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Chapter 18: Parinaam





Zumm!



'Ow! Hell, aisa laga jaise mai mar hi jaaunga,' ek sipahi ne khud se kaha, jab uske baayein kaan se khoon ki ek patli dhaar tapak rahi thi. Use abhi bhi ek humming sound sunayi de rahi thi, aur use imbalance ke saath-saath blurred vision bhi feel ho raha tha.



"Rohan! Rohan! Arre, idhar dekh!" ek kam zakhmi sipahi ne apne teammate ko chilla kar kaha, jo zameen par behoshi ki haalat mein pada tha aur uske muh aur kaano se khoon nikal raha tha.



"Oye bhai, tu theek hai na?" us sipahi ne Rohan ki taraf dekhte hue poocha.



"Cough, cough. Ah! Main theek hoon, Arjun. Bas thoda time chahiye is shock se recover hone ke liye," Rohan ne kamzor awaaz aur pale chehre ke saath kaha.



Aryan ke baaki sipahiyon ka bhi yahi haal tha. Aadhe to Rakshak Philip ke sacrifice se theek pehle usse lad rahe the, isliye unhpar is dhamake ka sabse zyada asar hua tha.



11 logon ke group mein se, 5 poori tarah thak chuke the, par unhe chote-mote zakhm hi lage the. Aryan bhi unmein se ek tha. Baakiyon ko andaruni chotein aayi thi, par koi bhi zyada serious nahi tha.



Unhe bas kuch din aaram ki zaroorat thi aur woh poori tarah theek ho jayege.



"Us bande ne to sach mein mujhe dara hi diya tha! Thaka hua hone ke bawajood bhi, woh humein itna nuksaan pahuncha gya," Commander Pratap ne apni aankhein chhoti karte hue kaha. Woh group mein sabse zyada zakhmi logon mein se ek tha aur jo kuch hua tha usse shocked tha.



'Hmm, ye sach mein bahut bura tha. Ummeed karta hoon ki future mein aise dushman se paala na pade,' Aryan ne khud se socha. Uski Amar Jisam defence technique bhi is dhamake se hone wale nuksaan ko jhel nahi paayi thi, jiske chalte uske fate hue kapdon ke beech se kai zakham dikhayi de rahe the.



"Tum sab, jitna ho sake aaram karo. Hum kal tak yahan rukenge. Uske baad, hum Portland City wapas chalenge. Main tumhe is ladai ke liye baki rewards bhi baad mein dunga," Aryan ne sabhi sipahiyon se oonchi awaaz mein kaha.

Ye sunkar, sabhi das log khush ho gaye ki unhe aaram karne ka time milega aur rewards bhi milenge.



Loot Ka Waqt



Aryan ke sipahi dheere-dheere recover ho rahe the, lekin Aryan un teen laashon ki taraf chal diya jo zameen pe giri padhi thi. Woh sabse pehle Darshan Sekhawat ki be-sir body ke paas gaya, jo wahan bane gaadhe se kuch feet ki doori par paadi huyi thi. Jab Aryan ne usee gaur se dekha, to Darshan ke daayein haath ki ek ungli mein usee ek silver ring dikhi. Ye uski spatial ring thi!



Is duniya mein kai tarah ki spatial rings hoti thi, par unke beech main farak unki storage volume ka hota tha. Lekin, kam capacity wali rings bhi is Central Continent ke region mein rare items mani jaati hai.



Generally, is region ki badi noble families ke bachchon ke alawa, aisi cheezein sirf 5th stage ke user, General Spiritual, ya uske upar ke cultivators ke paas hi dekhi jaati hai. Kyunki low level wale aisi ring khreed hi nahi paate the.



Halaanki, aise 'item' ko naye-naye General Spiritual Stage mein enter karne wale logon ke paas dekhna itna common nahi tha, aur kai cultivators ko ek kharidne mein saalon lag jaate the.



Khair, Aryan ne baaki do bodies ko bhi check kiya, par wahan koi spatial ring nahi thi. Mujhe laga hi thaa... Ye dono to bas Sekhawat khandaan ke subordinates the aur Level 41 aur 42 par the,' Aryan ne unhe check karte hue socha. Wahan sirf kuch darjan low-grade crystals se bhare bags the, kuch bhi aisa nahi tha jo uski aankhon mein chamak laa paata.



Phir woh Raksha Philip ke sacrifice se bane gaadhe ki taraf gaya aur wahan bache hue kuch avsehsho ko dhoondhne laga. Woh aisa isliye kar raha tha kyunki kam level ki rings ki bhi excellent resistance hoti thi aur woh yahan hue explosion jaise dhamake mein barbaad nahi hoti thi.



Aryan jab waterfall ke kareeb pahuncha toh usee kuch chamakta hua dikha. Woh ek spatial ring thi! Jaisa socha tha vaisa hi paeya. Mujhe laga hi tha ke is Philip ke pass spatial ring toh hogi hi.



Dono rings ko uthakar Aryan waterfall ke paas ek patthar par baith gaya aur rings ko check karne laga. Ye karna mushkil nahi tha, kyunki rings generally apne owners ki spirituality se linked hoti thi. Par ek baar jab cultivator mar jaata tha, to uski spatial rings ke andar ki cheezein doosron dwara aasani se 'recover' ki ja sakti thi.



Aryan ne pehle Raksha Philip ki ring check karne ka socha, kyunki woh janta tha ki Darshan ki ring mai paka kuch na kuch acha mil sakta hai. Isiliye woh usko baad mai kholna chahta tha.



'Hmm, ismein 3,000 low-level crystals hain... Aur do Black-grade techniques!'

'Wow! Is bande ke Sekhawat khandaan mein acche contacts honge, tabhi usee aisi cheezein mili hain,' Aryan ne Philip ki ring ke andar dekhte hue socha.



Woh do Black-grade techniques ki maujoodgi se hairan tha kyunki Philip sirf Level 43 par tha. Is level par, ek subordinate ke paas is quality ki technique hona bhi bahut badi baat mani jaati thi.

Arjun Rathore khud, jo royal family ka subordinate tha, uske paas Level 51 par sirf 3 techniques thi! Aur Philip jaisa insaan is level tak pahunchne mein kai dasak lag sakte the, isileye Aryan thoda heran tha.



Thodi der baad, Aryan ko Philip ki spatial ring mein teen spiritual weapons bhi mile, par woh sabhi Grade-1, medium-level ke the...



'Ye weapons aur techniques main Kaalivaan ki Sena ko dunga. Unke paas abhi techniques ki acchi variety nahi hai, aur na hi acchi quantity mein weapons hain...' Aryan ne khud se socha. Uske baad, usne Darshan Sekhawat ki spatial ring check karna shuru kiya.



'Haha, jaisa socha tha, ye Darshan Sekhawat sach mein ameer nikla,' woh ring ke andar ki cheeze dekh kar zor se hasne laga.



Usmein 400 medium-grade crystals, 20,000 low-grade crystals, 4 Black-grade techniques, kuch Grade-1 spiritual pills, aur teen Grade-1, high-level, spiritual weapons the. Sekhawat khandaan ka head Omkar Shekhawat apne bete par sach mein bahut meherban tha.



