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Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Harry rocks

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Bhot hi mast update bro
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mera k Ghar ka gate khula hu tha ,or charo or andhera hi tha , naina ander ghus k charo or ghumke waha ki ek ek chij ka jayja lene lagi.

Tabhi uske hath se taker kha k kuch jamin p gir gaya , tabhi ek kamre se aawaz aayi.

Kon h bhai ,kya chahiye.

Awaz kisi bhudi orat ki lag rahi thi , jab naina us kamre m gayi to waha p ek bhudi orat bethi hui thi. Jo naina ko dekhte hi boli.

Bhudi orat :- kon ho beti tum , pahale to kabhi ni dekha tumhe kundera m

Naina :- ji mera naam naina h or m yaha rampur se aayi hu.

Bhudi orat :- kahi tum vahi naina to ni ho jisne brihaspur k pret ko mara tha

Naina :- ji amma .

Budhi orat :- is garib or akeli budhiya se kya kaam pad gaya beti.

Naina :- ji kya aap lila ki maa ho.

Bhudi orat :- ha beti m hi vo abhagi ma , jiski jwan or bekasur beti ko in nirdayi ganv valo ne berahami se mar dala

Naina :- bekasur ! Per ama ganv vale to bol rahe the ki vo kala jadu kerti thi , wo ek

Bhudi orat gusse se :- dayan thi , yahi bola na un kamino ne , lekin ye sarasar jhut h beti , meri beti to ek sadhvi or param shiv bhakt thi , jisne apni aradhna or sadhu santo ki seva se kuch sidhiya praapt ki thi , jisse bhi vo bina kisi swarth k logo ki madad kerti thi.

Lekin in ganv valo ne apne swarth or kharab charitra k chalte us sadhvi ki jaan leli.

M samjh gayi hu tum yaha kisliye Ayi ho na , taki tum lila ko rok sako, m janti hu ki uski aatma logo ko mAr rahi h , to kya galat ker rahi h meri bachi bolo.

Naina samjh gayi ki ama abhi bhavuk ho gayi h or unse ye samay swal jawab kerne k liye uchit ni h isliye wo boli .

Naina :- kripya aap roiye mat amma,aap.shant ho jaiye , m ye ni bol rahi ki lila galat thi , ha lekin jo ab wo jo ker rahi h , wo jarur galat h , uski vajah se aaj ek nirdosh ki jaan khatre m aagayi thi

Amma aap chinta mat kijiye , ager lila k sath ager kuch galat hua h to m usko nyay dilwane ki puri koshis karungi , per uske liye mujhe janna hoga ki uske sath akhir hua kya tha , jiske karan sara ganv use dayan lekin aap use bekasur manti ho.

Lekin aap abhi aaram kijiye m kal wapas aaungi aaps milne .

Bhudi orat :- kya tum sach me meri beti ko nyaya dilvaogi,

Naina :- ha amma , or aap abhi aaram kijiye , m kal aapse aaker milungi.

Bhudi orat :- beti khana to khati jao.

Naina :- ji dhanyawad amma , fir kabhi. M kal aapse milne aayungi , lekin usse pahale mujhe lila ko rokna hoga , taki or koi na mare or uske uper dag na lage.

Ye bol naina waha se nikal gayi , lekin naina ki aakhiri line sun bhudi orat thoda gusse se khud se badbadayi.

Bhudi orat :- chahe kitni bhi koshis ker le tu naina , lila ka har ek hatyara to jarur marega.

Ye bol vo bhudiya ek dusre kamre m chali gayi.
Ghar se nikalte hur naina ne ek baat notice ki thi ki jab wo un amma k pass thi , jab uski machine bahut hi tez awaz k sath uski lal light flicker ker rahi thi or ghar k bahar aate hi sab normal , naina ko kuch to gadbad lagi.

Wahi naina pahuch gayi vapas veer ki mosi k ghar , jaha p preety usika intezaar ker rahi thi.

Preety excitement se :- are sister kaha chali gayi thi tum , tumhe pata h abhi kya hua.

Naina ankh marte hue :- esa kya ho gaya meri lado kahi esa to ni jiju man gaye

Preety thoda sharma ke :- are ni re sister , apun ki kismat itni bhi achi kaha, per fir bhi aaj esa hua jisse apun bahut khush hu.

