Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[Anky@123]

Behtareen update bhai

 

[Xabhi]

हेल्ला ~ हमसे जलने वाले भी कमाल के होते है

महफ़िल तो उनकी होती है पर चर्चे हमारे आम होते है...

Naina ji baki sb to hm manage kr lenge pr ab apne aam ka jikar kr hi diya hai to aaiye Kabhi Bijnor District me hr taraf aam hi aam milenge mausam bhi aam ka hi hai sath me ganne ka bhi
Sath me Apne aee ji oo ji ko bhi laiyega kyoki ganne ke khet me jora jori bahut hoti hai

Mai itna Kabhi nhi bolna chahta tha pr aapne hmare aam hote hai bolkr jo meri purani Kali yade taja ki hai abhi bhi jalan ho rhi hai
Khair Kissa fir kabhi btaunga tb tk Injoy kariye or please fir se hmare aam hote hai mt boliyega pain hota hai or jalan bhi...

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Update:-73 (B) ​

Shwetna aur Jivisha jaise-jaise naag dansh apne sar upar gol-gol ghuma rahi thi, wo apne sar ke upar aag ka bhimkay, gol ghumavdar, aasman ko chhune wali bawandar bana chuki thi, jo kafi teji ke sath uss naag dansh ke muh ke ander simatne lagi. Kewal ek minute ki yah chhoti si ghatna thi... aur puri aag sama chuki thi. Astak, Dark universe ke sath-sath yah adbhut karnama pura Middle Universe dekh raha tha...


Fir to badal garje... Tej kadadkti bijliyan bhi gir rahi thi... Agle 10 minute tak tarah-tarah ke vayumandaliya energy se humla badastur jaari rahe... Lekin ye kamal ke naag dansh... Har vayumandaliya energy mano apne ander samati chali ja rahi thi...


Kadakti bilkul ki puri chhat hi giri thi lekin aise laga tha jaise wo chhat sar ke kayi fit upar hi ruk gayi ho aur kadakti chamchamati bijli ka bhi wahi hashar hua jo aag ka hua tha…


Naag dansh hawa me gol gol ghumane se aas paas ki samparkiya hawa mano koi majboot shuraksha ghera sa banaye thi, jisme kisi bhi prakar ki vayumandaliya energy prawesh nahi kar pati… Astak ke vansaj ki jo sabse badi takat thi usse matr 2 logon ne mil'kar dhul chata dee...


Fir to Ladai ke maidan me Astak vansaj ke ore se tarah-tarah ke prayog shuru ho chuke the, jo Jivisha aur Shwetna ke isharon ki gulaam thi... Jaise jaise wo apne naag dansh ko prayog karte unke ghatak se ghatak humle bhi barbaad ho ja rahi thi… Astak aur unke vansaj ke gurur bhi gol-gol ghum'kar usnke naag dansh me dum tod rahe the...


Nandni yahan ke high voltage action dekhti hui… "Kyon jalil Astak, tere pillon ke pass aur bhi kuchh joker'giri bachi hai, ya kuchh ghanton ke liye hum apni screen ko band karen... Taki jab tere in abhedi pillon ko hum yahan maar rahe hon, to tu unke marne ke viyog me hi na kahin mar jaye...


Nischal:- Areee Nandu kahan iss begairat ko heart attack aane wali hai... Abhi Universe me to lagbhag 2400 carore inke logon ki lash giri, fir bhi iske chehre par sikan tak na aayi...


Shwetna:- O commentator sar yahan ka pura prasaran balank karoge, taki ab hum apna kahar dikha sake...


Nischal:- Jaisa aap chaho malik... HuYu sara prasaran close karo... Jivisha vayumandaliya radio tarangon ko bhi rok do taki suchna prasaran natural tarike se bhi band ho jaye...





Idhar ye log humla karne ki soch hi rahe the utne me hi sabhi giants daud laga chuke the... Puri jagah hi kaanp gayi... 1 kilometer fasla hi kya tha unke liye... Aisa laga jaise ab to sabko kuchalne ki than kiye hon.. Apne hath ke gada numa bade aur vishal hathiyar chala'kar sabki leela hi samapt kar deni hai...


Idhar Nischal ki baat sun'kar Jivisha ne apna naag dansh ko anguthe me samet'kar, apne dono hath ka gola banati hui, usme suchna prasaran ki tarangon ko uss poore ilake se gayab kar dee. Lekin jab'tak Jivisha apne kaam me lagi hui thi, pura middle universe hi jaise aankh mund chuki thi… aur sabhi chillate huye Nischal, Nischal kar rahe the... Aur jab poore middle universe ki aankhen khuli, unke aage ka screen ja chuka tha... Sab ke sab suspence me... Aur yahan ladai ke maidan me sabke muh se nikla... Adbhut... Prasaran band hone ke sath hi Jivisha sabhi giants ko ek sath hawa me taang chuki thi...


Yah adbhut najara tha, jise aakhen faade sab dekhte rah gaye... Aur ab waqt tha javavi humle ka… "Sabko thodi dur dhakel'kar niche chhodo"… Shwetna chillayi aur Jivisha apni shakti hatayi... Sabhi giants hawa se niche gire, siway ek ke... Wo tha inka sena-nayak Javo..


Idhar Shwetna bhi bilkul taiyar, jaise hi Jivisha ne apni shakti hatayi aur wo niche gire, agle hi pal Shwetna apne naag dansh ko bhumi par maarti hui garji.…


"Surpmarich ke aavishkar paun me pahan'ne se, pahan'ne walon ko bhumigat nahi kiya ja sakta tha. Lekin uske iss bhed ko jan'ne ke baad, humne apna tarika hi badal diya aur ab hum kisi insan ko bhumigat karne ki nahi sochte, balki pura ilaka hi bhumigat kar dete hai.. Ab tum sab ho jao bhumigat, jahan niche tumhara samna pani se hoga, jiske ander tumhari shari shaktiyan dhari ki dhari rah jayengi".…


Shwetna itna kah'kar 2 baar apne naag dansh ko bhumi par jod se patki. Jabtak giants uth'kar fir se daudte, Nilbhut sainikon ne uss poore ilake ko, jis'par vansaj sena khadi thi, poori bhumi ko hi bhutal ke pani me kayi hazar feet neeche le gaye...