'Ah! To isliye woh zyada bid nahi kar paaya tha. Kyunki uske paas aur medium-grade crystals the hi nahi...' Aryan ne chehre par muskan ke saath socha.



Uske baad, usne Darshan ke paas se mili 4 techniques ko analyze karna shuru kiya. Unmein se ek cultivation mein specialized thi, do attack mein, aur ek defense mein.

'Kitna ajeeb baat hai, is bande ne sirf 4th stage of cultivation mein hote hue bhi do attack techniques seekh li...' Aryan ne jab ye notice kiya to woh hairan ho gaya.



Aisi cheez common nahi thi, kyunki lower levels par, alag-alag uddeshyon ke liye techniques seekhna safe nahi mana jata tha. Sirf woh cultivators jo ladaiyon par dhyan nahi dete the, jaise alchemists, ik se jayda takneek sikhte the.



Normally jaise Aryan aur is duniya ke zyada tar log ek cultivation technique, ek attack technique, ek defense technique, aur ek moving ya support technique hi sikhte the jab tak woh 4th stage of cultivation tak na pahunch jaye.



'Hm, shaed yeh isiliye ho sakta hai ki Shekhawat Khaandan taakat mai believe karta hai aur unki sena bhi baki ke noble paarivaon se jayda hai aur taakatvar hai.



Thodi der baad, Aryan ne dheere-dheere recover ho rahe apne sipahiyon ke group ki taraf dekha. Usne phir un logon par focus kiya jinhe sabse zyada chot lagi thi aur kaha. “Darshan Sekhawat ke paas recovery mein specialized 5 spiritual pills thi. Main woh tumhe dunga kyunki tumhe sabse zyada chot lagi hai. Ye tumhe jaldi recover hone mein madad karengi."



Ye sunkar, woh 5 sipahi khush ho gaye. Kyunki aisi pill ka istemal karne se unke zyada tar zakhm theek ho jaane the!



"Main ye do spatial rings commander Pratap aur Rohan ko dunga. Par tum baaki sab ko tumhari rings tab milengi jab Kaalivaan Sena thoda aur develop ho jaayegi aur kam se kam ek array master aur ek Grade-2 blacksmith haasil kar legi."

"Ismein thoda waqt lag sakta hai, par hum wahan zaroor pahunchenge," Aryan ne confidenti se har sipahi ko dekhte hue kaha.



Ye kehne ke baad, usne sipahiyon ko woh spiritual crystals bhi diye jo usne Darshan Sekhawat ke teen rakshakon ki bodies se loot liye the. Char hazaar se zyada crystals the, jo dus logon mein theek se baant diye gaye. Aur phir woh aur uske sipahi us shaant vatavarn mai dhiyan mudra mai beth kar cultivate karne lage.



Isi beech, Jal Nagar mein, ek white eagle shehar ke bahar khada huya tha. Ki tabhi ek black hair wali young woman us beast ke kareeb aayi aur uski gardan par haath ferne lagi.



"Chalo, Badal. Ab hum samundar ke upar yatra karenge. Main Stone Island dekhna chahti hoon. Log kehte hain ki ye Central Continent ke is northern region ke kareeb ek decent jagah hai," Ritu Malhotra ne dheere se apne bade spiritual beast ko sehlaate hue kaha.



Usne samundar paar karne se pehle Jal Nagar mein ruk kar aaram kiya tha. Yahan uska pehli baar aana huya tha, isliye mission par hone ke bawajood bhi, woh is trip ka poora fayda uthana chahti thi.

Ritu ko is jaisi kam spiritual density wali jagah par bheja jaana pasand nahi tha, par... Chunki woh kuch kar nahi sakti thi, toh usne is trip ka poora maza lene ki koshish ki.




Milte hai abh agle update mai. Aur dekhte hai kiya Ritu ka saamna Aryan se ho pata hai ja nahi.
Nice update and awesome story
 
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Chapter 2: Jaagna





Pichhle chhe saalon mein, jabse Aryan Rathore behosh tha, uske wafadar mukhya sewak Devraj ne uske sharir par kai khaas spiritual dawaiyan lagayi aur bahar se bhi madad dhoondne ki koshish ki. Lekin koi khaas safalta nahi mili.



Aryan ki maa, jo kabhi-kabhi hi usse milne aati thi, usne bhi apne hisab se koshish ki, lekin afsos, kuch aisa tha jo Aryan ko jagne se rok raha tha, jaise koi baddua usse lagi ho.



Is dauran, Senapati Arjun Rathore par hue us khooni hamle ke baad kai badlaav aaye the. Maslan, Surkhila Kshetra, jo Rajputana Rajya mein cultivation ke liye sabse behtareen jagah thi, woh Arjun ke parivar ko milni chahiye thi. Lekin uski jagah, yeh kshetra Rajya ki sabse badi shahi family, Shekhawat khandaan, ke haathon chala gaya. Shekhawat parivaar ke pass aisa sena bal tha jo bas rajvansh se thoda hi kam tha.



Shekhawaton ne Raja par dabav dala ki Surkhila Kshetra, jo Rathore parivar ko diya gaya tha, usko unse le liya jaaye. Unka kehna tha ki Arjun toh mar chuka hai, aur uska ek hi beta hai, jisne kabhi koi rajya ke leye yogdaan nahi diya aur abhi bhi maut se lad raha hai, uske liye aisi zameen ka kya matlab? Aise hi, mahinon ki baatcheet ke baad, Shekhawaton ne Surkhila Kshetra apne naam kar liya.



Aur Aryan? Usko ‘bakshees’ mein mili Kaalivan ki banjar zameen—ek aisa ilaaka jo bada toh tha, lekin spiritual urja ke mamle mein ekdum khokhla, jansankhya sabse kam, aur Rajya ki sabse gandi arthvyavastha wala rajya.



Aur Kaalivan ka naya raja chhe saal se behosh pada tha. Isi ke chalte Kaalivan ke logon ke dil mein Aryan ke liye nafrat paida ho gayi. Raja ke hukm ka virodh toh woh nahi kar sakte the, isliye yeh nafrat bas is kamzor bacche par nikalti thi.



Ab Aryan Rathore 15 saal ka ho chuka tha, aur usne cultivation ke paanch saal barbaad kar diye the, kyunki cultivation ki shuruaat das saal ki umar se hoti hai—woh perfect waqt jab sharir taiyaar hota hai. 15 saal ke umar mein, Rajya ke sabse talented ladke level 20 se 29 ke beech hote hain, jo Spiritual Beginner stage hai, cultivation ka teesra charan. Lekin Aryan? Woh abhi bhi pehle charan, Sharir Adhaar, level 0 par tha—ek aise sadharan insaan ka level jisne zindagi mein kabhi cultivation nahi ki!



Lekin yeh thodi si der itni buri nahi thi. Kyunki usne ek level 100 ke maharathi, Shivendra Pratap, ka gyaan hasil kiya tha! Uska talent, jo pehle black varg ka tha, ab Shivendra ke Divine-level talent ke saath Gold varg se bhi aage nikal gaya tha! Ab uske saamne bass ek hi rukawat thi—level 100 tak pahunchna, aur uske liye bhi uske paas 50% se zyada chance the.