Naina :- Hua kya bata to sahi .

Preety :- wo hua yu sister, tumhare khana khane k baad jese hi m or veer khana khake uthe to hum dono ek sath hi plate rakhne kitchen m gaye.

Veer k plate rakhne k baad , jab m plate rakh wapas jane k liye mudi to achanak mera per mud gaya or balance bigdke m girne hi wali thi tabhi.

Naina excited hote hye :- tabhi kya

Preety sharma k gal lal kerte hue :- tabhi achanak se veer ne mujhe girne se bacha liya , apni baho m leke.

Kya batau sister kya mast feeling aayeli thi apun ko jab apun k pyaar ne anjane m hi sahi lekin apni baho m to liya. Hum dono to ek dusre ki ankho m kho hi gaye the, or veer dhire dhire apana face mere karib laane laga , lekin tabhi kambhakt modi ki aawaz se hum had bada k alag ho gaye , or mera kaam hote hote rah gaya

Naina :- oh ho , madam k gaal to dekho itne m hi itni shamahat ,abhi ye hal h to shadi k baat suhagrat p kya hoga .

Kayi esa na ho hamare veer jiju ko hath se kaam hi chalana pade.

Preety josh josh me:- hath se kyu , apun h na apne pyaar veer k liye.

Preety ko jab hosh aaya ki josh josh m kya bol gayi , to wo to sharm se pani pani ho gayi

Naina majak kerte hue :- pakka na tu ker legi , ager ni h to koi baat ni verna ye sali to h hi na , or wese bhi sali to adhi ghar wali hoti h.

Preety:- sali ki bachi ruk tujhe m batati hu, m to tujhe bholi samjhti thi , tu to apun se hi aage nikali in mamlo m.

Ye bol preety naina ko pakdne dodi or naina bhi haste hue bhagne lagi .

Agle din dono saheliyan shahar gayi jesa unhonne kal decide kiya tha , jaha naina ne preety k liye achi or har type ki dresses ki shopping ki.

Jab tak ye dono shopping kerti h aaiye najar dal lete h kundra m kya ho raha h.

Ganv ka postman aaj ka apna sara kaam nipta k jaldi ghar aagaya, kyunki usko bhi bhi lila dayan se khatra mahasoos ho raha tha.

Ghar aaker sabse pahale to usne khana khaya fir apne kamre m aaram ke liye chala gaya.

Tabhi uski patni kamre m aati h or boli .Jiska nam mina tha.

Mina :- kya baat h ji aaj badi jaldi aagaye aap , tabiyat to sahi h na.

Postman jiska nam shekhar tha vo bola.

Shekhar :- ha aaj kaam jaldi ho gaya to aagaya , kyu tujhe koi dikkat h kya.

Mina :- kesi baat kerte ho ji ,mujhe bhala kya pareshani hogi.

Shekhar :- acha , chal mera bahut man ker raha h , chal apne kapde utaar or aaja.

Mina :- ji aaj meri tabiyat thik ni h or abhi bhaiya(mina ka devar) bhi ghar p h, hum kal pakka ker lenge



Shekhar gusse se :- sali teri himmat , tu mujhe yani apne pati ko mana karegi . Kal wala kuch ni mera aaj hi man h , chup chap chudne k liye man ja verna

Mina :- verna kya , aap apni hi patni k sath jabardasti karenge.

Shekhar :- ha karunga , kyunki m tera pati hu , or ek patni ka ye farz h apne pati ko khush kerne ka.

Mina lekin ni manti to shekhar gusse se bola

Shekhar :- m bhi dekhta hu sali kese tu ni manti , chudayi to m kerke rahunga , pyaar se ni to jabardasti hi sahi.

Ye bol shekhar mina ko bed p gira ker usper chad ker jabardasti kerne laga, lekin mina ko achanak se pata ni kya hua , ki usne ek jor dar dhakka mar shekhar ko gira diya or bed se uth ker ek divar ki or muh kerke jor jor se sas lens lagi.

Shekhar:- kamini teri ye majal mujhe dhakka marti h , ab dekh m kya halat kerta hu.

Ye bol shekhar mina ka hath pakad use apni or modne ki koshis ki , lekin mina hili tak ni.

Mina ek bhayanak aawaz me :-tukh jesa havsi bujdil or ker bhi kya sakta h shekhar kute.

