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Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)
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"papa??" monica ne Mr Oberoi se poocha
"hmm bolo beta" Mr Oberoi paper padhte hue coffee peete peete bole
"wo.... Mujhe ek c c cycle chahiye" monica dheere se boli
"WHAT??????" Mr Oberoi ne paper wahi rakh diya aur monica ki aur ghoorne lage
"tabiyat to thik hai na teri??" me Oberoi ne poocha
"kyun papa nahi denge??" monica ne poocha
"wo to a jayegi lekin itne saal baad aaj achanak cycle kyun?? Kuch din pehle hi ek BWM lakar di thi tujhe" Mr Oberoi bole
"nahi... Mujhe cycle bhi chahiye wo bhi laal rang ki" monica zid par a gayi
Mr Oberoi muskuraye. Is ladki ka bachpana nahi gaya abhi tak
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Aaj sadak kuch zyada hi khali khali sa hai. Yug sochte hue cy le chalakar ghar ki aur ja raha tha. Waise bhi cricket match me jo success mili thi uske liye aaj school me ek choti si tea party thi
Yug apne dhun me cycle chalakar ja raha tha ki achanak uske Saamne ek shaks khada ho gaga
Poora kaala libas pehne hue tha wo. Aur poora kaala tha. Sirf aankhen laal thi
"aap kou..."
US shaks ne yug ka collar pakda aur uthakar door fenk diya
Yug ka sharir kalabaazi khaane hi wala tha ki kuch sochkar usne apna sharir dheela chor diya
Aur.
THADDDDDDDDD
door ja gira yug aur karahte hue apne haath pair dekhne laga
"please maine tumhara kya bigada hai tum kyun Maar rahe ho mujhe" yug bola
Shaks kuch bola nahi balki yug ki aur aane laga aur ek punch yug ki aur maarne hi wala tha ki
"STOPPPP" ek ladki ki teekhi awaz aayi
Yug ne dekha ki monica uski aur a rahi hai
"koun ho tum aur kyun maar rahe ho ise. Himmat hai to mujh par Vaar karo" monica ne apne dono haath aage kar fighting stance le liya
Kaala shaks ne apne muthhi kas li aur wo Vaar karne hi wala tha ki
"RUKO" door sasne dekha ki ek kubda waha a raha tha
Kaala shaks ruk gaya aur door hat gaya. Yug us shaks ki aur dekh raha tha. Gazab ki energy feel kar raha tha us kubde ke sharir se
"mere dost ko maaf kar do. Galat aadmi par hamla kar diya usne. Aapki nuksaan ke bharai ke liye ye kuchpaise rakh lijiye aur apna ilaaj karwa lijiye" kubda bola
Bohut shaant awaaaz me kubda bola. Yug kuc bola nahi bas us kubde ki aur dekhe ja raha tha. Kubda bhi yug ki aur dekh raha tha
"apne paise apne Paas hi rakho. Mai abhi police ko phone karti hoon" monica boli
"Rehne do monica. Fir inhone maafi to maang hi li hai. Waise aapke paise nahi chahiye sir. Mai apna ilaaj karwa sakta hoon" bol muskurate hue yug ne paise kubde ko lauta diye
Kubde ne paise rakh liye aur kaale shaks ko ishara karte hue chala gaya
"nahi ye ladka wo nahi jisne IAK ko maara tha. Aap bematlab us bechare ko pitwa kar aaye" kaala shaks bola
Kubda kuch nahi bola. Ek baar yug ki aur mudkar thoda rukte hue chala gaya
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"dekha bewkoof agar do teen punch maarte us aadmi ko to ye haal nahi hua hota ab bhugto" monica yug ke Paas hospital me thi
Cycle lekar yug ko surprise dena chahti thi. Lekim surprise use mila yug ko us haal me dekhkar. Koun the wo log aur yug par hamla kyun kiya gaya kuch pata nahi chala. Yahan tak ki yug bhi kuch nahi bata pa raha hai
"aur champ?? Cricket khelte khelte ye kyaho gaya??" dr ander aaye Saath me police inspector prakash tyagi bhi tha
Yug inspector ko dekhkar thoda chup ho gaya
"arey ye inspector prakash tyagi hai. Kuch case ke silsila me aaye the. Waise inspector Saab ye ladka gem hai gem. Brilliant in studies aur cricket me kuch din pehle dhamaal hi kar diya tha isne" Dr bola
"chot kaise lag gayi??" de ki aur dhyan na dete hue prakash bola
"cycle se gir gaya tha" yug ne safed jhoot bola
"cycle se is umra me gir gaye the?? Strange" yug ki aur dekhte hue prakash bola
Yug thoda serious ho gaya.inspector kuch shaque to nahi kar raha hai???
