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Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

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Salty~Otaku

ᴺᵒ ᴹᵃᵗᵗᵉʳ ᵂʰᵃᵗ ᴵ’ᵐ ᶜˡᵒᶜᵏⁱⁿᵍ ᴼᵘᵗ ᴮʸ ˢⁱˣ
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So finally VENDETTA ARC khatam hua lekin as usual Salty~Otaku type ke twist per aur what a vengeance of Revenge.
:smarty:
ek kaam karna har 1 ya 2 update ke andar vansh ka zikra latey rehna means uska torcher kis level pe pohach gaya hai.
Updates me likha to boring ho ga aur milking bhi ho gi! Lekin extra update me likh sakta hu, Like a filler update, 500-600 words ka ho sakta hai :approve:
In sab me sirf itna accha pata chala ki vanshika abhi bhi zinda hai to woh Arav ke saamne zaroor aayegi.
Lekin wo to pehle bhi clear tha na? Remember chain's scene?
Veronica ki grave per Arav ka emotional hona bohat hi zabardast hai. Aakhir woh Arav se bohat hi bepanah pyar karne lagi thee.
Kinda :approve:
Lekin 2 month me baby hona ab bhi mystery bana hua hai
:hint: diye huwe hai! Like literally hints saamne the :D

sath sath yoo-jung ke pass uska Jana.
Ye to bataya tha na? Archana ne he unko derek diya tha :?:
kia woh singh parivar ke contact me rahega specially abhi ke change circumstance me?
Maybe or maybe not :catshrug:
lekin uski Qi kia thee yah abhi Raaz hai.
:anyahide:
coz koi bhi apni maa ko dobara dekhega to uska reaction kuch aur hi hoga but yaha nafrat aur woh bhi itni zada.
It depends ke situation kya hai! Ye sab ke liye same nahi ho ga, Ab Aarav ki kya situation hai ye aage pata lage ga :approve:
3. Varsha bhi ek ascendant level Qi holder hona but yah samjh me aa sakta hai coz woh bhi kisi clan se thee same like Veer mother.
Yup :approve:
4. And sab se bada surprise URVI ka waha hona. Ek sath sare rishtey mil ker khadey ho gaye magar sab se aage n upar URVI ka hona. Yah surprise ka baap thaa aur usper Arc khatam karna yah expected thaa. Shayad Urvi ko ustime varsha hi utha ker ley gayi hogi.
Varsha nahi! Lekin haan, uske he orders the.
Magar jo sawal thaa woh vansh ko order karne wali lady kaun thee jis ne bola thaa ki Arav ko mitana hai?
Just a spoiler! Ab tak uski entry huwi he nahi hai.
Aane Waley Arc ka built-up ho gaya hai wow Kia hi khoob built-up kia hai. Maza aayega padne me bhi aur feel karne me bhi.
Take your time and come back with new freshness.
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Salty~Otaku

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IShika kaha hai es time aur wo Aayushi aur nandani ke sath waha kya ker Rahi hai ,
Explain kiya to hai :hmm2: Aayush ne accidentally usko Aura se hit ker diya tha, Uske kaaran se unconscious hai, Lekin badi baat nahi hai.
Bhai bohot hi badhiya story hai bohot ka stories pr comment krta hu lekin jo bohot achi lgti h and your story is one of them and the feelings and emotions you set are just on next level
:thank_you:
i can predict one thing this story is going to get as popular as werewolf bhai ki story love you bro and continue writing and pls story complete zarur krna❤️❤️
Story complete to ho gi he! Even agar kuch serious issue bhi huwa to short me ker du ga, Lekin beech me band nahi karu ga.
 