Or ye bol wo shekhar ki or.mudi , jise dekhte hi shekhar ki fat k hath m aagayi, kyunki mina ka chahara bahut bhayanak ho gaya tha,or ankho ki putliya gayab ho gayi.

Shekhar darte hue :- kkon ho tum , tum mina ni ho sakti .

Mins :- kyu pahachana ni shekhar babu, m tumhari mot hu lila.

Ye bol usne shekhar ka hath pakad liya , shekhar kese n kese hath chuda k bhaga kamre se or gate ko bahar se band ker diya.

Tabhi piche se shekhar ka bhai bola.

Bhai :- kya hua bhaiya aap dare hue kyu ho ,

Shekhar :- wo wo mujhe mar dalegi .

Bhai :- kon bhaiya kon mar dalegi aapko.

Shekhar :- wo wo mina , mina mar dalegi.mujhe.

Bhai :- mina bhabhi ya lila.

Ye bolne k sath achanak uske bhai ka chahara badal gaya or mina jese hi bhayanak ho gaya.

Lila :- bach k ni ja paoge shekhar , teri mot nishchit h.

Shekhar fir se bhaga or ghar k bahar ja ker hapne laga .


Tabhi use uska ek dost dikha usne apne dost ko bulaya.

Shekhar :- bhai , bhai mujhe bacha le verna ...


Dost bhayanak aawaz me :- verna lila mar dalegi na , lekin tu h isi layak .

Ab wo dost bhi lila k vash m tha , jis ne apne hath m rakhi kulhadi k ek vaar se shekhar ki gardan uda di.

Naina jab preety k sath wapas aayi to use is ghatna ka pata chala to usne wo jagah jaha lila ki kabra thi , waha jane ka decide kiya.

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Karan or jyoti ne apna sara saman pack ker liya tha,or ab wo nikalne ko ready ho rahe the.

Jyoti :- bhai sabhi saman pack ho gaya h , ab chale .

Tabhi karan ki najar darwaje k pass jati h , bahar ki or se divar se chipak halka se juk k kamre m jhatke hue unhe hi dekh rahi h.

Uski ankho m dar or dukh saaf saf najar aaraha tha asuo k roop m.

Karan use dekhte hi uski or gaya or pyar se use apni god m utha liya.

Shivani masumiyat se :- bhaiyu , papa ki or se m aapse mafi mangti hu , ager aap mujhse gussa ho to chahe mujhe tapad bhi mar lijiye, lekin please yu ghar mat chod k mat jaiye . (Rote hue sisakte hue boli) mat jaiye na didu, verna aapki ye princess ek baar fir se akeli ho jayegi.

Shivani ko rota dekh , karan or jyoti ka kaleja kamp sa gaya , wo jante the ki unke or unke maa baap k is jhagde k bich bechari shivani buri tarah fas chuki h or use sabse jyada mansik kasht jhelna pad raha h , ek to usbechari ko itni kam umer m hi uske bhai bahan se dur ker diya gaya , use hostel bhej diya gaya , or jab itne salo baad use vapas bhai bahan ka pyaar mila to kismat ko vo bhi na manjur thA.

Karan or jyoti to khud apni princess ko chod k ni jana chahate the ,lekin kya kerte bichare wo bhi.

Karan shivani ko chup karate hue apne sine se laga k bola.

Karan :- na mera bacha , ese rote ni , kisne kaha aapke bhaiyu aapse naraj h, m or aapki didu bhala aapse naraj ho sakte h kya kabhi.

Shivani :- to fir aap ghar chod k kyu ja rahe ho bhaiya , itne salo baad to mujhe aapka pyaar nasib hua , kya fir mujhe aap dono se dur hona padega.

Jyoti :- ni meri princess , kisne kaha hum aapse dur ja rahe h , aap bhul gayi us din humne kya kaha tha humne , hum apni princess se roj milenge or khub sari masti bhi karenge , h na babu, to aap please mat ro na.

Karan :- ha gudiya , or ap to kitni samjhdar ho na , dekha ni aaj hamare papa ne kesi ghatiya harkat ki , apki didi ki shadi karane ja rahe the , bina unki marji k , wo bhi ek budhe or criminal aadmi k sath.

