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congratulations for new story.... bhara pura pariwar ka parichay toh ho gaya hain..waise devnagri kee toh baat hi kuchh aur hain,,, par hinglish mein hi likhe,, kyunki padhne waale readers kee sankhaya jyada wahee hain...

marti hui maa ne achhe bhavishya ka soch ke behen ko ghar mein jagah dee,,, lekin ussi behen ne uske bachho ko hi beghar kar diya.. lekin jeevan mein kathinayee shamapt nahin hui,,, mami bhi paraye ladke ko paraye sa hi maan diya,,, kuchh kisse ghate jo ateet mein dabe hain,, wahan se zindagi ne...

do behno ke beech hamara monu kee nunnu pish raha hain... pehli pyar karti hain aur doosri khujli,,, aur yeh bechara dono haatho mein aaye gend mein se kisi ko chhorna nahin chahta hain...akhir kachhi umar hain jitna mile utna paa lo,,, aksar jab shareer mein veerye kee matra badhti hain toh...

mami jee ne akhir arjun ko bhawuk kar ke gaon jaane pe majbor kar hi diya,,, lekin arjun agar gaon jaane se itna hi chidhta hain toh sach bata de,,, aur agar uski mami gaon jayegi toh kya nahin dekhegi unki raas leela... aur arjun ne kabhi apni mami se mama ke sahar na aane ka karan kyun nahin...

anchaal mami ke baapu chal base,,, umar ka takaja aur beemari dono ne ghera aur bechari maa besahara ho gayee,,, lekin in logo ne marne ke baad shraadh pooja nahin karwaya... khair ab akeli maa ko gaon mein bhi nahin chhor shakte isiliye saath le ke chal rahi hain.... wahee khud ke aansu rok...

soch kee vidambana dekho,,, ek taraf arjun apni maa kee gandagee ke liye ghinn karta hain unse,, bhale hi aur bhi galtiya kari uss aurat ne,,, lekin doosri taraf yeh khud kee behen ko uss najariye se dekhta hain jisme nahin dekhna chahiye.... mana kee umar ka yeh padaaw kareebi rishto ke baare...

update 6-7 review*** rakhi devi dukan pe kya kar rahi hain,,, jo aurat khud ke ghar ke kaam kabhi nahin karti,, wo aisi hi dukan pe baith ke sarree bech rahi hain,,, akhir uska guroor usse ijjajat kaise diya inta chhota kaam karne ke liye,,, khair manchalo ke beech arjun ka dar hain,, akhir...

kahani ek masoom kee sirshak se prateet hua ,,ek aisi aurat kee kahani jiska samna iss hawsi samaaj ke mard se hoga,,, lekin yehan ek aurat ek saath apne do sabse kareebi rishto ko chhal rahi hain,,, ek pati jiske saath agni ke samne kitne wayde kiye aur ek behen jiske saath bachpan ke kitne...

beta toh baap ban gaya lekin iss baap bante-bante ek bewi ka chaska lag gaya,,, ab pihu bua toh har wakt uska saath na de shakti thee,,, toh baal bramhachaari ab bhogne lage byahta na jab na mili kunwari... bua ke baad bhabhi ke peeche par gaya,, bhale hi bhabhi ne jyada aage na badhne diya...

ek masoom khayal se panpa yeh vichar na jaane kin khwabo ko hawa de raha hain,,, jahan pihu bua matritva sukh chahti thee gopu ko apna stan paan karwa ke,,, wahee gopu unko inka kar ke dukhi na karna chahta tha,,, lekin bhawnaaye kitni bhi sudhh kyun na ho,,, jab umar hi aisi kachhi ho jahan...

update 5 review...kahani mein kareeb 7-8 saal ka lamba gap ko teji se cover kiya gaya hain,,, lekin itne lambe antaral mein insaan kaaif utar chadhaw se gujarta hain,,, kabhi khus kabhi dukh,,, kabhi antyant dukh krodh,,, dhero bhawnaaye aati-jaati rahti hain,,, kya kabhi aisa avasar nahin...

update 4 review...arjun ko hostel mein adhnanga kisi ladke ke saath hone se aisa laga kee uska taste toh nahin kharab ho gaya hain apni maa ke dwara diye gaye trauma se,, lekin yeh night out thee laundo kee,,, resutl ke khushi mein...*** maa ko mami maa samajh ke pyar jatane gaya tha lekin...

aise sare aam itni gandi harkat kar rahe hain,,, kya inhe prashashan ka dar tanik bhi nahin hain... aur aas paas ke logo mein koi mahila ya koi shabhya purush nahin hain jo ,, ek pareshan mahila kee madad kar sake,,, mauka dikha nahin kee apni tharak dikhana shuru kar dete hain... khair...

gopu kee achhi aadato mein se ek hain apni galti turant maan lena,,, usse mehsoos hua kee behen ke saath jo labj istemaal kiye usne wo galat aur anaitik tha... khair bhai behen ka pyar bhi aisa hain kee pihu ne turant maaf bhi kar diya,,, aksar log chhoti moti baato ko tul de dete hain lekin...

daba hua gussa jo lambe antaral se man mein baitha hua ho,,, ek samay ke baad wo nafrat ban jata hain,,, pehle jo bachha bas apni maa ke pyar ke liye tarasta tha,, na mil paane pe gussa hota tha naaraj hota tha,, apni maa ko usse pyar na de ke kisi aur ko uski jagah pe dekhne se dukh hota tha...

galti teeno charachter ne kee...1. gopu ko kabhi apni behen ke liye aise shabd nahin istemal karna chahiye,,, chahe kitna bhi gussa kyun na ho,,, koi paraya kahe toh gussa aata hain lekin jab koi apna kahe toh andar tak chot karti hai...2. rupi ko apne bhai kee parwah thee toh usse aaram se...

gopu ke aas paas ke log itne achhe hain isliye gopu itna achha hai ya gopu achha hain isiliye uske aas paas ke log itne achhe hain... karan chahe jo bhi ho gopu hain toh shabka ladla... chahe maa ho ya taijee,,, tau jee ho ya phir uski bhabhi aur behen... bhai se abhi tak jyada vartalaap nahin...

akhir yeh to hona hi tha,,, jab pati kisi dosri ke liye apni patni ko akela chhor de,,, usse tarshaye,,, usse yeh ehsaas dilaye kee wo kabhi usse pyar nahin kar shakta,,, hataasha aur nirasha aisa hain jo insaan ko ek gehre andhakar mein dhakel deta hain,,, aur jo bhi uss gart se nikale usse wo...

arjun baar baar aata hain aur uska gate peet-ta hain,,, kya itne se uss aurat ko samajh nahin ke wo bachha usse dekh raha hain,,, aur uss halat mein dekh raha hain jisme kisi bachhe ko apni maa ko nahin dekhna chahiye,,, akhir uska baap hota toh samajh aata hain,,, lekin kisi gair mard ko apni...

update 25 review....school khatam chhutti shuru,,, pyar ka izhaar sare aam bhi shuru ho gaya hain.. isha aur yash,,, ab yash toh turant hi ghar ko jaa rahahain,,, idhar isha akeli lekin udhar preeti aur yash... shayad in dono naario ka takraaw college shuru hote hee ho...*** behrahaal kaya...