Nice story

Okk Nice story

Nice starting

Congratulations for starting the story Nice start bhai....

Nhi bhai Jo Mann me hai wahi likho mai bass iss site ka overview bata raha tha. Jaisa aapne puch ki views or comments Kam kyu hai Maine uska reason bataya. Baat hai suspense create karne ki toh jaise aapka Hero IAS bann chuka hai toh training ke baad se story start karte. Aur dhirre dhirre...

Baat Aisa hai dost tumhari story straight forward hai. Usme suspense aur thrill nhi hai sayad aur saath Jaydatar log yaha sayad incest story padhne aate hai. tumhara content accha hai bro update Dene ki speed v.

Nice update

Bhai abhi mera exam kal aur parso lagatar hai toh Mai Wednesday ko update de paunga.

I am a big fan of your writing skill brooo.... You mentioned each and everything in every single updates. I think you never missed anything in your update. You mentioned every little things. Big fan brooo big fan... yar yeh story padh ke apun ko Deepika se pyaar ho gya aur usko lekar joh aap...

Update -4 Sanu ek ghante me so kar utha aur khaa pi kar apni maa se mila aur cheque par sign lekae nikal gya. Showroom ka saman order kartey hue late ho gya. Sanu ne imtiaz ko phone karke badi ammi ke ghar milne ko kaha. Sanu sidha neelofar le Ghar pahuncha. At Neelofar house--- Sanu -...

Bhai abhi mera internal exam chal raha hai college ka toh jaise abhi aya deke toh abhi thoda aaram karke likhna start hi karunga. But raat tak aa jayega.

Update -3 Kishmat Imtiaz - le lo neelofar ne bade pyaar se bheja hai. Sanu - mamu aap unhe hi de Dena plzz.. Imtiaz - jaisa tumhe thik lage. Tumse ek iltiaza thi... Sanu - kahiye na mamu kya baat thi. Imtiaz - voh... Voh... Kaise kahu... Tum chote ho aur mai...

Update -2 Sanu jaise hi showroom pahucha usse pata chala kuch log yaha marpit kar rahe hai. Aur paper chod ke gye hai. sanu ne paper padhe woh loans ke paper the. Aur use samjh nhi aya ke kaise yeh galti uska baap kar sakta hai. Sanu tension me aa gya. Uske pass bas 3 months the iss dauran...

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