Ab tum hi batao meri bachi , kya ese ghar m hume rukna chahiye jaha aapke bhaiya or didi ki koi ijjat ni or unhe har time nicha dikhaya jaye.

Shivani karan ki baat samjhte hue :- aapne sahi kaha bhaiya, aapne jo fesla kiya h wo bilkul sahi kiya.

Per promise kijiye aap mujhse roj miloge or mere sath kheloge bhi.

Karan or jyoti ek sath shivani k galo ko chum :- promise princess.

Fir karan or jyoti apna saman uthate h or nikalne lage . Lekin jane se pahale ek akhiri baar apne us kamre ko ji bhar k niharne lage.

Itni yaade jo jud gayi thi us kamre se un dono bhai bahan ki bachpan se leker aaj tak apni jindagi k jyadatar har pal , chahe wo hasi khushi k ho ya dukh k , wo sab unhonne usi kamre m bitaye the.jise dekhte hue unki ankhe nam thi.

Dono ko dukh to bahut ho raha tha us ghar ko chodte hue , kyunki yahi wo ghar tha , jinme unki kilkariya gunji thi , unki maa ka prem or pita ka sneh mila tha yaha , lekin ab paristhitiya kuch or ho chuki thi. Ab unhe yaha prem ni , keval dukh or kasht hi mil rahe the .

Karan or jyoti apne ghar se nikalte h unke pass saman jyada tha to ye dekh shivani ne jyoti ko uski car use kerne ko bol diya or wo bhi unke sath sonsm wale ghar ki or chalne ko ready ho gayi.

Jyoti car nikalti h or karan apni bike , karan apni bike bhi apne sath le jane wala tha , kyunki ye bike uske baap ne ni uski maa ne dilvayi thi.

Ab aap soch rahe honge ki asha to karan k bachpan m hi mar gayi thi to yr bike kese .

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To darasal baat ye thi ki karan or jyoti ko shuru se hi bike ka bahut shock tha, ek din karan apni ma k pas jake bola.

Karan :- mumma , mumma suno na.

Asha :- ha bolo mele babu , kya baat h.

Karan :- mumma, mujhe na ek bike chahiye.

Asha :- acha to mele bache ko bike chahiye , acha jala apni mumma ko bhi to batao , ki mela bacha kya kalega bike ka.

Karan :- mumma jab aap mujhe aap bike dilaogi na , to m aapko or choti ko ghumane leke jaunga uspe or hum jungle wale ghal bhi usipe jaya kalenge. Aap dilaogi na mumma

Asha:- ha kyu ni mela bacha , pal aap pahale bade to ho jao.

Karan bed p khada hoke bola :- lo dekho mumma, m ho gaya bada.

Asha apne bete ki is masum harkat per pahle to hasi, fir use apni god m bithakar boli.

Asha :- ese ni beta, abhi aapki age bahut kam h , aap jab 16 k ho jaoge na tab aapko badiya si bike dilvayungi m.

Fir kuch soch k asha muskurayi or ek pigi bank jo usne aaj hi kharida tha apne bacho ko savings kerna sikhane k liye wo leker aati h , tab tak waha jyoti bhi karan k pass ake beth gayi.

Asha :- acha beta aapko bike chahiye na to apko jarur milegi , lekin uske liye hume pese to ikathe kerne padenge na

Fir usne apne purse se 35000 nikal k karan or jyoti ko dikhate hue boli.

Asha :- per babu mere paas to itne hi h or bike to 70000 m aayegi na to ab hum kya karenge.

Jyoti :- kya karenge mumma.

Asha :- mele paas ek idea h meli bitiya , chalo hum esa kerte h aadhe pese to mane is gullak m dal diye , ab baki ke adhe pese aapko isme dalne padenge.

Karan :- per mumma, hamale pass to pese h hi ni na, hum kidal se layenge pese.

Asha pyar se karan k galo ko sahalate hue boli :- uske liye beta aapko savings kerni padegi na

Jyoti :- savings kya hota h mumma or wo kese kalte h.

Asha :- beta savings matlab, apni pocket money se thode thode pese bacha ker rakhna.

Jese abhi aapko papa pese dete h na , to aap unme se thode thode pese mat kharch kerna or unhe is pigi bank m dal diya kerna , ese dhire dhire apne aap aapke pass pese ikatha ho jayenge

Karan :- per mumma, itne thole thole peso se kya hoga.

