Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

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Zabardast update

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Bhai bohat hi zabardast update dia hain yah aapne. Aur aapki story likhne ki shally din ba din behtreen aur nikharti jaa rahi hain. Bohat khoob ab radha chali jayegi wapas aur bactey hain karan n jyoti aur ab unka asli prayojan shuru hoga is ilaqe ko dusht preto ke qahar se bachane ka aur shayad isi me woh Naina se mulaqat kar sakey kyuki Naina ka lakshya bhi kuch kuch same hoga. Aur aane wale khatre ko bhaaptey huay jyoti ko shakti punj dia gaya hain. aur Naina ka rahasya ko aapne ujaagar kia magar abhi bhi bohat se cheezay baqi hain. Dekhay itihaas ke panno me kiya chupa huanhain aur bhavishya me kab uski jankari hum tak pohachti hain wait rahega agli update is umeed ke sath ki woh pehlay waley se bhi zabardast hoga jaisai ki aap har ek update ke sath kar rahay hain pichlay se bhi badia.

Sare raaj time k sath khulenge bhai , lekin dhire dhire
Kyunki jaldi ka kaam shetan ka hota h
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Very good update bro ..

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बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Fantastic update

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

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thank you for comment aur agar ye plot ki demand he to bohot achcha he aap din pratidin kafi achcha likh rahe ho mene bas isiliye kaha kyunki ek hi rishta jodne se imotion bhi ek jaise hote he aur dialogue bhi aur ye human nature he ke same situation me hum kuch naya nahi kar pate isiliye thoda bore ho jata he iski vajah se jab bhi lagta he ke inko nayi behan milne wali he to use scroll kar diya jata he aur muze ye bhi pata he ke ek update likhne me kitni mehnat lagti he aur waqt bhi lagta he iske baad bhi agar koi thoda part bhi miss kare ya scroll kare to apko improvement ki jarurat he muze yahi lagta he
Bhai aapne shayad dekha ni m is wale comment k alawa bhi kayi alag se baat jarur kerta hu.



aur jahatak iss baat ka jawab he to aap bhale hi baki logose wa pe baat kar lete ho lekin har kisi ke paas apka no.nahi he na and kayi baar logo ke man me swal ate he lekin wo puchte nahi ya phir kisi comment me same sawal padhke ye sochte ke aap jawab doge to samaj aa jayega lekin apka reply nhi ata
aur mene isiliye aisa bola kyunki mene kai baar comment karne ki ya sawal puchne ki koshish ki to wo sawal pehle hi pucha jaa chuka tha to me apke reply ka wait kiya uske baad apka wahi same reply aya to phir mene bhi comment karne ka idea chhod diya kyunki muze kuch fayda dikha nhi baki apki marji bhai apki story he

Aapke suggestion or appriciatio k liye thanks bhai , and sorry for my rude behaviour

 

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mere bhai me ye nahi keh raha ke apne force kiya wo bas kehne ka lehja tha aur kuch nahi itna dil pe mat lo koi force bhi nhi kar sakta aise comment ke liye mene yahi bola he aur aap itna mat socho apki story bohot achchi he aapne jo changes kiye he plot me and spectrum rakha he wo kabile tarif he and story one way nahi jaa rahi ye bhi bohot achchi baat he apme kuch to baat he creativity ki ye to manana padega aur apko to iss baat se khush hona chahiye ke apki story logo ko itne pasand aa rahi he ke unke expectations barh rahe he isiliye negative comments ya critisism aa raha he aur ye bohot achchi baat he ek writer ke liye aap bas story pe dhyan do ek din aisa jarur ayega ke apko kisiko request karne ki jarurat nahi hogi log apse request karrnge ke story post karne ke liye
aur rahi force wali baat to wo mene apke liye nahi kaha tha in general kaha tha itna dil pe mat lo kyunki muze pata he ke logo ke dil me bhi mere comments padhne ke baad ye sawal ata hoga ke me sirf criticise kyu karta hu aur apne bhi wahi puch liya to sare jawab ek sath de diye aap plz hurt feel mat kijiye

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Fantastic update bro.... Keep it up....

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Nice update..

Karan Jyoti dono hi Sonam k bare m soch k pareshan h but as Karan said , wo ivh karega is bare m .. dekhte h..

Karan n baba s Kya aur kis baat ki permission maangi thi ??

Naina ko apni maa bare mkch kch pata Chala h jaisa Pandit ji n bataya .
Pandit ji n naina ki MAA ko Sahara dia tha aur behan maan Kar uski raksha b Kari but samraat k samne wo haar gae aur MEGHA b swarthi ni hone chahti thi isliye wo samraat k sath chali gai.
Is flashback m ye to clear h ki naina spcl h but ye ni pata Chala ki samraat megha k piche pada hi kyu tha..

Kher dekhte h Kya hotah h...

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Kya aaj update ayega

Sorry buddy aaj kaafi busy hu
Ab 31st k baad hi free ho paunga properly
Agar detailed review na de Pau to naraaz mat hona

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Lajawab story
Keep posting
Waiting for next update

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