Ab bas ek hi problem thi—Aryan ka jagna aur sahi matra mein urja ikattha karna. Haan, har level aur sharir ki ek seema hoti hai, toh koi bhi Spatial Kingdom ki divine dawaiyan kha kar ekdum se Devta nahi ban sakta. Agar usne aisa chutiyapa kiya, toh uska sharir ek second mein phat jayega!



Lekin uske paas jo Shivendra Pratap ka gyaan tha, uske karan yeh ek choti baat ban gayi thi.











Aur aise hi, waqt guzarta gaya, aur aakhirkaar, ab jawaan ho chuka yeh ladka, jiska sharir chhe saal se behosh tha, jagne ke sanket dikhane laga. Usne apni aankhein kholi aur us jagah ko dekha jahan woh tha.



Yeh uska kamra tha, bilkul waisa hi jaise usne us manhoos din chhoda tha. Ek kitaabon ki almaari thi, jisme dawaiyon, goliyon, rajneeti, aur Spiritual Academy mein sikhi hui kai zaroori cheezon ke baare mein kitaabein thi. Iske alawa, ek bada wardrobe, ek padhai ka jagah, aur uska bistar. Aryan, ek shahi hone ke bawajood, ek sada insaan tha, toh uska kamra fuzool cheezon se bhara nahi tha.



Usi pal, Aryan ko sab yaad aane laga—apne baap ki maut, Shivendra Pratap ki virasat—aur uski aankhon mein aansu aa gaye. “Mere papa ne apni jaan de di… Main abhi kuch nahi kar sakta. Mujhe cultivation par focus karna hoga. Nahi toh mai mere pita ki maut ka badla kaise loonga?”



Aryan ekdum shant aur gambhir tha. Chhe saal behosh rehne ke bawajood, uski soch abhi bhi ek 9 saal ke bacche jaisi honi chahiye thi, lekin aisa nahi tha. Shivendra Pratap ke 50,000 saal ke jeevan ka gyaan usse haasil ho chuka tha, Aryan ab uski umar se kahi zyada mature ho chuka tha.



“Jo gyaan mujhe mila hai, uske hisab se Cultivation mein 11 stages hote hain, ek ke baad ek, jaise level-up karna—Sharir Adhaar, Sankraman, Spiritual Beginner, Warrior, General, King, Emperor, Saint, Sage, Demigod, aur phir Devta! Har stage ke saath taakat aur zindagi double hoti hai. Spiritual Beginner se shuru karke, har level par hum zyada lambi zindagi jeete hai—Devta toh 50,000 saal tak jee sakta hai, bhenchod! Aur har stage par hamari spiritual urja ekdum rocket ki tarah badhti hai. Jaise, level 69 ka banda level 59 se saat guna zyada taakatvar hota hai, aur ek Devta? Woh level 99 Demigod se gyarah guna zyada powerful hota hai!



“Iske alawa, Spiritual Emperor banne par koi ud sakta hai, agar sharir nasht ho jaye toh Spiritual Saint ke roop mein woh ek aatma ke roop mein thodi der jee sakta hai, aur woh phirse apna sharir bana sakta hai ya kisi aur ka sharir le sakta hai. Spiritual Sage Stage par koi antriksh mein safar kar sakta hai, aur level 100 par Spatial Kingdoms bana sakta hai.”



“Tch! Aur woh Spiritual Academy ke buddhe apne aap ko bada samajhte the kyunki hamare Rajya mein Spiritual Kings the. Kitne jahil the woh…”



“Agar mai mere Sharirik Dhanche ki baat karoon toh, Hahaha, yeh toh ekdum jackpot hai! Pehle yeh King-grade ka tha, lekin us haadse ne isse ek mutant Sadharan-grade bana diya, jo dheere-dheere Devin-grade tak jayega—woh level jahan bande Devta bante hain! Aur, yeh Dhancha ek secret weapon hai—yeh har cultivation level par mujhe thodi extra spiritual urja store karne deta hai, shuru mein 5% zyada, aur jab Devin-grade tak pahunchunga, toh 40% zyada! Matlab, main apne level ke har bande se kahi zyada taakatvar hunga.



Usi waqt, Aryan ke kamre ka darwaza khula, aur ek adhed umar ka aadmi andar aaya. Yeh Devraj tha, mare hue Senapati Rathore ka sewak. Woh 150 saal ka tha aur level 45 par tha.

Jab usne dekha ki Aryan bistar par baitha hai, woh ekdum uski taraf dauda, jaise koi chamatkar ho gaya ho. “Chhote sahab, kya aap abhi jaage? Aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe hain?”



“Main theek hoon, Devraj chacha. Abhi jaaga hoon. Aisa lag raha hai jaise main ek lambi neend ke baad utha hoon,”



Aryan ne sacchai se kaha. Aakhir, Devraj uske papa ke saath kayi dashakon se hai, uske janm se pehle se, aur Aryan ki zindagi mein, jab uske papa zinda the, Devraj woh doosra insaan tha jiske bharose woh reh sakta tha.



“Bahut badhiya! Chhote sahab, itne saalon baad, mujhe darr tha ki shayad aap kabhi na jaagein,” Devraj ne gambhir chehre se kaha.



“Hmm, mere papa par hamle ke baad kitna waqt guzar gaya?”



“Chhe saal, chhote sahab. Master ke guzar jane ke baad, aapko yahan laya gaya, aur in saalon mein, main har sambhav koshish kar raha tha aapko jagane ki. Aapki maa, Meenakshi ji, ne bhi bahut madad ki.”



“Meenakshi ne yeh kiya? Jaise unhe koi parwah hai meri. Mere life ke 9 saalon mein maine unhe paanch baar mushkil se dekha hoga. Main toh soch raha tha ki woh is waqt ka maja le rahi hongi kyunki unhe mujhse milne nahi aana padta hoga,” Aryan ne mazakiya lehje se kaha, apni dur rehne wali maa ke baare mein.



Adhed aadmi ne jawab diya, “Aisa mat bolo, chhote sahab. Meenakshi ji ke kandhon par bahut zimmedariyan hain. Meenakshi ji ke peeche ek badi shakti hai, ek secretive group jo Rajya ke bade-bade faisle control karta hai. Unke orders ke wajah se woh itni busy rehti hai.”



“Tch, yeh bas unka bahana hai, yeh sab chhododo, mujhe pichhle chhe saalon mein kya kya hua, woh batao.”



Phir Devraj aur Aryan ne agle kuch ghanton tak baat ki, us dauran hui ghatnaon ke baare mein.



“Toh yeh haal hai… Abhi ke liye humein yeh haalat accept karni hogi kyunki humare paas badla lene ka koi tareeka nahi hai. Lekin sab kuch bura nahi hai. Kaalivan ko shayad sudhara ja sakta hai.”



Jab Aryan ne yeh kaha, usne turant Spatial Kingdom mein jane ka socha, aur woh yeh dekhna chahta tha ki woh wahan kya kar sakta hai. Aakhir mai, kisi se sunna alag baat hai, aur apni aankhon se dekhna alag.