Asha :- mere babu, bund bund se hi sagar bharta h , har kaam dhire dhire hi pura hota h na, or wese bhi apan ko bhi kaha jaldi h beta , aap dhire dhire saving ker lo.

Tab tak aap bade bhi ho jaoge , fir hum sab ek sath jayenge new bike lene or khub ghumenge h na.

Dono ek sath :- ha mumma.


Ese asha ne karan or jyoti ko savings kerna sikhaya, isliye hi to maa ko pratham guru kaha jata h.

or Usi din se dono bhai bahan roj thoda thoda saving kerne lage, or us hadse ke baad bhi apni maa ki is sikh ko na bhule

Or dono ne jald hi 70000 rs jama ker liye , lekin tab tak dono samjhdar bhi ho gaye the , wo 12 th tak school bus se gaye

Or 17 sal k hote hi unhone apni savings se vo bike kharidi college jane k liye.

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Fir ek akhiri baar dono bhai bahan ne apne ghar ki or najar dali or nikal gaye sonam k ghar ki or.

Yaha ranvir or bajaj usko jate hue dekh rahe the gusse se or kabya jo itni der se khud ko badi mushkil se roki hui thi , ab uska sabra ka bandh tut gaya or wo apne kamre m jaker fut fut ker rone lagi.

Ranvir :- bajaj sahab kaha rah gaye aapke admi , wo kamina to us ladki ko le bhi gaya.

Bajaj :- aap chinta mat kero sharma ji , wo bach k ni jaa payenge, bas kya aap bata sakte ho wo dono abhi yaha se kaha gaye honge

Ranvir :- mere admiyo ne pata kerke bataya tha , us kutte ko competition k inam m ek ghar mila h , jarur wahi ja raha hoga wo

Fir ranvir usko pura adress batata h,jise sun kamini muskan k sath bajaj bola

Bajaj :- fir to humara kaam ho jayega sharma ji , aap yahi rupiye, us ghar tal pahuchne se pahale unhe ek sunsan area cross kerna padega , m abhi shortcut se unse pahale apne aadmiyo tak pahunch , un dono ko pakad lunga, lekin aapke us bete ka kya karna h.

Ranvir :- jo kerna h , wo ker dena aap to bajaj sahab , mujhe koi fark ni padta ,aapko or mere ko bas jyoti se matlab h, aapko ladki chahiye or.mujhe apna maksad.

Bajaj ye sun waha se full speed m apni car se nikal gaya or apne admiyo ko bhi vaha aane ko bol diya.

Karan or jyoti dhire dhire sonam k ghar ki or badh rahe the ki tabhi karan ko aage khatre ka ahasas ho gaya.

Karan man me :- choti kya tune bhi mahasus kiya wo jo mane kiya.

Jyoti :- ha bhai , lagta h aage koi khatra h , per kya.

Karan :- jarur wo us kamine bajaj ki koi chal hogi , tum esa kero pahale shivani ko sambhal lo.

Jyoti :- ji bhai,

Ye bol jyoti apni ankh band ker kuc budbudayi or pyar se shivani k sir p hath fer diya , jisse shivani ko usi vakt nind Agayi or vo gahari nind m so gayi.

Karan or jyoti thoda hi aage bhade the ki , aage sunsaan area m 2 van rasta roke khadi thi , karan ne jese hi unko dekh gadi roki , to piche se do gadi or aagayi or rasta rok liya.

Tabhi ek gadi se bajaj utra , or uske sath baki gadiyo se 30 40 gunde type aadmi utre.karan ne jyoti ko ander hi rahane ko bol k khud bike se utra.

Bajaj :- dekh karan aakhiri moka de raha hu , pyaar se man ja , or apni bahan ki shadi mujhse kerwa de.

Teri bahan rani ban ker rahegi , or jese tere baap ko karodo ka fayda karwaya h , wese hi tujhe bhi m malamal ker dunga. Soch le

Karan ka ab para high hone laga tha ,bajaj ki is ghatiya baat ko sun ker.

Karan :- kute , mujhe apne jesa nich or gira hua insaan samjh rakha h kya tune , jo meri bahan ka soda kerne chala h tu haram ki nasal.

Meri bahan ki meri liye wo kimat h , jiske badle me m puri duniya ki dollat ko bhi bekijk thukra dunga.

