Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[Vickey1211]

Update - 17

abhi tak aapne Abhi k school ki kuch zhalkiya dekhi...ab aage

Arre abhi tak apne hero ki entry kaise hoti hai school mein woh toh bataya hi nahi...

school k gate k aage teen gadiya aakar rukti hai...jinme se aage aur piche Black Bolero aur centre mein thi Rolls royce phentom

aage aur piche gaadiyo se pahele Gaurds utre aur unme se ek ne
Car ka gate khola aur usme se.....nikli ....Ri.......mpy...arre yeh toh Rimpy k gadyion ka kaafila hai, toh apna hero kaha hai....
in teen gadiyo k piche ek safed Fiet thi jisme hamara hero apni di k saath baitha tha...

Ritu aur Abhi ko jyada dikhawa achha nahi lagta.....nahi toh jinke paas 10 private jet ho unko gaddiyo ki kya kami...
aaj jaldi school pahunch gaye the..
Ritu abhi ko Bhanu k paas chodkar apne class room chali gayi

jaise hi Abhi class room jane laga toh class room k bahar Rimpy ko dekha toh khush ho gaya... aur usse milne k liye aage bada tabhi piche se kisi ne sir par jor se tapli bajaayi.....chatak ...Abhi aage jaise hi girnewala hota hai tabhi ek ladka usse pakad leta hai......
yeh dekhkar Rimpy hasne lagti hai

Rimpy - ae fatichar ...jara dekho toh isse ....jaane kaise kaise yaha muh uthakar chale aate hai......

yeh tapli bajane wala Golu tha waha k under world don ka beta issiliye jyada aakadta tha...

Golu - kyu be kal se dekh raha hu Rimpy se friendship karne k chakkar mein hai.....ab agar aise kiya na toh dekh le...

tabhi jiss ladke ne Abhi ko girne se bachaya (Sameer) yeh waha k
DSP Sudir ka beta hai jo apradhio k liye maut se kam nahi

Sameer - oye mote ...golu sudhar jaa nahi toh tu mera gussa jaanta hai
( isne kai baar golu ki pitayi ki thi)
ab agar dubara tune aise kiya toh dekh le....aao dost tum aaj se mere paas baithna...

Abhi ko dukh Rimpy ki baaton ka tha

Sameer ne apni bench par se do students ko Abhi aur Bhanu ki jagah bitha diya aur sabse aage wali 1st row mein baith gaya.

Rimpy k liye golu ne aage wali seat par jagah 2 row mein jagah banayi ..

aise hi class chalte rahi din bitate daye ab Abhi Bilkul bhi Rimpy ki taraf nahi sekhta tha , Rimpy ko bhi apni galti ka thoda ahsas ho gaya tha...
woh abhi se baat karna chati thi lekin Abhi usse ignore kar deta tha

Yaha R.V.S ne kuch din se apne bete ko khoya khoya dekha toh apni shaktiyo ka istemal karke usske mann mein zhankne ki koshis ki....lekin nahi jaan paaya... Ritu ne bhi bahut baar pucha lekin .....kuch nahi di kahkar
Abhi baat ko taal deta tha......

Lekin jab Abhi apni nanhi Pari Adira k saath hota tha toh sab kuch bhul jaata tha aur bas usske saath khub khelta tha .....Addu bhi aone bhai ko apne paas dekhkar bahut khush hoti thi aur jab tak Abhi usse thapki dekar sula na de tab tak soti nahi thi.....

ek din R.V.S - kya baat hai beta aajkal tum kahs khoye rahte ho

Abhi -- Kuch nahi hua papa.......
(phir kuch sochte hue)..muzhe strong
banna hai ....

Maa - Abhi ko goad mein bithate hue
arre wah mera betu toh ab bada ho gaya hai .....strong banne ga..
phir kya karega betu

Abhi - ( kuch sochte hue).....mein ....mom ...mein na strong bankar bure logo ko punish karunga

maa -- accha betu ....thik hai

Phir R.V.S ne Abhi k liye Ek master appoint kiya jo specially Trained tha Har tarah k fights mein daksh tha
MASTER SANGRAM..
ab shuru hui abhi ki phsyical training aur fight practice.....

ab Abhi ki life bahut busy ho gayi thi.
Subah yoga ,exercise, phir school, phir tution class jo ghar par hi hoti thi aur sham ko martial arts ki traning ...

aise hi Abhi ka yeh saal beet gaya, School mein abhi sirf Sameer aur Raghu se hi baat karta tha......

