Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[nain11ster]

Update:-76 ​

"Doc chinta nahi... Aadhi raat ke baad main, Jivisha, Nandu aur Shwetna sab uss Surpmarich ke mahal jayenge… wahan ke tilishm ko aaj raat tod'kar, wahan dekhna hai ki aisi kaun si siddhi hai jiske bute par Zoren ko wo baar-baar apne control me le leta hai"…


Nischal ki baat sunkar Ansh ke meethe arman par jaise kainchi chal gayi ho, wo mayus ho'kar wahan se uth gaya... Tabhi 4-5 dragon babies jakar Ansh ke kandhe par baith gaya... "Doc, humale taath theloge"..


Ansh apne hath dayen-bayen le ja'kar kandhe par baithe dragon babies ko sahlaya, itne me aur kayi sare uske ore udte huye pahunch gaye...


Jivisha, wapas se Nischal ke kandhe par pana sar rakhti.…. "Tumhare sath hona kitna sukoon deta hai na... Kash meri life kuchh saal pahle jaisi hoti aur tum bhi mere wahi Nischal hote station par wale... Bilkul bhole aur masoom... Waqt ne wo sari sharaten aur pagalpan kahin dur kar diya...


Nischal:- Hat badmash, haan ab tum jimmedar ho gayi ho lekin sharten aur pagalpan.. wo tumhari kabhi band nahi hone wali...


Jivisha:- Ab to waqt hi nahi milta love... Shararat karun ya chal rahe mahol par baat.. fir gambhirta apne aap aa jati hai..


Nandni wahan pahunch'kar Nilbhut samuday ke 3 som-rash pyale un dono ke hath me deti... "Chal bich se jagah khali kar... Wo meri jagah hai...


Nischal aur Jivisha dono pichhe mud'kar Nandni ko dekh'kar muskuraye aur bich se jagah chhodte… "Aaja darling baith"…


Nandni, dono ke bich baith'ti... "O melle pyale bhanje... Tum sab idhar kya kar rahe... Chalo jao khana khao aur khelo kudo"..


Nischal:- Sale dagabaj, ye sabhi dragon babies tum dono ki baat sunte hain, lekin meri sunte hi nahi... Dekho Nandu ne bola aur jaise wo 1 kilometer dur wala bhi sun liya ho...


Jivisha aur Nandni dono hansne lagi. Jivisha... "Ab tum mere bacchon se meri hi sikayten karoge to tum par khis to badhegi hi"…


Nischal:- Ohhh hooo hoo... Bacche jab se aaye tab se to mera samay bhi usse de dee.. khis kyun na badhegi...


Jivisha:- Dhatt !!! Kaisi baat kar rahe.. wo bacche hain aur abhi apni maa se dur hai... Aur maine kab waqt nahi dee ye batao... Uss raat sej ke sath-sath armaan bhi saje the, lekin janab anuvansik gun me badlav aur andon ke chhilke par experiment kar rahe the... Tab to main kuchh nahi bolne gayi thi…


Nandni:- Kya ye sach hai...


Nischal aur Jivisha.… "Kya???"


Nandni:- Wahi???


Dono:- Kya???


Nandni:- Wahi jo sab kah rahe hain...


Dono:- Sab kya kah rahe hain???


Nandni:- Areee wahi…


Nischal, Nandni ke baal pakad'kar khinchte huye uska poora sar hi ret me ghusa diya.... Jab Nischal usse chhoda to bechari ke poora muh ret laga hua tha aur baal poore bikhar gaye... Jise dekh'kar Jivisha jor-jor se hasne lagi....


Usse aise hanste dekh, Nandni poora gussa hoti... "Bacchon... Apne iss baap ke sar ke baal jalaooo abhi"..


Nischal:- Ae pagal, bacchon ko supadi de rahi hai kya???


Jivisha:- Love..


Nischal:- Kya??


Jivisha:- Baby bhago.. warna takla hona pakka hai..


Nischal:- Kyun, iske kahne par wo gaye huye dragon babies sun lenge kya...


Jivisha:- Upar aasman me dekhte to aisa nahi kahte.… Ab bhago warna sar ke baal gaye...