Akhiri moka de raha hu bajaj , meri bahan ko pane ka vichar bhi mzn se nikal de, verna vo haal karunga tera ki , tu mot ki bhik mangega , per mot ni milegi tujhe.

Bajaj gusse se chilaya :- bas bahut ho gaya sale ,ab to teri bahan k sath suhagrat tere samne hi manaunga, or kamine , ise to m apni rakhe.....

Abhi bajaj itna hi bol paya tha ki karan ne bahut jordar lat uske sine p de mari , jisse wo piche ja ker car se takraya or uski halat patli ho gayi.

Bajaj apne admio se :- dekh kya rahe ho salo , mar is kute k pille ko .

Tabhi 6 admi ek sath waha aapahunche, lekin karan bhi iske liye teyar tha.

Pahale 2 jano ek sath var kiya , jise karan ne asani se dodge ker ek ki chati p jordar lat maar di or dusre ka hath pakad k tod diya.

Aaj karan kisi ko bhi bakshne k mood m ni tha , isliye apni speed se kab baki bache aage aaye 4 k ese point p jordar laat mad di , jisse insan ki turant mot ho jaye , kisi ko pata hi ni chala

Or thodi thodi dur ja ker sab mar gaye , dhyan se dekhne p pata chala 4ro ki gardan tut chuki thi.

Ab bajaj ne sabko ek sath jane ko kaha , ab karan bhi khun kharaba kerne ko tatpar tha , to wo jyoti ki car ki or bhada or jyoti ko diggi kholne ka ishara kiya.or digi k paas jake kuch nikalne ki koshis laga.

Darasal ye diggi kholne ka to sirf natak tha , usne digi ki aad me apni shakti se apni talvar ko mangwaya or sath me ek or chij ko bhi vo kya thi uska aage pata chal jayega.

Karan apni talvar ko leker unki or doda , or shuru ker diya sabko gajar muli ki tarah katna.

Karan aaj kisi p raham ni ker raha tha , jo bhi samne aata to bahut buri mot mara ja raha tha, kisi ka to sir to kisi k hath.

Unme se kuch talvar baji bhi jante the , or apne sath talvar laye bhi the , ab vo karan se ladne aaye.

Ek hata kata talvaar baj aage aaya or karan p attack kerna chaha , per karan ne use dodge ker , ek hi war m talvar uske sine k aar par ker di.

Tabhi piche se ek admi ne is baat ka fayda utha karan p vaar kerna chaha , to karan ne bijli k speed se apni talvar us admi k sine se nikal bina piche mude hi badi style se talvar ko ghuma kee us dusre aadmi k sine m ghop di.

Fir karan ko char aadmiyo ne gher liya , lekin karan ne itni speed se khud gol ghumte hue wo apni talvar ko charo or chalaya , ki ek hi jhatke k sath ,ek hi pal m charo ki gardane alag ho gayi. Ab baki bache kuch log jinki buri tarah fat gayi thi , wo apni van ki or dode.

Lekin jesa mane pahale hi kaha tha karan aaj raham k mood m bilkul ni tha or jo bhi karan k hatho aaj yamalok ki ticket katwa rahe the, wo sare criminals the.

Ab karan ko laga bahut hua timepass , ab wo wapas diggi ki or gaya or jaker or usne apna dusra hathiyar nikala , jo ye tha



Ji ha loaded rocket launcher jo karan ne mangwaya tha apni shaktiyo se ,fir karanne us bhagti van ko nishana bana trigger daba diya , jisse ek tez aawaz k sath rocket nikal van se takraya , jisse van k chithade chithade ud gaye.

Ab karan ghayal bajaj ki or bhada , bajaj ne to karan ka ye rodra rup dekh ker apni pant gili nili sab ek sath ker di thi , use apne pas karan ni , yamraj aate hue dikh raha tha.

Karan apna hath uski gardan k piche lejaker uski gardan piche se pakad k bola

Karan :- kyu be haramjade bola tha na tujhe , abhi bhi moka de raha hu bhag ja , per tu ni mana.

Bajaj kamptee hue :- mujhe maf ker do , m aage se jyoti k bare m sochunga bhi ni.

Karan :- mat le apni is gandi juban se meri pyaro bahan ka nam sale gandi nali k kide.

