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Update - 19
ab tak aapne dekha....A1ki apne shastro ko prapt karne k liye yatra shuru ho gayi hai ...
aur abhi raat ko apne ghar mein ek nakab posh ko dekhta hai......aur fir uska chera dekhkar hairan ho jaata ha.....
ab aageee....
Raat mein apne papa ko iss tarah dekh kar mein bada hairan tha......
tabhi muzhe aawaj aayi.......Bete apne papa ko aise chup chup kar nahi dekha karte ......yaha saamne aao ..
mein papa k saamne jaakar
--- Papa aap inn ..kapdo ..mein ...kaise kya...kar rahe ho .....aur aise choro ki tarah apne hi ghar mein .....
aakir aap jaun hooo .....kya sachaayi hai aapki......
R.V.S - arre ...arre ...arre beta thoda saans toh le.....ek saath itne sawal
aao meri study mein chal hai wahi baat karenge .....
mein papa k saath unke study room mein pahunch gaya.....
papa - baitho beta ...tumahare saare sawalo ka jawab milega...
beta jab Parmatma kisi ko kuch shaktiya deta hai toh usska iss sansar k prati kuch kartaya banta hai
beta Shaktiyo k saath jimmedaari bhi aajati hai ....
mein - papa kaun si shaktiya aur kaisi jimmedariya...
Fir papa muzhe 5 pidio pahle hamare purvaj dwara ki hui tapasya aur vardan mien unke pariwar ko mili hui teen shaktiyo k baare mein batate hai
muzhe unki baatopar vishwas nahi hua toh Papa ne ne hawa mein haath uper kiya aur apni aankhien band ki aur unke haatho mein pragat hui ek badi si talwar
uss laal rang ki roshni se chamkti hui talwar ko dekhkar mein bada hairan hua......
Papa - Beta yeh hai Sangharak ki khooni talwar ....jo hamesha apradhiyo k khoon ki pyasi rahti hai
Mein - Sangaharak .... kahi yeh RAW ka wahi agent toh nahi ...jiske baare mein baare kuch log sirf kahani maante hai kuch log hakkikat
papa - Haa beta wahi hai
mein - toh papa yeh Talwar aapke k paas kya kar rahi hai.....
Papa - Kyu ki beta mein hi hu woh
apradhiyo ka Bhakshak aur acche logo ka Rakshak SANGHARAK
aur yahi baat tumhe batane k liye hi aaj tumahare saamne iss bhesh mein aaya hu ....kyu ki ab tumahari training ka dusra safar shuru karne ka samay aagaya hai ....
Ab chalo itna kahkar papa ne apni aankhein band ki aur phir Apne normal kapdo mein aagaye
Ab mein Papa k saath apne Ghar k bbasement mein Jaha hamari Cars aur bikes Rakhi jaati thi
mein - papa yaha garrage mein kya hai ..hum yaha kyu aaye hai..
Papa beta thoda ruk jaao bas dekhte raho...
Phir papa waha ek diwar k paas pahunch gaye aur mera haath pakadkar ho gaye deewar k aar paar
mein hairani se papa ki aur dekhta hu
papa hairan hone ki jarurat kahi yeh koi deewar nahi just image thi ki dekh walo ko yaha sirf deewar dikhe aur kuch nahi ...
saamne ek glass ki bani hui lift thi ...
mein uss lift mein papa k saath ander chala gaya aur , pahuch gaya ek corridor mein jisske dono taraf kamre bane hue the
beta yeh rooms yaha rahenewalo k liye aur kuch rooms storerooom aur weapon rooms k liye use hote hai
uss laambe corridor se chalte chalte meine andaja lagaya tha ki yaha kam se kam 1000 rooms k lagbhag honge
aur phir hum pahunch gaye ek bade se hall mein jaha 5000 log aaram se rah sakte ho, waha chaaro taraf screen mein kuch videos chal rahi thi aur ..kareeb kareeb 1000 log waha ki monitoring kar rahe the
apne ghar k niche itna bada control room dekhkar hairaan ho gayaa..
