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Part 1 -

Year 1875 – Ranakpur, Uttarakhand
Himalaya ki talhati me, Harey bhare Vishal pedon (Tree) se dhaki chotiyon ke beech basa Ranakpur gaon aaj ajeeb tarah se chup tha. Devdar ke pedon ke beech se beh rahi thandi hawa apne saath ek anjaana sa darr le ja rahi thi. Gaon ke beechon-beech khadi Vishal Haveli ka uncha burj badalon ko cheer kar aasmaan ko chho raha tha. Pathar ki deewarein, bade bade lakdi ke darwaze, aur bahar jalti mashaalen… sab milkar yeh keh rahe the ki yeh jagah sirf rehne ke liye nahi, balki raaz ko qaid rakhne ke liye bani hai.

Jaswant Singh Thakur ki entry
Haveli ke andar, lambi chhaton aur gumbad wale galion ke beech, 66 saal ke Jaswant Singh Thakur apni private laboratory se bahar aa rahe the. Unke haath me peetal aur kaanch se bana ek ajeeb sa yantra tha, jisme ek pendulum jaisa hissa lagataar hil raha tha. Unke chehre par thakaan thi, par aankhon me ek chamak – jaise kisi khoji ko khazana mil gaya ho.

Seedhiyon ki taraf badhte hue unki nazar haveli ke uttari hisse par jaake ruki – wahi hissa jo hamesha band rehta tha ya uska raaj ya fir uskey purkho ka raaj. Wahan ek bhaari lohe ka darwaza tha, jispar moti zanjeeren lipti hui thi. Darwaze ki satah par sanskrit aur arabi me kuch likha tha. Jaswant ki aankhon me ek pal ke liye bechaini aayi, par phir unhone nazar hata li.

Darbar ki baithak
Diwan-e-khas me aaj darbar laga tha.
Bayein taraf baithe the Rajveer Panwar – hamesha aadhi muskaan me baat karne wale chalak mantri. Unke paas the Bhimdutt Joshi – jinke mathe ki silwatein unki soch ka saboot deti thi, aur jo Jaswant ke experiments ko samay ki barbaadi mante the.
Kone me baithkar chupchaap sun rahe the Hamitullah Khan – ek buzurg Mughal mantri, jinki awaaz hamesha gehre raaz ki taraf ishara karti thi.
Samaney khade the Senapati Pratap Narayan Rana – talwar ke mooth par haath rakhe hue, hamesha ready for war.

Aaj ka mudda tha – Angrezi Sarkar ka naya order, jisme Ranakpur ke resources aur tax par control ki baat thi.
Bada beta Vikram Singh Thakur is order ke paksh me tha, jabki chhota beta Arjun Singh Thakur iska virodh kar raha tha.

> Arjun: “Pitaji, Angrez humare dost nahi, humare malik banna chahte hain.”



Mahol ek pal ke liye bhaari ho gaya. Jaswant ne dheere se kaha:

> “Hamari ghadi aane wali hai… aur jab waqt badlega, hum itihaas badal denge.”



Kisi ko samajh nahi aaya ki unka “waqt badalne” se kya matlab tha.

Kyoki Jaswant Singh Thakur ki baton ko samjhna aasan nahi thaa.

Haveli ka zenana hissa
Is waqt Badibahu Kusumlata (Vikram ki patni) khidki se darbar ki taraf jhaank rahi thi. Chehra shaant tha, par aankhon me purani aag jal rahi thi – jaise koi purane apmaan ka hisaab rakhti ho.
Dusri taraf Chotibahu Charulata (Arjun ki patni) chupke se haveli ke band hisse ki taraf ja rahi thi. Unhe hamesha us lohe ke darwaze aur uske peeche se aati halki fuskaraahat ne kheench liya tha.

Jab Charulata darwaze ke paas pahunchi, unhe laga koi unka naam le raha hai –
“Lata… Lata…”
Unhone zanjeer ko chhua, aur darwaze ki satah barf jaisi thandi ho gayi. Saansen tez ho gayi, aur wo turant wahan se hatt gayi.

Pehli parchhaai
Us raat, haveli ki chhat par pehra de raha ek sipahi ne dekha ki ek aurat safed kapdon me uttari hisse ki chhat par khadi hai… par uske pairon ke neeche zameen nahi thi.
Jab dusre sipahi aaye, wahan koi nahi tha. Sirf thandi hawa aur door se aati wahi awaaz –
“Samay… badalna hai…”


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Part 2 –

Subah ka Ranakpur
Agli subah Ranakpur gaon me ek ajeeb sa mahaul tha. Devdar ke pedon se girti halki mist aur hawa me ghanti ki halki si awaaz… lekin logon ke chehron pe saaf tha ki koi baat unhe chain se baithne nahi de rahi. Gaon ke kuch buzurg chauraha par baith kar fuskaraahat me baatein kar rahe the — “Kya tumne suna? Kal raat phir haveli ke uttar wale hisse me roshni dekhi gayi thi…”

Hamitullah Khan ka shak
Darbar me aaj hamesha se zyada khamoshi thi. Hamitullah Khan, jo hamesha apni nazar zameen par rakhta tha, aaj apni tez nigah seedha Jaswant par jama ke baitha tha.
Hamitullah ka yeh shak koi nayi baat nahi thi। Ranakpur ke kuch log kehte the ki unke jawani ke dinon me ek hadsa hua tha — unki ek hi beti Noor Khan ek raat achanak gaayab ho gayi thi aur usko last time haveli mai jaatey hue dekha gaya tha. Us waqt logon ka kehna tha ki Noor ko Jaswant ne apne “kale prayogo” ke liye istemal kiya, aur phir uski deh ko hamesha ke liye chhupa diya.

