Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

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Jaise mera naam hai waise he main bohat Saalo se anime aur Manga lover raha hu. Lekin ek waqt per ja ker mere mann me khud kuch stories ke idea ane lage jin ko main bohat waqt se try karna chahta tha. Ab main itna talented nahi tha jo manga ya light novels bana sakta. iss liye main ne diffrent site search ki jahan se mujhe iss Forum ka pata chala meri storie system based thi aur yahan kuch writers ne System based storie bhi start ki huwi thi. jis wajha se main ne iss forum per storie likhne ka decide kia. Mujhe forum ka kuch zada pata to nahi hai Per Umeed karta hu ap logo ko meri storie pasand aye gi.

Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet

Kuch Storie ke points ​

(1) Jaisa Main ne upar bataya ye storie System based storie hai jis me ap ko Fantasy, Adventure, Adultery, Harem aur Romance jaise genre daikhne ko mile gye.

(2) Storie ke shuru me kuch cheeze thora zada waqt le sakti hai per jaise jaise storie aage barhti jaye waise waise cheeze intresting hoti jaye gi to saath bane rahiye ga.



(3) Storie Real World aur other world dono me chale gi lekin Main storie jo hai wo real world me he chale gi.



(4) Week me 2 update aye gye ek Saturday night ya Sunday ko aur dusra Wednesday Night ya Thursday ko.





(5) Storie Arcs ke hisaab se chale gi abhi 8 Arc to soche huwe hai. Lekin Response acha huwa to storie lambi bhi chal sakti hai.









Readers ke Response ke hisaab se timing baad me change bhi ho sakti hai to bharpoor pyaar de ker Meri himmat barhane me madad zaroor kariyega. Main Font aur Color wagaira decide nahi ker pa raha tha iss liye jo style Readers ko pasand hai us ke hisaab se Werewolf bhai ke font aur color style use karu ga agar baad me koi acha mila to change ker lu ga. Aj Shaam tak pehla Update aa jaye ga tab tak ke liye.





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Guide-Sama ​

Hello Guys! Guide-Sama here, Ye story ke liye ek guide hai, Ye ap ko story samajhne me madad kare gi, Ap ko yahan Character Intro, QNA, Abilities Detail's, Prologue, Arc Poster aur Current Status daikhne ko mile ga, Qna me pehle Question's main ne khud chune hai agar ap ko kuch khaas puchna ho to PM ker ke puch sakte ho aur ap ka Question bhi yahan add ho jaye ga!

Spoiler: Current Status Name: Aarav Arya Level: 142 Rank: C Title: (Alpha) (Dragon Slayer) (X3) Job: None Sealed Stats: 22% (Skills) [SLASH(A)] [SHADOW SHUFFLE(B)] [LIGHTNING STEPS(B)] [RUNE ENGRAVING(A)] [TECHNOMANCY(B)] [ADAPTIVE LEARNING(B)] [CHARISMATIC PRESENCE (C)] [ENCHANCED LANGUAGE UNDERSTANDING ] (Abilities) [ALPHA PRESENCE] [DRAGONIC OVERLORD] [FLASH STEPS(QI)] [ALPHA TRANSFORMATION] [MNEMOSYNE'S GAZE] [WIND BLADE(QI )] [WIRL WIND(QI)] [FLIGHT(QI)] [SONIC BOOM (QI)] [WIND BULLET(QI)] [POISON RESISTANCE(B)] [BEAST SUMMON(B)] [Berserk (A)] (Unique Abilities) [Will to Live] [Limitless Growth] (Hidden) [Devour] [Soul Binding] [Substance Sustainer] [Spirit's Domination] [Cupid's Chalice] (System Features) [SYSTEM BAZAAR] [HOLOGRAPHIC TRAINING(3)] [EXPERIENCE INSIGHT(2)] [LEVEL INSIGHT(2)] [INVENTORY MANAGEMENT(4)] [ASCENDENT LEVEL INNER QI] [UNSEALING SYSTEM]