Nischal wahan se uth'kar sarpat daud lagate... "Sale kamino, Nandu to chillayi bhi nahi... Kano me blutooth laga'kar ghumte ho kya"…


Nischal ki baat sun'kar Nandni aur Jivisha hi-fi karti jor-jor se hasne lagi… "Bhaga di na bechare ko... Abhi to baithi thi baat karne"…


Nandni uske dono gaal khinchti... "Soooo sorryyy.. Achha ye bata tu Aizem kyon nahi gayi... Aur wo gadha Aizem kyon nahi jana chahta"…


Jivisha:- Nahhh !!! Wo baat par baten baad me karenge... Pahle hum dono ko kis baat par pareshan kar rahi thi... 'ye suna, wo suna' puchh'kar firki le rahi thi...


Nandni:- Oh haan achha yaad dikayi. Apna sina dikha… kya wakai wo panje ka nishan hai sine par hai...


Jivisha apna sar teji se hilati hui haan kahne lage… kya chehre ki muskaan thi... Nandni uska khila chehra dekh'kar hansti hui.m. "Aree duffer kya apne gardan me spring lagaayi hai… khol'kar nishan dikha na"…


Jivisha, Nandni ko ghurti... "Pagal kahin ki... To kya abhi Nischal baitha hota, to uske samne bhi yahi kahne wali thi"…


Iss baar Nandni haan me sar hilaya... Thik Jivisha ki tarah usske chehre par bhi khili si hansi thi.…


"Kamini besharm... Chal ab tu bhag".. Jivisha aankh dikhati hui kahne lagi...


Nandni:- Kyun... Tu bhi dragon babies ko supadi dene wali hai kya???


Jivisha:- De chuki...


Nandni bhi uth'kar bhagti hui... "Sale kamine, main itna dular pyar dee lekin hoga apni maa ka hi... Aana kal se tum log"…


Aadhi Raat ka waqt hoga... Shwetna sabhi logon ke sath Surpmarich ke gupt mahal ki jaanch karne nikli. Yah mahal kafi sudoor me banaya gaya tha jiske kayi hazar kilometer tak koi aabadi nahi basti thi. Chhota sa mahal tha, jiski boundry wall bilkul mahal se hi laga hua tha. Yah ilaaka kafi lambe samay tak partidbadhit raha tha isliye iss mahal ke bare me kisi ko jaankari nahi thi...


Surpmarich jab lauta aur usne jaise hi dimagi jaal bunkar Zoren ko apne kabje me liye. Iss baar Shwetna bhumigat hone ke sath hi apne logon ko bhumigat hokar jasoosi karne bhej dee thi….


Shwetna ke logon dwara chhan-bin ke dauran iss jagah ko sandehspad ghoshit kar diya gaya tha… 30 meter ka chhote mahal jiske 200 meter ke dayre me kuchh to aisa tha, jiske pass jane par hi kayi Nilbhut Jasoos atmhatya kar chuke the… Uske baad se hi Shwetna ne iss jagah ko pratibandhit kar diya...


Pancho mahal se takriban aadhe kilometer pahle utar'kar phail gaye aur aas-pass ke jagah ka jayja lete huye mahal ke ore badh rahe the... Nischal baar-baar Nandni ko pichhe se sar par marte huye, shaam ki ghatna ke liye usse tok raha tha...


Baar-baar sar par tafli khane ke vajah se Nandni poore aawes me aa gayi aur bijli ka itna tej jhatka de di ki Nischal sidha ja'kar 100 fit dur gira.. Nischal jhatka kha'kar jamin par bichh gaya aur Nandni teji se uske upar ja'kar, uske baal ko apne mutthi me dabochti... "Kamine mujhe bhi to instant karma mila na... Tujh par dragon babies chhodi to dekh ye mere baal... Kitni mehnat se badhayi thi... Aag ka spray maar diya isme"…


Nischa:- Jungli chhod mujhe... Aisa kiya hi kyon... Thik hua tere sath... Afsos hai niche ka sirf kuchh inch baal gaye... Tu takli ho jati tab maza aata...


Nandni, Nischal ke upar se hat'kar rone lagi… Nischal harbari me uth'kar Nandni ke sar ko apne sine se lagaate... "Pagal mazak kar raha tha... Dil chhota kyon karti hai"…


Nandni:- Chhod mujhe… tujhe kya pata kitni mehnat lagti hai baal bada karne me... Mujhe apne baal ke liye rona aa raha hai... Upar se ek hi baat ke liye tu sham se chidha raha hai... Ho gayi galti, ab kya main tere paun pakad lun...


Nischal:- Shant ho ja re... Dil chhota na kari... Mere pass kuch jadi buti hai.. Baal jaldi bade ho jayenge...


Nandni:- Rahne se mujhe apne balon par koi experiment nahi karna... Ruk Nischal...


