First Derek.
Second Derek.
Third Derek.
Just for academic interest, Derek name has been used thrice, but you need not change them as I think first two are insignificant and have no role in the story.
Actually me mujhe kuch tip of the tongue ki tarha ka hai! I'm not sure why, but it is what it is, Hota kya hai ke sometimes I can't remember something I said or wrote before.
Maybe you've noticed that I sometimes use the same words over and over in my story! that's because a lot of the time I can't recall the right words, so I end up choosing repeated ones.
Sometimes I even forget if I've used a name for a character before or not! So I really appreciate it if you point out little things like that to me.
Writing is fun for me! Likhna ek tarha se mere liye practice ki tarha hai.
It's not anything serious! it's just a part of my life now
