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Sorry not at all interested in this story..it's not even sexy

lalach wala story toh khatam karo pahele , ie kya suru kar di..wtf!!

still no updates?? it's not fair

kab ayega update? kab aage badega story? itna late hone se maja khatam ho jata hai

kahan ho bhai, hum sab bade besabrise intezar kar rahe hi ji

U r an awesome writer , u bring life to characters, jaldi update lao koi hot update, waiting bro

yeah and my point is a good erotica should look realistic. otherwise there is no fun, all the characters should be in that specific character. a riksaw driver should talk like a riksaw driver , eso we can imagine the picture clearly else it's comedy not erotica, a sexual fantasy story is not...

yes, and less english please, English words on low class old men, it's sounds so stupid, don't u understand??

toh aapko sirf taarifein chahiye criticism nahi, aap ie dekhiye mai logical bol raha hu ke nahi, ek riksaw driver agar itna english bolega toh story fake lagne lage ga na, why dont u improve these things whn u can

pathetic, A riksaw driver saying "company" just wow , and a muslim would say dawat not invitation , u dont care about anything bro, just rotting ur writing

When u r writing a story please keep the characters into characters , a riksaw driver should not talk like an engineer,

Sorry without logic erotica bakwas ho jate hai, everything builds with logic even a good erotica