Rimpy ko Abhi ki yeh ignorance bahut takleef pahuchane lagi ...lekin abhi bhi Raghu ,aur Sameer k alwa aur koi Abhi k baare mein nahi jaanta tha ki yeh school inhi ka hai aur yeh India k top most Business man ka beta hai

aise hi Abhi ka janamdin bhi aaya..
R.V.S ne bahut badi party rakhi..
apne sabhi rishtedaaro ko bulaya ....desh k bade bade logo ko ...netao ko bhi bulaya.....

Pura Abhi Mansion sajaya gaya...
Abhi aaj bahut khush tha gaon se dada dadi jo aaye the .......bua....massi, chaha & family, nana, nani,saare cosins abhi party shuru honewali thi
Maa muzhe party k liye tayar karne k liye aai ... muzhe suit baht pasand aaye tha ...mom ne bataya di ne hi mere liye select kiya hua tha

Black colour ka Jodhpuri suit jisske button k jagah Daimonds lage hue tha aur saath mein rajkumaro wala royal necklace...
jab mein tayar hoke apne aap ko shishe mein dekha toh toh dang rah gaya
Niche guest ka aana shuru ho taya tha
sab ka dhyan tha stage par




jo kuch iss tarah se sajaya tha ...tabhi lights off hui aur stage par bachpan se lekar ab tak ki meri pic ki film chalne lagi ...phir aayi ek awaaj
.....Every one clap your hand .....
here the birthday comes Aur ek focus light muzhe saath lekar stage par aagayi ...Tabhi Gunji meri pyari di ki Aawaj ......Happy birthday to you mere betu .....aur gunja ek gaana
Baar - baar din ye aaye (the famose song for birthday)

Aur saari lights on ho gayi ..tabhi meri nazar saamne gayai jaha do aankhien aisi thi jinn mein aansoo thien...

Cake kata aur shuru hua gifts ka sislia
tabhi papa -- aayiye Home minister sahab yeh mera beya abhi

Hm - Happy birthday beta.....arre beti Rimpy gift do abhi ko....
Arre tumahari aankon mein yeh aansoo kyu hai....

R.V.S - Kya hua beta , kisi ne kuch kaha kya

H.M - Nahi bhai sahab woh baat yeh hai k aaj Rimpy ka bhi birthday hai lekin 3saal pahele ek accident mein issi din iski maa ki death ho gayi thi..
tab se yeh apna birthday nahi manati hai
waise aaj hum kahi jaate bhi nahi lekin aapne bulaya toh nahi taal sake Tabhi mom ne pyar se Rimpy k si r par haath phera

mom- arre beta aise dukhi mat ho dekho aaj se muzhe apni mom hi samzho .....aao mera bachha
Maa k iss tarah pukarne se Rimpy ka rona fut pada aur mom k gale lagkar fut futkar rone lagi...

jaane kyu usska dard dekhkar mera bhi dil ro raha tha ...leikin waha aisa bharri mahol dekhkar muzhe kuch sujzha aur mein bol utha ...

mein - yeh Rondu ladki Rimpu...
rote hi rahegi yaa mera gift bhi dogi

ussne aansoo bhari aankon se meri taraf hairani se dekha... aur gift muzhe diya ....toh maine bhi cake ka ek tukda utha kar usko khliya jisse woh bahut khush ho gayi....lekin cake k saath saath meri ungli bhi kaat li jungli billi kahi ki.....aur phir hasne lagi
aise hui hamari dosti aise hi party celebration chalta raha....aur ab Rimpy bhi hum baccha party mein shamil ho gayi khub dum dhaam k baad party khatam hui toh maine bhi apni ek gold chain Rimpy ko jabardusti birthday gift k roop mein diya.....toh bahut khush hui aur aise hi party khatam hui....

abhi k liye itna hi...
agla update raat ko ....

Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gyA

 

[aditya]

Awesome update

 

[Shurya dev]

Lajawab update hai bhai

 

[Naina]

Bahot hi shandar starting ki hai ju ne story ki....
narrations aur language ki pakad kaafi majbut hain...... masterpiece story line with awesome writing skill....
Thank you abhi ji ish kahani ko yahan likhne ke liye......