Spoiler: Character Intro Aarav's Family Aarav Arya (Main Character) Avinash Arya (Aarav's Father) (Spirit Clan) Varsha Arya (Aarav's Mother) Urvi Arya (Aarav's Sister) Aarav's Party Member Daisuke Takahashi (The Warlord) (Wind Clan) Andrew Yakubu (Guardian) Vansh Sayani (Blacksmith) Isabelle Adjani (Healer) (Beta) Kim Yoo-Jung (Assassin) (Fire Clan) (Luna) Kunle Yakubu (Andrew's Son) Avinash's Party James Kevin (Swordsman) Junaid Shiekh (Guardian) Kang Jinho (Warrior) Lee Soo-hyun (Black Smith) (Fire Clan) Ela Öztürk (Healer) Sayani Family Adarsh Sayani (Vansh's Father) Archana Sayani (Vansh's Mother) Aakash Sayani (Vansh's Elder Brother) Saanvi Sayani (Aakash's Wife) Arti Sayani (Vansh's Elder Sister) Vanshika Sayani (Vansh's Twin Sister) Sonia Sayani (Vansh's Wife) Sameer Sayani (Vansh's Cousin) Daisuke's Family Hiroshi Takahashi (Daisuke's Father) (Wind Clan Leader) Miyuki Takahashi (Daisuke's Mother) Tsubame Takahashi (Daisuke's Sister) (Wind Clan) Yoo-Jung's Family and Clan Kim Yoo-ri (Yoo-Jung's Sister) Na-ri (4th Elder) From Aarav's Hometown Manohar (Aarav's Employer) Akansha (Manohar's Daughter) Parth (Aarav's Friend) Kirti (Parth's Sister and Urvi's Friend) From New-York Veronica Carmichael (Vanshika's Friend) Lydia Martin (Vanshika's Friend) Barbie (Aakash's Guard) Ellis (Adarsh's P.A) Ashley (Urvi's Nurse Friend) Jenny (Sammy's Secretary) **** Singh Family Pratap Singh (Head of the Family) Amar Singh (Pratap's Elder Son) Radhika Singh (Amar's Wife) Kunal Singh (Amar's Son) Vikram Singh (Pratap's Second son) Meera Singh (Vikram's Wife) Veer Singh (Vikram's Son) (Dead) Tanushree Singh (Vikram's Daughter) Karunesh Singh (Pratap's Third Son) (Dead) Priya Singh (Karunesh's Wife) Ishika Singh (Karunesh's Daughter) Ananya Singh (Pratap's Daughter) Rohit Verma (Ananya's Husband) Riya Verma (Ananya's Daughter) **** From Level Up Tower Michael Murphy (Head of Player Association) Caroline (Michael's assistant) Becky Mitchell (Player Association Officer) Hannah William (Player) Mia Murphy (Michael's Daughter) Steven Valentine (S Rank) Emily Valentine (Steven's sister) **** Aarav's Guild Malia Hale (Guild Master) Rahul (Guild Member) (Beast Human) Tarun Sharma (Guild Member) (Sushnat's Son) **** Shankar (Ishika's Boss) Deepak (Shankar's brother) Nandini (Ishika's Friend) Dineshwar (From Intelligence Bureau) Monarch's Ezra (Shadow Monarch) Sushant Sharma (???) ??? (Stone Monarch) Mother Spirit (Demon Spirit Monarch) Servants & Tamed Beast Shadow (Gamma) Lime (Tamed Beast) (Slime) Aayush Arya (Servant) (Red Dragon) Sushmita (Servant) (Rahul's Mother)