Maafi ka samay ab ja chuka h , ab samay h tere karmo ka dand milne ka

Karan ne ye bol badi berahmi se uska ek hath jad se ukhaad dala , jiske kaaran bajaj ek bhayanak chikh k sath behosh ho gaya.

Karan usko hosh me lata h us pe pani dal k or bola .

Karan :- kamine inhi hatho se tune apni hi maa ka murder kiya tha na , wo bhi bas isliye, kyonki usko tere dush charitra ka pata chal gaya tha.
Or isliye unhone tere baap ki property ko tere naam kerne se mana ker diya tha.

Fir karan ne uska ek per ukhaad k diya or jab vo apas behosh hua to use vapas hosh me lake bola

Karan :- isi per se tune us bichari garbhavati orat k pet p laat mar k apne ghar se nikala tha na , jo rishte m teri sagi bahan thi.

Wo bhi bas keval isliye , kyunki usne apna hissa jo mang liya tha , apne pita ki property me se.

Vo bhi us bichari ne isliye manga tha , kyunki uska pati mar chuka tha or use peso ki jarurat thi , apne or apne hone wale bache k liye.

Lekin tu vo rakshas nikla jisne , apne peso k lalach m apni bahan ko bhi ni baksha , apni hi garbhavati bahan k sath esa suluk kiya.

Bajaj :- aah mujhe mar dalo please , or dard ab bardasht ni hota .

Karan :- dard abhi mila hi kaha h tumhe bajaj , abhi to tumhe apne or karmo ka dand milna baki h.

Karan ne fir uske main point p itni jordar laat mari jisse uske main point ka kachumer ban gaya , lekin karan ne use marne ni diya.

Karan :- ye har us ladki k liye bajaj , jinhe tune apni havas ka shikar bana unke jivan ko nark se bhi battar bana diya.

Karan ne ab uski jibh pakad k uske muh se alag ker di

Karan :- tune meri bahan ko jo gali di thi abhi kute, ye uske lie.

Or last m karan ne uski dono ankhe fod dali or akhiri baar bola.

Karan :- ye meri jaan pe apni gandi najar dalne k liye ,

Bajaj ab tadaf tadaf k behosh ho gaya , karan ne kuch mantra bol ek roshni uski or chodi, jisse wo mar na jaye ,

Karan ko shant kerne k liye jyoti jaldi se car se bhag k aayi or uske gale lag gayi , jisse wo shant ho gaya.

Jyoti :- bhai ,aap ise jinda kyu chod rahe ho , mar daliye is hevan ko.

Karan :- ni choti , mot jesi choti saja iske liye bahut kam h , mane iska wo hal ker diya h , ki ye sari jindagi mot k liye tarsega , per mot iske karib bhi ni aayegi .

Tabhi bajaj ki jeb m pada mobile ring hone laga , karan ne jab phone nikal ke dekha to call ranvir ka tha .

Karan ne jese hi phone pic kiya to ranvir samne se bola.

Ranvir :- hello bajaj sahab , kaha rah gaye , jyoti mil gayi kya or us haramjade karan ka kya kiya

Karan :- aapke bajaj sahab to baat kerne ki halat m ni h mr ranvir , ha chahe to tum mujhse baat ker sakte h my so called papa.

Ranbir :- gusse se tu abhi tak sahi salamat h kamine , aap se sidha tum p aagaya .chupchap ghar aaja jyoti ko leker verna

Karan :- verna kya ker loge mr ranvir , tumhara bheja hu kuta bajaj yaha mot k liye tadaf raha h or uske pile yamalok ki yatra p nikal chuke h. Tere jesa insaan samman k kabil kadapi ni h mr ranvir jo peso k liye apni beti tak ka soda ker de.

Kaan khol k sun lo mr ranvir , aaj jo apne harkat ki h , uske baad aapka hamse koi rishta ni rah gaya h , tumne jo meri bahan k sath jo kerne ki koshis ki h man to kerta h tujhe abhi gaad du jinda, per ni m tujh jesa kamina ni ho sakta ,is baar to tum bach gaye mr ranvir , kyunki tumhare or tumhari mot k bich ye rishta jo aagaya tha, kyunki durbhagya se tum mere baap jo thahre , isliye aakhiri moka de raha hu, mere ya meri bahan ki jindagi m tumne kuch bhi ulta sidha kerne ka socha , to agli baar tumhe mere prakop se na to ye rishta bacha payega , na hi swayam ishvar .