Jaise hi wo poora kshtr pani me duba... Jivisha hath badha'kar Nischal ko jhatke me uthayi aur usse khinchti hui, uske sine sine se ja lagi aur utni hi teji se Nischal ke honth se honth laga di...


Jivisha ke naram honth ka wo aanandmay sparsh aur Nischal ka chehra poora khil sa gaya... Apne dono hath se Jivisha ke dono gaal ko pakad'kar wo bhi pyar se chumne laga... Kayi dino ke pyase honth jab mile to dono ek dusre me kho'kar chumte rahe... Aaj na to najre mili thi aur na hi aankhon se kuchh ishare huye the… Shayad lambe arse ki ye tadap thi aur pahle Jivisha apni bhavnao ko rok nahi payi...


Jo haal dil ka idhar tha, wahi aag to Nischal ke sine me bhi lagi thi.... Ek lambi tadap… Judai ke lambe se arse ke baad yun to dono sath hi the, lekin pyar jatane ke pal kam hi mile the... Isliye aaj jab fursat ke pal mile, tab pahle honth mile aur bhavnayen to baad me swatah hi jaag gaye...


Jitni tadap ye dono apne sine me dabaye the, shayad utni hi jyada badla lene ki tadap Nilbhut samuday aur uski sardar Shwetna ke dil me bhi thi… Shwetna jo Nilbhut samuday ke 40 hazar masoom log aur lagbhag 1 lakh 60 hazar dirdh aayu ke masoom logon ke jinda chabaye jane ka dard sameti hui thi...


Shwetna jise Jivisha ki tarah hi yah baat pal-pal mehsus hota raha ki log kisi bhi karan se mar jate.… Lekin unki hi jamin par unke hi logon ko, aakar koi jinda chaba gaya…. Dil me asim pira jaga jati… tab to rah-rah kar ek hi khyal aata... Ghar... Wo ghar jahan log khud ko sabse jyada surakhit mehsus karte hain, wahin unke ghar me ghus'kar aisi himakat... Fir to yah ehsasa bhi dil me jaah uth'ta, kya chand mutthi bhar darindon ke samne na kewal ek rastr, balki ek pura grah ghutne tek chuka hai...


Yahi wo baaten thi jisne Jivisha ko vichlit kiya aur usse 5,6 din tak dhyan lagane par vivash kar gayi... Sok ki wahi lahar har Zoren niwasi ke dil me thi, lekin Shwetna khud yadi sok me hoti tab ye pura grah hi ek apang shashak Jatin ke jimme hota.


Karma... Shwetna apne kartvya se muh mod nahi sakti thi, isliye muskurati rahi aur ye ussi ke dil ki aag thi jise bujhane ke liye Astak ke vansaj khud yahan aa pahunche… apne karmon ki instant karma pane ke liye...


Shwetna ne black hole ki kahani prithvi par hi suni thi... Shwetna yah bhali-bhanti samjhi ki kaise aquatic medium me universe ke 2 mahan yoddha asahay ho gaye the. Aur yah aquatic medium na kewal Nilbhut samuday ke liye ek anukool medium tha, balki un adrishi janvaron ke liye bhi jo 15 se 20 fit ke bade janvar the.… Jiski kaali upri chamdi itni majboot thi ki metal ki tarah chamkti thi... Astak aur uske Vansaj ne to kisi process se abhed sharir paya hoga... Adrishi janvaron ka to poora natural skin tha...


Pani ke ander doobte hi sabhi vansaj sena satah par aane ki kosis karne lage, lekin 5 lakh ki tadat Nilbhut samuday ke liye mahaj mutthi bhar thi... Fir to vishalkay sharir ko ek sath itne saanp ne jakad liya ki unka pura badan saanp se dhak gaya....


Vishalkay sharir ki visheshta thi ki kitne saanp usse kyon na jakad le, aur bhale hi Astak vansaj pani me apni shakti na prayog kar paye... Fir bhi Nilbhut samuday wale unhe duba kar maar nahi sakte the aur naa hi unke skin ko bhed sakte the...


Kintu bade sharir ka khamiyaja yah tha ki uske naak aur pichhe se kayi hazar saanp uske pet ke ander ghus chuke the… Dil ko sukoon dene wala wo pal tha, jab sabhi vishalkay giant, pet, dimag aur badan ke har ang ki pira se chhatpata rahe the...


Lekin tej pira me wo chhatpatane ke alawa kuch kar bhi nahi sakte the, kyonki ek saanp dusre saanp ki punchh ko muh me daba'kar, kafi lambe saanp ka nirman kar bhi chuke the aur uski kundliyon ke bich poori tarah giants ka sarir jakda bhi ja chuka tha….


Koi bhi giant vansaj apna hath nahi hila pa rahe the. Muh khol'kar wo chillana to chahte the, lekin muh band tha... Aisa lag raha tha jaise, sar se lekar paun tak me poora palstic lapet diya gaya ho aur wo sab giants apne dard bhadi chinkh apne jahan me samete huye, bus apna kamar hila pa rahe the...


Unki aankhen fat'kar baahar aane ko thi... Badi aankhen bahar ko nikalti aur dard me dubi laal aankn. Sabhi giants apni aankhen poori takat se aise faila rahe the mano aankhon ke dayen aur bayen chhed kar'ke, tej-tej chinkh bahar nikalna chah rahe ho... Lekin in Nilbhut samuday ke logon ki darindgi... Har giants ki aankhen tab bahar chali aayi, jab saanp unke aankhon se hi ghusna shuru kar chuke the…


Aankhon ke kinare, dayen, bayen upar niche jin kono se ghusne ki jagah mil rahi thi, saanp ghus rahe the… Koi bhi saanp naa to aankhon ke bahar aa rahi retina ko phod rahe the aur na hi unke abhed palkon ko band hone de rahe the... Sabhi saanp apne tej daton ke bich sabhi giant vansajon ke palkon ko poori takat se upar khinche the... Unki palken aankhon ko pichhe palat'kar charrr ki awaj ke sath khinch rahi thi... Retina par saanp rengte huye kono se ghus rahe the... Dard itna haawi tha ki poori gati se chhatpatate huye giants bus yahi dua maang rahe the ki ab maar do lekin dard na do...


