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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

Kya story m threesome hona chahiye


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FRIDAY

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Writer Bhai aap ki story padh ke mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki main Yahan Par Koi adult site me sex stories padhne Nahin balki bhajan sunne ke liye Aaya Hoon,
Kuch Toh Sharam karo yaar Hum Yahan adult site mein sirf sex stories read karne ke liye Aate Hain Na Ki Is Tarah ke Bhajan wali stories padne ke liye
Shuru se aapki story read kar raha hoon aur abhi tak aapne jitne updates post kiye the Pure 95 update padh liya hai lekin usme ek bhi sex wala update nahi hai or na hi sex se related hai Yaar tum sirf devtaon par hi kahani ghuma rahe ho,
Writer bhai Agar mujhe pata hota ki Tumhari story Itni bakwas hai To Mai isko Shuru se read hi nahi karta isse accha to kisi Mandir Mein bhajan Sunta mai ya Bhagwat Geeta padh Leta lekin Kya Karen Is Tarah Ki adult site par ye padh Bhi To Nahi Sakte.

I know bro how it feels. But most of people don't understand. Opposite opinion ko hamesha writers galat samajta ta hai. They think opposite reviewers are the enemy of writer. They don't think opposite reviews are the betterment of the story.
Jo writer man ki weak ho ta hai wo story quit korne ki bath korta hai.
Wo kabhi thande dimag me samajta nahi hai ese comments ek reader kitni nirash hoke korta hai ye koi samajta nahi. Mai bhi bahut bar writer ko kaha magar wo galat samaj betehe .It's not only about sex. Opposite opinion can help a writer to become a good writer .kiu ki real truth ko digest korne ki liye strong man ki jarurat hai. Yaha most of readers zyada pump marte hai writer ko. Isi liye writers andhere me doobe rahte hai. Encouragement writing ki liye bahut jaruri chiz hai. Magar pump zyada ho gaya to wo drugs ki tara hani karak hai.

TRUTH IS BITTER. BUT LIES ARE SWEET. BUT THIS BITTER MAKES U BETTER.
 

Harry rocks

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I know bro how it feels. But most of people don't understand. Opposite opinion ko hamesha writers galat samajta ta hai. They think opposite reviewers are the enemy of writer. They don't think opposite reviews are the betterment of the story.
Jo writer man ki weak ho ta hai wo story quit korne ki bath korta hai.
Wo kabhi thande dimag me samajta nahi hai ese comments ek reader kitni nirash hoke korta hai ye koi samajta nahi. Mai bhi bahut bar writer ko kaha magar wo galat samaj betehe .It's not only about sex. Opposite opinion can help a writer to become a good writer .kiu ki real truth ko digest korne ki liye strong man ki jarurat hai. Yaha most of readers zyada pump marte hai writer ko. Isi liye writers andhere me doobe rahte hai. Encouragement writing ki liye bahut jaruri chiz hai. Magar pump zyada ho gaya to wo drugs ki tara hani karak hai.

TRUTH IS BITTER. BUT LIES ARE SWEET. BUT THIS BITTER MAKES U BETTER.
Bhai sahab ye truth ki pipdi bajana band kero or rahi baat dushman samjhne ki to pahale us bande k bAt kerne k tarike ko dekho ,m yaha kisi ka worker ni hu jo har kisi ki sunta firu be faltu , saf saf bol raha hu jise ni pasand wo padhna chod de story ko , meri story k bare m ulta sidha bolne ki koi jarurat ni h . Or na hi ye ummid rakhe ki koi bhi ki m jabardasti adultery banaunga meri story ko. Tumne to bas bina jane uski side leli , uske baat kerne k tarike ko ignore ker. Bas yahi h tum logo ki kami , kuch bhi tumhare hisab se na ho writer ko dish dedo , or esi bhadi language m mujhe opinion chahiye bhi ni h.
 

Harry rocks

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I know bro how it feels. But most of people don't understand. Opposite opinion ko hamesha writers galat samajta ta hai. They think opposite reviewers are the enemy of writer. They don't think opposite reviews are the betterment of the story.
Jo writer man ki weak ho ta hai wo story quit korne ki bath korta hai.
Wo kabhi thande dimag me samajta nahi hai ese comments ek reader kitni nirash hoke korta hai ye koi samajta nahi. Mai bhi bahut bar writer ko kaha magar wo galat samaj betehe .It's not only about sex. Opposite opinion can help a writer to become a good writer .kiu ki real truth ko digest korne ki liye strong man ki jarurat hai. Yaha most of readers zyada pump marte hai writer ko. Isi liye writers andhere me doobe rahte hai. Encouragement writing ki liye bahut jaruri chiz hai. Magar pump zyada ho gaya to wo drugs ki tara hani karak hai.

TRUTH IS BITTER. BUT LIES ARE SWEET. BUT THIS BITTER MAKES U BETTER.
Tum logo ki baat me sachai kam sex ki aag jyada dikh rahi h , bas ek jesi story padhni h , koi different idea pasand ni kerta, or mujhe kamjor man ka kahane se pahale apne gireban me jhanko , bina soche samjhe kisi bhi seen ko bakwas ya be fijul bata dete ho , story kya h ye m janta hu ya tum log, story writer k kamjor man k kaaran ni , tum jeso k kaaran adhuri rahati h .
Story to ab ese hi chalegi , m koi change ni karunga
 

Monkey D. Dragon

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Tum logo ki baat me sachai kam sex ki aag jyada dikh rahi h , bas ek jesi story padhni h , koi different idea pasand ni kerta, or mujhe kamjor man ka kahane se pahale apne gireban me jhanko , bina soche samjhe kisi bhi seen ko bakwas ya be fijul bata dete ho , story kya h ye m janta hu ya tum log, story writer k kamjor man k kaaran ni , tum jeso k kaaran adhuri rahati h .
Story to ab ese hi chalegi , m koi change ni karunga
I agree with the last part
 

