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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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UPDATE-3

Lucifer guruji se milne ke baad vaha se chala gaya
Guruji ne usse sab kuch to bata hi diya tha ki kaha jana hai, kya karna hai bas ek chhij nahi bataye jo sabse jaruri thi ki kaise karna hai kyuki lucifer ko to bas ek hi tarika aata tha aur vo jadatar logo ko pasand nahi aata tha

Lucifer aaj pehli baar insaano ke bich me ja raha tha ya fir yu kahe ki usse aisa lag raha tha ki vo pehli baar ja raha hai
Sayad usse yaad hi na ho kuch ya fir koe aur vajah ho

Bahut lamba safar tay karke vo pahucha Mumbai me aur vaha se us jagah jaha usse rahna tha

Ye ek multi story building thi jiske ek floor par uske rahne ka intezaam Kiya gaya tha

Lucifer apne flat par pahucha aur apna samaan fek kar ek bottle khol li aur sidha bottle se neat hi peene laga

Puri bottle khali karne ke baad bed par gir gaya aur sochne laga

"Sala es ladki me aisa kya hai jo guruji ne mujhe yaha bejha?
Aur eske liye vo meri sachae tak batane ke liye raaji hogaye
Kuch to hai es ladki me
Vaise mujhe pehle hi puch lena chahiye tha guruji se ki pehle mere bare me batao aur fir ladki ke bare me sochunga lekin sayad guruji nahi hi batate esliye jaise mil raha hai vaise hi sahi"

Aise hi sochte sochte raat hogaye jo ki lucifer ki hi hoti hai esliye vo flat ke bahar aagya aur road par tahalne laga

Vo raste me aate jate insaano ko dekh raha tha aur unki harkato ko notice kar raha tha
Ye sab uske liye bilkul naya tha esliye hi usse jada interest aa raha tha

Kabhi kabhi vo man me sochne bhi lagta ki insaan kitne chutiye hote hai
Vaise vo galat bhi nahi tha

Vo idhar udhar dekhte hi chal raha tha aur samne dekha hi bhul gaya kyuki abhi vo kisi se takra gaya

Lucifer ko to kuch hua nahi usse to aisa laga jaise hawa ka jhoka aaya tha aur chala gaya lekin samne niche ek ladki giri hue thi

Lucifer ne usko dekha
Ek simple se saree pehan rakhi thi usne aur makeup ka koe namo nisaan nahi tha fir bhi khubsurati uske pure sareer se bah rahi thi

Lucifer aur uski najar mili lekin yaha humare demon ko pata hi nahi tha ki aise time par react kaise karte hai to vo bas aise hi khada raha

Vo ladki usse ghurte hue vaha se kuch badbadate hue chali gaye

Lucifer- ajeeb insaan hai yaha
Halke se touch se uchal padte hai
Kisi ko punch maar diya to jameen ke ander hi ghush jayenge

Yehi sochte sochte vo vaha aagya jaha ke liye apne ghar se chala tha

Samne ek bahut bada mahal jaisa ghar bana hua tha jo es raat ke waqt bhi jagmaga raha tha
Aur esse mahal me rahti thi vo ladki jisse Lucifer ko bachana tha

Vo to bas dekhne aaya tha ki kon hai vo ladki lekin bechare ko nirasa hi mili kyuki etni badi badi diwaro ke ander vo jhaak nahi sakta tha
Aur kod ke Jane ka abhi koe matlab nahi tha

Esliye vaha se vapas mud gaya apne ghar ki taraf chalne laga

Apne khayalo me khoya hua vo vapas apne flat pahuch gaya aur gate kholne laga to samne flat me vohi aurat thi jisse thodi der pehle lucifer ki takkar hue thi aur vo bhi usse hi dekh rahi thi

Lekin lucifer bina koe react Kiya ander chala gaya

Aur aise hi subah ho gaye
Lucifer ko college jana tha, padhne nahi re us ladki ko dekhne
Esliye kapde pahane aur nikal gaya college ke liye jo bahut pass tha uske flat se aur jake gate par khada ho gaya

Vaha bahut sare students ander bahar ho rahe the lekin jiska intezaar tha vo to aa hi nahi rahi thi