Sab alag-alag disha se aage badh rahe the… chuki ye dono jhagra karte-karte aage nikal aaye aur sath ho gaye the... Nischal, Nandni ke sar ko sine se lagate apne kadam badha'kar, idhar-udhar dekhte huye chalta ja raha tha... Tabhi Nandni ke kaan me dragon babies ki awaj sunai dee thi...


Nischal ko rok'kar Nandni ne jaise hi najar upar ki... Aage dragon babies unka rasta roke khade the... "Hat ja, main tum logon se baat nahi karti... Mujhe manane ki kosis bhi nahi karna"…


Nandni dragon babies par gussa dikhati hui kahne lagi... "Bacche hain kyon gussa kar rahi"…


Nischal apni baat kahte jaise hi apna kadam aage badhaya, tabhi dragon babies ki lambi katar ne, ek sath Nischal ke paun par aag ka lamba spray dete huye apni jagah par khade rahne ke liye majboor kar diya...


Nandni:- Nischal ye piddi humara rasta rok rahe hai... Maar'kar bhagao …


Nandni ki baat sun'kar sabhi dragon baby lagbhag chillane lage .. Nischal aur Nandni ek dusre ka chehra dekhe... Nischal aage na ja'kar, dayen mud'kar chalne laga... Uske kadam ke sath hi sare dragon babies bhi dayen ore udne gaye...


"Kamal hai... Aage jane se hume rok raha hai... Lekin dayen-bayen jane se nahi rok raha… iska matlab"…. Nandni, Nischal ko sawaliya najron se dekhti hui puchhne lagi...


Nischal:- Aage kuchh bahut hi khatarnak hai... Isliye hume rok raha hai... Khatron ko bhanpne ki adbhut kshmta hoti hai inme...


Nandni:- Kitna khatarnak ho sakta hai...


Nischal:- Shayad humari aur tumhari kashmta se kahin jyada, isliye hume rok raha hai ..


Nandni:- Oh my god... Udhar Jivisha, Shwetna aur Ansh...


Nandni itna bol hi rahi thi ki issi bich wo teeno bhi najar aane lage… Shwetna dur se hi chillati hui puchhne lagi… "Dragon babies tumhara bhi rasta rok rahe hain kya?"


Nischal:- Sab pichhe hat jao...


Paancho kuchh dur pichhe hat'te... "Yahan aisa kya hai jo ye dragon babies rok rahe"…


Tabhi Jivisha Dragon baby Gopal ko awaj lagayi... Jaise hi pahuncha… Jivisha uske sar par hath ferte... "Kya hua mere natkhat gopal, yahan tum sab ke chehre ki rangat kyon uddi hai"…


Gopal:- Mat jao, mat jao.. mat jao..


Jivisha:- Aisa kya ho gaya jo hum aage nahi jayen...


Gopal:- May jao, mat jao, mat jao…


Shwetna:- Daro nahi gopal, hum poori taiyari se aaye hain...


Gopal ne wahin se chillana shuru kiya... Sabhi 8400 se dragon sab ko gherte huye ek sath chillate huye unhe kewal aage jane se rok rahe the...


Nischal:- Koi aage nahi jayega... Sab pichhe hato... Shwetna Nilbhut Rastr se yahan ka 3 period ka map kaho lane... Aur wahi 3 periods ke map Dridh Rastr ke bhi chahiye... Aur haan kuchh mirtydand mile kaidi ko bhi le aao...


Shwetna:- Hmmmm Abhi mangwati hun...


Nandni:- Ye koi bhutiya mahal hai... Kafi majboot shakti ko madhya me rakh'kar nirman ki hui ek mahal... Do alag-alag duniya ka darvaja...


Jivisha:- Aur iss theory ka aadhar...


Nandni:- Jaanvar bhoot aur pret ko mehsus kar sakte hain...


Jivisha:- Kya baat hai Nandu... Main sahmat hun... Bus yahan jinda bhoot hai... Guru Vashudhar ke jaise... mujhe aisa lagta hai...


Nandni:- Matlab kisi ka aansik kalpnik sharir...


Nischal:- Yahan kisi ek ka aanshik kalpnik sharir nahi hai...


