Noor shouldn't be aware of her husband's secret.No - read carefully
Good going
I also agree, sex scene ka description Rhoda jyada lamba hona chahiye
Another thing , new characters can be included but only after Noor and Ammi be fucked thoroughly, roughly
Bring another friend of Hira, more depraved,
Right or Agreed
Chudai jb bhi thoda details bataya jarur
Baki Writer Shandar h.