Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya h aapne is pavan kahani ko.
Or Ise Bari Bari se aage le Jane ka vichar bhi Uttam h bhai.
Karan ne jo bhi Kiya usse Prabhu bhi Prasanna hue.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar