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Sorry dost meri pichli kahani kisi reason ke wajah se beech me rok diya. Uss kahani ko mai jld se jld suru karne ki koshis karunga tab tak mai apni ek nai kahani jisse pahle se hi kuch part likh rakhe the usse parastut kar raha hu.
 

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Disclaimer- ye kahani kisi bhi dharm jati samuday kisi bhi vaykti asthan mritya jivit kisi se bhi sambhandh nhi rakhta h. Agar aapko lage aap ahaht ho rahe h to pichle kahani ke tarah iss baar bhi likhunga aap kahani na padhe.
 

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Gaon madhupur

ramakant singh- (age 60) ghar ke mukhiya ke sath gaon ke bhi mukhiya. Ek rashuk dar vaykti. Inke samne teeno gaon ke mukhiya sar jhukate(ijat dene ke liye kyuki ye unlogo ke dost h or umar se bade bhi) h. Inka gaon thora modern h kyuki inke gaon se sahar matra 5km dur h or baki gaon ke 10 se 15km par jate h.

samrat singh- (age 35) ramakant singh ka eklauta beta. Apne baap ke viprit jaha baap aurato ki ijat karta h(bhale ussi ijat me kai log uske niche aaye par ab sanyash le chuke h) wahi isse dekh galiya hi dete h. Baap se darta h. Baap ghar pe ab nhi rahte h to roj raat ko daru pi ke aayega baap ke khana khaa ke jane ke baad or apni bibi ko pitega or banjh kah ke dutkar dega.

kajal singh- (age 30) samrat ki bibi padhi likhi h or samjhdar. Sadi ko 10 saal ho gaye h abhi tak bacha nhi h. Apni chalaki se apne pati or apna janch karwa chuki h. Isme koi dikat nhi h na hi pati me dikat h ki isse strong maal chahiye bache hone ke liye or wo maal uska pati de nhi skta.

neelam singh- iss ghar ki sadharan si ladki(ghar me pura khulam khula h)

shubham singh- age 20 (hero)

munim Sukhiram - age 40 (iski beti hi sab kuch h ghar me koi or nhi h bibi beti ko janam dete hi chal bassi. Ghar baar h par rojgar ke naam pe kuch nhi. Isiliye ramakant singh ke yaha munim h)

Pari- age 19 heroine (iske pichhe hero kabse pagal h dono ne apne pyaar ka ijhar bhi kar rakha h. Neelam ki khash shaheli h isse bhi pata h neelam pyaar karti h or dono ko isse koi farak nhi yaha tak ki shubham kisi se bhi pyaar kare)

Hira singh- age 28 (ek mota par apni aurat se gora aaiyashi ka shok h abhi tak apni bibi ko ek baar choda uske baad kabhi hath nhi lagya or jab hath lagaya to iske hath pao hi bekam ho gaye) (samrat singh ka chachera bhai iske pariwar me ab koi nhi h)

Mamata singh- age 23 (shubham ki padoshi kahe to uske room ke sate iska kamra h andar jo bhi ho hala hota h sab awaj shubham ke pass aati h. Kyuki batware ke baad vantilantion band nhi kiya gaya)

Others

kiran- neelam college teacher.

rekha- teacher (shubham ke political science ki bahut din se dore dal rhi h iska ghar madhur pur ke puliye ke pass me h)

Sukhiya chachi- khet me kaam krti h.

Mona bhabhi- bahu sukhiya chachi ye bhi khet me kaam krti h.

Dono ka marad bahar kaam karata h.

Sano- sukhiya beti (married)

Savita- mona ki padoshi (ek dam bomb pataka kahne thori moti h par maal jabardsat h)


Sohan- madhupur me eklauta dost. Savita ka beta.

baki ke patra aate rahenge.
 
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10 saal pahle.

Admi1- behosh h na.
Admi2- haaa....
Admi1- fek do isse.
Admi2- kaha.
Admi1- kahi bhi feko magar ye maar jana chahiye.
Admi2- malik nahar me fek du.
Admi1- ha jao jldi fek ke aao.

Admi1 ke kahe jane pe wo usse sahar ki or jane wale puliya ke niche fek diya. Jisse ek adher umar ke vaykti ne dekh liya. Wo turant chhalang maar diya uss nahar me or apne admi ko bola usse pakrne ko. Adher uss bache ko bacha liya or usse dekh wo achambhit bhi hua par abhi uss bache ko ilaj ki jarurat thi to wo uss admi ko apne jeep me bandhwaya or uss bache ko leke nikal gaya. Or apne admio ko bol diya iske bare me kisi ko na bataye.

Wo pahle hospital le gaya jaha usse 6 ghante lage matlab raat adhi ghir chuki thi. Abhi bacha sawasth tha. Tab uss adher admi ko wo admi yaad aaya jo bache ko feka tha nahar me. Jldi se wo jeep me gaya waha wo behosh baitha tha jeep ka pichhla hissa cover tha to koi dekh nhi paya. Wo usse leke ek ghar me gaya. Jaha uski khub aao bhagat hui phir unlogo ko kuch bataya to chehre ke haw bhao hi badal gaye.

Phir uss admi ko lene koi bahar aaya or usse ghashitta hua leke andar gaya or usse sari jankari li uske baad to uss adher ko jo gussa aaya ki usne usse wahi maar diya. Sabhi gusse me the par lash thikana lagana tha phir bhi wo uss lash ko jeep me dalwa kar wahi parsal karwa diya jiss admi ka wo admi tha.

Bacha ab yahi rahne laga. Aise hi wo yhi bara hua yhi padha likha 10th pass kiya achhe numbaro se. Uske baad apne hisab se 12 ki padhai me lagaya. Abhi wo matra 15 saal ka hua tha. Uss bache ko abhi bhi kuch bate yaad thi 5 saal pahle wali jisko wo soch soch ke rota tha. Par kisi ko dikhata nhi tha. Waise iske dimag me kuch mithi yade bhi thi jisse wo soch kar hasta bhi tha.

Wo adher kon h? Iska jawab update 1 me admi2 admi hi h. Admi1 uske khulashe me abhi bahut deer h.

aage ke liye bane rahe or apna support pichle kahaniyo ke tarah ispe bhi banye rakhe.

update 1 aaj raat tak aa jayegi.

dhyanwaad
 
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