dar lagta hai"ragini boli
"Aaj se tujhe kam se kam andhere se darne ki zaroorat nahi hai ragini"aakash ne muskurate hue bola
"Kyun ??tu bada gama pahalwan hai kya???"ragini ne kamar par haath rakhkar kaha
Ye sunkar aakash zor zor se hasne laga
"Gama pehelwan to nahi lekin andhere ka raj....mera matlab andhere se tujhe bacha sakta hoon"aakash bola
"Ok jaldi neeche a warna mummy daant lagayegi"ragini boli aur daudkar neeche chali gayi
Aakash bhi sone chala gaya
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Ragini jogging ke liye jab park gayi to hairan reh gayi
Aakash jogging kiye ja raha tha aur pasine se nahaya hua tha
"Tu??aur jogging??Sapna no nahi dekh rahi hoon??"ragini boli
"Kyun na karu??"aakash apna haath strech karte hue bola
"Are wo baat nahi tu to kabhi in sab me rehta hi nahi tha na"ragini
"There's always first time"aakash ne aankh marte hue fir duadne laga
Ragini bhi peeche peecha ho li
"Baap re kitna bhagta hai,waise jahan tu tha wahan bhi aise hi jogging karta tha kya??isse mujhe yaad aaya bhaiyya.tune abhi tak bataya nahi kahan tha tu itne din??"ragini ne poochha
Aakash kuch batane ja hi raha tha ki usne dekha ki ek bheed ekattha ho gayi hai ek jagah par
Dono bhai behen wahan gaye
"Kya hua bhai sahab??"aakash ne poochha
"Dekho na ek saamp waha dikh gaya ,park me aise saampo ka paana achi baat nahi hai na ??
Kal hi society ke secretary ko bolkar iske baare me kuch kehna padega"aakash ke paas khada aadmi bola
"Jab tak hum unhen pareshan nahi karenge,ye aapko pareshan nahi karega"bol aakash ne zameen me jhukte hi jaise apne haath zameen par sparsh kiye,ek saamp waha se tezi se bhag gaya
"Are ye to wahi saamp hai"wahi aadmi bola
"Insano ne koun si jagah khali rakhi hai bhai sahab??insano ke liye jagah kam pad jaati hai ye to fir bhi bechare jeev hai"bol aakash ragini ko lekar aage badh gaya
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Jaise hi aakash aur ragini ghar aaye.ghar me sab chupchap mile
"Papa a gaye hai tour se"ragini ne dheere se bola
Aur dono bhai behen breakfast karne jaise hi baithe saamne amit malhotra paper par aankhen gadaye hue mile
"Ab tabiyat kaisi hai??"mr malhotra ne paper se aankhen bina hataye poocha
"Bas thik hoon"aakash bola
"Aaj tumhare birthday par hi loss karwa kar aaya hoon, Congratulations"mr malhotra ne paper table par rakhte hue kaha
"Isme bhaiyya ka kya dosh ki aapke shares ludak gaye??? malhotra industries ke shares se bhaiyya ka kya lena dena papa??"ragini boli
"Jab se usne janm liya tabse hi to lena dena shuru ho gaya tha"mr malhotra bole
"Malhotra shares kaise loss kar sakti hai,aadhe ghante pehle hi to 1.25 points upar aayi"aakash bola
"KYA??"mr malhotra aur ragini dono hairan hokar muh khol kar bole
Mr malhotra ne apna mobile nikala jhat se kuch fatafat dabaya aur....
"Y y ye to sach hai,lekin tumhe kaise....tum kab se...."mr malhotra ko apne share ke badhne par jitni hairani nahi ho rahi thi
Apne bete ko dekh usse zyada ho rahi thi
"Happy birthday beta"mrs malhota ne apne bete ke liye breakfast me hi duniya bhar ke pakwan se plate bhar diya
"Haan haan khilao is nalayak ko,hun ek tukka lag gaya to apne aap ko tees maar khan mat samajh lena"bol mr malhotra dining table se uthakar chale gaye
"Papa ki baaton ka bura na manna beta,unki zaban aisi hai,dil ke bohut ache hai"mrs malhotra boli
Aakash muskurate hue apne maa ke gale lag gaya
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GANDEN MONASTERY TIBBET
"Sensei sensei"ek boudh bhikshu daud kar aaya
Ek boodha boudh bhikshu pahadiyon ko dekh raha tha usi ke paas chillate hue aaya boudh bhikshu
"Wo ...wo...."boudh bhikshu bola
"Pata hai mujhe"vridh boudh bhikshu bola
"Lekin....lekin ye galat hai sensei"boudh bhikshu bola
"Aur jo tum logo ne 18 saal pehle kiya wo kahan tak sahi tha??abhi agar use uski priyasi nahi mili to poori duniya andhere me doob jayegi,koi suraj nahi uthega"vriddh bola
Aur aasman ki aur dekhne laga
"Bas tahal raha tha"aakash bola
"Darr nahi lag raha hai tujhe??pehle to andhere se darta tha"ragini boli
"Tujhe darr lagta hai ragini??"aakash ne poochha
"Haan andhere se to sabko dar lagta hai"ragini boli
"Aaj se tujhe kam se kam andhere se darne ki zaroorat nahi hai ragini"aakash ne muskurate hue bola
"Kyun ??tu bada gama pahalwan hai kya???"ragini ne kamar par haath rakhkar kaha
Ye sunkar aakash zor zor se hasne laga
"Gama pehelwan to nahi lekin andhere ka raj....mera matlab andhere se tujhe bacha sakta hoon"aakash bola
"Ok jaldi neeche a warna mummy daant lagayegi"ragini boli aur daudkar neeche chali gayi
Aakash bhi sone chala gaya
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Ragini jogging ke liye jab park gayi to hairan reh gayi
Aakash jogging kiye ja raha tha aur pasine se nahaya hua tha
"Tu??aur jogging??Sapna no nahi dekh rahi hoon??"ragini boli
"Kyun na karu??"aakash apna haath strech karte hue bola
"Are wo baat nahi tu to kabhi in sab me rehta hi nahi tha na"ragini
"There's always first time"aakash ne aankh marte hue fir duadne laga
Ragini bhi peeche peecha ho li
"Baap re kitna bhagta hai,waise jahan tu tha wahan bhi aise hi jogging karta tha kya??isse mujhe yaad aaya bhaiyya.tune abhi tak bataya nahi kahan tha tu itne din??"ragini ne poochha
Aakash kuch batane ja hi raha tha ki usne dekha ki ek bheed ekattha ho gayi hai ek jagah par
Dono bhai behen wahan gaye
"Kya hua bhai sahab??"aakash ne poochha
"Dekho na ek saamp waha dikh gaya ,park me aise saampo ka paana achi baat nahi hai na ??