Salty~Otaku

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Salty~Otaku

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So finally its over....
Vendetta Arc is Completed....🎉
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Arav ko Avantika k suicide ka raaz bhi pata chala or saath hi usse Vanshika ka bhi pata chala...
Avantika??? :dquestion: Fuck.....Ye sab ko naam yaad kyu nahi rehte? :redface: Main ek baar Tsubame ka Tsunade kiya tha tab sab ko yaad aa gaya tha :laughing:
Singh house m Tanu or baaki sab ARAV ko miss kr rhe hain specially Tanu...
Tanu :love3:
That time i was talking about ARAV 's Mom being Alive...
And look it happens to be real.... Woohoo
🎉

OR specially the last scene URVIII....
SHE's Also Alive... 🥳🥳🥳🥳
I was shocked when you guessed it! Bhayia khatarnak type ke readers hai, Ek baar to _ABHAY itna guess ker gaya tha 3-4 update uska reply he nahi diya :laughing:
Or woh lady jo Urvi ko hospital se le kr gyii thi jab Arav prison m trapped ho gaya tha... Woh lady uski Maa hi hogi ya AKASH ki wife.
Uske reaction se lag raha tha ke wo un dono me se koi ho sakti hai? :?:
And i think k agla Arc "FORGED BONDS" ARAV k liye kaafi Roller coaster ride jaisa hi hoga..
Because ab usse sirf apne dushmanon ko nhi maarna hai... jo k ARAV k liye Shayad utna difficult nhi hota ...
But ab usse apne sabhi Rishton ko sambhaalna hai unhe samaitna hai...

Uski Maa, uska bhai AKASH, Veer k saath ka rishta, that Corps misty, Urvi ka waapas aana but i think without his memory... Also uski new family Tanu, Ishita, Meera, Kunal and all...
Or ab to AKASH ne bola hai k ab se hum sab yahin rahen ge ek saath (SAYANI MENSION, FRANCE) or is hum m ARAV bhi shaamil hai...

So it will surely be very difficult for ARAV to handle all this...
It will be more difficult for readers! Ek saath action ke baad yapping updates boring lage gye he....Aur readers ka kya, Main khud sone lagta hu, Lekin ye important bhi hai to can't skip them :sigh2:
Maybe that time usse Maa ne hi bachaaya hoga ya AKASH ki wife ne...
MAybe woh lady inhi m se koi ho..
I'm Salty~Otaku :roll3:
 

Salty~Otaku

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Wow... Pichle update ke 2-3 din shift hone ke baad mujhe nahi laga tha ki yeh update time se aa jayega. Great to see that as always, Mr. Consistent has stuck to his words.
Abhi ek post padhi ke zuban ka kaccha hu :laughing:
Aarav ne akhir apna revenge le liya, lekin jo durdasha Vansh ki huyi hai aur jindagi bhar hoti rahegi, usko padh kar hi rongte khade ho gaye. Weh apni yaadon se, apne nightmares se, aur physical pain se kabhi bahar hi nahi aa payega.
Vansh ko maarna badi baat nahi thi! Lekin Aarav ne kaha tha ke wo maut ko tarse ga, Main zuban ka kaccha hu wo nahi :laugh:
lekin Vanshika kahan hai, yeh pata nahi laga.
Soon ~
I feel really sorry for Tanu, kitne mann se usne Aarav ke liye rakhi banayi hogi, lekin Aarav pahunch nahi paya.
Tanu :love:
Aayush aur Nandini ka episode hilarious tha, Malia/Kitsune ki tarah Aayush bhi jaldi hi sab seekh jayega.
Yup ~
Ab aate hain surprises par, yehan to machine gun hi chala di, ek ke baad ek surprise.
Main to suspense khatam ker raha tha :shy:
Aur yeh Suhani kaun hai, kya yeh Vanshika to nahi hai...
Really? Aur Aarav ko pata nahi lage ga? :redface:
I am sure here forged is used for strengthening by hammering and not deceiving... hahaha
It's for both, You'll understand :roll3:
Enjoy your break... come back with new ideas to thrill us. Sayonara, till we meet again.
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Salty~Otaku

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Salty~Otaku apko 21 tobo Ke salami Deta hu Dimag Ke Dahi Aur Dahi Se Kadi Phr uska Bhajipala Kese krna hai bakhubi aata hai apko than
Main ne kya kiya? :shy:
Phar de Apny Vansh Ke Aur AKHIR Mai Jo jhatke diye Sachi bolo Ek Ek word Mera Dil esa dhak dhak horila tha Kya he kar Dala yaar
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I know urvi Ke Zinda hone Ke chances the but aarav Ke maa ko be Zinda dekhoga Sala Socha ich Nhi apun tha ab aarav Kese sub jhilta hai dekhna Hoga KYa Kya raaz khulte Hain
I knew ke urvi ka literally sab ne guess kiya hai! Lekin Varsha out of syllabus thi :D