Giant jab asahay aur past ho gaye, tab bahari sarir ko sabhi saanpon ne chhod diya aur un saanpon ki madad karne pahunch gaye, jo chhote size ke vnasaj ko pakde huye the aur unke sharir ke ander chhote-chhote saanp ko ghusne me madad kar rahe the...


Ab tak wo sabhi vansaj kisi tarah apne samanya bahubal se saanpon ko roke huye the, lekin jaise hi 1 lakh badan ke upar ke saanp ne unka badan ke ore lapke, fir to bache huye 4 lakh astak vansaj ki bhi wahi haalat hui thi…. Unhe bhi lapet'kar pura pack kiya gaya tha aur dard jab beintahaan hua, fir to maut ki bikh ander hi ander wo sab bhi maang rahe the...


Kintu sabhi saanpon ne abhi to beinthaan dard diya tha, maut ki bhikh maangne wali dard. Abhi unko maut kahan diya tha… Unhe maut dene ke liye pahle giants vansaj ko dabocha Adrishi janvaron ne...


Size me bhale hi chhote the lekin... Dono hath, paun, aur sar ko viprit disha me jab hazaron ki sankhya me Adrishi jaanvar, ek sath mil'kar giants ke badan ko khichna shuru kiya... Fir to pol bhi khul gayi inke abhedi skin ki, jise bhed to nahi sakte the, lekin har ek ang ke bich itna khinchav paida karte chale gaye ki charrrr charrrr charrrr ki awaj ke sath unka badan Adrishi jaanvar ki jhund ne faad diya….


Berahmi se maut ka tandav takriban 1 ghante tak chalta raha. Nilbhut samuday wale jab wapas se poori jamin ko jab upar le'kar aaye... Fir to ek hi jagah par vansaj sena ke chithre huye badan ko jama kar rahe the... Wo dher itni dur me faila aur uncha tha ki, dur se jitne masoom log dekh pa rahe the, apne priyajano ke jane ka gum bhula rahe the... Khud me yakin sa ho chala tha apne satta aur shashan ke prati, ki sala koi aankh utha'kar humari jamin ko dekho to sahi.…


Haan lekin ek vansaj ab bhi bacha hua tha, aur wo tha Javo... Jiski maut ka pradarshan poore universe me karna tha aur dikhana tha ki Zoeren grah kisi se kamjor nahi…. Shwetna jab prasaran shuru karne ke liye Jivisha ke ore dekhi... "O Teri ye fevicol ka jod kab chipka"…


Ansh aur Nandni dono hanste huye.… "Jabse sabhi kamine pani me gaye the"…


Shwetna apni aakhen badi karti…. "Ek ghante se honth par hi atke hain… shudhh prem ek dusre ko mehsus karne wala... Main hoti to ab tak poore maze le chuki hoti... Aree koi jagao re dono ko"..


Ansh:- O madam ji abhi niche in par hi najar hai... Jarra sar utha'kar aakash me dekho upar kya ho raha hai.…


Shwetna ne jaise hi dhyan upar aakash me kee, aaschrya se uski aankhen badi ho gayi… muh khula ka khula rah gaya... "Ab ye kya hai?????"

नालायक बाप ( अस्तक ) के लायक औलादों का अच्छा हश्र हुआ । करोड़ों विमान से कुछ नहीं हुआ तो आ गए धरातल पर युद्ध करने । धरातल पर फजीहत हुई सो हुई , धरातल को उनके साथ ही पाताल लोक में भेज दिया और अथाह जल के अन्दर उनके उपर सांपों को एवं अदृशि जानवरों को छोड़ दिया गया ।

सर्प दंश......... क्या गजब का ब्रह्मास्त्र है । इस से पार होना तो बिल्कुल ही असंभव दिखता है । निश्छल और जीविशा इस ब्रह्मास्त्र से लैस तो है ही शवेत्ना भी इस की धारक हैं ।
अस्तक की सेनाओं के तो छक्के छूट गए ।

इतना बड़ा महासंग्राम चल रहा है और इधर बेपरवाह निश्छल , नंदिनी और अंश अस्तक के साथ मसखरी कर रहे हैं । घोर बेइज्जती हुई अस्तक की ।

वैसे अंश और शवेत्ना ने ऐसा क्या आसमान में देख लिया कि हक्के बक्के हो गए ! शायद अस्तक के विमानों के परखच्चे उड़ते देख रहे हो ।

शानदार और बेहतरीन अपडेट नैन भाई ।

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-73 (A) ​

Nischal aur Nandni dono ek sath...… "Ab bol diya so bol diya... Jo hoga dekha jayega"….


Ansh unhe ghurte... "Tum dono hi pagal ho"…


Teeno baat kar hi rahe the tabhi wahan tej music bajne laga, jo kisi ke swagat ka background music jaisa aabhash karwa raha tha.. Teeno ki najar jaise hi screen par gayi... Nischal ka muh khula rah gaya... "Hayyy kya lag rahi hai meri jaan"…. "Kafi mast dikh rahi hai... Khatrnaak, katilana"…


Udhar HuYu ne Jivisha ke bahar nikalne par swagat me nagade baja diye aur idhar kayi dino baad uske first look ko dekh'kar Nischal ka muh khula hi rah gaya... Ansh bhi khud ko rok na paya, fir uske roop varnan me apne chand shabd kahne se..


Ek to ati-khubsoorat aur rachayita ki banayi uttam nakkasi ki bhartiya nari... Upar se uski wo laal saree. Laal saree me dikhti uski wo dilkash kamar, jiske upar ke kamar'band ko hata'kar khud lipatne ki chahat jaag jaye...


Tikhe nain-naksh aur uske khubusrat chehre ki shant bhavna par wo halki pratit hoti hui gurur, jo uske shashaktikaran ki parichayak thi... Chalne ke haav-bhav fir to aise ki, halke chham-chham ki awaj uske gurur aur vajood ka aisa aabash karwaye, jaise uss se jyada pratibhavan, gunvaan aur shaktishali stri iss sampurn brahmand me koi nahi...