Hamitullah kha ki kabhi himmat nahi hui Jaswant se es baarey mai puchney ki aur naa hee Is baat ka koi saboot kabhi nahi mila, par gaon ke daant-ghisai aur andhvishwas ne is afwah ko ek sachai ka roop de diya। Hamitullah ne kabhi khulkar Jaswant par ilzaam nahi lagaya, par unki aankhon ka kaanta Jaswant hamesha raha

Jacob Hartley ka aana
Isi waqt haveli ke deewan-e-aam me ek LAL rang ka coat pehne, topi thoda sa jhukaye hue, ek gora aadmi ghusa — Jacob Hartley, Ranakpur ka Angrezi Police Officer।
Jacob ka chehra Jaswant ko dekhte hi thoda sa tan gaya.

> “Lord Thakur,” Jacob ki awaaz me halka sa vyang tha, “aap ke yeh naye machines aur experiments… kaafi ‘ahead of time’ lagte hain. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai aap apne samay me jee hi nahi rahe.”


Jaswant ne thandi muskaan di, “Shayad isi liye aapko samajh nahi aata, Mr. Hartley.”

Gaon me log jaante the ki Jacob ko Jaswant pasand nahi karta tha। Ek toh isliye ki Jaswant angrezon ke saamne jhukta nahi tha, doosra — Jaswant ka ‘advance’ hona Jacob ke ego ko chubhta tha। Uske liye ek Indian ruler ka science aur mechanics me angrez engineers se zyada aage hona ek beizzati thi.

Charulata ki khoj
Usi din dopahar, Charulata chupke se haveli ke uttar wale hisse ke kareeb phir se gayi। Is baar unhone dekha ki lohe ke darwaze ke neeche se halki si dhund nikal rahi hai… aur dhund ke saath ek bachi ki halki si hansi bhi sunai dee।
Charulata ka dil tez dhadakne laga। Woh kuch samajh nahi paayi ki yeh bachi ki hansi thi… ya Noor Khan ki?

Sham ka takraav
Sham hote-hote Darbar me Jacob, Hamitullah aur Jaswant ek hi chhat ke neeche they. Jacob ne khulkar Jaswant par bol diya:

> “Main janta hoon aap kuch chupa rahe ho, aur jab main sabit kar dunga… to aapka yeh ‘Vishal Haveli’ Angrezi Hukumat ke qabzey me hoga.”

Hamitullah kha ajnabi bankar sabhi baatey sun raha thaa aur apney khanjar par hath rakh kar Jaswant ke isharey ka intejaar kar raha thaa sath hee Hamitullah ne bas apni aankhon se Jaswant ko dekha — us nazar me na sirf shak tha, balki ek purani dardnaak kahani ka badla bhi.

Haveli ke andar se ek purana ghadiyaal barah ka ghanṭa baja raha tha… aur uttar wale hisse ka loha ka darwaza halki si kampan me aaya.


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Part 3 –

Ranakpur ki shaam
Shaam ka time tha. Haveli ke aangan me diye jal chuke the, hawa me thodi thandi si nami thi. Door mandir se aarti ki awaaz aa rahi thi, lekin haveli ka uttari hissa ab bhi andhere me dooba hua tha – jaise wahan waqt hi ruk gaya ho.

Charulata ka shauk
Rajkumari Charulata, Arjun Singh Thakur ki patni, bachpan se hi raaz aur purani kahaniyon me dilchaspi rakhti thi. Haveli me shaadi ke baad aate hi uska dhyaan baar-baar ussi band hisse ki taraf chala jata tha, jise log “manhoos darwaza” kehte the.

Usne kai baar suna tha ki wahan se raat ko ajeeb awaazein aati hain – kabhi kadam ki aahat, kabhi halki fuskaraahat, kabhi kisi aurat ki hansi. Haveli ke log in awaazon ko ignore karte, jaise unhone maan liya ho ki wahan jana mana hai.

Chupke se nikalna
Us raat Arjun kisi sainik baithak me tha, aur zenana hissa lagbhag khaali tha. Charulata ne yeh moka dekh liya. Usne apni chaandi ki payal utaar di, taaki chalne ki awaaz na aaye, aur ek chhoti si tel ki lantern lekar chupke se galliyon me chal padi.

Jitna wo uttari hisse ke kareeb aati gayi, hawa utni hi thandi hoti gayi. Deewaron par makdi ke jaale latke the, aur zameen par dhool ki moti parat – jaise koi saalon se idhar aaya hi na ho.

Darwaze ke paas
Wo bhari lohe ke darwaze ke saamne aayi. Darwaze par moti zanjeerein lipti hui thi, lekin neeche ek chhoti si darar thi. Charulata ghutnon ke bal jhuki aur lantern ki roshni andar daalne ki koshish ki.
Andar kuch dikh nahi raha tha, par jaise hi usne kaan darwaze se lagaya… ek halki si fuskaraahat sunayi di –
“Lata… andar aao…”

Uska dil zor se dhadakne laga. Usne halki si zanjeer kheench ke dekhi – hairani ki baat yeh thi ki ek kundee dheere se khul gayi, jaise kisi ne andar se khola ho.

Andar ki jhalak
Darwaza kuch inch khula hi tha ki ek thandi dhund ka jhonka bahar aaya. Lantern ki lau kaanp gayi. Dhund ke beech usne kuch dhundli-dhundli shakalain dekhi – purane kapdon me log, lekin unke chehre dhundh se dhak gaye the.

Phir dhund ke andar se ek aurat ka silhoutte ubhar kar paas aane laga – safed lambi poshaak, bikhre hue baal, aur aankhein… bilkul bina putili ke. Wo seedha Charulata ki taraf badh rahi thi.

Jhatka
Charulata piche hatne hi wali thi ki uska pair kisi cheez se takra gaya. Neeche dekha to ek purani, aadhi jali hui diary padi thi. Usne bina soche diary utha li, aur turant darwaza zor se band kar diya.

Wo tez saanson ke saath apne kamre me daudi. Diary kholi – pehle kuch panne khaali the, par ek panne par halki si likhawat thi –
“Noor… samay ko bandh lo, toh maut kabhi nahi aayegi…”

Charulata ke haath thande pad gaye. Noor… wahi naam jo usne kabhi Hamitullah Kha ke muh se suna tha.