Ansh:- Matlab…


Jivisha:- Matlab ye hum logon ke soch se bhi jyada khatarnak aur uss se bhi kahin jyada shaktisali hai.…


"Aisa hi ek mahal humare yahan core planet par bhi hai... Astak aur uski raniyan aise hi mahal me rahte hain, jiske dayre ke aas pass bhi hum nahi ja sakte. Wo mahal iss mahal ke 10 se 12 guna jyada badi hogi lekin bahari banavat bilkul ek jaisi hi hai"…


Uss jagah par kisi anjaan ne jaise hi apni baat rakhi… Shwetna apne naag dansh ka sira uske gardan se tikati.… "Tum Astak vansaj ho na, humari najron se ab tak chhipi kaise rahi"…


Nischal:- Hathiyar hata lo Shwetna wo Orja ki dost hai Vardali... Orja ki dimagi dost... Jiske dimag me Orja kabhi praves nahi kar payi, lekin dono ko baat karna itna pasand tha ki Vardali usse khud apne dimag me praves karwati thi...


Sabhi ek sath Nischal ko ghurte.… "Tumne kitne raaj paal rakhe hain"…


Nischal:- Hume Dark Universe ke bare me koi idea nahi tha... Orja ne hi wahan ke bhinn-bhinn prakar ke shaktiyon wale log ke bare me hume batayi thi, jisme ek naam Vardali aur Messa jaise community ki bhi thi… Vardali bhi ussi community ki pure breed hai, jis community ki Orja hai... Aur ye bhi maans'bhakshi nahi… Bus Vardali Orja ke purv samay ki hai...


Nandni, Nischal ka thuddi pakad'kar chahra upar karti…. "Jarra najren mila'kar bata to kitna purv"…


Jivisha:- Pakka ye jholer kuchh chhipa raha hai...


Vardali:- Main Orja se 200 sal purv ki hun... Aur Astak vamsaj me mere 50 bacche hain aur ek bhi pure breed nahi hai....


Shwetna:- Yani ki tumhare bacche bhi narbhakshi hai…


Vardali:- Kisi ko majboor karke bacche paida karwaye jaye aur uss bacche ko fir chhin'kar kahan le gaye pata na chale, aise me kya main kah dun tum sab ko judge karne aur apni safai me kya hi bata dun...


Ansh:- Had hai... Baat suru hui thi iss haunted villa se aur baat kya ho rahi hai...


Jivisha:- Tumhe safai dene ki jaroorat nahi hai... Hume Astak ke kisi bhi rastr ke aam janta se koi samsya nahi hai... Wahan kayi to aise honge jinhe Arhcemia ke control hatne ke baad samjh me hi nahi aaya hoga ki wo kya aur kyon kar rahe hai...


Vardali:- Galat... Kisi ko kuchh samjhne ki jaroorat hi nahi hai, kyonki Vishal faile samrajya me aaj tak kabhi unhe yudhh me le jaya nahi gaya... Matr kuch vansaj tukdi ko chhod diya jaye to… Messa aur uski anth'hin gulaam fauj hi Dark Universe ke planet ko jit'te aayi hai..


Vardali kah hi rahi thi itne me sainik ki tukdiyan pahunch chuki thi... Aur unke sath 20 mirtydand wale kaidi the...


Shwetna, kaidiyon se... "Tum sab ko uss mahal ke ander se bahar aana hai... Fir tum sab ka mirtydand main rajya bahiskar me badal dungi…


Sabhi kaidi sunte hi daur laga diye... Jaise hi wo log daure, sabhi apni aankh samne laga diye... Lekin iss baar bhi sabhi dragon babies ne unka rasta rok diya... Ek baar fir se sabko hairani hone lagi... Ye sabhi dragon babies in kaidiyon ke liye bhi aise rasta roke kyon khade hain...


Nischal aur Jivisha jaise hi dragon babies ko awaj lagane wale thi, tabhi Nandni.… "Nahi mat jane do unhe uss kshetr me... Un dragon babies ko khatre ka aabhash hai.... Parinaam kuchh bhi ho sakta hai"...


Sabhi ek sath:- Jaise ki...


Nandni:- Vasikarn aur in logon ko khatarnak murt roop dena...


Jivisha:- Lekin jab koi jayega hi nahi to hume khatre ka andaja kaise lagega...


Nandni:- Mujhe kafi strong feeling aa rahi hai ki iss jagah par ghuspaith ke parinaam kafi khatarnaak ho sakti hai, tabhi isse Dridh aayu rastr ke virane me banaya gaya tha... Aur jahan tak lagta hai iske pichhe ke itihaas ki kisi ko jaankari nahi hogi...


Shwetna:- Haan Mahamahim ke samay se hi ye puri jagah pratibandhit hai... Uske baad Jatin aur Baby ne bhi usse open nahi kiya tha...