Kyu Ke Mai 3 Baar reaper mood Pe update read Kiya tab yakeen hua ya waqai ho gya
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Salty~Otaku

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Wow wow just fantastic. Finally dil ko kuch karar aya hai
:thanks: and :welcome1:
But Urvi ka part dekh ke Vansh keliye ye saza bhi kam lag rhi hai.
Urvi ka konsa part? :?:
Ye saza similarly izanagi ki trha hai from Naruto. Minor differences hein.
Fuck! Subconsciously kuch waisa he likh diya, Main ne anime daikha huwa hai, Lekin likhte time yaad nahi tha :redface:
I hope ke ye urvi na ho. Like koi twin sister bhi hoskti hai. Same shakal wali. But I hope ke Urvi ab na hi zinda ho. Vengeance poori meaning less hojye gi.
Ab agar Vansh maar nahi saka to uska ye matlab to nahi ke wo doshi nahi hai :dazed: Lekin ab to aur bhi kaaran the usko maarne ke liye :approve:
Ye maa ka pehle zikar hochuka hai kia?
Yup :approve:
think tanu ki baat wrong hone wali hai. Bhai pe kabza hone wala. But Urvi ke baad koi female character se attach hua hn to wo tanu hi hai
Tanu :blush1:
Hope ke apke holidays me ek lamba cut lg jye
😂
Lag gaya hai:buttkick:
 

Salty~Otaku

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Kuch shock
Kuch mystry
Nice one
Waiting for next ARC....

Nice update

Bhai is update ne to aag hi laga di
Kiya hi bat karu
Bhut bhut shandar update bro

Urvi how?????

what a update ,

no words...

Outstanding amazing unimaginable update

Outstanding amazing unimaginable update


awesome update bro & suprising & suprising update bro

Fantastic update

Zabardast 💯🔥🔥🔥
Ab ye kahan se aa gayi 😱😲

Very Nice Update

Yeeee bro

Mne to phele hi kha tha Urvi bach jae gi
Last me wapis aw hi aje gi

Aur loo aw bhi gyi
Ab next arc me bss sb mysterious ko clear krna h
I'm expecting kuch aur bhi charactere bhar aye ge and
Veer ka sch bhi
Mtlb veer ki story bhi

Mzza Aya
Anyways
Waiting ki next arc jldi start ho

It's getting more exciting.... awesome update bro

amazing update

It,s owsome update

Lots of twist & turn in this update

Can,t wait for next update

Super duper awesome update brother.
Humesha se lagta tha urvi jinda hogi and finally ye hua.
Now eagerly waiting for ur next update plz do cont asap.
Take care

shocking update tha. vansh ko to memory me uljha diya jaan se maarne ki bajay .ye uske liye sahi saja thi .
aur ab ek ek karke har koi Saamne Aa raha hai jisko sab mara hua samajh rahe the 🤔..

urvi bhi jinda hai .
par archana aur varsha dono maa kaisi ho gayi aarav ki ?.
aakash aur aarav sage bhai hai ,vansh nahi to aarav ko dur rakhke vansh ke saath ek ghar me family banke kyu reh rahe the .

Ohhh bhai sara emotion to ye Wale mein tha
Bhai muje phele se lag raha tha ki urvii zinda hogi ya fir twin nahi na hai wisy bhi ap ki story mein kuch bhi possible hai

बदला तो एकदम बेहतरीन था।

NYC story

Superb update bro

Fantastic and fabulous update bhai ☺️ 😊

Mast update

Wow bhai shandaar update

Ye urvi bachi kaise

मज़ा आ गया भाई.....
लास्ट मे बहन भाई आखिर मिल ही गए (wonderful story bro)
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Mast update bro akhir vansh ka ant hua lekin ab suspense bhi ban gaya yaar akhir ye urvi kaise bachi aur ye Aarav ki maa yaha kya kar Rahi hai

Lovely update

Keh do k ye END nhi h abi bht sy raazo sy parda uthana baki hy yrr dil💔 toor dia itni jldii END kr k....

