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cheekku 2.0

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hey 👋...

ye aik short story hogi 20,25 updates ki,

ab thriller genre par hain to ... thrill to hoga ... par jiskey liye aye ho wo nahi hoga ... hope samaj gaye hogy ...

first update isee week mein aye ga ...
 

cheekku 2.0

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update 1 ,



kal karlunga kal karlunga .... keh keh kar ... ham wo kaam kar hee nahi paatey .

kiya ham itney lazy ho chuky hay ... kay chota saa kaam karny mein bhi hamey maut aati hay ,

............
shivangi , beta mein tujey kiya bola tha papa ki dawai lekar aaja tu abhi
tak mobile mein laga howa hay ,

rohit , arey jaa raha hu mummy bss khatam honay wala game ,

shivangi , han tere is chakkar mein aik din tera baap dunya sey chaley jaye ga ,

rohit , kiya hay yrr ... sakoon sey rehny bhi nahi dete ,

shivangi , tu sakoon sey beth .. chal sneha khadi ho tu aur mein tere papa ki dawai leke aye ,

sneha , mummy iska mobile cheen lo .. ye tabhi sudhre ga ,

rohit , arey jaa to raha hu ..bss khatam honay wala hay game ,

shivangi , tu game khel ham jaa rhy hay ,

shivangi aur sneha dono ... dawai lene bahar chali gayi thi
..........................
tabhi rohit kay phone par kisi ki call aati hay ,

rohit , arey payal ki call ,

rohit call pick karta hay ... saamney sey awaz aati hay,

payal rooty howe , rohit hello ... ,

rohit herat mein par jaata hay ... payal ki awaaz sunkar ,

rohit , hello payal .. kiya howa roo kio rahi ho ,

payal , rohit mein pregnant hu ,

rohit kay chehry kay rang udh jaatey hay ye sunkar ,

rohit , kia... kiya keh rahi ho ye tumne pills nahi khayi thi kiya ,

payal , chup raho tum ... pills tumne kaha tha laa kar doo gy .. magar tum leke nahi aaye thy ,

rohit gusse sey , arey mein nahi laya to tum to le sakti thi na ... had ho gayi ..ab batao kiya karey ,

payal , hamey abortion karana hoga ,

Rohit , han to kara lo jaa kar ,

payal , ye kiya bol rahy ho .. tum mere saath chalo hospital mein tumhare sign chaiye hogy ,

rohit , kiya.musibat hay ...thik hay ham kal chalenge ,

payal , ab tumhe ye sab aik musibat lag rahi ... mujey tumse ye umeed nahi thi ,

rohit , mera wo matlab nahi tha sneha ... please ham kal chalenge na .. tension nahi lo ,

sneha bina koi jawab diye ...call cut kardeti hay ,
rohit phone ko side mein rakh kar ... ghoomty howy phanky ko dhek raha tha ,

rohit man mein, ( kaash mein payal ko pills laa kar dede ta ... to aaj aesi bhaari musibat nahi aati )
..................
tabhi bara bar room se kisi aadmi ki zor zor sey khaansne ki awaz aati hay ,

rohit ye sun kar uth khada hota hay .... aur wo jaisy hee kamre ka door kholta hay ,

rohit , oohhh shit ... papa ,

rohit jaldi se jaa kar apny baap ko utha kar bitha ta hay ,

rohit , kiya .. papa bola bhi hay awaz laga diya karo khud sey uthney ki koshish mat kara karo ,

rohit glass mein paani daal kar apny baap ko pilata hay ... aur phir dubara sey apny baap ko litaa kar ..bahar ajata hay ,

rohit man mein , ( ye kaafi der hogayi ..par ab tak mummy aur sneha nahi aayi .. call karky puch leta hu )

rohit room mein jaa kar apna phone utha ta hay .. aur sneha ko call karta hay ,

phone kabsy ring ho raha tha .. par sneha call nahi utha rahi thi ... rohit baar baar call kar raha tha par .. koi response nahi aarha tha ,

wo 5 minute ruk kar ... phir sey number dial karta hay .. par ab phone band jaa raha tha ,

rohit ko ab tension honay lag gayi thi .... wo apny kamrey mein chakkar kaat raha tha ... uske dimag mein ajeeb ajeeb thoughts aaney lag gaye thy ,

usey bhook bhi lag rahi thi .... usey ab gussa aaney lag gaya tha ,

tabhi Rohit kay phone par aik unknown number sey call aati hay

rohit call utha ta hay ... udher sey aik awaaz aati hay ..ye awaaz sunkar rohit kay pairo taile zameen khisak gayi thi ,

unknown , hello kiya tum sneha kay bhai rohit ho ,


to be continued....
 