Jivisha:- Main ja'kar check karun kya… I mean dhyan laga'kar iss jagah ka muwayna karun kya???


Nischal:- Nahi iss kshetr me machine ko bhej'kar dekhte hain... Kuchh to pata chalega...


Nischal ki baat par har kisi ki sahmati bani... Thodi der baad kuchh machine ko un ilakon me chhoda gaya jo badi teji se ander ghus rahe the... Har machine par audio-video devices lage huye the… jis seema se dragons kisi ko aage badhne nahi de rahe the, wahan se dhire-dhire sabhi device aage badhne lage...


Har koi apni khuli aankhon se wah device aage badhte dekh raha tha… wahin Doctor sahab aur Nandni dono screen ko dekh rahe the... "Oh my goddd... Sabhi machine ko apni jagah rok'kar, tum logon ko ye screen dekhni chahiye"…


Nandni aur Ansh itni hairan bhari najron se dekh rahe the mano koi daitya dekh lee ho... Haalanki din ke waqt jo daitya dekhi thi ye utna hairan nahi kiya tha, jitna hairan abhi ka screen kar gaya...


Nandni ki hairani to fir bhi thik thi lekin Jivisha aur Nischal ne jaise hi wo screen dekha, apne aap hi muh se nikal gaya.… "Ye nahi ho sakta... Aisa kaise sambhav hua"…

 

[Agniban]

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[prakash2piyush]

नैन भाई दूसरे नंबर वाली कहानी अगर पहले शुरू करे तो ज्यादा मजा आएगा,क्योंकि दूसरे ग्रह और अपने गृह को जोड़ते हुए आप जब लिखते हो तो फिर उसमें आपका कोई सानी ही नही है।
एक अलग ही दुनिया ख्यालो वाली सामने आ जाती है जिसमे हम सभी खो से जाते हैं।
इतना अच्छा वर्णन होता है कि लगता ही नही है कि पढ़ रहे हैं, लगता है जैसे सब कुछ सामने घटित हो रहा हो मानो।
शब्दो का ऐसा जाल और इतना अच्छा उल्लेख की कहने और तारीफ के लिए शब्द ही कम पड़ जाए। कितना भी बड़ा update क्यों ना दे दे लेकिन लगता है बस पढ़ते ही चले जाएं और पढ़ते ही रहे।

 

[Battu]

Nice fabulous dhamakedar update.

 

[nain11ster]

नैन भाई दूसरे नंबर वाली कहानी अगर पहले शुरू करे तो ज्यादा मजा आएगा,क्योंकि दूसरे ग्रह और अपने गृह को जोड़ते हुए आप जब लिखते हो तो फिर उसमें आपका कोई सानी ही नही है।
एक अलग ही दुनि

Bas ek sawal ka jawab apne ko abhi maangta hai.... 74 update aur 6 comment... Kya meri mehnat ko itna justify tha....

Ya fir main roj update deta hun aur kahani complete karta hun ye mere liye week point ho gaya aur yahi soch'kar comment na karte...

Aaj kal to sapna sa ho gaya ki waiting comment kya hota hai... Kamal ka thread hai... Waiting comment tak nahi...

Lagta hai style badalna hoga

 

[ragish7357]

Nice update bro
Ye esa konsa bhoot dikha diya iss bhutiya mhl m jo astk vnsj se bhi jyada khatarnak h

 

[ragish7357]

Bas ek sawal ka jawab apne ko abhi maangta hai.... 74 update aur 6 comment... Kya meri mehnat ko itna justify tha....

Ya fir main roj update deta hun aur kahani complete karta hun ye mere liye week point ho gaya aur yahi soch'kar comment na karte...

Aaj kal to sapna sa ho gaya ki waiting comment kya hota hai... Kamal ka thread hai... Waiting comment tak nahi...

Lagta hai style badalna hoga

Na aap style na bdle
Apun aaj se waiting comment bhi kr dega

 

[krish1152]

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Update:- 75 Posted 0n page 551... Check the index ... And don't forget to Like, Comment and Share

Please choice any one of the story... Both in Romantic Genera

1) Too Old Too Young
Slow romance with full of emotional drama and action)
2)
Aryamani ~ A Pure Alfa Between Two Worlds
Or
A Pure Alfa And Two Worlds
(Title abhi decide nahi hai)
A supernatural romantic action pack...

1 fir 2

 

[krish1152]

Mast shaandar update

 

[Dgadkari]

Behad shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Bahot khoob superb fantastic