Thriller Aditi ek housewife aur Karim chacha

[Prince srk]

Mai ek new story shru karne jaa rha hu jo ek long story hai jiska haqiqat se kuch wasta nai hai iske sabhi cracters kalpanik hai

Aditi chawhan 27
Vishal chawhan 30
Karim chacha age 57

 

[Nasn]

karo start..

 

[Black & White]

Story base is superb keep going bro

 

[axm]

post update

 

[Monster Dick]

Story to start karo...

 

[afreenshaikh]

Good

 

[Prince srk]

Update 1

birju chawhan aur karim bhot ache dost hai unki dosti bhot pakki thi dono bachpan se dost the kabi dono ke beech jagda nai hua tha birju ke bete vishal ko karim bhot laad krta tha vishal bhi karim chacha ki bhot izzat krta tha karim ka beta asif use birju bhi laad krta tha in dono ki dosti aesi thi ke ye dono koi bhi kaam kre jese zameen leni ho kahi bhar jana ho ye ghar mai koi khusi ka mauka ho to dono ek sath hote the hamesa karim ke pas bhot zameen thi aur birju ke pas kum zameen thi dono gaav mai hi rhe hai bachpan se vishal mumbai chlagya padhne ko aur asif bhi uske sath hi padhne gya
Waqt aafe badta rha aur ab asif ki shadi hogyi wo ek bada busninsman bangya delhi mai wife ko lekar rhene laga use apne maa baap ko sath chalne kaha lekin karim ne mana kardia ke muje gaav mai hi acha lagta hai
Kuch din baad vishal ko ladki dekne gye ladki mumbai ki hi thi birju karim dono ki wife vishal and vishal ka chota bhai and choti bahen dekne gye

Ladki sab ko achi lagi aur kuch dino mai vishal ki shadi hogyi aur wo wife ko lekar mumbai mai rhene laga qk vishal ko gaav mai rhena acha nai lagta tha vishal ko comapny ki traf se ek ghar mila tha chota sa usmai hi wo dono rhete the

Vishal ki shadi ko 1 saal hogya tha vishal and aditi bhot pyar se rhete the dono ek dusre se bhot pyar krte the

Aditi jobek khubsurat ladki hai and dil ki achi hai lekin wo sanskari wife hai jo apne pati se bhot pyar krti hai

EK din achanak karim aur uski wife car mai kahi jaa rhe the ke car ka accident hogya jismai uski wife ki maut hogyi aur karim ko bhot chot aayi is baat se birju ko bhot dhakka laga tha karim ki chote jada thi lekin waqt ke sath zhakam bharta gya

Ab 2 mahine baad karim thik hogya aur birju ke ghar rhene laga wo hamesa apni biwi ki yaado mai khoya rheta tha jada kisi se baat nai krta tha ye baat birju ko pata thi isliye usne karim se kaha ke wo mumbai mai rahe ab vishal ke paas isse use bhabhi ki yaad bhi nai ayengi aur naayi jaga par wo dhire dhire apne dil mai jo dard hai wo kum hota jayenga

Karim ne mana kia lekin birju ne uski baat nai mani aur apni dosti ki kasam de di
Karim ab gaav se nikalta hai mumbai vishal ke ghar ane keliye

Vishal ka ghar ek bedroom kichen and hall tha
Ab karim mumbai pauchne wala hai

Ab aage kya hone wala hai kya vishal and aditi ki life change hone wali hai ye to ane wala waqt bateynga

Update kesa laga friends batana

 

[kamal]

Starting achchha hai. But as usual your update is irregular. Please give regular update to keep the readers interest alive.

 

[Genius]

Hello, Ladies  & Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 10th, June 2020, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.

Rules Check Karne k Liye Ye Thread Use karein :- Rules And Queries Thread

Entry Post Karne k Liye Ye thread Use Karein :- Entry Thread
Reviews Post Karne K liye Ye thread Use karein :- Reviews Thread
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Xforum Staff..

 

[Rafiqaskhani586]

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