Isi ke sath charulata ki nind khul gayi. Charulata bahut ashcharya mai thi ki Usney ek sapna dekh ya hakikat. Kyoki usko yahi lag raha thaa ki vo sach mai yah sab kar chuki hai. Charulata ko vishwas nahi ho raha thaa ki yah ek sapna hai.


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Part 4 –

Subah ka Ranakpur
Suraj ki pehli roshni Devdar ke pedon ke beech se guzar kar haveli ke burj par padh rahi thi. Charulata apne kamre me bethi thi.

Par usney apney yah dekha thaa ki usney jo diary dekhi thi vese hee same aadhi jali hui dairy Jaswant Singh Thakur ki library main ek kach ki shell mai padi hui thi.

Charulata taiyar ho kar Jaswant ki library ki aur chali jaati hai. Haveli mai 2 library thi ek jo sabhi ke liye thi aur dusri sirf Jaswant ki personal thi jaha sirf vahi kaa sakta thaa. Library ek vishal kamrey mai thi jaha kamrey ke ander kamra thaa aur us par lock thaa. Library ke bahar Jaswant ka ek khas Sipahi khada thaa jiska naam Dhamu Singh tha. Ab vaha Charulata jaise hee library ke paas pahuchi usko Dhamu ne ander jaaney as rok diya.

Charulata halkey gussey aur tej aaavaj mai - tumari himmat kaise hui hamko rokney ki?

Dhamu garden jukaye - maaf kijiyega Chotibahu rani. Raja sahab ke sakht aadesh hai. Unke alava koi ander nahi jaa sakta. Vo koi bhi ho aam vaykti ya Raj parivar ka.

Charulata samaj jaati hai ki yah Dhamu naam ka sipahi Jaswant yani uskey sasur ka khas aadmi hai.

Charulata chahti toh apna dum lagakar ander library mai jaa sakti thi par vo nahi chahti thi ki Jaswant ko iska pata lagey.

Yaha charulata ko ek baat yaad aati hai ki yah Dhamu Singh naam ka sainik ek baar ek haveli ki Mahila dasi ya nokrani ke sath jabardasti karne ke jurm mai 1 mahina jail ja chuka hai par Jaswant ka khas sainik hone ki vajah se vo jaldi jail se bahar aa gaya thaa.

Idhar Charulata ek plan banati hai jissey vo library ke ander ja sakey. Vo Dhamu ki aur dekhti hai. Dhamu ki nigahey kahi na kahi charu ki body par toh thi hee. Par vo usko chupa raha thaa.

Charulata - 'hum jaa rahe hai' yah bolkar mudati hai aur ek halki aawaj ke sath ghirney ka baha banati hai. Vo Dhamu ko yah dikhana chahti thi ki usko chakkar aa rahey hai.

Idhar Dhamu ko bhi kuch samaj nahi aata aur vo Rajhaveli ki Choti Bahu ko girta dekh bina kuch sochey samjey pakdney jata hai jissey charulata jamin par na ghirey.

Ab yaha scene yah thaa ki Dhamu ke hatho mai charulata thi. Charulata bhi Dhamu ke sparsh ko acchey se mahsus kar paa Rahi thi. Dhamu ka kathor hath charulata ki mulayam kamar ko kas kar pakad rkha thaa aur dusra hath halka halka uski back par ghum raha thaa. Yaha charulata ki ankhey dhamu ki ankho mai dekh rahi thi. Jaise kuch kahna chah rahi ho. Charulata se aati itra ki smell Dhamu ko pagal bana rahi thi aur uskey Ling mai tej kadakpan paida kar rahi thi.

Vahi charulata Dhamu key kadakpan ko halka sa mahsus kar paa Rahi thi. Dhamu ab dhery dhery apney muh ko charulata ke paas laa raha thaa ki tabhi charulata apni hatheli ko Dhamu ki hatheli se pakad leti hai aur khadey hone ki koshish karti hai. Dhamu ke liye toh yah sab ek hasin sapney ke saman thaa. Uski bahon Mai ek rajbahu jo thi.

Yaha charulata ab khud ko Dhamu se alag karti hai aur gussey mai bolti hai - tumari himmat kaise hui mujko chuney ki ? Mai abhi jakar apney raha sasur ko batati hu.

Yah sun kar Dhamu darr mai thaa. Usko samaj aa gaya thaa ki ussey galti ho gayi hai.

Fir Dhamu kuch boley uskey pahle hee vo ek shetani hasi charulata ke cheharey par dekhta hai. Mano ab uske samney jo aurat khadi thi vo charulata nahi hai.

Dhamu gutno par baith jata hai aur charulata ke bina kuch boley library ki chabi (Key) charulata ko de deta hai. Charulata jaldi se library mai jaa kar vo kitab le aati hai aur apney kamrey mai chali jaati hai.

Ab charulata room mai haath me wahi aadhi jali hui diary pakde hue. Lekin jab usne diary kholi, to panne bilkul khaali the – na koi likhawat, na koi nishaan.

Uska dil ghabra gaya. Kal raat jo kuch hua, wo itna zinda lag raha tha… par ab sab gayab tha. Usne socha –

> “Kya wo sab maine sapne me dekha? Ya sach me darwaza khula tha?”



Uska mann keh raha tha ki yeh sapna nahi ho sakta… uski ungliyon par ab bhi dhund ki nami mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Jacob ka soojh-boojh wala khufiya kaam
Isi waqt, haveli se kuch door, gaon ke chaupal par Jacob Hartley apni LAL coat me baitha tha.Usney gaon ke 3 logo ko bulaya tha.Uske samne Ranakpur ke do buzurg aur ek purana mazdoor baitha tha, jo pehle haveli me kaam karta tha.

Jacob ne seedha sawal kiya –

> “Tum logon ne kabhi haveli ke andar ke gupt kamre ya tahkhane dekhe hain?”