Tabhi fir vohi aurat dikhi raat wali daksh ko jo pink saree me kahar dhati hue ander ja rahi thi
Aur usse dekh ke sab students unhe good morning ma'am kahke wish kar rahe the

Ye ma'am thi jo essi college me padhati thi aur bahut simple aur sweet thi
Logo ko musibaat me dekhte hi madad ke liye pahuch jati thi chahe vo kar pati ya nahi lekin mojud humesha rahti thi
Enka naam tha madhuri ma'am

Unhone aaj fir lucifer ko vaha khada dekha aur pata nahi kya sochte hue uske pass chali gaye

Maam- kal tumne sorry nahi bola?
Lucifer edhar udhar dekhte hue
Kis baat ke liye?

Ma'am- takrane ke liye
Aur mujhe girane ke liye
Lucifer- lekin takraye to aap the mujhse
Maine to nahi kaha aapko sorry bolne ke liye?

Ma'am- giri to main thi na?
Lucifer- kyuki aap KAMJOR ho

Jaise hi lucifer ne kamjor bola madhuri ma'am bilkul shant ho gaye ek second ke liye fir

Ma'am- yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Student ho?
Lucifer- nahi

Ma'am- fir yaha kya Kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- kisi ko dekhne aaya tha

Ma'am- kisko?
Lucifer- ek ladki ko

Ma'am- kyu?
Lucifer- aap kon ho?
Aur ye sab kyu puch rahi ho?

Ma'am- main yaha padhati hu
Lucifer- guruji to aap
Aise bolo na

Ma'am thoda haste hue ha guruji hi hu lekin tum ma'am bula sakte ho
Lucifer kuch bolne wala hota hai ki tabhi ek bahut sundar kali car vaha aaye aur usme se car se bhi sunder ladki nikli
Vo ladki jitni photo me sunder lag rahi thi usse kahi jada sunder hakikat me thi
Daksh to ma'am ko bhul ke bas usse hi dekhta rah gaya aur yehi haal baki students ka bhi tha lekin vo ladki bina kisi ko dekhe attitude me college ke ander ghus gaye
Vo etni sunder thi ki uske sath ek aur ladki thi jiski taraf kisi ne dhayan tak nahi diya esliye nahi ki vo sunder nahi thi balki esliye ki dusri wali usse kahi jada sunder thi

Ma'am- kaha kho gaye?
Lucifer- oh sorry
Kahi nahi

Ma'am- chalo sorry to bola
Jada edhar udhar mat dekhna dunia bahut jalim hai
Aur ye bol Kar Ma'am bhi vaha se chali gaye
Ab unko kon bataye ki jisse vo bol rahi hai usse bada jalim to sayad koe aur hai hi nahi insaano me

Lucifer thodi der aur vaha khada raha fir vaha se chala gaya

Us bechare ko idea bhi nahi tha ki aage aage uske sath kya kya hone wala hai

Abhi kuch hi door gaya tha ki usne socha ki agar vo yaha se chala gaya aur us ladki ko kuch ho Gaya to?

Yehi soch ke vapas jake college ke Park me bath gaya aur wait karne laga

Morning se evening ho gaye aur college khatam hone ka bhi waqt aagya tha

Students bahar nikal rahe the aur unke sath sath vo dono ladkiya bhi bina kisi ko koe bhav dete hue vaha se chali gaye

Thodi der baad madhuri ma'am bhi nikli unhone lucifer ko vahi khade dekha lekin es baar vo kuch nahi boli aur vo khud bhi vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer bhi us ladki ke piche piche uske ghar tak pahuch gaya aur vahi jagah dekh ke bath gaya

Usse ye sab bahut boring lag raha tha lekin vo kuch kar bhi nahi sakta tha

Fir raat hue aur vaha se apne ghar ki taraf chalne laga

Raste me soch raha tha ki ki agar usse es ladki aur eske khadhan ki hifazaat karne hai to uske liye sabse jaruri hai esse pahchaan banana ya fir dosti karna aur jaise es ladki ko attitude hai ye kaam bahut muskil hone wala tha

Agar aisa nahi hua to vo Kab tak chhup kar unka picha karega kabhi na kabhi to kisi na kisi ki najar us par padegi hi

Ye sab sochta sochta to vo apni society me aagya aur so gaya....