Papa - yeh hai yaha ka control room , yaha se poori State ki gatividhiyo par najar rakhi jaati hai ....aur humare Desh mein jitne bhi mere agents hai issi k jariye muzhse connected rahte hai .. aur yeh saara system meri iss watch se......
abhi mein yeh sab soch raha tha ki
papa - beta kaha kho gaye abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai....ab papa ne apni watch mein kuch kiya tabhi waha ek aur lift aagayi aur uuke iariye hum pahunch gaye aur niche yaha ek bahut bada hall tha jaha kuch log....
advaced weapon aur fighting skills ki training kar rahe the....papa ko dekhkar sabhi ruk gaye .....aur unme se 5 ne aakar salute kiya ....
papa - beta yeh 5 hai yaha k best agents kal se yahi tumahari training shuru hogi....
mein - Par papa mein toh master se martial art ki training kar hi raha hu
papa - beta yaha tumhe fighting skills k saath saath computer programming aur hacking bhi sikhayi jaayegi...
tumne abhi tak kya sikha jara hum bhi dekhe ......toh jara ho jaaye do do haath innse.....
Mein - ji papa kyu nahi main bhi toh dekhu aapke top agents mein kitna dum hai
papa - toh bolo innmein se se kis ke saath lado ge
toh ussmein se ek ko meine chuna
jisski hieght 6.5ft k karreb thi
papa - Haaruk .... good choice....go on
ab shuru hua mukabla....
ab mein bhi savdhan ho gaya tabhi Haruk ne muzhe kisi bacche ki tarah kandhe par uthaya
aur patak diye ...jisse dekhkar Haruk woh 4 agents bahut khush hue....lekin abhi woh nahi jaante the kisse paala pada hai, tabhi maine mauka derkh kar ek jump maari aur Superman punch sidha Haruk k jabde par aur Aur Haruk dharashayi...
yeh sab itne jaldi hua k kisi ko bhi samz mein nahi aaya,
Papa - wah beta ..i am proud of you ...
Haruk ko ek punch mein dharashayi kar dena matlab ..ab tumhe martial art ke aage ki teaining ka samay aagaya hai......
aise hi ab papa muzhe ab khud hamare vansh ko virasat mein milne wali shaktiyon ko jagrit karne ka prashikshan de rahe the.......
aur computer science aur hacking bhi india k top most hackers se sikh raha tha.....
aap soch rahe honge k aise itne bade jagah ka ghar k niche nirman kaise hua ...toh bata du ...jo pahele bhi likh chuka hu ....jab hero ne Naina k garbh mein pravesh kiya tha toh mahaguru ne usski shaktiyo ka vibhajan kar diya tha...Iss mein jo Srijanatmak shakti
(creation power) Naina mien hi samahit ki gayi thi..... aur jab hero
5 yrs ka hua tha toh dheere Naina ki powers jaagne lag jaati hai jisse R.V.S aur mahaguru usse control karna sikhate hai.......aur issi power se iss basement ka nirman hua hai ....
yeh creation power aage kahani mein bahut kaam aayegi..
lekin abhi hero ko Apne mom k power k baare mein nahi pata...
ab din par din jaane kyu Meri aankon mein kuch badalne laga
aise hi ek din school k lunch time mein mein aur rimpy baithe baatein kar rahe the...
mein Accha rimpy aur baatao tumahari tech ki practice kaisi chal rahi hai ...
Rimpy -( man mein) haaye aaj kitba handsome lag raha hai lagta hai bas inn aankho mein kho jaau ....lekin yeh buddu toh kuch samazta hi nahi ...uff
nahi ..muzhe ye kya ho raha hai...
phir apni hi soch se sharmakar usne dono haatho se apna muh chupa liya..
mein sochne laga abhi iss pagal ladki ko kya ho gaya ...uff..hey ..bhagwan
innko samzna bhi bahut mushkil hai
tabhi muzhe kuch suzha ki yahi samay hai dekhne ka ki papa ki training kya rang laayi hai ..
Mein --Uff Rimpy jara dekho na meri aankon mein kuch chala gaya lagta hai.. ..dekho na vahut jal raha hai
meri baat sunkar woh jaldi se palti aur meri aankhon mein dekhkar funk maarne lagi..... tum bhi abhi kya karte ho ...dhyan nahi rakh sakte a...ab kaisa feel ho raha hai.
issi mauke ka fayda utha kar mien usski aakhon k jariye usske bhitar zhank k dekha toh sab jasn gaya jo woh soch rahi thi.......arre wah beta abhi chahat ka beej yaha bhi panaone laga hai.....abhi mein usski bhanavo ko padh hi rha tha ki ek sky blue colour ki roshni ne mere saamne aagayi......sochne laga ki yeh roshni Rimpy k bhiter kaise ...kaha se
tabhi Rimpy ne muzhe hilakr ...