Mazdoor ne thoda dare hue sur me kaha –

> “Sahib, haveli ke neeche kuch kamre hain jahan sirf Thakur Jaswant aur unke do purane khidmatgar jaa sakte hain. Wahan se kabhi-kabhi ajeeb awaazein aati hain… kabhi jaise loha ghis raha ho, kabhi jaise koi chain kheench raha ho.”



Ek buzurg aadmi ne dheere se bola –

> “Aur kai saalon pehle ek ladki bhi wahi chali gayi thi… Noor naam tha uska… phir kabhi wapas nahi aayi.”



Jacob ki aankhon me ek tez chamak aa gayi. Usne apne notebook me likha –
“Secret chambers – possible prisoner or experiment. Must infiltrate soon.”

Charulata ka uljhan
Haveli ke andar, Charulata diary ko apne almari ke andar chhupa rahi thi. Uska mann kah raha tha ki iske andar kuch likha tha, lekin aankhon se kuch dikh nahi raha tha.
Usne socha, shayad suraj dhalne ke baad kuch badle.

Wo khidki ke paas aayi aur dekha ki haveli ke bahar Jacob kuch logon se baat kar raha tha, apne notebook me kuch likh raha tha. Charulata ko ek ajeeb bechaini hui –

> “Ye gora kuch toh plan bana raha hai… par kyu lagta hai ki iska taluk bhi us band darwaze se hai?”



Ant ka ishaara
Shaam ko, jab suraj pahaadon ke peeche chala gaya, Charulata almari se diary nikalti hai… aur iss baar pehle panna kholte hi usme naye shabd ubhar kar aane lage –
“Samay ka darwaza sirf ek baar khulta hai… aur tum uske kareeb thi…”

Usne darr ke maare diary bandh kar di… lekin uske kan me wahi awaaz gungunai –
“Lata… wapas aao…”


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Kahani tow Badi zabardast start Kari h aapne suspense se bharpoor
Charulata ka Sapna tow aisa lag Raha tha jaise haqeekat hi dikha jaa Raha tha
Kuch tow zaroor Hoga Noor kan ka raaz tabhi tow aisa huwa
Ab Kahani jaise jaise aage badhegi parat khulte jayenge
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Part 4 –

Subah ka Ranakpur
Suraj ki pehli roshni Devdar ke pedon ke beech se guzar kar haveli ke burj par padh rahi thi. Charulata apne kamre me bethi thi.

Par usney apney yah dekha thaa ki usney jo diary dekhi thi vese hee same aadhi jali hui dairy Jaswant Singh Thakur ki library main ek kach ki shell mai padi hui thi.

Charulata taiyar ho kar Jaswant ki library ki aur chali jaati hai. Haveli mai 2 library thi ek jo sabhi ke liye thi aur dusri sirf Jaswant ki personal thi jaha sirf vahi kaa sakta thaa. Library ek vishal kamrey mai thi jaha kamrey ke ander kamra thaa aur us par lock thaa. Library ke bahar Jaswant ka ek khas Sipahi khada thaa jiska naam Dhamu Singh tha. Ab vaha Charulata jaise hee library ke paas pahuchi usko Dhamu ne ander jaaney as rok diya.

Charulata halkey gussey aur tej aaavaj mai - tumari himmat kaise hui hamko rokney ki?

Dhamu garden jukaye - maaf kijiyega Chotibahu rani. Raja sahab ke sakht aadesh hai. Unke alava koi ander nahi jaa sakta. Vo koi bhi ho aam vaykti ya Raj parivar ka.

Charulata samaj jaati hai ki yah Dhamu naam ka sipahi Jaswant yani uskey sasur ka khas aadmi hai.

Charulata chahti toh apna dum lagakar ander library mai jaa sakti thi par vo nahi chahti thi ki Jaswant ko iska pata lagey.

Yaha charulata ko ek baat yaad aati hai ki yah Dhamu Singh naam ka sainik ek baar ek haveli ki Mahila dasi ya nokrani ke sath jabardasti karne ke jurm mai 1 mahina jail ja chuka hai par Jaswant ka khas sainik hone ki vajah se vo jaldi jail se bahar aa gaya thaa.

Idhar Charulata ek plan banati hai jissey vo library ke ander ja sakey. Vo Dhamu ki aur dekhti hai. Dhamu ki nigahey kahi na kahi charu ki body par toh thi hee. Par vo usko chupa raha thaa.

Charulata - 'hum jaa rahe hai' yah bolkar mudati hai aur ek halki aawaj ke sath ghirney ka baha banati hai. Vo Dhamu ko yah dikhana chahti thi ki usko chakkar aa rahey hai.

Idhar Dhamu ko bhi kuch samaj nahi aata aur vo Rajhaveli ki Choti Bahu ko girta dekh bina kuch sochey samjey pakdney jata hai jissey charulata jamin par na ghirey.

Ab yaha scene yah thaa ki Dhamu ke hatho mai charulata thi. Charulata bhi Dhamu ke sparsh ko acchey se mahsus kar paa Rahi thi. Dhamu ka kathor hath charulata ki mulayam kamar ko kas kar pakad rkha thaa aur dusra hath halka halka uski back par ghum raha thaa. Yaha charulata ki ankhey dhamu ki ankho mai dekh rahi thi. Jaise kuch kahna chah rahi ho. Charulata se aati itra ki smell Dhamu ko pagal bana rahi thi aur uskey Ling mai tej kadakpan paida kar rahi thi.

Vahi charulata Dhamu key kadakpan ko halka sa mahsus kar paa Rahi thi. Dhamu ab dhery dhery apney muh ko charulata ke paas laa raha thaa ki tabhi charulata apni hatheli ko Dhamu ki hatheli se pakad leti hai aur khadey hone ki koshish karti hai. Dhamu ke liye toh yah sab ek hasin sapney ke saman thaa. Uski bahon Mai ek rajbahu jo thi.

Yaha charulata ab khud ko Dhamu se alag karti hai aur gussey mai bolti hai - tumari himmat kaise hui mujko chuney ki ? Mai abhi jakar apney raha sasur ko batati hu.