 
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ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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UPDATE-3

Lucifer guruji se milne ke baad vaha se chala gaya
Guruji ne usse sab kuch to bata hi diya tha ki kaha jana hai, kya karna hai bas ek chhij nahi bataye jo sabse jaruri thi ki kaise karna hai kyuki lucifer ko to bas ek hi tarika aata tha aur vo jadatar logo ko pasand nahi aata tha

Lucifer aaj pehli baar insaano ke bich me ja raha tha ya fir yu kahe ki usse aisa lag raha tha ki vo pehli baar ja raha hai
Sayad usse yaad hi na ho kuch ya fir koe aur vajah ho

Bahut lamba safar tay karke vo pahucha Mumbai me aur vaha se us jagah jaha usse rahna tha

Ye ek multi story building thi jiske ek floor par uske rahne ka intezaam Kiya gaya tha

Lucifer apne flat par pahucha aur apna samaan fek kar ek bottle khol li aur sidha bottle se neat hi peene laga

Puri bottle khali karne ke baad bed par gir gaya aur sochne laga

"Sala es ladki me aisa kya hai jo guruji ne mujhe yaha bejha?
Aur eske liye vo meri sachae tak batane ke liye raaji hogaye
Kuch to hai es ladki me
Vaise mujhe pehle hi puch lena chahiye tha guruji se ki pehle mere bare me batao aur fir ladki ke bare me sochunga lekin sayad guruji nahi hi batate esliye jaise mil raha hai vaise hi sahi"

Aise hi sochte sochte raat hogaye jo ki lucifer ki hi hoti hai esliye vo flat ke bahar aagya aur road par tahalne laga

Vo raste me aate jate insaano ko dekh raha tha aur unki harkato ko notice kar raha tha
Ye sab uske liye bilkul naya tha esliye hi usse jada interest aa raha tha

Kabhi kabhi vo man me sochne bhi lagta ki insaan kitne chutiye hote hai
Vaise vo galat bhi nahi tha

Vo idhar udhar dekhte hi chal raha tha aur samne dekha hi bhul gaya kyuki abhi vo kisi se takra gaya

Lucifer ko to kuch hua nahi usse to aisa laga jaise hawa ka jhoka aaya tha aur chala gaya lekin samne niche ek ladki giri hue thi

Lucifer ne usko dekha
Ek simple se saree pehan rakhi thi usne aur makeup ka koe namo nisaan nahi tha fir bhi khubsurati uske pure sareer se bah rahi thi

Lucifer aur uski najar mili lekin yaha humare demon ko pata hi nahi tha ki aise time par react kaise karte hai to vo bas aise hi khada raha

Vo ladki usse ghurte hue vaha se kuch badbadate hue chali gaye

Lucifer- ajeeb insaan hai yaha
Halke se touch se uchal padte hai
Kisi ko punch maar diya to jameen ke ander hi ghush jayenge

Yehi sochte sochte vo vaha aagya jaha ke liye apne ghar se chala tha

Samne ek bahut bada mahal jaisa ghar bana hua tha jo es raat ke waqt bhi jagmaga raha tha
Aur esse mahal me rahti thi vo ladki jisse Lucifer ko bachana tha

Vo to bas dekhne aaya tha ki kon hai vo ladki lekin bechare ko nirasa hi mili kyuki etni badi badi diwaro ke ander vo jhaak nahi sakta tha
Aur kod ke Jane ka abhi koe matlab nahi tha

Esliye vaha se vapas mud gaya apne ghar ki taraf chalne laga

Apne khayalo me khoya hua vo vapas apne flat pahuch gaya aur gate kholne laga to samne flat me vohi aurat thi jisse thodi der pehle lucifer ki takkar hue thi aur vo bhi usse hi dekh rahi thi

Lekin lucifer bina koe react Kiya ander chala gaya

Aur aise hi subah ho gaye
Lucifer ko college jana tha, padhne nahi re us ladki ko dekhne
Esliye kapde pahane aur nikal gaya college ke liye jo bahut pass tha uske flat se aur jake gate par khada ho gaya

Vaha bahut sare students ander bahar ho rahe the lekin jiska intezaar tha vo to aa hi nahi rahi thi

Tabhi fir vohi aurat dikhi raat wali daksh ko jo pink saree me kahar dhati hue ander ja rahi thi
Aur usse dekh ke sab students unhe good morning ma'am kahke wish kar rahe the

Ye ma'am thi jo essi college me padhati thi aur bahut simple aur sweet thi
Logo ko musibaat me dekhte hi madad ke liye pahuch jati thi chahe vo kar pati ya nahi lekin mojud humesha rahti thi
Enka naam tha madhuri ma'am

Unhone aaj fir lucifer ko vaha khada dekha aur pata nahi kya sochte hue uske pass chali gaye

Maam- kal tumne sorry nahi bola?
Lucifer edhar udhar dekhte hue
Kis baat ke liye?

