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Ahsa lagta hai jese koi bollywood ki movie chal rahi hai. 😂😂😂

Story end

Update?

Bro kya ye story kisi or web par hai kya. Mai pak se hn. Urdu janta hn

Sorty boht achi hai ap ki. Mai pakistan se hn itni zada hindi nahi samj ahti. Is liye... Baki good luck for next update

Ap ki story boht achi hai. Kuch words ahsy ah jate hai hindi k jo samaj nahi ahty. But it's ok. Bs update ki length thori zada kar do.

Update bro.

Next update kab hai?

Good update... But 1 cheez thori ajeeb lagi. Raj ability chura k veer ko b de deta hai. System Raj k under hai to sub powers Raj hi ko milni chahye. Haa thore time k liye kisi ko de de to thik jesy aksir movies mai hota hai. Wese writer ap ho to ap apne hisaab se hi story continue karo gay. Lekn...

System based story achi hoti hai. Lekan har koi likh b ni sakta. 2 3 writers hai jin ki story achi hai system base. Ye 3 updates read kar k lag raha hai k ap ki story b achi ho gi... Baki sex na b ho story mai to chaly ga lekan fight or action ko achy se likhna.... Bs yahi kahna chahon ga.. Good...

Update to acha hota. Lkn problem ye hai k boht chota aur boht lat hota hai.

Solo leveling hi name hai.

1st episode b ah geya. Wo b hindi dubbed main.

Bro update to kar do bara. Lekn words boht small hai wo b large kar do.

Start to acha hai. Bro sex na b ho story mai to chaly ga. Story achi honi chahya. Bs words ka siza zada kar do.