Dark Devil

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Sorry Harry Bhai thoda busy chal Raha hai schedule kaam ki vajah se. Isi liye review nai de paa Raha hu

Sorry once again Harry bhai
 

FRIDAY

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Bhai sahab ye truth ki pipdi bajana band kero or rahi baat dushman samjhne ki to pahale us bande k bAt kerne k tarike ko dekho ,m yaha kisi ka worker ni hu jo har kisi ki sunta firu be faltu , saf saf bol raha hu jise ni pasand wo padhna chod de story ko , meri story k bare m ulta sidha bolne ki koi jarurat ni h . Or na hi ye ummid rakhe ki koi bhi ki m jabardasti adultery banaunga meri story ko. Tumne to bas bina jane uski side leli , uske baat kerne k tarike ko ignore ker. Bas yahi h tum logo ki kami , kuch bhi tumhare hisab se na ho writer ko dish dedo , or esi bhadi language m mujhe opinion chahiye bhi ni h.
Tum logo ki baat me sachai kam sex ki aag jyada dikh rahi h , bas ek jesi story padhni h , koi different idea pasand ni kerta, or mujhe kamjor man ka kahane se pahale apne gireban me jhanko , bina soche samjhe kisi bhi seen ko bakwas ya be fijul bata dete ho , story kya h ye m janta hu ya tum log, story writer k kamjor man k kaaran ni , tum jeso k kaaran adhuri rahati h .
Story to ab ese hi chalegi , m koi change ni karunga
WHY ARE U SO RUDE AT ME? I DIDN'T SAID ANYTHING ABOUT SEX.
AAPKO JAISE STORY LIKHNE KI LIYE PAISA NAHI MILTA HAME BHI PORNE AUR COMMENT KORNE KI LIYE PAISA NAHI MILTA.OR WORKERS KI BATH YAHA AYA KAHA SE?



CASI BRO ki FARRAR MAI KIA SEX HAI ?
VIKRANT MAI KIA SEX HAI ?
SWARJ BHAI KI
AGENT,
AGENT-02 , PAGLE SHAB KI KABAR KIA IN SAAB STORY ME SEX HAI?
KIA NOTEBOOK BHAI KI AJEEB SI LOVE STORY MAI SEX HAI?

XF ME BAHUT ESE STORY HAI JINME SEX NAHI HAI. KIA WO ACHA NAHI HAI?

IT'S NOT ABOUT SEX.


IT'S ABOUT WRITING. IT'S ABOUT WHAT U TRYING TO SAY U READERS THROUGH WRITING. IT'S ABOUT THAT MAJIC THAT WOULD HOLD THE READERS FOR READING YOUR WRITING.
DON'T REPLY COMMENT EMOTIONALLY.
 
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FRIDAY

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Aur ek bath reader ki karan kabhi story adhuri nahi rahta.
YE 95 percentage time writer hi Apne personal karan ke wajah se story bandh ho jata hai.
Jab ek reader ek writer ki koi story 95 update tak parta hai to apne aap hi us story ke upar ummmed janam jata hai. Isi liye wo writer ki writing ki different opinion deta hai jo wo story pe dekhna chata hai.
Har scene HAR READER KO acha laga ga aisa kabhi nahi hota.
ESE HI HAR COMMENT ACHA LAGE YE JARURI NAHI HAI.
READING READERS KI PASSION HAI.
AUR WRITING WRITER KI PASSION HAI.
YAHA SAB APNE OPNION SHARE KORNE KI LIYE ATE HAI.YOU CAN'T TELL ME TO STOP SHARING MY VIEWS.
YOU DON'T HAVE THE RIGHT TO SHUT ANYONE MOUTH. GOD DIDN'T GIVE U THAT RIGHT.

JUST FEEL FREE.
JUST CHILL!
 
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Jitu kumar

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Aur ek bath reader ki karan kabhi story adhuri nahi rahta.
YE 95 percentage time writer hi Apne personal karan ke wajah se story bandh ho jata hai.
Jab ek reader ek writer ki koi story 95 update tak parta hai to apne aap hi us story ke upar ummmed janam jata hai. Isi liye wo writer ki writing ki different opinion deta hai jo wo story pe dekhna chata hai.
Har scene HAR READER KO acha laga ga aisa kabhi nahi hota.
ESE HI HAR COMMENT ACHA LAGE YE JARURI NAHI HAI.
READING READERS KI PASSION HAI.
AUR WRITING WRITER KI PASSION HAI.
YAHA SAB APNE OPNION SHARE KORNE KI LIYE ATE HAI.YOU CAN'T TELL ME TO STOP SHARING MY VIEWS.
YOU DON'T HAVE THE RIGHT TO SHUT ANYONE MOUTH. GOD DIDN'T GIVE U THAT RIGHT.

JUST FEEL FREE.
JUST CHILL!
bhai aap dono apni jagah par sahi ho,
bas aapke sochane ke drishtikon me antar hai jisase aap dono ke mat ek dusre ke viparit ja rahe hai,
lekin aapka aur harry bhai dono ka tark bahot achchha hai,
aur mai aap dono me se kisi ko galat nhi thahra sakta
 

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Harry rocks bhai aap story ko jaise likhna chahate wise hi likhiye. Kyo ki koi kitna bhi achha writer ho vo sare readers ko santust nahi kar Sakta. Yaha tak ki app ko tulsidas ke ramcharitmanas granth ke bhi kai alochak mil jayenge. Mai bas yahi kahana chahata hu ki app apne trike se hi likhiye.
 
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