Ma'am- takrane ke liye
Aur mujhe girane ke liye
Lucifer- lekin takraye to aap the mujhse
Maine to nahi kaha aapko sorry bolne ke liye?

Ma'am- giri to main thi na?
Lucifer- kyuki aap KAMJOR ho

Jaise hi lucifer ne kamjor bola madhuri ma'am bilkul shant ho gaye ek second ke liye fir

Ma'am- yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Student ho?
Lucifer- nahi

Ma'am- fir yaha kya Kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- kisi ko dekhne aaya tha

Ma'am- kisko?
Lucifer- ek ladki ko

Ma'am- kyu?
Lucifer- aap kon ho?
Aur ye sab kyu puch rahi ho?

Ma'am- main yaha padhati hu
Lucifer- guruji to aap
Aise bolo na

Ma'am thoda haste hue ha guruji hi hu lekin tum ma'am bula sakte ho
Lucifer kuch bolne wala hota hai ki tabhi ek bahut sundar kali car vaha aaye aur usme se car se bhi sunder ladki nikli
Vo ladki jitni photo me sunder lag rahi thi usse kahi jada sunder hakikat me thi
Daksh to ma'am ko bhul ke bas usse hi dekhta rah gaya aur yehi haal baki students ka bhi tha lekin vo ladki bina kisi ko dekhe attitude me college ke ander ghus gaye
Vo etni sunder thi ki uske sath ek aur ladki thi jiski taraf kisi ne dhayan tak nahi diya esliye nahi ki vo sunder nahi thi balki esliye ki dusri wali usse kahi jada sunder thi

Ma'am- kaha kho gaye?
Lucifer- oh sorry
Kahi nahi

Ma'am- chalo sorry to bola
Jada edhar udhar mat dekhna dunia bahut jalim hai
Aur ye bol Kar Ma'am bhi vaha se chali gaye
Ab unko kon bataye ki jisse vo bol rahi hai usse bada jalim to sayad koe aur hai hi nahi insaano me

Lucifer thodi der aur vaha khada raha fir vaha se chala gaya

Us bechare ko idea bhi nahi tha ki aage aage uske sath kya kya hone wala hai

Abhi kuch hi door gaya tha ki usne socha ki agar vo yaha se chala gaya aur us ladki ko kuch ho Gaya to?

Yehi soch ke vapas jake college ke Park me bath gaya aur wait karne laga

Morning se evening ho gaye aur college khatam hone ka bhi waqt aagya tha

Students bahar nikal rahe the aur unke sath sath vo dono ladkiya bhi bina kisi ko koe bhav dete hue vaha se chali gaye

Thodi der baad madhuri ma'am bhi nikli unhone lucifer ko vahi khade dekha lekin es baar vo kuch nahi boli aur vo khud bhi vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer bhi us ladki ke piche piche uske ghar tak pahuch gaya aur vahi jagah dekh ke bath gaya

Usse ye sab bahut boring lag raha tha lekin vo kuch kar bhi nahi sakta tha

Fir raat hue aur vaha se apne ghar ki taraf chalne laga

Raste me soch raha tha ki ki agar usse es ladki aur eske khadhan ki hifazaat karne hai to uske liye sabse jaruri hai esse pahchaan banana ya fir dosti karna aur jaise es ladki ko attitude hai ye kaam bahut muskil hone wala tha

Agar aisa nahi hua to vo Kab tak chhup kar unka picha karega kabhi na kabhi to kisi na kisi ki najar us par padegi hi

Ye sab sochta sochta to vo apni society me aagya aur so gaya....
Awesome update..bhai..,
 

