Adultery Sana ki chut mai Arjun ka paani

[kranjhe]

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[varunsingh1990]

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[k md thabrez]

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[Rohit Dwivedi]

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[Wilder12345]

Next update Saturday aur Sunday milega

 

[Kiran kumar 83]

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[rahlone]

Plot accha hai but writer ki bewakoofi bhari galtiyo se story worst hoti ja rahi hai. Sorry writer buddy but as a reader I said what I felt. Story bohot hai interfaith pr but jo baat story ko achchi banati hai wo he every pont of description of every scene weather it is big or the smallest one. Or yahaan wo sb miss hai just like shabana ki choot me lund kab gaya pata nahi, arjun ne choot kb chosna start kiya kaise kiya pata nahi seedhe ek bada gape dete hua sex ke mid point pr. Writer agar kahi bhagne ki jaldi hai to likhhi kyu rahe ho. Pehle apna kaam pura karo fir shanti se story likhana. dominance dikhne ke chakkar me story ki khichdi mat pakao. Or agar story likhni he to achcha content socho fir likho. Jo dusro ko padhne me bhi maza aaye or tumhe likhne me bhi. Otherwise don't waste people's priceless time. Hope you got my point

 

[Iron Man]

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[harryhott]

Need bigger update

 

[Wilder12345]

Plot accha hai but writer ki bewakoofi bhari galtiyo se story worst hoti ja rahi hai. Sorry writer buddy but as a reader I said what I felt. Story bohot hai interfaith pr but jo baat story ko achchi banati hai wo he every pont of description of every scene weather it is big or the smallest one. Or yahaan wo sb miss hai just like shabana ki choot me lund kab gaya pata nahi, arjun ne choot kb chosna start kiya kaise kiya pata nahi seedhe ek bada gape dete hua sex ke mid point pr. Writer agar kahi bhagne ki jaldi hai to likhhi kyu rahe ho. Pehle apna kaam pura karo fir shanti se story likhana. dominance dikhne ke chakkar me story ki khichdi mat pakao. Or agar story likhni he to achcha content socho fir likho. Jo dusro ko padhne me bhi maza aaye or tumhe likhne me bhi. Otherwise don't waste people's priceless time. Hope you got my point

Point toh hai ,ok I will try to improve my mistakes . Thanks for your honest suggestions.