Woh gambhirta se sochne laga, “Mujhe Spatial Kingdom mein jana hoga taaki wahan ka haal samajh sakun, phir main Kaalivan ke problems ke saath deal karunga. Mujhe kuch resources lekar cultivation bhi shuru karni hogi. Main yeh dekhna chahta hoon ki Gold se upar ka talent kaisa kaam karta hai.”



Spatial Kingdom mein jane ke liye, uske right hand ki ungli mein ek ajeeb si angoothi thi, jo usse virasat ke waqt Shivendra ki aatma ke tukde ne di thi. Yeh angoothi Aryan ke alawa kisi aur ko dikhayi nahi deti thi, aur yeh uske liye Spatial Kingdom mein aane-jane ka zariya thi, chahe woh kahan bhi ho. Bilkul ek teleportation device jaisa.





To be continued………
Nice starting to the story. Ab dekhna hoga ki Kalyavan ko kaisay spiritual energy se bharta hai. Aur kaisay abhi waha ke logo ke dil me apne liye jagah banata hai Aryan.
 
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Chapter 18: Parinaam





Zumm!



'Ow! Hell, aisa laga jaise mai mar hi jaaunga,' ek sipahi ne khud se kaha, jab uske baayein kaan se khoon ki ek patli dhaar tapak rahi thi. Use abhi bhi ek humming sound sunayi de rahi thi, aur use imbalance ke saath-saath blurred vision bhi feel ho raha tha.



"Rohan! Rohan! Arre, idhar dekh!" ek kam zakhmi sipahi ne apne teammate ko chilla kar kaha, jo zameen par behoshi ki haalat mein pada tha aur uske muh aur kaano se khoon nikal raha tha.



"Oye bhai, tu theek hai na?" us sipahi ne Rohan ki taraf dekhte hue poocha.



"Cough, cough. Ah! Main theek hoon, Arjun. Bas thoda time chahiye is shock se recover hone ke liye," Rohan ne kamzor awaaz aur pale chehre ke saath kaha.



Aryan ke baaki sipahiyon ka bhi yahi haal tha. Aadhe to Rakshak Philip ke sacrifice se theek pehle usse lad rahe the, isliye unhpar is dhamake ka sabse zyada asar hua tha.



11 logon ke group mein se, 5 poori tarah thak chuke the, par unhe chote-mote zakhm hi lage the. Aryan bhi unmein se ek tha. Baakiyon ko andaruni chotein aayi thi, par koi bhi zyada serious nahi tha.



Unhe bas kuch din aaram ki zaroorat thi aur woh poori tarah theek ho jayege.



"Us bande ne to sach mein mujhe dara hi diya tha! Thaka hua hone ke bawajood bhi, woh humein itna nuksaan pahuncha gya," Commander Pratap ne apni aankhein chhoti karte hue kaha. Woh group mein sabse zyada zakhmi logon mein se ek tha aur jo kuch hua tha usse shocked tha.



'Hmm, ye sach mein bahut bura tha. Ummeed karta hoon ki future mein aise dushman se paala na pade,' Aryan ne khud se socha. Uski Amar Jisam defence technique bhi is dhamake se hone wale nuksaan ko jhel nahi paayi thi, jiske chalte uske fate hue kapdon ke beech se kai zakham dikhayi de rahe the.



"Tum sab, jitna ho sake aaram karo. Hum kal tak yahan rukenge. Uske baad, hum Portland City wapas chalenge. Main tumhe is ladai ke liye baki rewards bhi baad mein dunga," Aryan ne sabhi sipahiyon se oonchi awaaz mein kaha.

Ye sunkar, sabhi das log khush ho gaye ki unhe aaram karne ka time milega aur rewards bhi milenge.



Loot Ka Waqt



Aryan ke sipahi dheere-dheere recover ho rahe the, lekin Aryan un teen laashon ki taraf chal diya jo zameen pe giri padhi thi. Woh sabse pehle Darshan Sekhawat ki be-sir body ke paas gaya, jo wahan bane gaadhe se kuch feet ki doori par paadi huyi thi. Jab Aryan ne usee gaur se dekha, to Darshan ke daayein haath ki ek ungli mein usee ek silver ring dikhi. Ye uski spatial ring thi!



Is duniya mein kai tarah ki spatial rings hoti thi, par unke beech main farak unki storage volume ka hota tha. Lekin, kam capacity wali rings bhi is Central Continent ke region mein rare items mani jaati hai.



Generally, is region ki badi noble families ke bachchon ke alawa, aisi cheezein sirf 5th stage ke user, General Spiritual, ya uske upar ke cultivators ke paas hi dekhi jaati hai. Kyunki low level wale aisi ring khreed hi nahi paate the.



Halaanki, aise 'item' ko naye-naye General Spiritual Stage mein enter karne wale logon ke paas dekhna itna common nahi tha, aur kai cultivators ko ek kharidne mein saalon lag jaate the.



Khair, Aryan ne baaki do bodies ko bhi check kiya, par wahan koi spatial ring nahi thi. Mujhe laga hi thaa... Ye dono to bas Sekhawat khandaan ke subordinates the aur Level 41 aur 42 par the,' Aryan ne unhe check karte hue socha. Wahan sirf kuch darjan low-grade crystals se bhare bags the, kuch bhi aisa nahi tha jo uski aankhon mein chamak laa paata.



Phir woh Raksha Philip ke sacrifice se bane gaadhe ki taraf gaya aur wahan bache hue kuch avsehsho ko dhoondhne laga. Woh aisa isliye kar raha tha kyunki kam level ki rings ki bhi excellent resistance hoti thi aur woh yahan hue explosion jaise dhamake mein barbaad nahi hoti thi.



Aryan jab waterfall ke kareeb pahuncha toh usee kuch chamakta hua dikha. Woh ek spatial ring thi! Jaisa socha tha vaisa hi paeya. Mujhe laga hi tha ke is Philip ke pass spatial ring toh hogi hi.



Dono rings ko uthakar Aryan waterfall ke paas ek patthar par baith gaya aur rings ko check karne laga. Ye karna mushkil nahi tha, kyunki rings generally apne owners ki spirituality se linked hoti thi. Par ek baar jab cultivator mar jaata tha, to uski spatial rings ke andar ki cheezein doosron dwara aasani se 'recover' ki ja sakti thi.



Aryan ne pehle Raksha Philip ki ring check karne ka socha, kyunki woh janta tha ki Darshan ki ring mai paka kuch na kuch acha mil sakta hai. Isiliye woh usko baad mai kholna chahta tha.



'Hmm, ismein 3,000 low-level crystals hain... Aur do Black-grade techniques!'

'Wow! Is bande ke Sekhawat khandaan mein acche contacts honge, tabhi usee aisi cheezein mili hain,' Aryan ne Philip ki ring ke andar dekhte hue socha.



Woh do Black-grade techniques ki maujoodgi se hairan tha kyunki Philip sirf Level 43 par tha. Is level par, ek subordinate ke paas is quality ki technique hona bhi bahut badi baat mani jaati thi.