Kal hi society ke secretary ko bolkar iske baare me kuch kehna padega"aakash ke paas khada aadmi bola
"Jab tak hum unhen pareshan nahi karenge,ye aapko pareshan nahi karega"bol aakash ne zameen me jhukte hi jaise apne haath zameen par sparsh kiye,ek saamp waha se tezi se bhag gaya
"Are ye to wahi saamp hai"wahi aadmi bola
"Insano ne koun si jagah khali rakhi hai bhai sahab??insano ke liye jagah kam pad jaati hai ye to fir bhi bechare jeev hai"bol aakash ragini ko lekar aage badh gaya
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Jaise hi aakash aur ragini ghar aaye.ghar me sab chupchap mile
"Papa a gaye hai tour se"ragini ne dheere se bola
Aur dono bhai behen breakfast karne jaise hi baithe saamne amit malhotra paper par aankhen gadaye hue mile
"Ab tabiyat kaisi hai??"mr malhotra ne paper se aankhen bina hataye poocha
"Bas thik hoon"aakash bola
"Aaj tumhare birthday par hi loss karwa kar aaya hoon, Congratulations"mr malhotra ne paper table par rakhte hue kaha
"Isme bhaiyya ka kya dosh ki aapke shares ludak gaye??? malhotra industries ke shares se bhaiyya ka kya lena dena papa??"ragini boli
"Jab se usne janm liya tabse hi to lena dena shuru ho gaya tha"mr malhotra bole
"Malhotra shares kaise loss kar sakti hai,aadhe ghante pehle hi to 1.25 points upar aayi"aakash bola
"KYA??"mr malhotra aur ragini dono hairan hokar muh khol kar bole
Mr malhotra ne apna mobile nikala jhat se kuch fatafat dabaya aur....
"Y y ye to sach hai,lekin tumhe kaise....tum kab se...."mr malhotra ko apne share ke badhne par jitni hairani nahi ho rahi thi
Apne bete ko dekh usse zyada ho rahi thi
"Happy birthday beta"mrs malhota ne apne bete ke liye breakfast me hi duniya bhar ke pakwan se plate bhar diya
"Haan haan khilao is nalayak ko,hun ek tukka lag gaya to apne aap ko tees maar khan mat samajh lena"bol mr malhotra dining table se uthakar chale gaye
"Papa ki baaton ka bura na manna beta,unki zaban aisi hai,dil ke bohut ache hai"mrs malhotra boli
Aakash muskurate hue apne maa ke gale lag gaya
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GANDEN MONASTERY TIBBET
"Sensei sensei"ek boudh bhikshu daud kar aaya
Ek boodha boudh bhikshu pahadiyon ko dekh raha tha usi ke paas chillate hue aaya boudh bhikshu
"Wo ...wo...."boudh bhikshu bola
"Pata hai mujhe"vridh boudh bhikshu bola
"Lekin....lekin ye galat hai sensei"boudh bhikshu bola
"Aur jo tum logo ne 18 saal pehle kiya wo kahan tak sahi tha??abhi agar use uski priyasi nahi mili to poori duniya andhere me doob jayegi,koi suraj nahi uthega"vriddh bola
Aur aasman ki aur dekhne laga
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Crocodile
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Waah sawraj bhai mast update totally different concept , akaash andhere ka raaja hai aur uski premik priyasi hai , 18 saal pehle kuch khtrnak hua ajnabee k saath , aur mere hisaab se akaash k chacha ko jis pandit ne usse gufa me maarne ko kaha voh andhere ka he koi piyada hoga
Dekhte hai kia hota hai aaghe
Aur yaar aaghe b issi speed se dete rehna updates
Crocodile
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Review ke liye thanks bro
Aakash abhi tak koi hai maine clear nahi kiya hai bro
Uska past mai dheere dheere laana chahta hoon
Aur uski priyasi bhi saamne aayegi
Story ke flow ke saath rahiye aur enjoy kijiye
Jaisa ki.maine kaha
Meri pehli fantasy story hai,koi galti agar ho rahi ho to maaf kar dijiye
Saath rahiye