Kya hi rayata faila hai yaha..... ...aur jaha Tak baat hai uss 30 we update ki to dekho sir hame apasyu se problem nhi thi pahale ...lekin uss update ki baat jab bhi hogi....burai to hogi hi na.... Matlab jab sab sahi chal rha tha to wo nach gaan ki Kya hi jarurat thi...lekin nhi ....pgyk me bhi
Rahul aur ham sabki pyari paridhi ke sath Kya hi galat Kiya gaya tha... Matlab waha to beti ke jaan ka sauda Kiya tha...sare bebyface character achanak se heel character ka Roop le liya tha...bas wahi kaam part 2 me hua tha... apasyu ka character thik hai, uska sayam bhi thik tha...lekin wo Kya hai na ki jivisha aur nishachal ka Jo character hai na wo ek aisa character ban gaya aapse ki wo Rahul aur pari ki tarah Amar aur roal modol ban gaya....koi bhi burai nhi , galat kamuk ichchhaye nhi...shant , lekin gussa hone par bhagwan shiv ki tarah tandav karne Wala...phir kuchh samay baad aaya nishchal ka maar khana apasyu se , dekhiye sir chahe intention kaisa bhi ho lekin jis tarah se yah baat samane rakhi gayi wo sawbhavik Roop se reader ke man me apasyu ke vidwesh ki bhavana bhar di...aur sabase badi problem ye rhi ki jivisha jaise vyavhar ki uss samay uska action bilkul anuchit laga...wo waha gayab rahti ,baad me madad ke liye aa jati aur ek lambi fight ke baad nishchal ko hara hua dikhaya ja sakta ...to koi dikkat nhi thi...lekin aisa na hokar wo ghatana kram aisa ghatit hua ki Jo ham sabko apasyu aur khas taur par jivi ke negative think se bhar Diya....aur iss ghatana ke alawa Maine Baki kisi character ko gali bola hu...aisa nhi tha....ab ke Jo comments hote hai usme Mai sabhi character ko negative iss liye bolata aaya hu kyoki Jo pahale page par jhalakiya dikhai gayi , uske anusar prahari samaj gaddaro se bhara hua hai....so usme koi galti nhi ....aur kisi bhi update ki prashansha to sabhi karte hi hai, Mai uski aalochana Kar deta hu.....Baki nain sir baar baar ye bole ki mere apsyu ke galat bolane se kafi sare readers comment nhi karte , to dekhiye sir jisko comment karna hai wo karega....aisa to hai nhi ki Mai yaha ka koi gunda hu Jo mere khilaf bolega usse goli maar dunga....in short jab bhi baat unn update ki hogi to ye problem to aati rahegi hi.., kyoki waha par aapka prastutikaran galat tha....aisa Mera manana hai anyatha na le....
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Main bahut jyada situations me nahi jaunga.... Kyonki shayad aapne storyline miss kiya ... Kyonki shayad poorn roop se Nischal, Jivisha ki tatkalik paristithi, unka jivan par Surpmarich ka prabhav... Purv me kaise Surpmarich ne Vish-nilayani ko corrupt kiya tha uska itihaas aur tatkalik aashram ke prabhav ko najarandaj kiya... Yahan tak ki fake fight jo ki pahle se yojnabadhh thi, jisme nischal aur Jivisha dono ki sahbhagita thi, uske khulase ke baad bhi lagaatar aap kahte rahe to ye charecters center hona na kahun to kya kahun...
Ek poore aise chepter ke lekhni ko aapne dhumil kar diya... Jahan ki lead charecter Jivisha apne aane wale aise samay ka poora plan banayi thi jisme uski khud ki yadast nahi hogi aur uss dauran apne madad karne walon ke liye wahi sabse jyada khatrnak sabit hogi.... Jahan ki ek chhoti si chuk Jivisha ko maut ke muh tak le jati lekin fir bhi Surpmarich ke poorn raaj jaan'ne aur usse ghutne par lane ke liye wah taiyar ho chuki thi... Ye bhi aapko na dikha...
Kya kare ek writer aapke pasandida charecters ke raah me phool bichha de aur jo bhi dushman hai uska gala katkar sidhe hi bichha de ...