Chehre par pyari si muskkan aur bilkul shant mann. Jivisha jaise hi bahar nikli, charo ore se dargon baby madrane lage. Jivisha ke dayen, bayen aur uske sarir se lag kar apni khushiyan jahir karne lage…. Jivisha apni gahri shwans khinchti apni dono baanh wo aise failayi, mano hawa ko hi apna baahn bana liya ho aur usme sabhi 8400 bacchon ko samet li ho.…


Sabhi dragon babies jaise chahak rahe the... Jivisha muskura'kar dhime se unse kahi.… "Ja'kar sab khelo aur koi shararat nahi karega.… HuYu Nischal, Nandu aur Ansh jiju mujhe sun rahe hain kya?"


HuYu:- Haan bhabhi aapko sab sun to rahe hain lekin Nischal abhi kuchh bolne ki haalat me nahi hai... Waise to aisi haalat iss waqt poore universe ki hai.. Sab aankhen fade, jitni khubsurat utne hi khatarnak stri ko dekh rahe hain...


Jivisha:- Fir to kuchh din baad ye poora Universe bharm me rah jayega... Kyonki main apne jaisi 6 aur stri ko janti hun. Aur jis din hum sab aise sath honge… nari shakti ki alag hi pahchan hogi... Khair Suno ji... Mere love, mere sona.. aap beer ki bottol ke sath, Ansh jiju aur Nandu ko le'kar wahin se kyon commentry nahi karte, jahan wo Astak vansaj land karne wale hain... Main pahunch rahi hun aap sab bhi pahuncho…


Jivisha ko lene uski sawari pahunch chuki thi. Wo sidha ladai ke vishal maidan me pahunchi... Jahan Shwetna uss virane me kayi shandar singhasan bichhayi hui thi… Aur Unhi singhasan me ek par Shwetna aaram se baith'kar, apne dushmano ka intzar kar rahi thi...


Jivisha sabse pahle wahan pahunchi… Shwetna khadi ho'kar ek beer Jivisha ko pura dekhi aur gale lagati... "Aap ko dekh'kar hi yahan ki Vishesh Rani hone jaisa aabash ho raha hai. Aapko dekh'kar achha laga shasika"…


Jivisha:- Main to hatash thi... Aur tum yahan ke logon ki himmat bani hui thi... Shashika sahi mayne me tum ho aur main sahayak... Ab iss par koi bahas nahi hogi..


Shwetna:- Ziddi kahin ki...


Jivisha:- Pagal… Kya hua Lin itna khamosh kyon hai...


Lin:- Nahi bus mai suchna sun raha hun... Yahan se 6 kilometer dur, wo log land kar chuke hai... Unke kuchh logon ki tukdi taiyar ho'kar yahan ka muwayna karne ke liye shayad niklenge...


Shwetna:- Ranbhumi sajao aur unko suchna pahuncha do ki hum yahin 6 km dur hain aur poora yudhh issi ladai ke maidan me ladenge...


Jivisha:- Nahi itne prem ki bhasha aur sam'maan se yudhh ke aamtran dene layak nahi hai ye log... Unse kaho 'Tumhare najayaj khoon ke jayaj naam dene wale Astak ne jitne logon ko yahan utarne ki bhikh maangi thi, uske mukable tum log 50 guna jyada ko humne aane diya... Apne ghinaune badan ki thakan mita'kar, jab yudhh karna chahe, ek baar apni jungli boli me suchna de de... Kyonki uske baad hum unhe chu shabd bolne ka mauka nahi denge...


Idhar Javo ke pass jaise hi suchna pahunchi, wo apni baukhlayi najron se Lin ko dekhte…. "Tu sab itna hi mahan khud ko samjhte ho, fir kyon humare sanchar pranali ko band kiya the... Jaise space me tum sab apni baat middle Universe se Dark Universe tak pahuncha rahe the, mujhe bhi Dark Universe baat karni hai"…


Lin:- Jaisa tum chaho... HuYu isse iske baap se connect karwa do... Aakhri pal me apne bachne ke jitne gyan le sakta hai le le... Taki Universe bhi dekh le ki ye kitne kabil hai….


Idhar Lin aur Javo ki baat chal rahi thi... Aur 6 kilometer dur baithe commentry team pahunchti hui... "Nandu aaj to aisa lagta hai jaise ye Astak sach me koi joker ho... Kyon be Astak ab kisi ladai ke maidan me ghus'kar, tere yodhha ko tujhse baat karni hai... Kahan gaya wo yakin, 10 hazar ki fauj kafi hai... 5 lakh se jyada log utar diye, tab bhi ladai ke maidan me tere man mauji fauj ko stretgy discuss karni hai... Ghar se sikha kar nahi bheja... Chhi chhi chhi... Ab lage hath ye bhi bol dena... Jit na pao to inke sahari aabadi me ghus'kar utpaat machana"
..


Astak:- Yaad nahi kuchh din pahle tumhare iss grah par kya hua tha... Humari 40 hazar ki tukdi ne ise grah ke 2 lakh aabadi ko jinda chaba gaye the…


Shwetna:- "Sale mutthi bhar gunde... Aur gundon ke bich baitha tha ek dimag control karne wala kutta, wo Surpmarich. Sab joker ka hi samuh to tha. Kyonki dridh aayu me shasan karne wala wo bewakoof Jatin aur uski bahan Baby, surksha ke naam par hi lull the... Hum bus gum kha gaye, kyonki jab yudhh hoti tab tere 40 hazar napunsak fauj, un dirdh aayu rastr ke sainikon ke pichhe chhip jate... Maine aaklan kiya aur mujhe laga ladai me kam se kam 4 se 5 carore jane jayengi... Isliye main shanti se gum khaye baithi thi...

"Tere 5 lakh fauj taiyar kar… aur wo kya aaj nautanki dikhaya tha tune Universe me… 2400 carore fauj... Aaj jab ye yudhh samapt hogi, tab tera ye bharm toot jayega ki tu aur tere vansajon se koi lad nahi sakta. Tumhari abhedi chamri hai aur Universe ke kisi bhi grah ko jit sakte ho"...


Nandni:- Bus kar Shwetna kitna lamba dialogue maar rahi hai... Tu action kar hum hai na dialogue ke liye... Aur miliye mere sathi Mr...