Spoiler: Unique Abilities [Will To Live] (Will to live) Abhi tak hume kuch cheeze iss ability ki daikhne ko mili hai, Pehli ye Aarav ke liye ek temporary stats boost ki tarha kaam karti hai, Dusri ye System me error daal sakti hai, Abhi ke liye hume kuch detail daikhne ko nahi mili hai, Ye ability mostly extreme dangerous situation me Aarav ki madad ke liye kaam ati hai, Abhi ke liye Ability ka ek progress meter bhi chal raha hai, 100% complete hone ke baad shayad hume ye ability ki details mile, Abhi ke liye hume kuch nahi pata ke ye Ability kia hai? Kiu hai? Kaise hai? [Limitless Growth] Will to live ki tarha ye bhi Aarav ki shuruaati Ability hai aur hume iss ke baare me bhi kuch daikhne ko nahi mila, Lekin naam ki tarha ye Aarav ki growth ke liye Ability hai, Ye hidden kiu hai? Kis se hidden hai? hume abhi nahi pata, Lekin aage chal ker hume iss ka bhi pata lage ga. [Devour] Devour basically ek dusre Player ki skill ko apna banane ki kshamta rakhne wali Ability hai, Player kisi ko maarne ke baad uss ki Skills ko devour ker sakta hai apna bana sakta hai, Lekin ye ability itni simple nahi hai, agar saamne wala ka Level ya shakti player se zada hai to un sab Skills ke level bhi kam ho jaye gye, Uss ke baad Player ke level ke saath uss Skill ke level bhi barhe gye, Lekin Player sirf ek Skill ya Ability he le sakta hai, Wanhi ek shakti Devour ability ki ye hai ke agar saamne wala Player ko apni shaktiyon ka vaaris bana leta hai to Player saamne wale ki sabhi Abilities aur skills le sakta hai aur saath me Player ke stats bhi barh sakte hai, Lekin ye Ability ek bari matra me Mana consume karti hai aur agar Mana kam per jaye to Player ki moat bhi ho sakti hai. [Soul Binding] Ye ability Avinash ke Clan se bani Ability hai, Bilkul jaise Avinash ne Aarav ki soul ko bind kia tha ye wo he ability hai, Ye ability target ki body aur soul ke beech ek shaktishali dhaga bana deti hai, Ye dhaga koi aur daikh ya chu nahi sakta, Lekin ye sirf tab kaam karta hai jab saamne wali ki soul shareer chorne ke baad uss ke kareeb he ho. Lekin agar soul apne akhri safar ke liye matlab afterlife nikal gayi hai to kuch nahi ho sakta, Soul ko shareer se bandhne ke baad Player usse kisi kathputali ki tarha Use ker sakta hai aur wanhi Soul swipe bhi ker sakta hai lekin uss ke liye kisi aur ko apni atma sacrifice karni pare gi, Bilkul jaise Avinash ne khud ko sacrifice ker dia tha. Soul aur shareer ko bandhne ke baad har second uss bandhan ko banaye rakhe ke liye 1 Mana Use hota hai wanhi Soul Swap ke liye adhik Mana Use hota hai. [Sustenance Sustainer] Ye ek aisi Unique Ability hai jo Survival ke liye kaam ati hai, Insaan khaane ke bina sirf kuch dino ke liye ya hafto ke liye zinda reh sakta hai aur uss beech bhi uss ka shareer kamzoor ho raha hota hai, Lekin Sustenance Sustainer ye hone se rokta hai, Player bina khaye bhi maheeno survive ker sakta hai, Aisa nahi ke bhook nahi lage gi wo lage gi lekin sataye gi nahi, Furthermore, Har khaane ka taste bhi increase ho jaye ga even agar wo bekaar bhi bana hai agar maze ka bana hai to svargh, Khaane ke beech ke sabhi harmful Substance bhi filter ho jaye gye to khaane se hone wale sabhi bemaariyo se bachaye gi ye ability, Aur har baar bhar pait khana khaane se Player ki strength bhi increase ho gi utni zada nahi lekin ho gi zaroor, Ye ability mana consume nahi karti aur har samay active rehti hai.