Arjun Rathore khud, jo royal family ka subordinate tha, uske paas Level 51 par sirf 3 techniques thi! Aur Philip jaisa insaan is level tak pahunchne mein kai dasak lag sakte the, isileye Aryan thoda heran tha.



Thodi der baad, Aryan ko Philip ki spatial ring mein teen spiritual weapons bhi mile, par woh sabhi Grade-1, medium-level ke the...



'Ye weapons aur techniques main Kaalivaan ki Sena ko dunga. Unke paas abhi techniques ki acchi variety nahi hai, aur na hi acchi quantity mein weapons hain...' Aryan ne khud se socha. Uske baad, usne Darshan Sekhawat ki spatial ring check karna shuru kiya.



'Haha, jaisa socha tha, ye Darshan Sekhawat sach mein ameer nikla,' woh ring ke andar ki cheeze dekh kar zor se hasne laga.



Usmein 400 medium-grade crystals, 20,000 low-grade crystals, 4 Black-grade techniques, kuch Grade-1 spiritual pills, aur teen Grade-1, high-level, spiritual weapons the. Sekhawat khandaan ka head Omkar Shekhawat apne bete par sach mein bahut meherban tha.



'Ah! To isliye woh zyada bid nahi kar paaya tha. Kyunki uske paas aur medium-grade crystals the hi nahi...' Aryan ne chehre par muskan ke saath socha.



Uske baad, usne Darshan ke paas se mili 4 techniques ko analyze karna shuru kiya. Unmein se ek cultivation mein specialized thi, do attack mein, aur ek defense mein.

'Kitna ajeeb baat hai, is bande ne sirf 4th stage of cultivation mein hote hue bhi do attack techniques seekh li...' Aryan ne jab ye notice kiya to woh hairan ho gaya.



Aisi cheez common nahi thi, kyunki lower levels par, alag-alag uddeshyon ke liye techniques seekhna safe nahi mana jata tha. Sirf woh cultivators jo ladaiyon par dhyan nahi dete the, jaise alchemists, ik se jayda takneek sikhte the.



Normally jaise Aryan aur is duniya ke zyada tar log ek cultivation technique, ek attack technique, ek defense technique, aur ek moving ya support technique hi sikhte the jab tak woh 4th stage of cultivation tak na pahunch jaye.



'Hm, shaed yeh isiliye ho sakta hai ki Shekhawat Khaandan taakat mai believe karta hai aur unki sena bhi baki ke noble paarivaon se jayda hai aur taakatvar hai.



Thodi der baad, Aryan ne dheere-dheere recover ho rahe apne sipahiyon ke group ki taraf dekha. Usne phir un logon par focus kiya jinhe sabse zyada chot lagi thi aur kaha. “Darshan Sekhawat ke paas recovery mein specialized 5 spiritual pills thi. Main woh tumhe dunga kyunki tumhe sabse zyada chot lagi hai. Ye tumhe jaldi recover hone mein madad karengi."



Ye sunkar, woh 5 sipahi khush ho gaye. Kyunki aisi pill ka istemal karne se unke zyada tar zakhm theek ho jaane the!



"Main ye do spatial rings commander Pratap aur Rohan ko dunga. Par tum baaki sab ko tumhari rings tab milengi jab Kaalivaan Sena thoda aur develop ho jaayegi aur kam se kam ek array master aur ek Grade-2 blacksmith haasil kar legi."

"Ismein thoda waqt lag sakta hai, par hum wahan zaroor pahunchenge," Aryan ne confidenti se har sipahi ko dekhte hue kaha.



Ye kehne ke baad, usne sipahiyon ko woh spiritual crystals bhi diye jo usne Darshan Sekhawat ke teen rakshakon ki bodies se loot liye the. Char hazaar se zyada crystals the, jo dus logon mein theek se baant diye gaye. Aur phir woh aur uske sipahi us shaant vatavarn mai dhiyan mudra mai beth kar cultivate karne lage.



Isi beech, Jal Nagar mein, ek white eagle shehar ke bahar khada huya tha. Ki tabhi ek black hair wali young woman us beast ke kareeb aayi aur uski gardan par haath ferne lagi.



"Chalo, Badal. Ab hum samundar ke upar yatra karenge. Main Stone Island dekhna chahti hoon. Log kehte hain ki ye Central Continent ke is northern region ke kareeb ek decent jagah hai," Ritu Malhotra ne dheere se apne bade spiritual beast ko sehlaate hue kaha.



Usne samundar paar karne se pehle Jal Nagar mein ruk kar aaram kiya tha. Yahan uska pehli baar aana huya tha, isliye mission par hone ke bawajood bhi, woh is trip ka poora fayda uthana chahti thi.

Ritu ko is jaisi kam spiritual density wali jagah par bheja jaana pasand nahi tha, par... Chunki woh kuch kar nahi sakti thi, toh usne is trip ka poora maza lene ki koshish ki.




Milte hai abh agle update mai. Aur dekhte hai kiya Ritu ka saamna Aryan se ho pata hai ja nahi.
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Chapter 4: Kaalivan





Rajputana Rajya ke paschim ki taraf teen din ke safar ke baad, Aryan Rathore aur uske 12 gaadiyon ka kaafila ab apne manzil se sirf ek din door tha—Kaalivan, ek banjar zameen jo ab uska ghar aur jung ka maidan banne wala tha.



Sabse shandaar gaadi ke andar, ek adhed umar ka aadmi aur ek jawaan ladka baat kar rahe the, dono ke chehre par gambhirta thi. Yeh the Aryan aur uska wafadar Devraj. Aryan Kaalivan ke haal-chaal samajhna chahta tha, taaki woh apni zameen ke asli challenges ka andaza laga sake. Baat bade-bade maslon par thi—ilaake ki average taakat, seema ke paas ke rajyon ka haal, aur woh sab kuch jo ek naye raja ko apni zameen ke sach ke kareeb la sake.



Haan, unke paas poori jankari nahi thi, kyunki Kaalivan ko ek regent chala raha tha, jo Rajputana ke maharaja ne appoint kiya tha. Asli details toh tabhi milenge jab woh Kaalivan ke sabse bade shahar, Sukha Nagar, mein pahunchkar command apne haathon mein lenge.



“Devraj chacha, Kaalivan ke liye trade ka kya scene hai?” Aryan ne poocha.



Devraj ne thoda sochkar jawab diya, “Beta, Kaalivan toh abhi export ke naam par kuch nahi karta. Khetibadi toh zero hai, aur jo thodi-bahut mining hoti hai, woh yahin consume ho jati hai. Spiritual crystals ka production bhi ekdum kam hai, kyunki yahan spiritual energy bilkul kamzor hai. Imports ke liye, zyadatar khane ka samaan mangwana padta hai.”



“South mein jo Kumbhalgarh Rajya hai, wahi Kaalivan ka sabse bada khana supplier hai, kyunki yeh uski seema se laga hua hai. Kumbhalgarh ki khetibadi ekdum shandaar hai—woh apne aaspaas ke ilaakon ko bhi supply karta hai, aur humein bhi. Aur woh toh Stone Island ke bade trading partner bhi hain, jo northwest mein hai.”



