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Areee BC,:omg1::omg1::omg1:. Iska hal to bhai ab site owners ko hi nikalna padega,

No worries bro, bas brave pr ads km aatein hein isliye bataya :thumbup: And wonderful update

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Badhiya update tha @Werewolf bhai Veer ne uski maa ki Kasam puri kr di, and kuch sawalon ke jawab bhi jaan liye, halanki kuch aur rahsya ab bhi bachein hein, dekhte wo kb aur kaise nikal kr saamne aatein hein. Aur end mein ek baar fir humein suspence mein daal diya. But a nice end. A very...

Lagti thi, pr aapka ek comment padh kr galatfahmi sahi ho gayi:laugh::laugh: And Bhanu pratap ki taraf se koi ho sakta, it was just a guess

Mujhe to yahi possibility lagti he :smile2:. Aur mein yeh bhi guess kr rha hun ki kya Bhavna ya Bhanu Pratap ke pariwar se LA Wale vyakti ka koi sambandh ho sakta he, jiske paas dusra system tha? Kuch bhi ho, aage kya hona he wo to @Werewolf sir ke hath mein he, we have to just wait and watch...

Majedar update hai dost. Bhai tum 5 kya 10k bhi likh lo, man nhi bharega... Keep it up.

I totally agree 💯. Bhawna Veer ko chod kar kyun gayi, iska karan hum nhi jaante, isliye yeh abhi se judge krna thik nhi ki wo sahi thi ya galat. Halanki, uska is tarah gayab rehna use Veer ke liye doshi zarur banata he. And I guess yahi uski udasi ka karan he? Veer ke sath hua vyavhar...

And you did that very well:perfect: Kafi maja aaya padh kr. Mein to Shweta aur Bhawana ke bich 'tu-tu me-me' expect kr rha tha.:smile2: Par Tej kuch alag hi avtar mein thi. Usne Usne jo Shweta ki wat to lagai he, usse to kisi ki bhi fat ke char ho jaye , :shocking: Usne Bhawana ko ye bhi zahir...

Mein to bs yahi kahunga ki, You know how to maintain the curiosity of your readers. Veer jb apni Maan se milega to kya hoga or wo kya kahega, Bhavana ka reaction kya rahega, in cheezon ko lekar hum sab curious the. Finally is update mein wo mile, or kafi drama bhi hua. Kuch cheezien abhi bhi...

आपकी दोनों ही कहानियों में आपकी प्रतीक्षा है। खासकर "पूर्व-पवन" में। बँधी हुई और लयबद्ध कहानियाँ यहाँ कम ही देखने को मिलती हैं, आशा है वह कहानी भी जल्दी ही आगे बढ़ेगी।

Yeh accha suspense banaye ho bandhu. Ye malik shayd Daksh ya Devdhar mein se koi ek hoga. Devdhar shayad hi ho kyunki uska or daksh ka koi connection samne nhi aaya he. Daksh ke chances jyada hein

Hi Guys!!!:itsme: I am a new member here and @Werewolf You are one of my favorite writers on this forum. :good: Mein isse pehle sirf as a guest hi stories padhta tha but your story made me to logIn and comment here, specially Baadshah. Mene isse pehle aapki "Akhir kyun?" bhi padhi he aur wo bhi...