Spoiler: Q&A Question(1): Abilities aur skills me kia difference hai? Answer: Ability aur skill bilkul power aur prowess ki tarha he hai, Ability ke liye Mana ya Qi consume hoti hai, Ability kisi superpower ki tarha hai, Matlab human capabilities ke bahar ki power Ability hai. Example, Levitation, koi bhi artibute ka istemal mind reading aur aisi he aur bhi bohat, Wanhi skill human capabilities me rehte huwe karne wali cheeze hai, Jo bhi physically possible ho wo skill hai. Example, Swordsmanship, Supernatural strength, Defence aur kuch daily life skills, Lekin skills me Mana ya Qi consume nahi hoti hai. Question(2): Unique Ability kia hai? Answer: Unique ability ka matlab sirf powerful ability ka hona nahi hai, Unique Ability ka matlab hai ke waisi koi bhi aur Ability nahi hai, Ek Simple ability bhi Unique Ability ho sakti hai, Lekin wo uss player ki sivaye kisi aur ke paas nahi ho gi, Similar ho sakti hai lekin wohi ability nahi ho gi, Unique Abilities bhi alag ranks me banti huwi hai jo hume aage chal ker pata lage ga. Question(3): Qi aur Mana ek he hai kia? Answer: Nahi! Dono alag alag hai, Mana System ki taraf se mila hai, Wanhi Qi Clan se mili hai, Mana body ke baahir nature se mil sakta hai, Wanhi Qi shareer ke andar Vitals me hoti hai, Dono similar hai lekin dono me antar bhi hai, Qi ka istemal shareer per bhi effect karta hai lekin Mana shareer per effect nahi karta. Question(4): Kia Alpha abhi bhi Aarav ke saath hai? Answer: Nahi! Ezra ke saath larte samay Alpha ne khud ke aur Aarav ke beech me Aarav ko chuna tha, Probably wo Alpha ki chori wahan akhri shakti aur chance tha, Lekin Alpha ne Aarav per Vishwas karte huwe usse uss pal sab kuch saunp dia tha. Question(5): Infinite Prison kia hai? Infinte Prison ek tarha se Tutorial tower se similar he hai, Ye ek mini dimension ki tarha ka hai, Dimension me ek Area hota hai jahan Monster's ko Rakha jata hai, Lekin Infinte Prison ke monster's sabhi ek special power possess karte hai jo un ki duniya ko tabah ker sakti hai, Infinte Prison me sirf ek Dimension nahi hai balke bohat zada aur bhi Dimension hai, Har dimension me ek certain amount of monster's ko rakha jata hai, Ek Dimension ke sabhi monster ke marne ke baad uss Dimension ki Existence ki koi wajha nahi rehti to bache huwe monster ya logo ke saamne ek Gate/Portal khulta hai aur wo unhe dusre kisi bhi random dimension me le jata hai. Question (6): What da hell was Update 40? Update 40 ko bina extra scene ke explain karta hu, Update 40 le shuruwat me hume daikhne ko mila kaise sabhi monster ek bari larayi ke baad shaant baithe huwe the, Tabhi wanha Aarav aa jata hai aur ek Werebat se larne lagta hai, Un ki larayi se baki monster's bhi dobara larna shuru ker dete hai, Akhir me wanha sab monster's ko maar ker Aarav he bachta hai, Prison ke rule ke hisaab se Aarav ke saamne ek Gate khulta hai, Lekin Aarav uss ke andar nahi jaata, Kiu ke usse shuru se ye ehsaas ho gaya tha ke yahan kuch ajeeb hai, Har dimension me zada monster hote hai aur ek baar larayi shuru hone ke baad jab tak sab monster mar na jaye tab tak larayi khatam nahi hoti, Aarav samajh gaya ke wanha kuch aisa hai jo Un sab ko shaant kiye huwa tha, Aarav ne focus kia to Aarav ko Guardian dikh gaya, Aarav uss Guardian se larne laga aur usse akhir hara he dia, Lekin Aarav aise he nahi lar raha tha uss ke paas reason tha, Aarav ko kisi Dimension me ye information mili thi ke Guardian ke paas ek spirit hai jo Infinte Prison se baahir nikalne ke liye ek gate khol sakti hai, Aarav uss Spirit ko guardian se azaad karwa ker uss ki madad se Gate kholte huwe Prison se baahir aa jata hai, The End.

Spoiler: Prologue Tutorial Tower Arc Ye manali shehar me rehne wale ek larke Aarav ki kahani hai! Maa baap ke guzarne ke kuch samay baad he behan ke Cancer ki khabar milte he Aarav ne khud ko choti umar me he kaam ki duniya me daal lia, Ek din kaam karte huwe Aarav ne khud ko ek ajeeb Circle me paya, Wo circle Aarav ko uss ki duniya se tutorial tower kheench laya, Aarav ko System mila aur saath me ek Quest, Waapis jaane ke liye Quest ko pura karna zaroori tha, Tower me mile saathiyo ke saath Aarav ne Quest puri karne ka safar shuru kia apni behan ke paas wapis jaane ki khawahish ke saath.

Spoiler: Tutorial Tower Arc's Poster

Spoiler: Ascension Arc's Poster

Spoiler: Vendetta Arc's Poster

Spoiler: Forged Bonds Arc's Poster

Spoiler: Carnival of Death Arc's Poster

 

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ARCS ​

• Tutorial Tower Arc [Completed]​
• Ascension Arc [Completed]​
• Vendetta Arc [Completed]​
• Forged bonds Arc [Completed]​
• Carnival of Death Arc [On going]​
• Vengeance Arc [Up Coming]​
• Finale Arc [Up Coming]​

 

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UPDATE 1 ~
[THE TUTORIAL TOWER]

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Manali
Evening ~ 04:14

*Thud*

"Ye ho gya akhri Sofa" Single Sofe ko neeche rakhte huwe 1 admi ne bola phir usi sofe per baith ker saanse drust karne laga.