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Riky007

उड़ते पंछी का ठिकाना, मेरा न कोई जहां...
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first update posted ..

update kuch ziyada bada nahi hay ... isey bss story intro kay liye post kiya hay,

next update ki length 3k words hogi ,
Sneha aur Payal ka naam exchange ho gaya hai, sahi kar do
 

Razzak

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update 1 ,



kal karlunga kal karlunga .... keh keh kar ... ham wo kaam kar hee nahi paatey .

kiya ham itney lazy ho chuky hay ... kay chota saa kaam karny mein bhi hamey maut aati hay ,

............
shivangi , beta mein tujey kiya bola tha papa ki dawai lekar aaja tu abhi
tak mobile mein laga howa hay ,

rohit , arey jaa raha hu mummy bss khatam honay wala game ,

shivangi , han tere is chakkar mein aik din tera baap dunya sey chaley jaye ga ,

rohit , kiya hay yrr ... sakoon sey rehny bhi nahi dete ,

shivangi , tu sakoon sey beth .. chal sneha khadi ho tu aur mein tere papa ki dawai leke aye ,

sneha , mummy iska mobile cheen lo .. ye tabhi sudhre ga ,

rohit , arey jaa to raha hu ..bss khatam honay wala hay game ,

shivangi , tu game khel ham jaa rhy hay ,

shivangi aur sneha dono ... dawai lene bahar chali gayi thi
..........................
tabhi rohit kay phone par kisi ki call aati hay ,

rohit , arey payal ki call ,

rohit call pick karta hay ... saamney sey awaz aati hay,

payal rooty howe , rohit hello ... ,

rohit herat mein par jaata hay ... payal ki awaaz sunkar ,

rohit , hello payal .. kiya howa roo kio rahi ho ,

payal , rohit mein pregnant hu ,

rohit kay chehry kay rang udh jaatey hay ye sunkar ,

rohit , kia... kiya keh rahi ho ye tumne pills nahi khayi thi kiya ,

payal , chup raho tum ... pills tumne kaha tha laa kar doo gy .. magar tum leke nahi aaye thy ,

rohit gusse sey , arey mein nahi laya to tum to le sakti thi na ... had ho gayi ..ab batao kiya karey ,

payal , hamey abortion karana hoga ,

Rohit , han to kara lo jaa kar ,

payal , ye kiya bol rahy ho .. tum mere saath chalo hospital tumhare sign chaiye hogy ,

rohit , kiya.musibat hay ...thik hay ham kal chalenge ,

payal , ab tumhe ye sab aik musibat lag rahi ... mujey tumse ye umeed nahi thi ,

rohit , mera wo matlab nahi tha sneha ... please ham kal chalenge na .. tension nahi lo ,

sneha bina koi jawab diye ...call cut kardeti hay ,
rohit phone ko side mein rakh kar ... ghoomty howy phanky ko dhek raha tha ,

rohit man mein, ( kaash mein payal ko pills laa kar dede ta ... to aaj aesi bhaari musibat nahi aati )
..................
tabhi bara bar room se kisi aadmi ki zor zor sey khaansne ki awaz aati hay ,

rohit ye sun kar uth khada hota hay .... aur wo jaisy hee kamre ka door kholta hay ,

rohit , oohhh shit ... papa ,

rohit jaldi se jaa kar apny baap ko utha kar bitha ta hay ,

rohit , kiya .. papa bola bhi hay awaz laga diya karo khud sey uthney ki koshish mat kara karo ,

rohit glass mein paani daal kar apny baap ko pilata hay ... aur phir dubara sey apny baap ko litaa kar ..bahar ajata hay ,

rohit man mein , ( ye kaafi der hogayi ..par ab tak mummy aur sneha nahi aayi .. call karky puch leta hu )

rohit room mein jaa kar apna phone utha ta hay .. aur sneha ko call karta hay ,

phone kabsy ring ho raha tha .. par sneha call nahi utha rahi thi ... rohit baar baar call kar raha tha par .. koi response nahi aarha tha ,

wo 5 minute ruk kar ... phir sey number dial karta hay .. par ab phone band jaa raha tha ,

rohit ko ab tension honay lag gayi thi .... wo apny kamrey mein chakkar kaat raha tha ... uske dimag mein ajeeb ajeeb thoughts aaney lag gaye thy ,

usey bhook bhi lag rahi thi .... usey ab gussa aaney lag gaya tha ,

tabhi Rohit kay phone par aik unknown number sey call aati hay

rohit call utha ta hay ... udher sey aik awaaz aati hay ..ye awaaz sunkar rohit kay pairo taile zameen khisak gayi thi ,

unknown , hello kiya tum sneha kay bhai rohit ho ,


to be continued....
Awesome start . Rohit kaam chor lagta hai per aur sab kaam mai aage hai payal ke saath
 
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