Yah sun kar Dhamu darr mai thaa. Usko samaj aa gaya thaa ki ussey galti ho gayi hai.

Fir Dhamu kuch boley uskey pahle hee vo ek shetani hasi charulata ke cheharey par dekhta hai. Mano ab uske samney jo aurat khadi thi vo charulata nahi hai.

Dhamu gutno par baith jata hai aur charulata ke bina kuch boley library ki chabi (Key) charulata ko de deta hai. Charulata jaldi se library mai jaa kar vo kitab le aati hai aur apney kamrey mai chali jaati hai.

Ab charulata room mai haath me wahi aadhi jali hui diary pakde hue. Lekin jab usne diary kholi, to panne bilkul khaali the – na koi likhawat, na koi nishaan.

Uska dil ghabra gaya. Kal raat jo kuch hua, wo itna zinda lag raha tha… par ab sab gayab tha. Usne socha –

> “Kya wo sab maine sapne me dekha? Ya sach me darwaza khula tha?”



Uska mann keh raha tha ki yeh sapna nahi ho sakta… uski ungliyon par ab bhi dhund ki nami mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Jacob ka soojh-boojh wala khufiya kaam
Isi waqt, haveli se kuch door, gaon ke chaupal par Jacob Hartley apni LAL coat me baitha tha.Usney gaon ke 3 logo ko bulaya tha.Uske samne Ranakpur ke do buzurg aur ek purana mazdoor baitha tha, jo pehle haveli me kaam karta tha.

Jacob ne seedha sawal kiya –

> “Tum logon ne kabhi haveli ke andar ke gupt kamre ya tahkhane dekhe hain?”



Mazdoor ne thoda dare hue sur me kaha –

> “Sahib, haveli ke neeche kuch kamre hain jahan sirf Thakur Jaswant aur unke do purane khidmatgar jaa sakte hain. Wahan se kabhi-kabhi ajeeb awaazein aati hain… kabhi jaise loha ghis raha ho, kabhi jaise koi chain kheench raha ho.”



Ek buzurg aadmi ne dheere se bola –

> “Aur kai saalon pehle ek ladki bhi wahi chali gayi thi… Noor naam tha uska… phir kabhi wapas nahi aayi.”



Jacob ki aankhon me ek tez chamak aa gayi. Usne apne notebook me likha –
“Secret chambers – possible prisoner or experiment. Must infiltrate soon.”

Charulata ka uljhan
Haveli ke andar, Charulata diary ko apne almari ke andar chhupa rahi thi. Uska mann kah raha tha ki iske andar kuch likha tha, lekin aankhon se kuch dikh nahi raha tha.
Usne socha, shayad suraj dhalne ke baad kuch badle.

Wo khidki ke paas aayi aur dekha ki haveli ke bahar Jacob kuch logon se baat kar raha tha, apne notebook me kuch likh raha tha. Charulata ko ek ajeeb bechaini hui –

> “Ye gora kuch toh plan bana raha hai… par kyu lagta hai ki iska taluk bhi us band darwaze se hai?”



Ant ka ishaara
Shaam ko, jab suraj pahaadon ke peeche chala gaya, Charulata almari se diary nikalti hai… aur iss baar pehle panna kholte hi usme naye shabd ubhar kar aane lage –
“Samay ka darwaza sirf ek baar khulta hai… aur tum uske kareeb thi…”

Usne darr ke maare diary bandh kar di… lekin uske kan me wahi awaaz gungunai –
“Lata… wapas aao…”


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Tow Dairy Charulata ke haath lag Lekin din ke ujale me usne Kuch nahi dikhta Raat me dikhayi deta h ab dekhte h kia Charulata dairy padhne ki himmat kar payegi
Yeh Jacob itna kyon haveli ke baare me jaan ne me interested h Bhala
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
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Tow Dairy Charulata ke haath lag Lekin din ke ujale me usne Kuch nahi dikhta Raat me dikhayi deta h ab dekhte h kia Charulata dairy padhne ki himmat kar payegi
Yeh Jacob itna kyon haveli ke baare me jaan ne me interested h Bhala
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
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Part 1 -

Year 1875 – Ranakpur, Uttarakhand
Himalaya ki talhati me, Harey bhare Vishal pedon (Tree) se dhaki chotiyon ke beech basa Ranakpur gaon aaj ajeeb tarah se chup tha. Devdar ke pedon ke beech se beh rahi thandi hawa apne saath ek anjaana sa darr le ja rahi thi. Gaon ke beechon-beech khadi Vishal Haveli ka uncha burj badalon ko cheer kar aasmaan ko chho raha tha. Pathar ki deewarein, bade bade lakdi ke darwaze, aur bahar jalti mashaalen… sab milkar yeh keh rahe the ki yeh jagah sirf rehne ke liye nahi, balki raaz ko qaid rakhne ke liye bani hai.

Jaswant Singh Thakur ki entry
Haveli ke andar, lambi chhaton aur gumbad wale galion ke beech, 66 saal ke Jaswant Singh Thakur apni private laboratory se bahar aa rahe the. Unke haath me peetal aur kaanch se bana ek ajeeb sa yantra tha, jisme ek pendulum jaisa hissa lagataar hil raha tha. Unke chehre par thakaan thi, par aankhon me ek chamak – jaise kisi khoji ko khazana mil gaya ho.

Seedhiyon ki taraf badhte hue unki nazar haveli ke uttari hisse par jaake ruki – wahi hissa jo hamesha band rehta tha ya uska raaj ya fir uskey purkho ka raaj. Wahan ek bhaari lohe ka darwaza tha, jispar moti zanjeeren lipti hui thi. Darwaze ki satah par sanskrit aur arabi me kuch likha tha. Jaswant ki aankhon me ek pal ke liye bechaini aayi, par phir unhone nazar hata li.