Nice end with some mysterious way👍👍👏👏👏👌👌👌

Amazing update me to yhi soch rha thi ki jo log urvi ko utha kar le gye the vo kon the is arc ke end me pata chala vo uski maa thi jaroor uski maa ne hi goli lagne ke baad use soul binding ki help se bachaya hoga 🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘🤘 story mujhe bahut pasand hai ye wali aap ise or bhi bda banaye

Amazing update salty bhi laga he tha kuch aisa hoga kyuki agar aisa nhi hota to aarav sirf revenge he leta but ab kuch vishram lagega uske revenge but i knw he will continue to hunt down those u has hurt him or his family and in future also hope u enjoy ur holidays well u derserve it bro and come back soon with new thrilling update 🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷

😳😳😳😳😳 What???????? Wowwwww. O bhaiiiiiiiii, I never expected this, simply amazing, itna bara jhakta wow. Bhai maza a gaya. Zaberdast I mean simply marvelous.
Thanks Guys! For all your love and support, Also main purane reviews ka reply nahi de raha, Kyu ke ek to wo extra time le gye aur unme likhi baate already explained hai, Lekin sab ka dhanyawad :thank_you:
 

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Avantika??? :dquestion: Fuck.....Ye sab ko naam yaad kyu nahi rehte? :redface: Main ek baar Tsubame ka Tsunade kiya tha tab sab ko yaad aa gaya tha :laughing:

Tanu :love3:

I was shocked when you guessed it! Bhayia khatarnak type ke readers hai, Ek baar to _ABHAY itna guess ker gaya tha 3-4 update uska reply he nahi diya :laughing:

Uske reaction se lag raha tha ke wo un dono me se koi ho sakti hai? :?:

It will be more difficult for readers! Ek saath action ke baad yapping updates boring lage gye he....Aur readers ka kya, Main khud sone lagta hu, Lekin ye important bhi hai to can't skip them :sigh2:

I'm Salty~Otaku :roll3:
Thik hai Namkeen bhai apun samajh gaya 😅...

Baaki yrr woh naam ka kya hai jo mar gye story m woh to gye naa..!

Us time apne ko Suhani, Beatrice etc ka nahi pata tha naa boss to thoda ho gaya jo hona tha hehehe 😁....

Baaki dekhte hain ab ye Urvi ki memory ka kya scene hai...
Bcz Arav k check krne pr bhi koi Dot nhi aaya jiska saaf matlab Hota hai k Urvi ki memory se Arav k erase hone ka (or bhi pata nhi kya kya erase huwa hai) Arav ki punishment or "Will To Live" k saath koi link nhi hai...

Maybe it have some kind of medical reasons...
Ya phir kisi ne Intentionally bhi yeh kiya ho sakta hai...
Baaki ab ye Arora or pata nhi yrr kya kya naye namoone aa gye hain...
Kaafi ghamasaan bana huwa hai pr umeed hai k aage k updates m ye sab explain ho jai gaa or sab samajh aa sake ga readers ko...

Baaki jo bhi bolo pr Arav k liye Monsters se ladna, Level up krna, Vansh se badla lena bhi itna mushkil nhi raha hoga jitna mushkil uske liye Urvi ka yun Begaana Pan hai... Bcz agr koi chala jaata hai to insaan kuch ghante, kuch din, ya Hafte tak Maatam krta hai pr waqt k saath sab stable ho jaata hai. Haan dukh to phir bhi rehta hi hai lekin phir bhi sab stable rehta hai..

Pr jab aapka apna aapke saamne ho or aap usse baat to kr sakte ho pr aap uske liye anjaan ho or aap usse bataa bhi nhi sakte k aap uske kon ho ya woh aapke liye kya importance rakhta hai to yeh jo feeling hai na woh bayaan nhi ki jaa sakti...

DEkhte hain k Arav ko iska sach kab or kaise pata chalta hai or woh iska kya solution nikaalta hai ...

Salty~Otaku bhai ek tarhaan se ye new update ka review bhi de diya hai...

Baaki Intezaar rahe gaa aaj k update ka ...
 
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