“Stone Island yahan ke saare coastal rajyon ke liye bada important hai, kyunki wahan ke mineral reserves aur spiritual blacksmith ekdum top-class hain. Unki economy ekdum mast hai, lekin fasal? Woh toh produce hi nahi karte, toh doosre rajyon par dependent hain. Isliye Kumbhalgarh unka bada partner hai.”



“Lekin Kaalivan ka Stone Island ke saath zyada lena-dena nahi hai, kyunki yahan spiritual equipment ki demand hi nahi hai” Devraj ne Aryan kobataya, lekin uski awaaz mai thodi udaasi thi.



“North mein Kaalivan ke paas sabse bada rajya hai—Kingdom Of Waves. Yeh rajya apne bade area ki wajah se kaafi active hai, regional economy mein bada role khelta hai. Lekin Kaalivan ke saath unka kya contact hai, mujhe nahi pata,” Devraj ne kaha.



“Phir Kaalivan ka main kaam-dhanda kya hai, chacha?” Aryan ne poocha, uska dimaag tezi se chal raha tha.



Devraj ke chehre par thodi si uljhan dikhayi di. “Jahan tak mujhe pata hai, yahan ka raja zyadatar tax se hi paisa kamaata hai, jo logon se vasoolta hai. Aur kuch kaam-dhanda hai toh mujhe nahi pata.”



Kaalivan, Rajputana Rajya ka sabse chhota ilaaka hone ke bawajood, takreeban 50,000 logon ka ghar tha. Inmein se zyadatar ke paas koi khaas talent nahi tha—bas White ya Blue talent, toh unke liye aise ilaake mein rehna hi behtar tha. Kyunki jab baat aati hai risk lene ki, toh koi bhi aise jagah nahi jana chahta jahan log tujhse hazar guna zyada taakatvar ho.



Zyadatar log Sukha Nagar mein rehte the, aur wahan ke logon ko basic services chahiye the, jo raja deta tha. Isliye woh tax vasoolta tha, yeh kehte hue ki yeh paisa unke jeene ke liye basic zarurat poori karne ke kaam aayega. Kaalivan ko Rajputana ke maharaja ko bhi koi paisa nahi dena padta tha, kyunki yahan ki income itni kam thi ki agar spiritual crystals maharaja ko bheje, toh yahan kuch bachega hi nahi. Yahan tak ki koi bhi shahi parivaar yahan aana nahi chahta tha—unke leye yeh ilaaka ek bojh jaisa tha!



Aur jo regent abhi Kaalivan chala raha tha, woh toh ek government aadmi tha, jise maharaja ne chhe saal pehle yahan bheja tha jab tak naye raja ka pata na chale. Lekin woh bhi yahan se thak gaya tha, bhenchod! Is banjar zameen mein rehne se uski cultivation ruk gayi thi, aur woh gussa tha ki aur kitne saal yahan waste karne padenge.



“Jab main Spiritual Academy mein tha, toh teachers ne bataya tha ki aaspaas ke rajyon ki average taakat 4th stage tak ki hai, aur sabse strong log 6th stage ke hai jo ke, Spiritual King stage, ke honge.



Aur kuch jankari hai, Devraj chacha?” Aryan ne poocha, apne plan ke liye har detail woh jaanna chahta tha.



“Haan, bilkul. In rajyon mein, raja aur unke purane log zyadatar level 58 ya 59 ke hote hain—yeh is area ke sabse strong bande hain. Yeh budhe log 500 saal se zyada ke hote hain, kuch toh 1,000 ke kareeb bhi hote hain. Lekin Spiritual King ke liye 1,600 saal ki zindagi hone ke bawajood, inke agle stage tak jaane ke chances kam hote hain, jab tak woh apne rajya chhodkar saalon tak bahar na jayein,” Devraj ne samjhaaya.



“Yeh isliye kyunki is ilaake mein spiritual energy ekdum dispersed hai, aur jo talented families thi, woh hazaron saal pehle yahan se nikal gayi. Talent toh maa-baap se bacchon mein aata hai, na? To ab yahan ke logon ka talent dheere-dheere kam ho gaya hai. Ab sirf kuch hazar log Black talent ke hain, aur Silver talent toh ungliyon par gine ja sakte hain. Aur woh bhi jaldi yahan se jahan se nikal jaate hain, kabhi-kabhi toh koi bada khandaan unhe dhundh bhi nahi pata,” Devraj ne aage kaha.



“Aur acha talent hona cultivation ke bottlenecks ke liye zaroori hai, jo har stage ke end mein aate hain. Yahan ke log, jo Black talent ke hain, 5th stage tak toh bina rukawat ke cultivate kar sakte hain, lekin 6th stage tak jaane ka chance sirf 50% hai, aur 7th stage ka toh aur bhi kam. Bina powerful resources ya zyada spiritual energy ke, yeh log rukawat ko cross nahi kar sakte,” Devraj ne samjhaaya.



“Isliye yahan koi bhi raja Spiritual Emperor nahi ban sakta, kyunki apna rajya chhodna khandaan aur khud ke liye khatarnak hota hai. Lekin Kaalivan mein toh spiritual energy itni kam hai ki yahan ke sabse strong bande bhi shayad level 39, Spiritual Warrior, ke honge—jab tak koi bahar se aaya hua na ho,” Devraj ne kaha, thodi rahat ke saath.



“Waise, main ladne mein expert nahi hoon, lekin chhote sahab ki safety ka koi issue nahi hoga. Main level 45 hoon, aur yahan isse badi threat nahi honi chahiye,” Devraj ne muskurate hue kaha.



Yeh sunte hi Aryan ke dimaag mein Antriksh Rajya se chuni hui Golden-grade cultivation technique aayi, jo usne Devraj ke liye rakhi thi. Lekin usne socha abhi nahi dena chahiye. Kaalivan pahunchne ke baad hi denge, kyunki usse yeh bhi batana padega ki yeh technique kahan se aayi, aur abhi woh yeh raaz kholna nahi chahta tha.



Thodi der baad, gaadiyan ruk gayi. Suraj dhal chuka tha, aur Sukha Nagar abhi thodi door tha. Agar safar jaari rakha toh woh subah hone tak pahunch jaayenge, lekin unhone socha ek raat aur ruk jayein. Unhone sadak ke paas ek camp laga liya, jahan thodi si aag jala kar sab rest karne lage.



In teen dino mein Aryan ko zyada cultivation ka waqt nahi mila, lekin phir bhi woh level 2 tak pahunch gaya. Shuru ke levels mein farak itna chhota hota hai ki kisi ko pata hi nahi chala ki Aryan ki taakat badh gayi hai—aur woh bhi apni power ko chhupane ki koshish kar raha tha.



Raat ho gayi, aur agle subah Aryan apne naye ghar pahunchne wala tha—Kaalivan, jahan woh apni sena banane ka plan bana raha tha. Shivendra Pratap ke gyaan ke saath, Aryan ke paas kai tareeke the ek ilaake ko taakatvar banane ke. Bas ab use Kaalivan ke asli haal ka pata lagana tha, taaki woh apna plan poora kar sake.