Nischal:- Aapka dost, aap ka host.… Universe traveller Nischal se.…


Ansh:- Aur hum phooti kismat wale in mahashay ke sang, tang jate hain...


Tabhi jaise wahan ke vayu me parivartan sa hone laga tha... 'Dhamnn dhamnnn' ki awaj kano me saaf sunai de rahi thi... 6 kilometer dur yun to pahle kuch bhi najar nahi aa raha tha, aur ye log baat karne me mashgul the. Lekin jab jamin me kampan hui aur sabka dhyan Ranbhumi me gaya...


Astak:- Kyon dar se sabke pesab to nahi nikal rahe na...


Samne bhimakay sharir aur 600 se 700 fit unche giaent vansaj ki sena... 1,2 giant nahi the, balki Javo ke control ki lagbhag 1 lakh tukdi itne hi hight ke giant the aur ab to sab ke sab dur se najar bhi aa rahe the...


Har ek giant ke upar 4 Vansaj fauji chadhe huye the... Sabhi giant vansaj fauji ke katar ki tarah line up hokar aage badh rahe the aur har koi apne hath me apne size ka hathiyar rakhe huye tha….


Ansh:- Bc ye kya bawasir hai...


Nandni, Ansh ko jordar thuski dete... "Nikal gayi student life wali baten... Bhulo mat tum ek medical vidwan ho... Medical vidwan...


Ansh:- Itne bade giants ko dekh'kar medical vidwan ki gaan nahi fategi kya… kah to aise rahi ho jaise tumhe to jarra bhi dar laga hi na ho...


Nandni:- Dekho, main janti hun ki ye humara kuchh bhi nahi bigad sakte... Lekin fir bhi mere paun kaanp rahe...


Nischal, jod jod se hanste huye... "Abe Astak sale, ye to tune puri nangi fauj bhej di hai be... Sale video ko kayi planet par blur karke chalana par raha hai... Paise na the kya in jaise fauj ko kapde pahnane ke liye...


Astak:- Tu khushnasib hai ki marne se pahle tune Astak se itni baten kar lee hai... Teri maut, teri dharti ka sina dahlaati hui pahunch rahi hai...


Shwetna, Nilbhut samuday ki sardar, apni jagah se khadi hui... Uske hath me bhi ek sharp dansh tha... Yah Nilbhut samuday ke sardar ka sharp dansh tha... Takriban 8 fit lambi... Jiske upar bada sa sarp bana tha aur niche mota rodnuma koi dhatu se laga tha... Haan lekin ye permanent sharp dansh tha, jo Jivisha ya Nischal ke sharp dansh ki tarah anguthe me nahi samatha tha...


Shwetna sharp dansh ke nichle shire ko bhumi par de mari... Ek tarang sa utha tha jo hawa ke sath failte huye poori sena ko alert kar gaya... Jaise hi sharp dansh bhumi se takraya, hawa ka rukh badal chuka tha… hawayen tej aur sansanati hui bahne lagi... Jamin faad'kar Shwetna ki sena ne apna parichay diya...


Wo size me matr 4 se 8 fit tak lambe the. 1mm se lekar 6 inch ki tak round shape ki motai thi... Lekin jitne bhi shape shifter Nilbhut samuday ke saanp the, sab ke sab nidar the... Yudhh ka bigul jaise hi Shwetna ne funka, saanpon ka jhund bhumi faad'kar hawa me the… itna bada jhund ek sath charo ore se nikal raha tha, ki wo sabhi gients ek second pahle tak dikh rahe hote, lekin saanp jab uchhaal marte, tab wo giants poore ke poore unke bich me dhake huye najar aa rahe the…


Agle hi pal Shwetna ne apne sharp dansh ko half round ghumayi... Iss baar charo ore ladai ke maidan me, Adrishi jaanvar ek pal dikhte aur dusre pal me gayab... Taadat itni jyada thi Adrishi janvaron ki, ki jab wo sab ek dusre ke upar chadh'kar uchhal kud karte, sabhi vansaj sena bharma jate ki abhi to najron ke samne tha, kahan gayab ho gaya...


Javo ki fauj fir bhi badhti rahi.... Dar aur shikast se aaj tak vansaj ki iss fauj ka kabhi samna hua hi nahi, to un par Shwetna ki fauj ka koi bhi kartab asar nahi kiya hoga...


Shwetna:- Shahsika, apna shikar chun lo, jise latkana ho...Baad me mujhe kuchh mat kahna.…


Javo ki fauj karib 1 kilometer ki duri par thi aur tabhi Astak tej chillate huye humle ka aadesh diya... Aadesh milte hi Vansaj fauj apni jagah par ruk gayi. Sabhi giants apni jagah khade ho'kar, ek sath apna paun patakte huye bhumi par aisa kampan karne lage, ki Nischal aur Jivisha jis jagah baithe the pura kaapne lagi...


Agle hi pal un giants ke upar sawar vansaj fauj ke baki logon ne apna hath se vayumandaliya energy ko capture karne lage... Tabhi Javo jor se chillahat huye... "Jala do yahan sab ko"…


Agle hi pal takriban 1 lakh hath hawa me lahraye aur aisa laga jaise aage ke 1 km ka poora vayumandaliya kshetr hi aag ki Chapet me tha... Unchi tej lapten aur aag 1 kilometer bich ke fasle ko apne chapet me lete huye, aage badh rahi thi...


Jivisha apni jagah se uth'kar Shwetna ke sath khadi ho gayi... Usne bhi apna naag dansh nikala... Shwetna aur Jivisha ne ek sath bhumi par naag dansh ko maara aur agale hi pal dono ne naag dansh ko apne sar ke upar se gol-gol lahrane lagi...


Aag dariya lagbhag unke karib pahunch chuka tha. Aag ka wo vishal bavander dekh'kar poora universe apne daton tale ungliyan daba'kar shwans roke huye the... Lapte itni bhishan thi aur itne karib ki sambhavtah wo lapten bhale kisi ko naa chhu pa rahi thi, lekin jhulsa jaroor dete...