Darbar ki baithak
Diwan-e-khas me aaj darbar laga tha.
Bayein taraf baithe the Rajveer Panwar – hamesha aadhi muskaan me baat karne wale chalak mantri. Unke paas the Bhimdutt Joshi – jinke mathe ki silwatein unki soch ka saboot deti thi, aur jo Jaswant ke experiments ko samay ki barbaadi mante the.
Kone me baithkar chupchaap sun rahe the Hamitullah Khan – ek buzurg Mughal mantri, jinki awaaz hamesha gehre raaz ki taraf ishara karti thi.
Samaney khade the Senapati Pratap Narayan Rana – talwar ke mooth par haath rakhe hue, hamesha ready for war.

Aaj ka mudda tha – Angrezi Sarkar ka naya order, jisme Ranakpur ke resources aur tax par control ki baat thi.
Bada beta Vikram Singh Thakur is order ke paksh me tha, jabki chhota beta Arjun Singh Thakur iska virodh kar raha tha.

> Arjun: “Pitaji, Angrez humare dost nahi, humare malik banna chahte hain.”



Mahol ek pal ke liye bhaari ho gaya. Jaswant ne dheere se kaha:

> “Hamari ghadi aane wali hai… aur jab waqt badlega, hum itihaas badal denge.”



Kisi ko samajh nahi aaya ki unka “waqt badalne” se kya matlab tha.

Kyoki Jaswant Singh Thakur ki baton ko samjhna aasan nahi thaa.

Haveli ka zenana hissa
Is waqt Badibahu Kusumlata (Vikram ki patni) khidki se darbar ki taraf jhaank rahi thi. Chehra shaant tha, par aankhon me purani aag jal rahi thi – jaise koi purane apmaan ka hisaab rakhti ho.
Dusri taraf Chotibahu Charulata (Arjun ki patni) chupke se haveli ke band hisse ki taraf ja rahi thi. Unhe hamesha us lohe ke darwaze aur uske peeche se aati halki fuskaraahat ne kheench liya tha.

Jab Charulata darwaze ke paas pahunchi, unhe laga koi unka naam le raha hai –
“Lata… Lata…”
Unhone zanjeer ko chhua, aur darwaze ki satah barf jaisi thandi ho gayi. Saansen tez ho gayi, aur wo turant wahan se hatt gayi.

Pehli parchhaai
Us raat, haveli ki chhat par pehra de raha ek sipahi ne dekha ki ek aurat safed kapdon me uttari hisse ki chhat par khadi hai… par uske pairon ke neeche zameen nahi thi.
Jab dusre sipahi aaye, wahan koi nahi tha. Sirf thandi hawa aur door se aati wahi awaaz –
“Samay… badalna hai…”


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Part 2 –

Subah ka Ranakpur
Agli subah Ranakpur gaon me ek ajeeb sa mahaul tha. Devdar ke pedon se girti halki mist aur hawa me ghanti ki halki si awaaz… lekin logon ke chehron pe saaf tha ki koi baat unhe chain se baithne nahi de rahi. Gaon ke kuch buzurg chauraha par baith kar fuskaraahat me baatein kar rahe the — “Kya tumne suna? Kal raat phir haveli ke uttar wale hisse me roshni dekhi gayi thi…”

Hamitullah Khan ka shak
Darbar me aaj hamesha se zyada khamoshi thi. Hamitullah Khan, jo hamesha apni nazar zameen par rakhta tha, aaj apni tez nigah seedha Jaswant par jama ke baitha tha.
Hamitullah ka yeh shak koi nayi baat nahi thi। Ranakpur ke kuch log kehte the ki unke jawani ke dinon me ek hadsa hua tha — unki ek hi beti Noor Khan ek raat achanak gaayab ho gayi thi aur usko last time haveli mai jaatey hue dekha gaya tha. Us waqt logon ka kehna tha ki Noor ko Jaswant ne apne “kale prayogo” ke liye istemal kiya, aur phir uski deh ko hamesha ke liye chhupa diya.

Hamitullah kha ki kabhi himmat nahi hui Jaswant se es baarey mai puchney ki aur naa hee Is baat ka koi saboot kabhi nahi mila, par gaon ke daant-ghisai aur andhvishwas ne is afwah ko ek sachai ka roop de diya। Hamitullah ne kabhi khulkar Jaswant par ilzaam nahi lagaya, par unki aankhon ka kaanta Jaswant hamesha raha

Jacob Hartley ka aana
Isi waqt haveli ke deewan-e-aam me ek LAL rang ka coat pehne, topi thoda sa jhukaye hue, ek gora aadmi ghusa — Jacob Hartley, Ranakpur ka Angrezi Police Officer।
Jacob ka chehra Jaswant ko dekhte hi thoda sa tan gaya.

> “Lord Thakur,” Jacob ki awaaz me halka sa vyang tha, “aap ke yeh naye machines aur experiments… kaafi ‘ahead of time’ lagte hain. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai aap apne samay me jee hi nahi rahe.”


Jaswant ne thandi muskaan di, “Shayad isi liye aapko samajh nahi aata, Mr. Hartley.”

Gaon me log jaante the ki Jacob ko Jaswant pasand nahi karta tha। Ek toh isliye ki Jaswant angrezon ke saamne jhukta nahi tha, doosra — Jaswant ka ‘advance’ hona Jacob ke ego ko chubhta tha। Uske liye ek Indian ruler ka science aur mechanics me angrez engineers se zyada aage hona ek beizzati thi.

Charulata ki khoj
Usi din dopahar, Charulata chupke se haveli ke uttar wale hisse ke kareeb phir se gayi। Is baar unhone dekha ki lohe ke darwaze ke neeche se halki si dhund nikal rahi hai… aur dhund ke saath ek bachi ki halki si hansi bhi sunai dee।
Charulata ka dil tez dhadakne laga। Woh kuch samajh nahi paayi ki yeh bachi ki hansi thi… ya Noor Khan ki?