"Itne me thak gye Parth? abhi to aur bhi samaan nikalna hai Truck me se" Dusre Adhik umar ke Admi ne table ko rakhte huwe hans ker kaha.


Parth: (sigh) Pata hai pata hai! Ab saans lene to ruk he sakta hu.

"Arey Manohar bhai sahib! Aram se ker lo ap kaam koi baat nahi, Ap ki bhabhi ne chaye banayi hai ye pee lo phir ker lena baki kaam" Ek aur Admi ne haath me chaye pakre kamre ke andar ate huwe kaha.


Manohar: Arrey! Ashwin main ne kab kaha aram ne kare? per Aram karne jitna kaam bhi to kare na pehle akhir paise kis kaam ke leta hai?

Ashwin: Chale koi baat nahi bacha hai abhi wo, kaam to ho jaye ga chaye pee le pehle warna ap ki bhabhi Gussa kare gi.

Ashwin ne chaye ko table per rakhi aur Manohar ko Sofe per baitha dia, Manohar ne bhi aage kuch na kaha aur chup chap chaye peene laga.

Manohar ki umar 35 saal thi uss ka apna Furniture ka kaam tha aur iss waqt wo Furniture Deliver karne aya huwa, Wiase to manohar dukan me kaam karne wale larko ko bhej deta tha lekin ye furniture us ke purane dost Ashwin ke ghar ana tha iss liye wo khud bhi saath aya tha.

Us ke saath us ki dukan me kaam karne wala larka baitha tha Parth, Kaam to karta tha per nakhre bhi bohat the aksar Manohar se us ko daant bhi sun'ni parti thi

Ashwin: Bhai sahib Aarav ko bhi andar ane ko keh dete! Bechara kab se laga huwa hai wo bhi kuch der baith jaye, us ki halat bhi mujhe kuch sahi nahi lag rahi.

Ashwin ne khirki se bahir ek Jawan larke ko October ki thand me kaam karte daikhte huwe kaha

Manohar: (Sigh) Ap ko kia lagta hai? agar use bula sakta to main kiu na bulata? use agar kahe gye bhi to wo nahi aye ga, Yahan se uss ko jaldi kaam pura ker ke dusre kaam per nikalna hai, Iss liye yahan ka kaam wo jaldi niptana chahta hai.

Manohar ne chaya ka khali cup wapis Table per rakhte huwe kaha, Us ki ankho me Mayooshi jhalakne lagi thi maano wo bebas ho is mamle me.

Ashwin: (Frowns) Per iss halat me dusra kaam? Aise agar wo kaam karta raha to wo khud ko koi bara nuksaan pohancha baithe ga.


Manohar: kia kahu Ashwin! Bechare Bache ko kis muh se kahu ke wo aram ker le Maa Bachpan me dono behan bhai aur baap ko chorr gayi, Upar se jo baap tha wo zimedariyo ko nibhane ke kabil he nahi tha, aur akhir main 2 saal pehle wo bhi duniya se chala gaya bache ke sar per 18 saal ki umar me kanwari behan ki zimedari aa gayi iss liye School chorr ker kaam per lag gaya Zindagi itna sab us bache se le ker bhi khush na huwi ke kuch arsa pehle us ki behan ki medical report me Cancer dikh gaya, Sirf stage 2 hone ki wajha se cancer curable to hai lekin paise to us me bhi lagte hai na? ab ye bacha 18 ghante lagatar alag alag jagha per kaam ker ke paise ikathe ker raha hai apni behan ke liye.


Manohar ki baat sun Ashwin ki ankho me Aarav ke liye hamdardi jhalakne lagi, wo daikhne laga kis tarha bina kisi bhi cheez ki parwah kiye 1 jawan larka mehnat ker raha hai

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Wanhi bahir Aarav ek ek ker ke sab cheeze truck se bahir rakhne me laga huwa tha, Aarav 20 saal ka ek jawan larka tha us ke kapre purane the use daikh ker he pata lag sakta tha ke wo theek se khana nahi khata us ki ankho ke neeche dark circle ban rahe the der raat tak kaam karne ki wajha se.