Usne than li thi—Kaalivan ko ek aisa rajya banayega jo is duniya ke sabse bade samrajyon se takkar le sake. Yeh uska ghar hoga, aur uski growth ki kahani yahin se shuru hogi.











Kuch ghante baad, Aryan ne door se Sukha Nagar ko dekha. Naam ke hisab se yeh jagah ekdum sukhi thi—bilkul banjar! Shahar ke aaspaas ka mahaul ekdum sookha tha, poore shahar mein ek bhi ped nahi tha, bas thodi si ghaas aur kaante wale paudhe.



Sukha Nagar ek chhota sa shahar tha, jahan sadharan ghar the, aur central area mein thodi si dukaanein. Shahar ke beech mein ek theek-thaak haveli thi—yeh wahan ki sarkar ka daftar tha, aur ab Aryan ka naya ghar bhi.



Sadkon par thodi chahal-pehal thi, log aate-jaate dikhai de rahe the, lekin gaadiyan sirf do hi thi—Aryan ke kaafile ke alawa. Kuch log spiritual beasts par chal rahe the, lekin woh bhi low-level beasts the, zyada se zyada 1st stage ke.



Aakhirkaar, Aryan ka kaafila shahar ke beech wali haveli tak pahunch gaya. Haveli ke darwaze par ek budha sipahi khada tha, uski aankhon mein thakawat aur gussa saaf dikhai de raha tha. “Kaun ho tum log? Itni subah-subah yahan kya kaam hai?” usne gusse se poocha.



Aryan gaadi se utra, uski aankhon mein ek chamak thi. “Main hoon Aryan Rathore, Kaalivan ka naya raja. Aur tu kaun hai, jo mere ghar ke darwaze par khada hai?” usne ek khatarnak muskaan ke saath kaha.




To be continued…….
To aakhir kar pohach hi gaya apni karam bhumi but yaha cheezay itni asaan nahi hone wali hai aur Aryan ko abhi bohat kuch aur bohat jaldi karna hoga coz yaha ki public jo naraz hai hai unka vishwas jeetne ke liye.
 

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Chapter 18: Parinaam





Zumm!



'Ow! Hell, aisa laga jaise mai mar hi jaaunga,' ek sipahi ne khud se kaha, jab uske baayein kaan se khoon ki ek patli dhaar tapak rahi thi. Use abhi bhi ek humming sound sunayi de rahi thi, aur use imbalance ke saath-saath blurred vision bhi feel ho raha tha.



"Rohan! Rohan! Arre, idhar dekh!" ek kam zakhmi sipahi ne apne teammate ko chilla kar kaha, jo zameen par behoshi ki haalat mein pada tha aur uske muh aur kaano se khoon nikal raha tha.



"Oye bhai, tu theek hai na?" us sipahi ne Rohan ki taraf dekhte hue poocha.



"Cough, cough. Ah! Main theek hoon, Arjun. Bas thoda time chahiye is shock se recover hone ke liye," Rohan ne kamzor awaaz aur pale chehre ke saath kaha.



Aryan ke baaki sipahiyon ka bhi yahi haal tha. Aadhe to Rakshak Philip ke sacrifice se theek pehle usse lad rahe the, isliye unhpar is dhamake ka sabse zyada asar hua tha.



11 logon ke group mein se, 5 poori tarah thak chuke the, par unhe chote-mote zakhm hi lage the. Aryan bhi unmein se ek tha. Baakiyon ko andaruni chotein aayi thi, par koi bhi zyada serious nahi tha.



Unhe bas kuch din aaram ki zaroorat thi aur woh poori tarah theek ho jayege.



"Us bande ne to sach mein mujhe dara hi diya tha! Thaka hua hone ke bawajood bhi, woh humein itna nuksaan pahuncha gya," Commander Pratap ne apni aankhein chhoti karte hue kaha. Woh group mein sabse zyada zakhmi logon mein se ek tha aur jo kuch hua tha usse shocked tha.



'Hmm, ye sach mein bahut bura tha. Ummeed karta hoon ki future mein aise dushman se paala na pade,' Aryan ne khud se socha. Uski Amar Jisam defence technique bhi is dhamake se hone wale nuksaan ko jhel nahi paayi thi, jiske chalte uske fate hue kapdon ke beech se kai zakham dikhayi de rahe the.



"Tum sab, jitna ho sake aaram karo. Hum kal tak yahan rukenge. Uske baad, hum Portland City wapas chalenge. Main tumhe is ladai ke liye baki rewards bhi baad mein dunga," Aryan ne sabhi sipahiyon se oonchi awaaz mein kaha.

Ye sunkar, sabhi das log khush ho gaye ki unhe aaram karne ka time milega aur rewards bhi milenge.



Loot Ka Waqt



Aryan ke sipahi dheere-dheere recover ho rahe the, lekin Aryan un teen laashon ki taraf chal diya jo zameen pe giri padhi thi. Woh sabse pehle Darshan Sekhawat ki be-sir body ke paas gaya, jo wahan bane gaadhe se kuch feet ki doori par paadi huyi thi. Jab Aryan ne usee gaur se dekha, to Darshan ke daayein haath ki ek ungli mein usee ek silver ring dikhi. Ye uski spatial ring thi!



Is duniya mein kai tarah ki spatial rings hoti thi, par unke beech main farak unki storage volume ka hota tha. Lekin, kam capacity wali rings bhi is Central Continent ke region mein rare items mani jaati hai.



Generally, is region ki badi noble families ke bachchon ke alawa, aisi cheezein sirf 5th stage ke user, General Spiritual, ya uske upar ke cultivators ke paas hi dekhi jaati hai. Kyunki low level wale aisi ring khreed hi nahi paate the.



Halaanki, aise 'item' ko naye-naye General Spiritual Stage mein enter karne wale logon ke paas dekhna itna common nahi tha, aur kai cultivators ko ek kharidne mein saalon lag jaate the.



Khair, Aryan ne baaki do bodies ko bhi check kiya, par wahan koi spatial ring nahi thi. Mujhe laga hi thaa... Ye dono to bas Sekhawat khandaan ke subordinates the aur Level 41 aur 42 par the,' Aryan ne unhe check karte hue socha. Wahan sirf kuch darjan low-grade crystals se bhare bags the, kuch bhi aisa nahi tha jo uski aankhon mein chamak laa paata.



Phir woh Raksha Philip ke sacrifice se bane gaadhe ki taraf gaya aur wahan bache hue kuch avsehsho ko dhoondhne laga. Woh aisa isliye kar raha tha kyunki kam level ki rings ki bhi excellent resistance hoti thi aur woh yahan hue explosion jaise dhamake mein barbaad nahi hoti thi.



Aryan jab waterfall ke kareeb pahuncha toh usee kuch chamakta hua dikha. Woh ek spatial ring thi! Jaisa socha tha vaisa hi paeya. Mujhe laga hi tha ke is Philip ke pass spatial ring toh hogi hi.