Sham ka takraav
Sham hote-hote Darbar me Jacob, Hamitullah aur Jaswant ek hi chhat ke neeche they. Jacob ne khulkar Jaswant par bol diya:

> “Main janta hoon aap kuch chupa rahe ho, aur jab main sabit kar dunga… to aapka yeh ‘Vishal Haveli’ Angrezi Hukumat ke qabzey me hoga.”

Hamitullah kha ajnabi bankar sabhi baatey sun raha thaa aur apney khanjar par hath rakh kar Jaswant ke isharey ka intejaar kar raha thaa sath hee Hamitullah ne bas apni aankhon se Jaswant ko dekha — us nazar me na sirf shak tha, balki ek purani dardnaak kahani ka badla bhi.

Haveli ke andar se ek purana ghadiyaal barah ka ghanṭa baja raha tha… aur uttar wale hisse ka loha ka darwaza halki si kampan me aaya.


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Part 3 –

Ranakpur ki shaam
Shaam ka time tha. Haveli ke aangan me diye jal chuke the, hawa me thodi thandi si nami thi. Door mandir se aarti ki awaaz aa rahi thi, lekin haveli ka uttari hissa ab bhi andhere me dooba hua tha – jaise wahan waqt hi ruk gaya ho.

Charulata ka shauk
Rajkumari Charulata, Arjun Singh Thakur ki patni, bachpan se hi raaz aur purani kahaniyon me dilchaspi rakhti thi. Haveli me shaadi ke baad aate hi uska dhyaan baar-baar ussi band hisse ki taraf chala jata tha, jise log “manhoos darwaza” kehte the.

Usne kai baar suna tha ki wahan se raat ko ajeeb awaazein aati hain – kabhi kadam ki aahat, kabhi halki fuskaraahat, kabhi kisi aurat ki hansi. Haveli ke log in awaazon ko ignore karte, jaise unhone maan liya ho ki wahan jana mana hai.

Chupke se nikalna
Us raat Arjun kisi sainik baithak me tha, aur zenana hissa lagbhag khaali tha. Charulata ne yeh moka dekh liya. Usne apni chaandi ki payal utaar di, taaki chalne ki awaaz na aaye, aur ek chhoti si tel ki lantern lekar chupke se galliyon me chal padi.

Jitna wo uttari hisse ke kareeb aati gayi, hawa utni hi thandi hoti gayi. Deewaron par makdi ke jaale latke the, aur zameen par dhool ki moti parat – jaise koi saalon se idhar aaya hi na ho.

Darwaze ke paas
Wo bhari lohe ke darwaze ke saamne aayi. Darwaze par moti zanjeerein lipti hui thi, lekin neeche ek chhoti si darar thi. Charulata ghutnon ke bal jhuki aur lantern ki roshni andar daalne ki koshish ki.
Andar kuch dikh nahi raha tha, par jaise hi usne kaan darwaze se lagaya… ek halki si fuskaraahat sunayi di –
“Lata… andar aao…”

Uska dil zor se dhadakne laga. Usne halki si zanjeer kheench ke dekhi – hairani ki baat yeh thi ki ek kundee dheere se khul gayi, jaise kisi ne andar se khola ho.

Andar ki jhalak
Darwaza kuch inch khula hi tha ki ek thandi dhund ka jhonka bahar aaya. Lantern ki lau kaanp gayi. Dhund ke beech usne kuch dhundli-dhundli shakalain dekhi – purane kapdon me log, lekin unke chehre dhundh se dhak gaye the.

Phir dhund ke andar se ek aurat ka silhoutte ubhar kar paas aane laga – safed lambi poshaak, bikhre hue baal, aur aankhein… bilkul bina putili ke. Wo seedha Charulata ki taraf badh rahi thi.

Jhatka
Charulata piche hatne hi wali thi ki uska pair kisi cheez se takra gaya. Neeche dekha to ek purani, aadhi jali hui diary padi thi. Usne bina soche diary utha li, aur turant darwaza zor se band kar diya.

Wo tez saanson ke saath apne kamre me daudi. Diary kholi – pehle kuch panne khaali the, par ek panne par halki si likhawat thi –
“Noor… samay ko bandh lo, toh maut kabhi nahi aayegi…”

Charulata ke haath thande pad gaye. Noor… wahi naam jo usne kabhi Hamitullah Kha ke muh se suna tha.

Isi ke sath charulata ki nind khul gayi. Charulata bahut ashcharya mai thi ki Usney ek sapna dekh ya hakikat. Kyoki usko yahi lag raha thaa ki vo sach mai yah sab kar chuki hai. Charulata ko vishwas nahi ho raha thaa ki yah ek sapna hai.


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Part 4 –

Subah ka Ranakpur
Suraj ki pehli roshni Devdar ke pedon ke beech se guzar kar haveli ke burj par padh rahi thi. Charulata apne kamre me bethi thi.

Par usney apney yah dekha thaa ki usney jo diary dekhi thi vese hee same aadhi jali hui dairy Jaswant Singh Thakur ki library main ek kach ki shell mai padi hui thi.

Charulata taiyar ho kar Jaswant ki library ki aur chali jaati hai. Haveli mai 2 library thi ek jo sabhi ke liye thi aur dusri sirf Jaswant ki personal thi jaha sirf vahi kaa sakta thaa. Library ek vishal kamrey mai thi jaha kamrey ke ander kamra thaa aur us par lock thaa. Library ke bahar Jaswant ka ek khas Sipahi khada thaa jiska naam Dhamu Singh tha. Ab vaha Charulata jaise hee library ke paas pahuchi usko Dhamu ne ander jaaney as rok diya.

Charulata halkey gussey aur tej aaavaj mai - tumari himmat kaise hui hamko rokney ki?

Dhamu garden jukaye - maaf kijiyega Chotibahu rani. Raja sahab ke sakht aadesh hai. Unke alava koi ander nahi jaa sakta. Vo koi bhi ho aam vaykti ya Raj parivar ka.

Charulata samaj jaati hai ki yah Dhamu naam ka sipahi Jaswant yani uskey sasur ka khas aadmi hai.

