Sci-FI A Forty Light Years Away

[DesiPriyaRai]

Bahot accha tha update thoda chhota laga mujhe shuru hote hi khatam ho gaya khair dekhte hai humara hero suit pahankar kaha jaane ki taiyaari me hai ​

Thank you for valuable feedback. Aage se update ke length proper dene ka try krungi

 

[DesiPriyaRai]

Congrats nayi story k liye ye lo badka dil

Thank you

 

[Raj_sharma]

पाठकों से जुड़िए, उनसे कहानी को लेकर संवाद कीजिए, खुलकर चर्चा कीजिए।
जो भी समीक्षाएँ आएँ, उन पर विचार करें और उन्हें बातचीत का हिस्सा बनाएँ।
उम्मीद है कि इस कहानी को अच्छा प्रतिसाद मिलेगा और पाठकों को एक बेहतरीन रचना पढ़ने को मिले।

Ee sala itna samajhdaar kabse hua be Avaran ?

 

[Raj_sharma]

Muje devnagari me read krna jyada pasnd he, aur jitna mene forum ke comment read kiye he us hisab se horror, thriller and adventure based story me log devnagari jayda pasand kr rahe the

Fir qpun ki story se kya dusmqni hai priye? Wo bhi to devanagari me hi hain?

 

[Raj_sharma]

Ok, agar reader ki jayada request aayi to fir me update ka sochungi..

Agar hinglish me aaya to apun gayab samjho, fir bhi tumhare liye ek aadh review to chemp hi dunga Dil ke hatho majboor jo hu

 

[DesiPriyaRai]

Fir qpun ki story se kya dusmqni hai priye? Wo bhi to devanagari me hi hain?

Kyu Qatil Raat regular read kr rhi hu, ha suprime mene continue nahi ki

 

[DesiPriyaRai]

Agar hinglish me aaya to apun gayab samjho, fir bhi tumhare liye ek aadh review to chemp hi dunga Dil ke hatho majboor jo hu

Nahi aane wali

 

[Raj_sharma]

Sach bolu to me khud surprise tha ke tumne sci-fi category choose ki hai.. mujhe laga koi romantic story likhogi... Vese abhi ek ladka likh raha hai romantic story hai, achi hai

Wo kya jaane ishq mohabbat,
Pyar wafa sabke baska nahi,
Hum pyar me jeene walo se,
Uska koi vaasta nahi, ye pyar nahi aasaan sahib, hum pyar me jeete marte, ye pyar aise shay hai pyare,
Ke pal pal aahe bharte hain.

 

[Raj_sharma]

Kyu Qatil Raat regular read kr rhi hu, ha suprime mene continue nahi ki

Katil raat ka dekho, last review ab diya hai, us se pahle 6th update pe diya tha

 

[Raj_sharma]

Nahi aane wali

Okey