Jab aap charecters ko like karte hain fir storyline ka kya.... Aur jaise mera apasyu aapne kaha .. waise hi mera nischal bhi hai .... Mere liye storyline mayne rakhta hai aur haan main apne kisi chatecter ko kabhi aisa nahi dikhaya ki gaye aur sex me lipt ho gaye .... Bahut hi selective intimate scenes hote hain jo ya to romance ya fir situation ke according hote hain... Jahan uss waqt ki tatkal need hote haiin...
Pyar Gum Ya Khushi Ka Example liya aapne jahan aapne kaha har Babyface dushman ban gaya... Well aapne wahan bhi gaur nahi kiya fir storyline... Kayi sare chhoti-chhoti baten milkar parivar me ego ka kaam karte hain .... Fir Rahul itna hi achha hota to papa ki baat maan'kar uske business ko sambhalta na ki Army me jane ki jid karta .... Rahul sahi hai to uske papa bhi galat nahi.... Fir kya ek maa uss aadmi par gussa bhi na ho jisne kisi aise ladke ko police ke hathon se maar khulwaya jisne uske bacche ki jaan bachayi thi... Wahi scene jo Rahul aur Paridhi ke milne ki sutradhar thi .. baad me khud rahul ne kyon pari se kaha tha ki uske ghar me jail aur maar khane ki baat nahi batane.... Kaun gardian khush hoga apne bacche ki adhmari kutai ki kahani sunkar...
See yahan bhi charecters center ho gaya... Aur baki sare charecters dushman... Kya jo dusre charecters hote hain unki feeling, unki manodasha, unki koi situation nahi hoti... Lead charecter kya bhagwan hai jo unse galti nahi hogi... Aur unse galti ho bhi gayi to 100 khun maaf... Sab jayaj hai...
Come to the Nischal point...
If u connect to history of "Vishes" samuday.... Jahan se vish kritima thi ya fir vish-nilayani... Itne prabhutv wale logon par dimag wala bhari nahi pad gaya...
See anthore instanse... Kaise viggo samuday tabah ho gaya...
Chaliye aapki baat ka main respect hi kar leta hun... Aapko bura laga... Thik hai maan liya bura laga... Ye maine bhi calculate Kiya tha... Lekin jab sare raaj open huye tab kya samjhdari par parda pad gaya tha ya fir storyline se matlab hi nahi .. sirf ek hi rona hai... Nischal maar kha nahi sakta... Ye scene likh kaise diye...
Ab aate hain aalochnaon par.... Maine kaun si kisi update ke upar kiye gaye alochna ko rudly, abruptly reply Kiya hai... Aapne jo bhi update ke liye likha... Go and see... I really enjoy that... I don't have the problem...
Ab sabse aakhri me... Bhasha jaroori nahi ki jo sidhe gaali me likhi jaye... Use abhadr kahte hain... Halanki isi thread par kayi jagah dusre kirdaron ke liye abhadr bhasha ka prayog to kiya hai aapne... Maine khud dekha hai... kayi baar to Aryamani ke sath nischal ka discussion ho gaya... Wo bhi aapka lahja kafi rude raha tha ..
Itni sari baten sirf isliye nahi likh raha ki mujhe kahani ke kisi kirdar ko justify ya glorify karna hai... Main sidha aur saaf sabdon me kah raha... Aap kahani ko na dekhkar... Charecter ko ab bhi center me daalkar kahani ke bare me soch rahe hain ... Ye galat hai....
Rahi baat jinhe comment karna hoga karenge... Maanta hun aapki baat... 100% sahi hai... Lekin maaf kijiyega aapne aur Naina ne milkar Ishq-risk realod ko spamming thread se jyada kuch na rahne diya jahan aapne dusre readers ko bhi counter reply me itna confuse kiya hai unhe update me koi aur kahani milti thi aur counter reply me kuch aur....
Aapka hissedari 30 ka tha to naina ka 70 ka.... Kahani ke sath jo bhi aap logon ne kiya tha... Main to usse galat hi kahunga... Aur wahi aadat barkarar hai jahan dusre ek baar puchhe ya khushi jahir kiye ya fir gum... Ki Aryamani ka connection kiskisse hone wala hai... Wahin aap apne discussion dekh lijiye ....
Kabhi kabhi khud ki galti bhi accept karni chahiye