Last update kuch ajeeb sa bahi tha kya? Mujhe kuch bhi samajh me nahi aayi Mujhe lagta gai writer sahab Samreen aur raheman ka flashback likhne mi jagah imran aur noor ki likh di hai Wahan sirf naam me gadabadi huyi lagti hai

Oh sad Aap pahle apna aur apne cheezo ka khayal rakhiye Hum aapke dukh me aapke sath hai

Late update hoti hai to kahani ka intrest kam ho jata hai

Jab kahani likhni hi nahi hai to shuru hi kyu karte ho

Aage kahani me aur zaika aayega jab rahul apna gussa nikalne ke liye noor ko apne neeche layega Aur uski madad samreen karegi

Kya hua hai Ab tak update bhej deni chahiye na writer sahab

Update kab tak aayega

Bahot Bahot acha likha hai Ek nayi shuruwat hira ke baad rahul

Story bahot achi chal rahi thi Magar ab lagta hai is story me zabardasti sex scene ghusa rahe hai Jabki last train ke platform ka scene bilkul bhi munasib nahi tha Waiting room me puri family ko chod kar koi bhi aurat is kaam ke liye itna bada risk le hi nahi sakti Writer sahab achi kahani ko...

Itna chotha sa update!!!? Thoda bad update dijiye na plsss

Kya aaj update aayega?

Der aaye durust aaye Shukriya update shuru karne ke liye

Pahle kahani pura likh ke ready kar lijiye phir post karna shuru kijiye Kahi aisa na ho baad me is kahani me dilchaspi badhne lagegi darshako ki to adhuri chod kar aap nikal jaye Sorry Aisa hi ho raha hai idhar jyadatar kahaniyo me Likhna hai to kahani pura likho Nahi to mat likho

Jo story mujhe pasand aane lagti hai Wo adhuri rahe jaati hai :sad:

Kya hua hai writer sahab Tabiyat theek hui nahi kya Sab khairiyat to hai? Kuch to khabar de dijiye

Aram se Apna khayal rakho pahle Ye sab to chalti rahegi

Kab aayega update?

Bahot hi zabardast likhte hai aap

Intizar karni hai ya nahi samajh lete