Arre phir kho gaye.....Abhi tum apna ilaj karawo ....aaj kal baithe baithe jaane kaha kho jaate ho...
meine socha mera waham hoga baad mein papa se puch lunga,....tabhi mere dost log waha aagaye....
Bhanu -- kya baat hai yr aaj Lunch time k baad class mein kyu nahi aaye aur yaha akele baithe kya kar rahe the tum dono chalo abhi ghar bhi jasna hai ya yahi baithna hai...
Bhanu ki baat sunkar hum dono hairan ho gaye aur chal pade apne apne gahr...
Aise hi school..yoga...basement ..aur dosto k bich life chal rahi thi...kabhi kabhi Dadi dadi se milne aur mera dost aapko yaad hoga Vayau Ghoda se milne Gaon jaata tha....
Ritu di k kahne par abhi gaon mein bhi dadu ne college hospitals saari city jaisi saari suvidhaye kar di thi....
Virasat mein milne wali teen powers mein se do ko mein haasil kar chuka tha Mind- controlling aur wepon ...aur ab hacking mein bhi mein expert hone laga tha...
abhi k liye itna hi ..
agla update jald hi ---
ab tak aapne dekha....A1ki apne shastro ko prapt karne k liye yatra shuru ho gayi hai ...
aur abhi raat ko apne ghar mein ek nakab posh ko dekhta hai......aur fir uska chera dekhkar hairan ho jaata ha.....
ab aageee....
Raat mein apne papa ko iss tarah dekh kar mein bada hairan tha......
tabhi muzhe aawaj aayi.......Bete apne papa ko aise chup chup kar nahi dekha karte ......yaha saamne aao ..
mein papa k saamne jaakar
--- Papa aap inn ..kapdo ..mein ...kaise kya...kar rahe ho .....aur aise choro ki tarah apne hi ghar mein .....
aakir aap jaun hooo .....kya sachaayi hai aapki......
R.V.S - arre ...arre ...arre beta thoda saans toh le.....ek saath itne sawal
aao meri study mein chal hai wahi baat karenge .....
mein papa k saath unke study room mein pahunch gaya.....
papa - baitho beta ...tumahare saare sawalo ka jawab milega...
beta jab Parmatma kisi ko kuch shaktiya deta hai toh usska iss sansar k prati kuch kartaya banta hai
beta Shaktiyo k saath jimmedaari bhi aajati hai ....
mein - papa kaun si shaktiya aur kaisi jimmedariya...
Fir papa muzhe 5 pidio pahle hamare purvaj dwara ki hui tapasya aur vardan mien unke pariwar ko mili hui teen shaktiyo k baare mein batate hai
muzhe unki baatopar vishwas nahi hua toh Papa ne ne hawa mein haath uper kiya aur apni aankhien band ki aur unke haatho mein pragat hui ek badi si talwar
uss laal rang ki roshni se chamkti hui talwar ko dekhkar mein bada hairan hua......
Papa - Beta yeh hai Sangharak ki khooni talwar ....jo hamesha apradhiyo k khoon ki pyasi rahti hai
Mein - Sangaharak .... kahi yeh RAW ka wahi agent toh nahi ...jiske baare mein baare kuch log sirf kahani maante hai kuch log hakkikat
papa - Haa beta wahi hai
mein - toh papa yeh Talwar aapke k paas kya kar rahi hai.....
Papa - Kyu ki beta mein hi hu woh
apradhiyo ka Bhakshak aur acche logo ka Rakshak SANGHARAK
aur yahi baat tumhe batane k liye hi aaj tumahare saamne iss bhesh mein aaya hu ....kyu ki ab tumahari training ka dusra safar shuru karne ka samay aagaya hai ....
Ab chalo itna kahkar papa ne apni aankhein band ki aur phir Apne normal kapdo mein aagaye
Ab mein Papa k saath apne Ghar k bbasement mein Jaha hamari Cars aur bikes Rakhi jaati thi
mein - papa yaha garrage mein kya hai ..hum yaha kyu aaye hai..
Papa beta thoda ruk jaao bas dekhte raho...