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Sab cheeze bahir rakh ker Aarav Truck se neeche utarne ke liye truck ke kinare per aa gya, Aarav neechhe utarne he laga tha jab achanak us ka paon phisal gaya us ne khud ko bachane ke liye truck ki side ko pakar lia per wahan ek ek keel nikli huwi thi jo seedhi Aarav ke haath per lagi aur us ki hatheli cheer di.


Aarav neeche girte girte bacha lekin us ke haath se khoon behne laga tha, Us ne jaldi se apne haath ki muthi band ker li aur apne dusre haath se apni jeb me rakha romal nikalne laga,Romal nikal ker Aarav ne apne haath per lapait lia.

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Aarav ne dobara haath ki muthi bana li aur upar asman ki taraf daikhte huwe dard ko bardasht karne laga, October ka maheena tha aur Aarav ko mehsoos ho raha tha ke Snowfall hone wali hai.

*ring* *ring*


Abhi Aarav ko khare kuch der he huwi thi ke us ke phone per Call ane lagi Aarav ne apna keypad wala phone nikala jis ko type laga ker apas me jora huwa tha, Aarav ne screen daikhi aur thook nighal ker call attend ker li.


Aarav: Hello!


Caller: Kahan Reh gye larke? yahan hotel me customer ane shuru ho gye aur tumhara kuch pata he nahi hai, 1 ghante me mujhe tum yahan chahiye ho, warna kanhi aur daikh lena kaam.

Saamne se caller ne chilate huwe kaha jo us hotel ka malik tha jahan Aarav ne iss ke baad jana tha, Kaam se nikaalne ka sun ker Aarav ke chehre per pareshani ke bhav aa gye.

Aarav: Sorry! Main aa raha.


Caller ne jawab sun ker Call band ker di, Aarav ne ek lamba saans bhara aur dobara Chair ko uthane laga.


"Aarav" Ghar se bahir nikalte huwe Manohar ne Aarav ko awaz lagayi, Aarav ne saamne daikha to Manohar, Ashwin aur Parth teeno chalte huwe aa rahe the.


Manohar: (Frowns) Aarav ye tumhare haath per kia huwa hai?


Manohar ne aage barh Aarav ka haath pakra aur romal khol ker daikhne laga, Aarav ke haath se khoon lagatar beh raha tha Manohar ne gusse Aarav ki taraf daikha to Aarav ne apna sar jhuka lia.


Parth: Aarav Chal mere saath yanhi paas Clinic hai wahan se Dressing karwa ate hai.


Aarav: Us ki zaroorat nah....!

iss se pehle Aarav apni baat puri karta manohar ne use ghoor ke daikha to Aarav chup ker gaya, Aarav ko pata tha Manohar kabhi kisi per aise gussa nahi hota, Aarav ki use fikar thi wo Aarav ko apne bete ki tarha samajhta tha, iss liye wo Aarav per gussa ker jata tha jis ka Aarav ne bhi kabhi bura nahi mana, Waise bhi Manohar ne Aarav ki bohat madad bhi ki thi mushkil waqt me.


Manohar: Parth isse le ker ja! Aur tu fikar mat ker ye samaan hum rakh le gye Tere paise bhi nahi katu ga. Aur Aarav tere bhi nahi katu ga waise bhi tujhe jitna bhi rok lu to hotel me to jaye ga he? behtar ye he hai teri maram pati hone ke baad aram ker ke jaye

Aarav ko acha to nahi lagta tha aise Manohar se ehsaan lena per Manohar bhi apni jagha sahi tha, Parth ko saath iss liye bheja tha Manohar ne kiu ke agar akele Aarav ko bhejta to wo bina Clinic gye seedha hotel chala jata.


Paarth aur Aarav clinic ke liye nikalne lage jab achanak kale badalo ne pure Asman ko dhak lia, Tez hawa chalne lagi jo sab ke rongte khare ker rahi thi, Sab ne apne paas rakhi cheezo pakar lia.


Sab taraf shor sharaba mach gaya hawa se baraf urne lagi aur Paas ki cheeze dikhni bhi band ho gayi.


Ashwin: (Shouts) Sab ghar ki taraf chalo!