Udhar monica hairan thi ki yug jhoot kyun bol raha hai
"khair mai chalta hoon Dr. Aur Haan ladke agli baar dekhkar cycle chalao kya pata kya ho jaaye???" ek rahasyamayi smile dekar inspector chala gaya
"hmm bolo beta" Mr Oberoi paper padhte hue coffee peete peete bole
"wo.... Mujhe ek c c cycle chahiye" monica dheere se boli
"WHAT??????" Mr Oberoi ne paper wahi rakh diya aur monica ki aur ghoorne lage
"tabiyat to thik hai na teri??" me Oberoi ne poocha
"kyun papa nahi denge??" monica ne poocha
"wo to a jayegi lekin itne saal baad aaj achanak cycle kyun?? Kuch din pehle hi ek BWM lakar di thi tujhe" Mr Oberoi bole
"nahi... Mujhe cycle bhi chahiye wo bhi laal rang ki" monica zid par a gayi
Mr Oberoi muskuraye. Is ladki ka bachpana nahi gaya abhi tak
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Aaj sadak kuch zyada hi khali khali sa hai. Yug sochte hue cy le chalakar ghar ki aur ja raha tha. Waise bhi cricket match me jo success mili thi uske liye aaj school me ek choti si tea party thi
Yug apne dhun me cycle chalakar ja raha tha ki achanak uske Saamne ek shaks khada ho gaga
Poora kaala libas pehne hue tha wo. Aur poora kaala tha. Sirf aankhen laal thi
"aap kou..."
US shaks ne yug ka collar pakda aur uthakar door fenk diya
Yug ka sharir kalabaazi khaane hi wala tha ki kuch sochkar usne apna sharir dheela chor diya
Aur.
THADDDDDDDDD
door ja gira yug aur karahte hue apne haath pair dekhne laga
"please maine tumhara kya bigada hai tum kyun Maar rahe ho mujhe" yug bola
Shaks kuch bola nahi balki yug ki aur aane laga aur ek punch yug ki aur maarne hi wala tha ki
"STOPPPP" ek ladki ki teekhi awaz aayi
Yug ne dekha ki monica uski aur a rahi hai
"koun ho tum aur kyun maar rahe ho ise. Himmat hai to mujh par Vaar karo" monica ne apne dono haath aage kar fighting stance le liya
Kaala shaks ne apne muthhi kas li aur wo Vaar karne hi wala tha ki
"RUKO" door sasne dekha ki ek kubda waha a raha tha
Kaala shaks ruk gaya aur door hat gaya. Yug us shaks ki aur dekh raha tha. Gazab ki energy feel kar raha tha us kubde ke sharir se
"mere dost ko maaf kar do. Galat aadmi par hamla kar diya usne. Aapki nuksaan ke bharai ke liye ye kuchpaise rakh lijiye aur apna ilaaj karwa lijiye" kubda bola
Bohut shaant awaaaz me kubda bola. Yug kuc bola nahi bas us kubde ki aur dekhe ja raha tha. Kubda bhi yug ki aur dekh raha tha
"apne paise apne Paas hi rakho. Mai abhi police ko phone karti hoon" monica boli
"Rehne do monica. Fir inhone maafi to maang hi li hai. Waise aapke paise nahi chahiye sir. Mai apna ilaaj karwa sakta hoon" bol muskurate hue yug ne paise kubde ko lauta diye
Kubde ne paise rakh liye aur kaale shaks ko ishara karte hue chala gaya
"nahi ye ladka wo nahi jisne IAK ko maara tha. Aap bematlab us bechare ko pitwa kar aaye" kaala shaks bola
Kubda kuch nahi bola. Ek baar yug ki aur mudkar thoda rukte hue chala gaya
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"dekha bewkoof agar do teen punch maarte us aadmi ko to ye haal nahi hua hota ab bhugto" monica yug ke Paas hospital me thi
Cycle lekar yug ko surprise dena chahti thi. Lekim surprise use mila yug ko us haal me dekhkar. Koun the wo log aur yug par hamla kyun kiya gaya kuch pata nahi chala. Yahan tak ki yug bhi kuch nahi bata pa raha hai
"aur champ?? Cricket khelte khelte ye kyaho gaya??" dr ander aaye Saath me police inspector prakash tyagi bhi tha
Yug inspector ko dekhkar thoda chup ho gaya
"arey ye inspector prakash tyagi hai. Kuch case ke silsila me aaye the. Waise inspector Saab ye ladka gem hai gem. Brilliant in studies aur cricket me kuch din pehle dhamaal hi kar diya tha isne" Dr bola
"chot kaise lag gayi??" de ki aur dhyan na dete hue prakash bola
"cycle se gir gaya tha" yug ne safed jhoot bola
"cycle se is umra me gir gaye the?? Strange" yug ki aur dekhte hue prakash bola
Yug thoda serious ho gaya.inspector kuch shaque to nahi kar raha hai???
Udhar monica hairan thi ki yug jhoot kyun bol raha hai
"khair mai chalta hoon Dr. Aur Haan ladke agli baar dekhkar cycle chalao kya pata kya ho jaaye???" ek rahasyamayi smile dekar inspector chala gaya
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Wah bhai bohat badiya update tha..
Story har update k sath or b zyada interesting hote ja rahi hai..
Ye Rashmi to yug ki diwani ho gayi ab pata nhi apna yug Monica ko kab propose karega...
lagta hai agey yug or mia k bich bohat maza ayega..
Waise bhai kya mia or yug ki ye khicha taani k bad dono me Dosti ho jayegi kya...
Ye mia apne yug ku bohat jamegi dono ki jodi ninja couple lagegi...
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