Sauravb

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UPDATE-3

Lucifer guruji se milne ke baad vaha se chala gaya
Guruji ne usse sab kuch to bata hi diya tha ki kaha jana hai, kya karna hai bas ek chhij nahi bataye jo sabse jaruri thi ki kaise karna hai kyuki lucifer ko to bas ek hi tarika aata tha aur vo jadatar logo ko pasand nahi aata tha

Lucifer aaj pehli baar insaano ke bich me ja raha tha ya fir yu kahe ki usse aisa lag raha tha ki vo pehli baar ja raha hai
Sayad usse yaad hi na ho kuch ya fir koe aur vajah ho

Bahut lamba safar tay karke vo pahucha Mumbai me aur vaha se us jagah jaha usse rahna tha

Ye ek multi story building thi jiske ek floor par uske rahne ka intezaam Kiya gaya tha

Lucifer apne flat par pahucha aur apna samaan fek kar ek bottle khol li aur sidha bottle se neat hi peene laga

Puri bottle khali karne ke baad bed par gir gaya aur sochne laga

"Sala es ladki me aisa kya hai jo guruji ne mujhe yaha bejha?
Aur eske liye vo meri sachae tak batane ke liye raaji hogaye
Kuch to hai es ladki me
Vaise mujhe pehle hi puch lena chahiye tha guruji se ki pehle mere bare me batao aur fir ladki ke bare me sochunga lekin sayad guruji nahi hi batate esliye jaise mil raha hai vaise hi sahi"

Aise hi sochte sochte raat hogaye jo ki lucifer ki hi hoti hai esliye vo flat ke bahar aagya aur road par tahalne laga

Vo raste me aate jate insaano ko dekh raha tha aur unki harkato ko notice kar raha tha
Ye sab uske liye bilkul naya tha esliye hi usse jada interest aa raha tha

Kabhi kabhi vo man me sochne bhi lagta ki insaan kitne chutiye hote hai
Vaise vo galat bhi nahi tha

Vo idhar udhar dekhte hi chal raha tha aur samne dekha hi bhul gaya kyuki abhi vo kisi se takra gaya

Lucifer ko to kuch hua nahi usse to aisa laga jaise hawa ka jhoka aaya tha aur chala gaya lekin samne niche ek ladki giri hue thi

Lucifer ne usko dekha
Ek simple se saree pehan rakhi thi usne aur makeup ka koe namo nisaan nahi tha fir bhi khubsurati uske pure sareer se bah rahi thi

Lucifer aur uski najar mili lekin yaha humare demon ko pata hi nahi tha ki aise time par react kaise karte hai to vo bas aise hi khada raha

Vo ladki usse ghurte hue vaha se kuch badbadate hue chali gaye

Lucifer- ajeeb insaan hai yaha
Halke se touch se uchal padte hai
Kisi ko punch maar diya to jameen ke ander hi ghush jayenge

Yehi sochte sochte vo vaha aagya jaha ke liye apne ghar se chala tha

Samne ek bahut bada mahal jaisa ghar bana hua tha jo es raat ke waqt bhi jagmaga raha tha
Aur esse mahal me rahti thi vo ladki jisse Lucifer ko bachana tha

Vo to bas dekhne aaya tha ki kon hai vo ladki lekin bechare ko nirasa hi mili kyuki etni badi badi diwaro ke ander vo jhaak nahi sakta tha
Aur kod ke Jane ka abhi koe matlab nahi tha

Esliye vaha se vapas mud gaya apne ghar ki taraf chalne laga

Apne khayalo me khoya hua vo vapas apne flat pahuch gaya aur gate kholne laga to samne flat me vohi aurat thi jisse thodi der pehle lucifer ki takkar hue thi aur vo bhi usse hi dekh rahi thi

Lekin lucifer bina koe react Kiya ander chala gaya

Aur aise hi subah ho gaye
Lucifer ko college jana tha, padhne nahi re us ladki ko dekhne
Esliye kapde pahane aur nikal gaya college ke liye jo bahut pass tha uske flat se aur jake gate par khada ho gaya

Vaha bahut sare students ander bahar ho rahe the lekin jiska intezaar tha vo to aa hi nahi rahi thi

Tabhi fir vohi aurat dikhi raat wali daksh ko jo pink saree me kahar dhati hue ander ja rahi thi
Aur usse dekh ke sab students unhe good morning ma'am kahke wish kar rahe the

Ye ma'am thi jo essi college me padhati thi aur bahut simple aur sweet thi
Logo ko musibaat me dekhte hi madad ke liye pahuch jati thi chahe vo kar pati ya nahi lekin mojud humesha rahti thi
Enka naam tha madhuri ma'am

Unhone aaj fir lucifer ko vaha khada dekha aur pata nahi kya sochte hue uske pass chali gaye

Maam- kal tumne sorry nahi bola?
Lucifer edhar udhar dekhte hue
Kis baat ke liye?