 

[Avir]

Waiting next

 

[ashish_1982_in]

nice update bhai

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Lovely update

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 18

abhi tak aapne abhi aur Rimpy k friendship ki shuruwat dekhi
....aur abhi ki traning ...
ab aage....

ab chalte hai aur dekhte hai Mahaguru k aashram mein apna dusra Abhi A1 kya kar raha hai

yaha A1 ne itne dino mein panch tatvo ki shaki mein se Vayau sahakti ko contorl kar liya tha , ab usski gati acharay Pawan se bhi badh gayi thi..
vaayu shakti k naye naye proyag jaise tufaan aur bawander ka nirman karna woh sikh chuka tha......
Shastro mein Dhanur vidya mein bhi parangat ho gaya tha lekin abhi bhi abhyas ki thodi jarurat thi ..
ab roj shiksha k baad pahle apne dosto k saath shastra vidya ka abhyas aur baad mein Shalini (Shalu) k saath sarowar par baatien karna,
aur saath saath dhyan bhi karna
ab Mahaguru ne Acharya Bhaumesh k dwara Prithvi tatva ki shakti ka abhyas shuru kar diya tha
yaha Shalu bhi rasayan vidya aur prithvi tatva ka abhyas kar rahi thi aur ussme kafi acchi bhi ho gayi thi
(iss shakti mein vyakti jab chahe pritvi se koi bhi vanaspati pragat kar sakta tha , aur parvat k saman shir aur bhari ho sakta hai )
Rakesh raath ko dhyan ki kuch gupt vidya Abhi ko batane laga jisse abhi aur shigrata se sikhne laga..

aise hi ek din abhi prithvi tatva ka abhyas kar raha tha tabhi usne mehsus hua ki koi majbut si raasi se koi usse jakad raha hai...
tabhi usne aankhein kholi toh dekha
ki woh koi rassiya nahi hai jameen se nikli hue bel hai jo Abhi ko jakad rahi hai....jab abhi ne idhar udhar dekha toh ...dekha ki Uday ki haatho se yellow rang ki kirane nikal rahi thi..
aur woh meri taraf dekh kar haas raha tha......
mein usse apni dusri shaktiyo se ussko sabak sikha sakta tha ...lekin usse issi shakti se harane k vichar se maine pahle apne mann ko kendrit kiya au mooladhar chakra ka dhyan kiya jo prithvi tatva ka kendra hai ....tabhi mera sharir bhi peeli roshni se chamakne laga..... aur jin belo ne muzhe jakad kar rakha tha unse mein aazad ho gaya ......aur unhi bello se Uday ko baandhkar ped se ulta latka diya......tabhi waha aacharya Bhaumesh waha Shalu aur C.T k saath aaye ....
arre putra chod do Uday ko mere ki kahne par yeh tumhe parakne aaya tha......ab tumhe prithvi tatva ke root ka pata chal gaya hai.... bahut acche

Tabhi Mahaguru ne bulawa bheja

Meine unnke paas jaakar pahle pranam kiya...

Mahaguru - bahut acche putra ... aaj tumne manav sharir mein urja k kemdra ko pehchana .....agar inn chakro nein tum dhanyn karke jagaaogi toh jald hi paanch tatvo ki shaki par tum control kar loge...

mein - parantu gurudev ...yeh kaise pata chalega ... kaunse tatva k liye kaunsa chakra hai..

Maha guru - toh aaj jaise tumhe pata chala ki tumhe ...mooladhar mein hi dhyan karna hai...

mein .... Gurudev muzhe mere bhiter se hi aawaj aayi thi ....

Mahaguru - Lagta hai putr tum hamare shiksha se alag bhi kuch kriya karte ho ...

mein - nahi guru dev mein toh sirf Raat ko thode der Rakesh k saath dhyan kar raha hu
meri baat sunkar Mahaguru muskuraye......aur saari baatein samaz gaye
( Mahaguru mann mein -- lagta hai ansh ko apne poorna swarup se milne ki kuch jyada hi jaldi hai)
Dhyan rahe putra yeh tumahare Manomay kosh ki aawaj hai jo jaagrit hone jaa raha hai

Phir mahaguru ne muzhe alag alg chako mein dhyan ki vidhi batayi

aise hi samay gujarta chala gaya aur Abhi 12 varsh ka ho gaya
ab Abhi ne Paanch tatvo aur usse sambandhit shastro aur vidya ki siddhiya puri ho gayi thi

aur saath hi saath uske dost bhi kuch vidyao mein safal ho gaye the
C.T -Vayau shakti
Shalu aur Uday - prithvi shakti
Rakesh - yeh toh hero ki shaktiyo mei se ek hai
Agnivesh - Agni

itne varsho mein Uday bhi ab Abhi ka mitra ban gaya tha... aur innka ek accha sa group tayyar ho gaya tha

