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Update was awesome Par mere Kuch sawal hai jaise scorpion tribe ke wo bande ne kaha ki tera bheja khane mein maja aayega toh kya scorpion tribe ke member sach mein insano ka bhej khate hai? Baccho ka khun chahiye matlab kya unke khun se kisi chiz ka raaz khul sakta hai ya wo kisi chiz ke chabi...

Bhai mere according story sahi chal rahi hai aur mein toh bas aapse itna hi kahunga ki jaisa aapne story ke baare mein socha hua hai waisa hi likho as kyunki readers ke according story ko aap better bana sakte hai but story ki jo main theme hai use change mat kariyega jo ki sana aur aryan ka ek...

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Update:-10 Mein aur Nayan chachi dono gadi mein bethe the aur mene mirror se unhe dekha to wo bahar dekh rahi thi aur na hi wo kuch bol rahi thi aur na hi mein par dono ke andar bahot se vichar chal rahe the Aur thodi der baad hum ghar pahoch jate hai aur bacche bhi uth jate hai aur andar...

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Mind blowing update bhai update aisa laga ki kisi chiz ke around ghum raha hai par kya? Apne jis tarah update likha hai bahot si chize sochne pe laga diya ki kya ho sakta hai Jo bhi ho update sach mein kamal ka tha aur padhte waqt ek alag hi grip bani huyi thi Waiting for your next update

Congratulations for your new story bhai 🎉

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Update:-9 Main gadi chala raha tha aur stepmom se baat karte waqt ek chiz mere dimag mein aayi aur mein wohi soche ja raha tha ki jabse shraadha mom ki shadi hui hai dad se maine toh unke saath baat bhi nahi ki hai bas jab unka aur dad ka rishta juda tha tab maine unhe pehli baar dekha tha par...

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