Kintu aisa laga jaise aag ki lapton ka patla 2 kinara ban gaya ho, aur dono kinare ka ek-ek kinara, ja'kar Shwetna aur Jivisha ke naag dansh ke upar bane sharp ke chhote aur patle muh se connect ho gaye....


Jivisha aur Shwetna, jaise-jaise naag dansh ghuma rahi thi... Aag ki lapte mano naag dansh se connect ho chuki ho aur naag dansh ke gol ghumne ke ishare par, aag hawa me lahra'kar upar aakash ki ore uncha uth'te ja rahi thi...

Bahut badhiya update mitr

 

[Xabhi]

नालायक बाप ( अस्तक ) के लायक औलादों का अच्छा हश्र हुआ । करोड़ों विमान से कुछ नहीं हुआ तो आ गए धरातल पर युद्ध करने । धरातल पर फजीहत हुई सो हुई , धरातल को उनके साथ ही पाताल लोक में भेज दिया और अथाह जल के अन्दर उनके उपर सांपों को एवं अदृशि जानवरों को छोड़ दिया गया ।

सर्प दंश......... क्या गजब का ब्रह्मास्त्र है । इस से पार होना तो बिल्कुल ही असंभव दिखता है । निश्छल और जीविशा इस ब्रह्मास्त्र से लैस तो है ही शवेत्ना भी इस की धारक हैं ।
अस्तक की सेनाओं के तो छक्के छूट गए ।

इतना बड़ा महासंग्राम चल रहा है और इधर बेपरवाह निश्छल , नंदिनी और अंश अस्तक के साथ मसखरी कर रहे हैं । घोर बेइज्जती हुई अस्तक की ।

वैसे अंश और शवेत्ना ने ऐसा क्या आसमान में देख लिया कि हक्के बक्के हो गए ! शायद अस्तक के विमानों के परखच्चे उड़ते देख रहे हो ।

शानदार और बेहतरीन अपडेट नैन भाई ।

Ji bhaiya ji Bilkul aisa hi lga hamko bhi pr astak ke vimano ke prkhacche udte dekhne ke sath hi dragon bhi honge apna mnoranjan karte huye

 

[11 ster fan]

Vish-Nilayani kya phir se paida ho gayi kya nain11ster saheb
to vish - jiviya koun hai phir

Are ye uss dark universe me gaddar ki beti thi Jo apne lalach me inhe super bhikhari ko saump di thi ..ye vish aur nilayani alag alag hai ye dono bahane thi dark universe ki wo vish nilayani alag hai ..update ko dhyan se pada kijiye ...

 

[Naina]

Are ye uss dark universe me gaddar ki beti thi Jo apne lalach me inhe super bhikhari ko saump di thi ..ye vish aur nilayani alag alag hai ye dono bahane thi dark universe ki wo vish nilayani alag hai ..update ko dhyan se pada kijiye ...

Matlab nainu saheb ne Vish-Nilayani ko agal alag kar ke ek vish ek nilayani kirdaar banaya jinka gala nischal /serin ne kaat diya

 

[Naina]

Naina ji baki sb to hm manage kr lenge pr ab apne aam ka jikar kr hi diya hai to aaiye Kabhi Bijnor District me hr taraf aam hi aam milenge mausam bhi aam ka hi hai sath me ganne ka bhi
Sath me Apne aee ji oo ji ko bhi laiyega kyoki ganne ke khet me jora jori bahut hoti hai

Mai itna Kabhi nhi bolna chahta tha pr aapne hmare aam hote hai bolkr jo meri purani Kali yade taja ki hai abhi bhi jalan ho rhi hai
Khair Kissa fir kabhi btaunga tb tk Injoy kariye or please fir se hmare aam hote hai mt boliyega pain hota hai or jalan bhi...

 

[11 ster fan]

Matlab nainu saheb ne Vish-Nilayani ko agal alag kar ke ek vish ek nilayani kirdaar banaya jinka gala nischal /serin ne kaat diya

Bilkul lagata to aisa hi hai

 

[Nevil singh]

Update:-73 (B) ​

Shwetna aur Jivisha jaise-jaise naag dansh apne sar upar gol-gol ghuma rahi thi, wo apne sar ke upar aag ka bhimkay, gol ghumavdar, aasman ko chhune wali bawandar bana chuki thi, jo kafi teji ke sath uss naag dansh ke muh ke ander simatne lagi. Kewal ek minute ki yah chhoti si ghatna thi... aur puri aag sama chuki thi. Astak, Dark universe ke sath-sath yah adbhut karnama pura Middle Universe dekh raha tha...


Fir to badal garje... Tej kadadkti bijliyan bhi gir rahi thi... Agle 10 minute tak tarah-tarah ke vayumandaliya energy se humla badastur jaari rahe... Lekin ye kamal ke naag dansh... Har vayumandaliya energy mano apne ander samati chali ja rahi thi...


Kadakti bilkul ki puri chhat hi giri thi lekin aise laga tha jaise wo chhat sar ke kayi fit upar hi ruk gayi ho aur kadakti chamchamati bijli ka bhi wahi hashar hua jo aag ka hua tha…


Naag dansh hawa me gol gol ghumane se aas paas ki samparkiya hawa mano koi majboot shuraksha ghera sa banaye thi, jisme kisi bhi prakar ki vayumandaliya energy prawesh nahi kar pati… Astak ke vansaj ki jo sabse badi takat thi usse matr 2 logon ne mil'kar dhul chata dee...


Fir to Ladai ke maidan me Astak vansaj ke ore se tarah-tarah ke prayog shuru ho chuke the, jo Jivisha aur Shwetna ke isharon ki gulaam thi... Jaise jaise wo apne naag dansh ko prayog karte unke ghatak se ghatak humle bhi barbaad ho ja rahi thi… Astak aur unke vansaj ke gurur bhi gol-gol ghum'kar usnke naag dansh me dum tod rahe the...


Nandni yahan ke high voltage action dekhti hui… "Kyon jalil Astak, tere pillon ke pass aur bhi kuchh joker'giri bachi hai, ya kuchh ghanton ke liye hum apni screen ko band karen... Taki jab tere in abhedi pillon ko hum yahan maar rahe hon, to tu unke marne ke viyog me hi na kahin mar jaye...