Ma'am- takrane ke liye
Aur mujhe girane ke liye
Lucifer- lekin takraye to aap the mujhse
Maine to nahi kaha aapko sorry bolne ke liye?

Ma'am- giri to main thi na?
Lucifer- kyuki aap KAMJOR ho

Jaise hi lucifer ne kamjor bola madhuri ma'am bilkul shant ho gaye ek second ke liye fir

Ma'am- yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Student ho?
Lucifer- nahi

Ma'am- fir yaha kya Kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- kisi ko dekhne aaya tha

Ma'am- kisko?
Lucifer- ek ladki ko

Ma'am- kyu?
Lucifer- aap kon ho?
Aur ye sab kyu puch rahi ho?

Ma'am- main yaha padhati hu
Lucifer- guruji to aap
Aise bolo na

Ma'am thoda haste hue ha guruji hi hu lekin tum ma'am bula sakte ho
Lucifer kuch bolne wala hota hai ki tabhi ek bahut sundar kali car vaha aaye aur usme se car se bhi sunder ladki nikli
Vo ladki jitni photo me sunder lag rahi thi usse kahi jada sunder hakikat me thi
Daksh to ma'am ko bhul ke bas usse hi dekhta rah gaya aur yehi haal baki students ka bhi tha lekin vo ladki bina kisi ko dekhe attitude me college ke ander ghus gaye
Vo etni sunder thi ki uske sath ek aur ladki thi jiski taraf kisi ne dhayan tak nahi diya esliye nahi ki vo sunder nahi thi balki esliye ki dusri wali usse kahi jada sunder thi

Ma'am- kaha kho gaye?
Lucifer- oh sorry
Kahi nahi

Ma'am- chalo sorry to bola
Jada edhar udhar mat dekhna dunia bahut jalim hai
Aur ye bol Kar Ma'am bhi vaha se chali gaye
Ab unko kon bataye ki jisse vo bol rahi hai usse bada jalim to sayad koe aur hai hi nahi insaano me

Lucifer thodi der aur vaha khada raha fir vaha se chala gaya

Us bechare ko idea bhi nahi tha ki aage aage uske sath kya kya hone wala hai

Abhi kuch hi door gaya tha ki usne socha ki agar vo yaha se chala gaya aur us ladki ko kuch ho Gaya to?

Yehi soch ke vapas jake college ke Park me bath gaya aur wait karne laga

Morning se evening ho gaye aur college khatam hone ka bhi waqt aagya tha

Students bahar nikal rahe the aur unke sath sath vo dono ladkiya bhi bina kisi ko koe bhav dete hue vaha se chali gaye

Thodi der baad madhuri ma'am bhi nikli unhone lucifer ko vahi khade dekha lekin es baar vo kuch nahi boli aur vo khud bhi vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer bhi us ladki ke piche piche uske ghar tak pahuch gaya aur vahi jagah dekh ke bath gaya

Usse ye sab bahut boring lag raha tha lekin vo kuch kar bhi nahi sakta tha

Fir raat hue aur vaha se apne ghar ki taraf chalne laga

Raste me soch raha tha ki ki agar usse es ladki aur eske khadhan ki hifazaat karne hai to uske liye sabse jaruri hai esse pahchaan banana ya fir dosti karna aur jaise es ladki ko attitude hai ye kaam bahut muskil hone wala tha

Agar aisa nahi hua to vo Kab tak chhup kar unka picha karega kabhi na kabhi to kisi na kisi ki najar us par padegi hi

Ye sab sochta sochta to vo apni society me aagya aur so gaya....
Fantastic one... Lucifer kya apni manzil me sahi jaa raha he . Waiting for future updates
 