Ashwin ne chilate huwe kaha to sab ghar ki taraf bhaage, Hawaye sab ko peeche ki taraf push ker rahi thi, Sab apne gharo ki taraf bhaagna chah rahe the lekin hawa ki wajha se chalna bhi mushkil ho raha tha.


"Uncle!!!" Manohar ko peeche Aarav ki Awaz ayi


Manohar ne peeche ghoom ker daikha to Aarav ek jagha khara huwa tha, us ke gird ek circle bana huwa tha jis me peele rang ki roshni jagmagah rahi thi, sab kuch dhoondla tha per Aarav ke gird maano halki si hawa tak bhi nahi thi dheeme dheeme wo roshni aag lapto me badalne lagi.

Aarav: (Scared) Uncle me hil nahi pa raha apni jagha se!

Aarav ne chilaya Manohar bina kuch soche us ki taraf bhag gaya per jaise he wo Aarav ke kareeb gaya, Un lapto ne mano Manohar ko dhaka de ker peeche gira dia ho, Tabhi Aarav ke saamne hawa me kuch likha aa gaya.


[The tutorial tower can only be entered by certain player]


Lapte Aarav ke gird lipatne lagi, Per wo Aarav ko jala nahi rahi thi, Lekin Aarav tab bhi dar raha tha kiu ke wo bilkul bhi hil nahi pa raha tha, Aarav ki ankho me ansoo aa gye.


Aarav: (Crying) Uncle! main marna nahi chahta, Uncle please mujhe nikal lo yahan se, Please!!!!!!!


Aarav ke ye akhri Lafaz the jab wo aag ek dum se bharki aur khatam ho gayi wahan bachi to tooti huwi zameen, Wahan zameen thar tharane lagi, Manohar bhaag ker wahan gaya jahan Aarav tha lekin Wahan ab kuch nahi tha.


Manohar wanhi zameen per toote pathro ke idhar udhar phenkne laaga maano wahan un pathro ke beech Aarav ko dhoond raha ho, Abhi kuch pal pehle un ke saamne Aarav khara tha Lekin ab wahan us ka namu nishan nahi tha, zameen aur zor se thar tharane lagi to Parth ne aage barh manohar ko pakar ke uthaya to Manohar us se chutne ki koshis karne laga,


Parth: Uncle! khud ko sambhaliye, hume yahan se nikalna ho ga,


Manohar: Kahan jaye! Hum Aarav ko chorr ker kanhi nahi ja rahe, Aarav meri awaz sun raha hai na tu? kahan hai tu?


Manohar ki ankhe bheeg gayi us ki awaz rondhaya gayi, Parth bhi shock me tha lekin wahan ke halat daikh ker use apne emotions side per rakh ker soch samajh ker faisle lene parne the.


Parth Manohar ko kheenchte huwe ghar ke andar le gaya, Aur darwaza lock ker dia, Manohar us se chutne ki koshis karta raha, Aur cheekhte huwe Aarav ko pukarta raha.


Manohar: Aarav!!! Aarav!!!

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Charo taraf gehra andhera tha kuch nazar nahi aa raha tha, un lapto me se Aarav seedha iss andhere me aa dooba tha, us ke mann me ek he sawal tha?

"Kia Main Mar Gaya Hu?"

Ye soch ker he Aarav ko khud per gussa ata ja raha tha, use ye bhi nahi pata tha ke wo kaise mara hai? wo aag na to jala rahi thi na garam thi phir wo kaise mar gaya?Aarav ye sab soch he raha tha jab uss ke saamne dobara kuch likha aa gaya


[Welcome, Player]


Aarav: [Frowns] Player ye kia hai? Aur kahan Welcome?


[You must survive in this tower while trying to go back to your world]

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[Name- Aarav Arya
Level- 1
Rank- F
Title- None

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HP- 27
MP- 13
Strength- 22
Agility- 22
Endurance- 23
Stamina- 19
Intelligence- 17

(Stats Points: 0)

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Skill- 2
[Will to live] ~ [Slash (E)]

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[Weapon- None]



[New Quest Available]

[Quest: To complete the quest, you have to kill the orc king, The location of orc king will be given below


(Rewards)
(1) Orc king's Blood Axe
(2) 20 stats point (every party member)
(3) MVP will get Additonal 20 Stats Point
(4) You can go back to home

Time Limit: 7 Days
Quest Failure Penalty: (Death) ]


[You are now entering the Tutorial Tower]


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