Nischal:- Areee Nandu kahan iss begairat ko heart attack aane wali hai... Abhi Universe me to lagbhag 2400 carore inke logon ki lash giri, fir bhi iske chehre par sikan tak na aayi...


Shwetna:- O commentator sar yahan ka pura prasaran balank karoge, taki ab hum apna kahar dikha sake...


Nischal:- Jaisa aap chaho malik... HuYu sara prasaran close karo... Jivisha vayumandaliya radio tarangon ko bhi rok do taki suchna prasaran natural tarike se bhi band ho jaye...





Idhar ye log humla karne ki soch hi rahe the utne me hi sabhi giants daud laga chuke the... Puri jagah hi kaanp gayi... 1 kilometer fasla hi kya tha unke liye... Aisa laga jaise ab to sabko kuchalne ki than kiye hon.. Apne hath ke gada numa bade aur vishal hathiyar chala'kar sabki leela hi samapt kar deni hai...


Idhar Nischal ki baat sun'kar Jivisha ne apna naag dansh ko anguthe me samet'kar, apne dono hath ka gola banati hui, usme suchna prasaran ki tarangon ko uss poore ilake se gayab kar dee. Lekin jab'tak Jivisha apne kaam me lagi hui thi, pura middle universe hi jaise aankh mund chuki thi… aur sabhi chillate huye Nischal, Nischal kar rahe the... Aur jab poore middle universe ki aankhen khuli, unke aage ka screen ja chuka tha... Sab ke sab suspence me... Aur yahan ladai ke maidan me sabke muh se nikla... Adbhut... Prasaran band hone ke sath hi Jivisha sabhi giants ko ek sath hawa me taang chuki thi...


Yah adbhut najara tha, jise aakhen faade sab dekhte rah gaye... Aur ab waqt tha javavi humle ka… "Sabko thodi dur dhakel'kar niche chhodo"… Shwetna chillayi aur Jivisha apni shakti hatayi... Sabhi giants hawa se niche gire, siway ek ke... Wo tha inka sena-nayak Javo..


Idhar Shwetna bhi bilkul taiyar, jaise hi Jivisha ne apni shakti hatayi aur wo niche gire, agle hi pal Shwetna apne naag dansh ko bhumi par maarti hui garji.…


"Surpmarich ke aavishkar paun me pahan'ne se, pahan'ne walon ko bhumigat nahi kiya ja sakta tha. Lekin uske iss bhed ko jan'ne ke baad, humne apna tarika hi badal diya aur ab hum kisi insan ko bhumigat karne ki nahi sochte, balki pura ilaka hi bhumigat kar dete hai.. Ab tum sab ho jao bhumigat, jahan niche tumhara samna pani se hoga, jiske ander tumhari shari shaktiyan dhari ki dhari rah jayengi".…


Shwetna itna kah'kar 2 baar apne naag dansh ko bhumi par jod se patki. Jabtak giants uth'kar fir se daudte, Nilbhut sainikon ne uss poore ilake ko, jis'par vansaj sena khadi thi, poori bhumi ko hi bhutal ke pani me kayi hazar feet neeche le gaye...


Jaise hi wo poora kshtr pani me duba... Jivisha hath badha'kar Nischal ko jhatke me uthayi aur usse khinchti hui, uske sine sine se ja lagi aur utni hi teji se Nischal ke honth se honth laga di...


Jivisha ke naram honth ka wo aanandmay sparsh aur Nischal ka chehra poora khil sa gaya... Apne dono hath se Jivisha ke dono gaal ko pakad'kar wo bhi pyar se chumne laga... Kayi dino ke pyase honth jab mile to dono ek dusre me kho'kar chumte rahe... Aaj na to najre mili thi aur na hi aankhon se kuchh ishare huye the… Shayad lambe arse ki ye tadap thi aur pahle Jivisha apni bhavnao ko rok nahi payi...


Jo haal dil ka idhar tha, wahi aag to Nischal ke sine me bhi lagi thi.... Ek lambi tadap… Judai ke lambe se arse ke baad yun to dono sath hi the, lekin pyar jatane ke pal kam hi mile the... Isliye aaj jab fursat ke pal mile, tab pahle honth mile aur bhavnayen to baad me swatah hi jaag gaye...


Jitni tadap ye dono apne sine me dabaye the, shayad utni hi jyada badla lene ki tadap Nilbhut samuday aur uski sardar Shwetna ke dil me bhi thi… Shwetna jo Nilbhut samuday ke 40 hazar masoom log aur lagbhag 1 lakh 60 hazar dirdh aayu ke masoom logon ke jinda chabaye jane ka dard sameti hui thi...


Shwetna jise Jivisha ki tarah hi yah baat pal-pal mehsus hota raha ki log kisi bhi karan se mar jate.… Lekin unki hi jamin par unke hi logon ko, aakar koi jinda chaba gaya…. Dil me asim pira jaga jati… tab to rah-rah kar ek hi khyal aata... Ghar... Wo ghar jahan log khud ko sabse jyada surakhit mehsus karte hain, wahin unke ghar me ghus'kar aisi himakat... Fir to yah ehsasa bhi dil me jaah uth'ta, kya chand mutthi bhar darindon ke samne na kewal ek rastr, balki ek pura grah ghutne tek chuka hai...


Yahi wo baaten thi jisne Jivisha ko vichlit kiya aur usse 5,6 din tak dhyan lagane par vivash kar gayi... Sok ki wahi lahar har Zoren niwasi ke dil me thi, lekin Shwetna khud yadi sok me hoti tab ye pura grah hi ek apang shashak Jatin ke jimme hota.


Karma... Shwetna apne kartvya se muh mod nahi sakti thi, isliye muskurati rahi aur ye ussi ke dil ki aag thi jise bujhane ke liye Astak ke vansaj khud yahan aa pahunche… apne karmon ki instant karma pane ke liye...


Shwetna ne black hole ki kahani prithvi par hi suni thi... Shwetna yah bhali-bhanti samjhi ki kaise aquatic medium me universe ke 2 mahan yoddha asahay ho gaye the. Aur yah aquatic medium na kewal Nilbhut samuday ke liye ek anukool medium tha, balki un adrishi janvaron ke liye bhi jo 15 se 20 fit ke bade janvar the.… Jiski kaali upri chamdi itni majboot thi ki metal ki tarah chamkti thi... Astak aur uske Vansaj ne to kisi process se abhed sharir paya hoga... Adrishi janvaron ka to poora natural skin tha...