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UPDATE-3

Lucifer guruji se milne ke baad vaha se chala gaya
Guruji ne usse sab kuch to bata hi diya tha ki kaha jana hai, kya karna hai bas ek chhij nahi bataye jo sabse jaruri thi ki kaise karna hai kyuki lucifer ko to bas ek hi tarika aata tha aur vo jadatar logo ko pasand nahi aata tha

Lucifer aaj pehli baar insaano ke bich me ja raha tha ya fir yu kahe ki usse aisa lag raha tha ki vo pehli baar ja raha hai
Sayad usse yaad hi na ho kuch ya fir koe aur vajah ho

Bahut lamba safar tay karke vo pahucha Mumbai me aur vaha se us jagah jaha usse rahna tha

Ye ek multi story building thi jiske ek floor par uske rahne ka intezaam Kiya gaya tha

Lucifer apne flat par pahucha aur apna samaan fek kar ek bottle khol li aur sidha bottle se neat hi peene laga

Puri bottle khali karne ke baad bed par gir gaya aur sochne laga

"Sala es ladki me aisa kya hai jo guruji ne mujhe yaha bejha?
Aur eske liye vo meri sachae tak batane ke liye raaji hogaye
Kuch to hai es ladki me
Vaise mujhe pehle hi puch lena chahiye tha guruji se ki pehle mere bare me batao aur fir ladki ke bare me sochunga lekin sayad guruji nahi hi batate esliye jaise mil raha hai vaise hi sahi"

Aise hi sochte sochte raat hogaye jo ki lucifer ki hi hoti hai esliye vo flat ke bahar aagya aur road par tahalne laga

Vo raste me aate jate insaano ko dekh raha tha aur unki harkato ko notice kar raha tha
Ye sab uske liye bilkul naya tha esliye hi usse jada interest aa raha tha

Kabhi kabhi vo man me sochne bhi lagta ki insaan kitne chutiye hote hai
Vaise vo galat bhi nahi tha

Vo idhar udhar dekhte hi chal raha tha aur samne dekha hi bhul gaya kyuki abhi vo kisi se takra gaya

Lucifer ko to kuch hua nahi usse to aisa laga jaise hawa ka jhoka aaya tha aur chala gaya lekin samne niche ek ladki giri hue thi

Lucifer ne usko dekha
Ek simple se saree pehan rakhi thi usne aur makeup ka koe namo nisaan nahi tha fir bhi khubsurati uske pure sareer se bah rahi thi

Lucifer aur uski najar mili lekin yaha humare demon ko pata hi nahi tha ki aise time par react kaise karte hai to vo bas aise hi khada raha

Vo ladki usse ghurte hue vaha se kuch badbadate hue chali gaye

Lucifer- ajeeb insaan hai yaha
Halke se touch se uchal padte hai
Kisi ko punch maar diya to jameen ke ander hi ghush jayenge

Yehi sochte sochte vo vaha aagya jaha ke liye apne ghar se chala tha

Samne ek bahut bada mahal jaisa ghar bana hua tha jo es raat ke waqt bhi jagmaga raha tha
Aur esse mahal me rahti thi vo ladki jisse Lucifer ko bachana tha

Vo to bas dekhne aaya tha ki kon hai vo ladki lekin bechare ko nirasa hi mili kyuki etni badi badi diwaro ke ander vo jhaak nahi sakta tha
Aur kod ke Jane ka abhi koe matlab nahi tha

Esliye vaha se vapas mud gaya apne ghar ki taraf chalne laga

Apne khayalo me khoya hua vo vapas apne flat pahuch gaya aur gate kholne laga to samne flat me vohi aurat thi jisse thodi der pehle lucifer ki takkar hue thi aur vo bhi usse hi dekh rahi thi

Lekin lucifer bina koe react Kiya ander chala gaya

Aur aise hi subah ho gaye
Lucifer ko college jana tha, padhne nahi re us ladki ko dekhne
Esliye kapde pahane aur nikal gaya college ke liye jo bahut pass tha uske flat se aur jake gate par khada ho gaya

Vaha bahut sare students ander bahar ho rahe the lekin jiska intezaar tha vo to aa hi nahi rahi thi

Tabhi fir vohi aurat dikhi raat wali daksh ko jo pink saree me kahar dhati hue ander ja rahi thi
Aur usse dekh ke sab students unhe good morning ma'am kahke wish kar rahe the

Ye ma'am thi jo essi college me padhati thi aur bahut simple aur sweet thi
Logo ko musibaat me dekhte hi madad ke liye pahuch jati thi chahe vo kar pati ya nahi lekin mojud humesha rahti thi
Enka naam tha madhuri ma'am

Unhone aaj fir lucifer ko vaha khada dekha aur pata nahi kya sochte hue uske pass chali gaye

Maam- kal tumne sorry nahi bola?
Lucifer edhar udhar dekhte hue
Kis baat ke liye?

Ma'am- takrane ke liye
Aur mujhe girane ke liye
Lucifer- lekin takraye to aap the mujhse
Maine to nahi kaha aapko sorry bolne ke liye?

Ma'am- giri to main thi na?
Lucifer- kyuki aap KAMJOR ho

Jaise hi lucifer ne kamjor bola madhuri ma'am bilkul shant ho gaye ek second ke liye fir

Ma'am- yaha kya kar rahe ho?
Student ho?
Lucifer- nahi

Ma'am- fir yaha kya Kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- kisi ko dekhne aaya tha

Ma'am- kisko?
Lucifer- ek ladki ko

Ma'am- kyu?
Lucifer- aap kon ho?
Aur ye sab kyu puch rahi ho?

Ma'am- main yaha padhati hu
Lucifer- guruji to aap
Aise bolo na

Ma'am thoda haste hue ha guruji hi hu lekin tum ma'am bula sakte ho
Lucifer kuch bolne wala hota hai ki tabhi ek bahut sundar kali car vaha aaye aur usme se car se bhi sunder ladki nikli
Vo ladki jitni photo me sunder lag rahi thi usse kahi jada sunder hakikat me thi
Daksh to ma'am ko bhul ke bas usse hi dekhta rah gaya aur yehi haal baki students ka bhi tha lekin vo ladki bina kisi ko dekhe attitude me college ke ander ghus gaye
Vo etni sunder thi ki uske sath ek aur ladki thi jiski taraf kisi ne dhayan tak nahi diya esliye nahi ki vo sunder nahi thi balki esliye ki dusri wali usse kahi jada sunder thi

Ma'am- kaha kho gaye?
Lucifer- oh sorry
Kahi nahi

Ma'am- chalo sorry to bola
Jada edhar udhar mat dekhna dunia bahut jalim hai
Aur ye bol Kar Ma'am bhi vaha se chali gaye
Ab unko kon bataye ki jisse vo bol rahi hai usse bada jalim to sayad koe aur hai hi nahi insaano me

Lucifer thodi der aur vaha khada raha fir vaha se chala gaya

Us bechare ko idea bhi nahi tha ki aage aage uske sath kya kya hone wala hai

Abhi kuch hi door gaya tha ki usne socha ki agar vo yaha se chala gaya aur us ladki ko kuch ho Gaya to?

Yehi soch ke vapas jake college ke Park me bath gaya aur wait karne laga

Morning se evening ho gaye aur college khatam hone ka bhi waqt aagya tha

Students bahar nikal rahe the aur unke sath sath vo dono ladkiya bhi bina kisi ko koe bhav dete hue vaha se chali gaye

Thodi der baad madhuri ma'am bhi nikli unhone lucifer ko vahi khade dekha lekin es baar vo kuch nahi boli aur vo khud bhi vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer bhi us ladki ke piche piche uske ghar tak pahuch gaya aur vahi jagah dekh ke bath gaya

Usse ye sab bahut boring lag raha tha lekin vo kuch kar bhi nahi sakta tha

Fir raat hue aur vaha se apne ghar ki taraf chalne laga

Raste me soch raha tha ki ki agar usse es ladki aur eske khadhan ki hifazaat karne hai to uske liye sabse jaruri hai esse pahchaan banana ya fir dosti karna aur jaise es ladki ko attitude hai ye kaam bahut muskil hone wala tha

Agar aisa nahi hua to vo Kab tak chhup kar unka picha karega kabhi na kabhi to kisi na kisi ki najar us par padegi hi

Ye sab sochta sochta to vo apni society me aagya aur so gaya....
Nice and awesome update....
 
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