Phir papa waha ek diwar k paas pahunch gaye aur mera haath pakadkar ho gaye deewar k aar paar
mein hairani se papa ki aur dekhta hu
papa hairan hone ki jarurat kahi yeh koi deewar nahi just image thi ki dekh walo ko yaha sirf deewar dikhe aur kuch nahi ...
saamne ek glass ki bani hui lift thi ...
mein uss lift mein papa k saath ander chala gaya aur , pahuch gaya ek corridor mein jisske dono taraf kamre bane hue the
beta yeh rooms yaha rahenewalo k liye aur kuch rooms storerooom aur weapon rooms k liye use hote hai
uss laambe corridor se chalte chalte meine andaja lagaya tha ki yaha kam se kam 1000 rooms k lagbhag honge
aur phir hum pahunch gaye ek bade se hall mein jaha 5000 log aaram se rah sakte ho, waha chaaro taraf screen mein kuch videos chal rahi thi aur ..kareeb kareeb 1000 log waha ki monitoring kar rahe the
apne ghar k niche itna bada control room dekhkar hairaan ho gayaa..
Papa - yeh hai yaha ka control room , yaha se poori State ki gatividhiyo par najar rakhi jaati hai ....aur humare Desh mein jitne bhi mere agents hai issi k jariye muzhse connected rahte hai .. aur yeh saara system meri iss watch se......
abhi mein yeh sab soch raha tha ki
papa - beta kaha kho gaye abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai....ab papa ne apni watch mein kuch kiya tabhi waha ek aur lift aagayi aur uuke iariye hum pahunch gaye aur niche yaha ek bahut bada hall tha jaha kuch log....
advaced weapon aur fighting skills ki training kar rahe the....papa ko dekhkar sabhi ruk gaye .....aur unme se 5 ne aakar salute kiya ....
papa - beta yeh 5 hai yaha k best agents kal se yahi tumahari training shuru hogi....
mein - Par papa mein toh master se martial art ki training kar hi raha hu
papa - beta yaha tumhe fighting skills k saath saath computer programming aur hacking bhi sikhayi jaayegi...
tumne abhi tak kya sikha jara hum bhi dekhe ......toh jara ho jaaye do do haath innse.....
Mein - ji papa kyu nahi main bhi toh dekhu aapke top agents mein kitna dum hai
papa - toh bolo innmein se se kis ke saath lado ge
toh ussmein se ek ko meine chuna
jisski hieght 6.5ft k karreb thi
papa - Haaruk .... good choice....go on
ab shuru hua mukabla....
ab mein bhi savdhan ho gaya tabhi Haruk ne muzhe kisi bacche ki tarah kandhe par uthaya
aur patak diye ...jisse dekhkar Haruk woh 4 agents bahut khush hue....lekin abhi woh nahi jaante the kisse paala pada hai, tabhi maine mauka derkh kar ek jump maari aur Superman punch sidha Haruk k jabde par aur Aur Haruk dharashayi...
yeh sab itne jaldi hua k kisi ko bhi samz mein nahi aaya,
Papa - wah beta ..i am proud of you ...
Haruk ko ek punch mein dharashayi kar dena matlab ..ab tumhe martial art ke aage ki teaining ka samay aagaya hai......
aise hi ab papa muzhe ab khud hamare vansh ko virasat mein milne wali shaktiyon ko jagrit karne ka prashikshan de rahe the.......
aur computer science aur hacking bhi india k top most hackers se sikh raha tha.....
aap soch rahe honge k aise itne bade jagah ka ghar k niche nirman kaise hua ...toh bata du ...jo pahele bhi likh chuka hu ....jab hero ne Naina k garbh mein pravesh kiya tha toh mahaguru ne usski shaktiyo ka vibhajan kar diya tha...Iss mein jo Srijanatmak shakti
(creation power) Naina mien hi samahit ki gayi thi..... aur jab hero
5 yrs ka hua tha toh dheere Naina ki powers jaagne lag jaati hai jisse R.V.S aur mahaguru usse control karna sikhate hai.......aur issi power se iss basement ka nirman hua hai ....
yeh creation power aage kahani mein bahut kaam aayegi..
lekin abhi hero ko Apne mom k power k baare mein nahi pata...
ab din par din jaane kyu Meri aankon mein kuch badalne laga
aise hi ek din school k lunch time mein mein aur rimpy baithe baatein kar rahe the...
mein Accha rimpy aur baatao tumahari tech ki practice kaisi chal rahi hai ...