Pani ke ander doobte hi sabhi vansaj sena satah par aane ki kosis karne lage, lekin 5 lakh ki tadat Nilbhut samuday ke liye mahaj mutthi bhar thi... Fir to vishalkay sharir ko ek sath itne saanp ne jakad liya ki unka pura badan saanp se dhak gaya....


Vishalkay sharir ki visheshta thi ki kitne saanp usse kyon na jakad le, aur bhale hi Astak vansaj pani me apni shakti na prayog kar paye... Fir bhi Nilbhut samuday wale unhe duba kar maar nahi sakte the aur naa hi unke skin ko bhed sakte the...


Kintu bade sharir ka khamiyaja yah tha ki uske naak aur pichhe se kayi hazar saanp uske pet ke ander ghus chuke the… Dil ko sukoon dene wala wo pal tha, jab sabhi vishalkay giant, pet, dimag aur badan ke har ang ki pira se chhatpata rahe the...


Lekin tej pira me wo chhatpatane ke alawa kuch kar bhi nahi sakte the, kyonki ek saanp dusre saanp ki punchh ko muh me daba'kar, kafi lambe saanp ka nirman kar bhi chuke the aur uski kundliyon ke bich poori tarah giants ka sarir jakda bhi ja chuka tha….


Koi bhi giant vansaj apna hath nahi hila pa rahe the. Muh khol'kar wo chillana to chahte the, lekin muh band tha... Aisa lag raha tha jaise, sar se lekar paun tak me poora palstic lapet diya gaya ho aur wo sab giants apne dard bhadi chinkh apne jahan me samete huye, bus apna kamar hila pa rahe the...


Unki aankhen fat'kar baahar aane ko thi... Badi aankhen bahar ko nikalti aur dard me dubi laal aankn. Sabhi giants apni aankhen poori takat se aise faila rahe the mano aankhon ke dayen aur bayen chhed kar'ke, tej-tej chinkh bahar nikalna chah rahe ho... Lekin in Nilbhut samuday ke logon ki darindgi... Har giants ki aankhen tab bahar chali aayi, jab saanp unke aankhon se hi ghusna shuru kar chuke the…


Aankhon ke kinare, dayen, bayen upar niche jin kono se ghusne ki jagah mil rahi thi, saanp ghus rahe the… Koi bhi saanp naa to aankhon ke bahar aa rahi retina ko phod rahe the aur na hi unke abhed palkon ko band hone de rahe the... Sabhi saanp apne tej daton ke bich sabhi giant vansajon ke palkon ko poori takat se upar khinche the... Unki palken aankhon ko pichhe palat'kar charrr ki awaj ke sath khinch rahi thi... Retina par saanp rengte huye kono se ghus rahe the... Dard itna haawi tha ki poori gati se chhatpatate huye giants bus yahi dua maang rahe the ki ab maar do lekin dard na do...


Giant jab asahay aur past ho gaye, tab bahari sarir ko sabhi saanpon ne chhod diya aur un saanpon ki madad karne pahunch gaye, jo chhote size ke vnasaj ko pakde huye the aur unke sharir ke ander chhote-chhote saanp ko ghusne me madad kar rahe the...


Ab tak wo sabhi vansaj kisi tarah apne samanya bahubal se saanpon ko roke huye the, lekin jaise hi 1 lakh badan ke upar ke saanp ne unka badan ke ore lapke, fir to bache huye 4 lakh astak vansaj ki bhi wahi haalat hui thi…. Unhe bhi lapet'kar pura pack kiya gaya tha aur dard jab beintahaan hua, fir to maut ki bikh ander hi ander wo sab bhi maang rahe the...


Kintu sabhi saanpon ne abhi to beinthaan dard diya tha, maut ki bhikh maangne wali dard. Abhi unko maut kahan diya tha… Unhe maut dene ke liye pahle giants vansaj ko dabocha Adrishi janvaron ne...


Size me bhale hi chhote the lekin... Dono hath, paun, aur sar ko viprit disha me jab hazaron ki sankhya me Adrishi jaanvar, ek sath mil'kar giants ke badan ko khichna shuru kiya... Fir to pol bhi khul gayi inke abhedi skin ki, jise bhed to nahi sakte the, lekin har ek ang ke bich itna khinchav paida karte chale gaye ki charrrr charrrr charrrr ki awaj ke sath unka badan Adrishi jaanvar ki jhund ne faad diya….


Berahmi se maut ka tandav takriban 1 ghante tak chalta raha. Nilbhut samuday wale jab wapas se poori jamin ko jab upar le'kar aaye... Fir to ek hi jagah par vansaj sena ke chithre huye badan ko jama kar rahe the... Wo dher itni dur me faila aur uncha tha ki, dur se jitne masoom log dekh pa rahe the, apne priyajano ke jane ka gum bhula rahe the... Khud me yakin sa ho chala tha apne satta aur shashan ke prati, ki sala koi aankh utha'kar humari jamin ko dekho to sahi.…


Haan lekin ek vansaj ab bhi bacha hua tha, aur wo tha Javo... Jiski maut ka pradarshan poore universe me karna tha aur dikhana tha ki Zoeren grah kisi se kamjor nahi…. Shwetna jab prasaran shuru karne ke liye Jivisha ke ore dekhi... "O Teri ye fevicol ka jod kab chipka"…


Ansh aur Nandni dono hanste huye.… "Jabse sabhi kamine pani me gaye the"…


Shwetna apni aakhen badi karti…. "Ek ghante se honth par hi atke hain… shudhh prem ek dusre ko mehsus karne wala... Main hoti to ab tak poore maze le chuki hoti... Aree koi jagao re dono ko"..


Ansh:- O madam ji abhi niche in par hi najar hai... Jarra sar utha'kar aakash me dekho upar kya ho raha hai.…


Shwetna ne jaise hi dhyan upar aakash me kee, aaschrya se uski aankhen badi ho gayi… muh khula ka khula rah gaya... "Ab ye kya hai?????"

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