Charulata chahti toh apna dum lagakar ander library mai jaa sakti thi par vo nahi chahti thi ki Jaswant ko iska pata lagey.

Yaha charulata ko ek baat yaad aati hai ki yah Dhamu Singh naam ka sainik ek baar ek haveli ki Mahila dasi ya nokrani ke sath jabardasti karne ke jurm mai 1 mahina jail ja chuka hai par Jaswant ka khas sainik hone ki vajah se vo jaldi jail se bahar aa gaya thaa.

Idhar Charulata ek plan banati hai jissey vo library ke ander ja sakey. Vo Dhamu ki aur dekhti hai. Dhamu ki nigahey kahi na kahi charu ki body par toh thi hee. Par vo usko chupa raha thaa.

Charulata - 'hum jaa rahe hai' yah bolkar mudati hai aur ek halki aawaj ke sath ghirney ka baha banati hai. Vo Dhamu ko yah dikhana chahti thi ki usko chakkar aa rahey hai.

Idhar Dhamu ko bhi kuch samaj nahi aata aur vo Rajhaveli ki Choti Bahu ko girta dekh bina kuch sochey samjey pakdney jata hai jissey charulata jamin par na ghirey.

Ab yaha scene yah thaa ki Dhamu ke hatho mai charulata thi. Charulata bhi Dhamu ke sparsh ko acchey se mahsus kar paa Rahi thi. Dhamu ka kathor hath charulata ki mulayam kamar ko kas kar pakad rkha thaa aur dusra hath halka halka uski back par ghum raha thaa. Yaha charulata ki ankhey dhamu ki ankho mai dekh rahi thi. Jaise kuch kahna chah rahi ho. Charulata se aati itra ki smell Dhamu ko pagal bana rahi thi aur uskey Ling mai tej kadakpan paida kar rahi thi.

Vahi charulata Dhamu key kadakpan ko halka sa mahsus kar paa Rahi thi. Dhamu ab dhery dhery apney muh ko charulata ke paas laa raha thaa ki tabhi charulata apni hatheli ko Dhamu ki hatheli se pakad leti hai aur khadey hone ki koshish karti hai. Dhamu ke liye toh yah sab ek hasin sapney ke saman thaa. Uski bahon Mai ek rajbahu jo thi.

Yaha charulata ab khud ko Dhamu se alag karti hai aur gussey mai bolti hai - tumari himmat kaise hui mujko chuney ki ? Mai abhi jakar apney raha sasur ko batati hu.


Yah sun kar Dhamu darr mai thaa. Usko samaj aa gaya thaa ki ussey galti ho gayi hai.

Fir Dhamu kuch boley uskey pahle hee vo ek shetani hasi charulata ke cheharey par dekhta hai. Mano ab uske samney jo aurat khadi thi vo charulata nahi hai.

Dhamu gutno par baith jata hai aur charulata ke bina kuch boley library ki chabi (Key) charulata ko de deta hai. Charulata jaldi se library mai jaa kar vo kitab le aati hai aur apney kamrey mai chali jaati hai.

Ab charulata room mai haath me wahi aadhi jali hui diary pakde hue. Lekin jab usne diary kholi, to panne bilkul khaali the – na koi likhawat, na koi nishaan.

Uska dil ghabra gaya. Kal raat jo kuch hua, wo itna zinda lag raha tha… par ab sab gayab tha. Usne socha –

> “Kya wo sab maine sapne me dekha? Ya sach me darwaza khula tha?”



Uska mann keh raha tha ki yeh sapna nahi ho sakta… uski ungliyon par ab bhi dhund ki nami mehsoos ho rahi thi.

Jacob ka soojh-boojh wala khufiya kaam
Isi waqt, haveli se kuch door, gaon ke chaupal par Jacob Hartley apni LAL coat me baitha tha.Usney gaon ke 3 logo ko bulaya tha.Uske samne Ranakpur ke do buzurg aur ek purana mazdoor baitha tha, jo pehle haveli me kaam karta tha.

Jacob ne seedha sawal kiya –

> “Tum logon ne kabhi haveli ke andar ke gupt kamre ya tahkhane dekhe hain?”



Mazdoor ne thoda dare hue sur me kaha –

> “Sahib, haveli ke neeche kuch kamre hain jahan sirf Thakur Jaswant aur unke do purane khidmatgar jaa sakte hain. Wahan se kabhi-kabhi ajeeb awaazein aati hain… kabhi jaise loha ghis raha ho, kabhi jaise koi chain kheench raha ho.”



Ek buzurg aadmi ne dheere se bola –

> “Aur kai saalon pehle ek ladki bhi wahi chali gayi thi… Noor naam tha uska… phir kabhi wapas nahi aayi.”



Jacob ki aankhon me ek tez chamak aa gayi. Usne apne notebook me likha –
“Secret chambers – possible prisoner or experiment. Must infiltrate soon.”

Charulata ka uljhan
Haveli ke andar, Charulata diary ko apne almari ke andar chhupa rahi thi. Uska mann kah raha tha ki iske andar kuch likha tha, lekin aankhon se kuch dikh nahi raha tha.
Usne socha, shayad suraj dhalne ke baad kuch badle.

Wo khidki ke paas aayi aur dekha ki haveli ke bahar Jacob kuch logon se baat kar raha tha, apne notebook me kuch likh raha tha. Charulata ko ek ajeeb bechaini hui –

> “Ye gora kuch toh plan bana raha hai… par kyu lagta hai ki iska taluk bhi us band darwaze se hai?”



Ant ka ishaara
Shaam ko, jab suraj pahaadon ke peeche chala gaya, Charulata almari se diary nikalti hai… aur iss baar pehle panna kholte hi usme naye shabd ubhar kar aane lage –
“Samay ka darwaza sirf ek baar khulta hai… aur tum uske kareeb thi…”

Usne darr ke maare diary bandh kar di… lekin uske kan me wahi awaaz gungunai –
“Lata… wapas aao…”


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