Rimpy -( man mein) haaye aaj kitba handsome lag raha hai lagta hai bas inn aankho mein kho jaau ....lekin yeh buddu toh kuch samazta hi nahi ...uff
nahi ..muzhe ye kya ho raha hai...
phir apni hi soch se sharmakar usne dono haatho se apna muh chupa liya..
mein sochne laga abhi iss pagal ladki ko kya ho gaya ...uff..hey ..bhagwan
innko samzna bhi bahut mushkil hai
tabhi muzhe kuch suzha ki yahi samay hai dekhne ka ki papa ki training kya rang laayi hai ..
Mein --Uff Rimpy jara dekho na meri aankon mein kuch chala gaya lagta hai.. ..dekho na vahut jal raha hai
meri baat sunkar woh jaldi se palti aur meri aankhon mein dekhkar funk maarne lagi..... tum bhi abhi kya karte ho ...dhyan nahi rakh sakte a...ab kaisa feel ho raha hai.
issi mauke ka fayda utha kar mien usski aakhon k jariye usske bhitar zhank k dekha toh sab jasn gaya jo woh soch rahi thi.......arre wah beta abhi chahat ka beej yaha bhi panaone laga hai.....abhi mein usski bhanavo ko padh hi rha tha ki ek sky blue colour ki roshni ne mere saamne aagayi......sochne laga ki yeh roshni Rimpy k bhiter kaise ...kaha se
tabhi Rimpy ne muzhe hilakr ...
Arre phir kho gaye.....Abhi tum apna ilaj karawo ....aaj kal baithe baithe jaane kaha kho jaate ho...
meine socha mera waham hoga baad mein papa se puch lunga,....tabhi mere dost log waha aagaye....
Bhanu -- kya baat hai yr aaj Lunch time k baad class mein kyu nahi aaye aur yaha akele baithe kya kar rahe the tum dono chalo abhi ghar bhi jasna hai ya yahi baithna hai...
Bhanu ki baat sunkar hum dono hairan ho gaye aur chal pade apne apne gahr...
Aise hi school..yoga...basement ..aur dosto k bich life chal rahi thi...kabhi kabhi Dadi dadi se milne aur mera dost aapko yaad hoga Vayau Ghoda se milne Gaon jaata tha....
Ritu di k kahne par abhi gaon mein bhi dadu ne college hospitals saari city jaisi saari suvidhaye kar di thi....
Virasat mein milne wali teen powers mein se do ko mein haasil kar chuka tha Mind- controlling aur wepon ...aur ab hacking mein bhi mein expert hone laga tha...
abhi k liye itna hi ..
agla update jald hi ---
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Bahut bahut dhnyawad bhai aapke appreciation aur support ka aur iss shandar review ka, ??????
aise hi aapka saath bana rahe bhai
kahani mein hero ki 14 heroine mein se hi hai Shalu , Rimpy aur Madalsa..
new update 19 posted
Arjun Singh 72
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Nice update
Raw bhi join kar hi Pega jald hi lakin ye teen power bhi mil hi than
Keep posting
Raw bhi join kar hi Pega jald hi lakin ye teen power bhi mil hi than
Keep posting
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wah naina ji kya shandar review diya hai aapne....so a1 nikal pada apne naye lakshya ke aur....
sorry writer sahab par ek pal liye toh shocked mein chali gayi thi ki rimpy bhuk lagne par boy friend mangti hai khane ke ko yani bf Khati hai
Actually breakfast mangti hai
hmm yeh hero ke dad ninja look mein kyun ?
Khair let's see what happens next week
Brilliant update..... Great going
??bukh lagne par bf ..waise khyal accha hai ??
hero k dad k baare mein pahle hi bataa chuka hu kuch iss agle update mein raaz khulega...
aise hi apna wonderful saath banaye rahe..
new update - 19 posted..
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Shukriya bhai aapke saath aur pyar k liye ????
aap aise hi apna saath banaye rakhe ....mein apni puri koshish karunga roz 2 ya 3 update dene ki...
new update - 19 posted...
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Thank you soo much bhai aapke shandar Reviw aur comment k liye ...???
haa bhi Raw joining ki baat agge kahani mein aayegi...
aise hi apna saath banaye rakhe
newupdate -19 posted...
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Aap sabhi friends ka kahani par banne rahne k liye aur pyar k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad
aise hi aapka pyar aur saath bana rahe...????new update - 19 posted...