Dono rings ko uthakar Aryan waterfall ke paas ek patthar par baith gaya aur rings ko check karne laga. Ye karna mushkil nahi tha, kyunki rings generally apne owners ki spirituality se linked hoti thi. Par ek baar jab cultivator mar jaata tha, to uski spatial rings ke andar ki cheezein doosron dwara aasani se 'recover' ki ja sakti thi.



Aryan ne pehle Raksha Philip ki ring check karne ka socha, kyunki woh janta tha ki Darshan ki ring mai paka kuch na kuch acha mil sakta hai. Isiliye woh usko baad mai kholna chahta tha.



'Hmm, ismein 3,000 low-level crystals hain... Aur do Black-grade techniques!'

'Wow! Is bande ke Sekhawat khandaan mein acche contacts honge, tabhi usee aisi cheezein mili hain,' Aryan ne Philip ki ring ke andar dekhte hue socha.



Woh do Black-grade techniques ki maujoodgi se hairan tha kyunki Philip sirf Level 43 par tha. Is level par, ek subordinate ke paas is quality ki technique hona bhi bahut badi baat mani jaati thi.

Arjun Rathore khud, jo royal family ka subordinate tha, uske paas Level 51 par sirf 3 techniques thi! Aur Philip jaisa insaan is level tak pahunchne mein kai dasak lag sakte the, isileye Aryan thoda heran tha.



Thodi der baad, Aryan ko Philip ki spatial ring mein teen spiritual weapons bhi mile, par woh sabhi Grade-1, medium-level ke the...



'Ye weapons aur techniques main Kaalivaan ki Sena ko dunga. Unke paas abhi techniques ki acchi variety nahi hai, aur na hi acchi quantity mein weapons hain...' Aryan ne khud se socha. Uske baad, usne Darshan Sekhawat ki spatial ring check karna shuru kiya.



'Haha, jaisa socha tha, ye Darshan Sekhawat sach mein ameer nikla,' woh ring ke andar ki cheeze dekh kar zor se hasne laga.



Usmein 400 medium-grade crystals, 20,000 low-grade crystals, 4 Black-grade techniques, kuch Grade-1 spiritual pills, aur teen Grade-1, high-level, spiritual weapons the. Sekhawat khandaan ka head Omkar Shekhawat apne bete par sach mein bahut meherban tha.



'Ah! To isliye woh zyada bid nahi kar paaya tha. Kyunki uske paas aur medium-grade crystals the hi nahi...' Aryan ne chehre par muskan ke saath socha.



Uske baad, usne Darshan ke paas se mili 4 techniques ko analyze karna shuru kiya. Unmein se ek cultivation mein specialized thi, do attack mein, aur ek defense mein.

'Kitna ajeeb baat hai, is bande ne sirf 4th stage of cultivation mein hote hue bhi do attack techniques seekh li...' Aryan ne jab ye notice kiya to woh hairan ho gaya.



Aisi cheez common nahi thi, kyunki lower levels par, alag-alag uddeshyon ke liye techniques seekhna safe nahi mana jata tha. Sirf woh cultivators jo ladaiyon par dhyan nahi dete the, jaise alchemists, ik se jayda takneek sikhte the.



Normally jaise Aryan aur is duniya ke zyada tar log ek cultivation technique, ek attack technique, ek defense technique, aur ek moving ya support technique hi sikhte the jab tak woh 4th stage of cultivation tak na pahunch jaye.



'Hm, shaed yeh isiliye ho sakta hai ki Shekhawat Khaandan taakat mai believe karta hai aur unki sena bhi baki ke noble paarivaon se jayda hai aur taakatvar hai.



Thodi der baad, Aryan ne dheere-dheere recover ho rahe apne sipahiyon ke group ki taraf dekha. Usne phir un logon par focus kiya jinhe sabse zyada chot lagi thi aur kaha. “Darshan Sekhawat ke paas recovery mein specialized 5 spiritual pills thi. Main woh tumhe dunga kyunki tumhe sabse zyada chot lagi hai. Ye tumhe jaldi recover hone mein madad karengi."



Ye sunkar, woh 5 sipahi khush ho gaye. Kyunki aisi pill ka istemal karne se unke zyada tar zakhm theek ho jaane the!



"Main ye do spatial rings commander Pratap aur Rohan ko dunga. Par tum baaki sab ko tumhari rings tab milengi jab Kaalivaan Sena thoda aur develop ho jaayegi aur kam se kam ek array master aur ek Grade-2 blacksmith haasil kar legi."

"Ismein thoda waqt lag sakta hai, par hum wahan zaroor pahunchenge," Aryan ne confidenti se har sipahi ko dekhte hue kaha.



Ye kehne ke baad, usne sipahiyon ko woh spiritual crystals bhi diye jo usne Darshan Sekhawat ke teen rakshakon ki bodies se loot liye the. Char hazaar se zyada crystals the, jo dus logon mein theek se baant diye gaye. Aur phir woh aur uske sipahi us shaant vatavarn mai dhiyan mudra mai beth kar cultivate karne lage.



Isi beech, Jal Nagar mein, ek white eagle shehar ke bahar khada huya tha. Ki tabhi ek black hair wali young woman us beast ke kareeb aayi aur uski gardan par haath ferne lagi.



"Chalo, Badal. Ab hum samundar ke upar yatra karenge. Main Stone Island dekhna chahti hoon. Log kehte hain ki ye Central Continent ke is northern region ke kareeb ek decent jagah hai," Ritu Malhotra ne dheere se apne bade spiritual beast ko sehlaate hue kaha.



Usne samundar paar karne se pehle Jal Nagar mein ruk kar aaram kiya tha. Yahan uska pehli baar aana huya tha, isliye mission par hone ke bawajood bhi, woh is trip ka poora fayda uthana chahti thi.

Ritu ko is jaisi kam spiritual density wali jagah par bheja jaana pasand nahi tha, par... Chunki woh kuch kar nahi sakti thi, toh usne is trip ka poora maza lene ki koshish ki.




Milte hai abh agle update mai. Aur dekhte hai kiya Ritu ka saamna Aryan se ho pata hai ja nahi.
Bahot behtareen
Tow Aryan ke sabhi sipahi sahi salamt Bach gaye bas sabko choate aayi Kisi ko ziada tow Kisi ko Kam khud Aryan bhi nahi bacha jakhmi hone me
Baherhal sabse achcha khasa saman Mila khaas kar Darshan se
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Behtareen shaandar update
 
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Story ke spoiler se to lagta hai ek acchi thriller n Fantasy type story hogi best of luck for your adventures story. Sath rahege aapke.
RAAZ dhanyavaad bro.
 
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Nice starting to the story. Ab dekhna hoga ki Kalyavan ko kaisay spiritual energy se bharta hai. Aur kaisay abhi waha ke logo ke dil me apne liye jagah banata hai Aryan.
To aakhir kar pohach hi gaya apni karam bhumi but yaha cheezay itni asaan nahi hone wali hai aur Aryan ko abhi bohat kuch aur bohat jaldi karna hoga coz yaha ki public jo naraz hai hai unka vishwas jeetne ke liye.
RAAZ aise hi kahani keha saath baane rahe dhnyavaad bro
 
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