Maha guru - putra ab tumne panch tatva ( 5 elements) ki shaktiya toh prapt kar li ab baari hai usnsse jude hue shastro ki jisski khoj tumhe karne jaana gai
tumhe prithvi tatva ko dharan karnewali Bhim ki Gada jo unke swarg jaane se pahele ...gandhmaadan parvat par kahi chodi hai woh laani hai
(dhyan rahe teh sab kalpanik hai)

dusri Jal tatva ki prateen varunastra aur talwar tumhe Maansarover mein milega

Teesra agni tatva ka prateek aagniban aur shool tumhe Prithvi k uttar disha mein jwalamuki parvat mein milega

4 th vyauastra aur chakra tumhe

aur 5th aakash tatva ka prateek Vyomaastra aur trishul

tumhe dhundne hai ....aur isske liye tumahare paas jyada samay nahi

tabhu Shalu ander aate hue.....
Tum chinta mat karo Abhi hum sabhi bhi saath chalenge..

Mahaguru - nahi ..putri yeh yaatra isski akele ki hai ...

mein - thik hai gurudev ....kai subah hi mein apni yaatra ka prambh karunga

aur phir nikal pada Shalu k saath sariver par ....aaj hum dono chup baithe the ....dono mein se koi baat nahi kar raha tha......itne barso se ek din bhi hum bina mule nahi rahe
ab muzhe apne lakshya ki aur badne k liye jaana pad raha tha toh kych ajeeb laga raha tha

mein - Shalu kya hua kuch toh bolo

Shalu - kya bolu mein ...tum toh jaa rahe ho na ....ab mein kaise ..

tabhi maine ysse rokte hue tum itns mat socho Shalu aakhir muzhe bhi oh aapne jeewan ka laksya pata karna hai

aue phir mein vachan deta hu ki mein laut kar jarur aaunga....
phir mere bahut jor dene par Shalu waha se apne kutiya mein chali gayi

aur mein aasmaan ko dekhte dekhte
aise hi wha baithe baithe kab raat guzar gayi kuch pata hi nahi chala hum

phir mein subah subah Mahaguru ka aashirwad liya aur nikal pada apni yatra par...

ab dekhte hai R.V.S k paas jo rac
vi hai woh kya kar raha hai
Abhi aur usske dost ab ,7th class paas karke 8th mein pahuch gaye the

yaha bhi abhi martial art ki training mein perfect ban gaya tha
Aur Rimpy Science and technilogy ki master ...
aaj highschool ka pahla din tha ki tabhi Abhi mansion k bahar 3 Gadiya aakar ruki jinmein se do gaurds ki thi aur ek rimpy kiander aate hi

Rimpy - Maa ...maa jaldi se bf do na bahut bhukh lagi hai
( haaji abhi k janamdin wali party se hi Rimpy ka yeh niyam ban gaya tha k subah ka bf aur school jana humare saath hi ho gaya tha)
itne servants k hote hue bhi subah ka bf mom apne hai haato se karati thi

didu ab college jaane lagi thi
Aur cute Adira bhi bahut shaitan ho gayi thi... bina muzhse choclate ki rishwat liye School nahi jaati thi

school mein sameer aur Raghu ab mere jigri ban gaye the

Aur Rimpy aur Sameer k samzhane par Golu ab muzhse fur rahata tha

mere 12th birthday k baad ek din raat ko muzhe jab pyas lagi tab mein kitchen jaa hi raha thi...ki tab muzhe gharki terrece se niche aate hue ek saaya dekha...

mein bhi chupkar dekhne laga toh diha k ek nakab posh tha, jisne black colur ka leather suit pehna tha aur do Talwarien pith par bandhi hui thi...maine sochs k koi chor hai...
jaise hi mein ussko pakad ne liye aage bada lekin rabhi us mask man ne apna mask utara toh mein dekhkar bahut hairan ho gaya kyu ki mask haatne par jo chehra sammne aaya tha woh aur koi nahi Papa ka tha.....
apne pita ko aise bhesh mein dekhkar mein bada hi hairaan hua.

Aaj k liye itna hi agla update kal
..........

 

[abhi1008]

Very nice update

Super fantastic update bhai

Thankyou so much friends for reading & comment???

keep reading ,and stay connected......

new update - 18 posted..

 

[abhi1008]

Bahot hi shandar starting ki hai ju ne story ki....
narrations aur language ki pakad kaafi majbut hain...... masterpiece story line with awesome writing skill....
Thank you abhi ji ish kahani ko yahan likhne ke liye......

Bahut bahut dhanyawad ..
Naina ji jo aapne itna accha appreciate kiya..?????

Aise hi aaka saath bana rahe ..mein aur prayas karunga iss kahani ko aur behter bannane k liye.....

new update - 18 posted...