Ye bol karan ne phone kat diya . Fir karan ne ek chutki bajayi , jisse sari lashe ek hi jhatke m van m pahuch gayi .

Fir karan ne apni fire power ko activate ker , sabhi vano m aag laga di , or tez dhamako k sath sari lasho k chithade ud gaye.

Fir bajaj ko karan or jyoti wahi chod bad gaye apne naye ghar ki orr.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

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Note :- sorry for late update dosto , per m bhi kya kerta aaj m bahut busy tha,jesa aap logo lo bataya tha mane dukan p bahut kaam tha ,is chakker m khana bhi ni khaya tha,ab jaker free hua ek ghante pahale to jaldi se ye mega update teyar kiya or aap logo k samne rakh raha hu.
Mazza aagya bhai
Main part aaj ka
Fighthing hi thi jisko dekh k kazza aaya
Ranveer ko nhi chodna chaiye tha
Kam se kam itna to karna hi tha ki ab vo koi bakchodi na kare

Naina leela ko rok hi legi
Ye to pkka h

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai :)
 

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Asli pariksha ki ghadi shuru.
Karan or jyoti ki baaten bade hi emotional thi .
Karan ka attitude apne baap ke sath jabardast.
Halka action bhi hua bajaj ke sath.
Udhar
Naina Preety too good yaara.

Or ab ,

Aage ka intjaar
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Bahut bhadiya update bhai. Mene bhi aapki story waha dekhi thi aur ascharya bhi hua tha. Lekin aap fikar na karo us site per review na ke braber mite he. Aur jo chor he use chori lar lene do kyuki original to aap hi ho na. Aajnke update me aapne bahut badiya warnan kiya he dono bhai behno ki manosthiti ka. Maza aagya. Bajaj ne sayad apne gundo ko bulaya hoga.
Waiting 4 next update
Thanks for your support bhai
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Bhai aaj k update ki taareef karne k liye shabd nhi h
Kya bolun samajh nhi aarha

Karan ka maturity dikha baat karna
Vo saara scene to dil mein utar gya
Magar isme pariksha khan se aayi ??
Ye samajh nhi aaya
Kon rok sakta h karan or jyoti ko saath rhne se
Kisme itna gurdaa h !??
Bajaj to h nhi ranveer ko mnaa kar diya
So ab kya hone wala h ????


Naina waali story bhi shi h
Mujhe lagta h leela waali story logo ko galat pta h
Jb vo itni achi thi to vo aisa q karegi
Jarur pandit or in charo ne milke kriya karwayi hogi
Or jb leela nne pakda hoga to unhone isko maara hoga
Or ilzaam bhikari pe lagaya hoga
Jiska badla ab leela le rhi h

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai :)


Or bhai rhi baat copy paste ki
Bhai ye to sabke saath hota h
Isko positive way mein dekho
Jaise ye xossip ki avi bhai k saath hua
Tabhi main
Meri family mera gaav or main jaisi shandaar story padh paaya
Pritam bhai k saath hua
Tabhi to koi to rok lo
Jaisi incomparable story or uski shayari padh paaya
Qki jb maine ye padhi tb mujhe xforum ka pta bhi nhi tha
Lekin asli talent kisi se chupta nhi h
Jis din aap update dene band karoge to log dhundhte dhundhte isi site pe aaenge or unko sach pta lag jaaega
So aap bas kaam kijiye apna
U r doing brilliant
Qki copy paste umdha stories hi ki jaati h

Keep rocking bhai :)
Thanks for your support bhai
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Roshini didi harry bhai ne apka comment na like kiya na comment kiya


Dekhlo
Harry bhai ki story bohot achi hai jaisa apne or rajeev sir ne bataya tha

Padhkar maza aa gaya
Acha likh rahe hai harry bhai


Magar aap sabke comment like or quote karte hao to apne roshini didi ka kiu nahi kiya :angrywife:


Iske piche kya baat ho sakti hai

Harry bhai readers ko answer chahiye :bat::bat:

Or abhi aap online bhi ho so tell me :banghead:
Sorry nisha ji mane apni galti sudhar li h
Thanks for your support
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