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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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Bahot khoobsurat date thi payal k liye usne aisa soch hi nahi hogabki Lucifer use koyi aisi jagah leke jayega usne aona bachmana khul ker jee lia aaj
Bahot behtareen
Payan n bhi accept ker lia ki woh Lucifer se payar kerne lagi h
Bahot shaandaar update bhai
Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting
 

Lone survivor

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Zaberdast
Madhuri aaj Lucifer ki hot body ko dekh ker dunia hi bhool gayi thi lekin time time per hosh m lata raha Madhuri k dil se abhi bhi shekhar ma dar nahi gaya halanki Lucifer baar baar yaqeen dila raha ki woh ab kabhi wapas nahi aayega
Ye dar etni jaldi khatam nahi hoga bhai
Yeh sahi baat kahi aapne ki sabko khushiyan de tow raha h lekin ineh yeh nahi pata aage kia hoga
Anisha yaha aayi thi kuch baat kerne or Devil n use daboch lia ab dekh a yeh h ki devil jeet ta ya fir angel
Angel to raha hi nahi ab koe bhai
Zaberdast update bhai shaandaar
Thank you bhai
 

Lone survivor

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Lucifer ki band baj jaati h Ashmita k samne zaberdast
Ashmita ko bhi pata h yeh sab sahi nahi ho raha lekin ker kia sakte h yeh sab tow waqt ko pata h uske garbh m kia h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bahot khoob shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Koe kuch nahi kar sakta sabko apni apni Halato par chhod dena chahiye
 

Lone survivor

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Lagta h jaise ye story abhi bhi km hi log padhte h kya.....

Ya phir yaha comments hi kam aate h....

Update read karne ke liye story dhundhana pad jata h...
Ek to humari story padhne wale kam upar se jo padhte hai vo bhi support nahi dikhate
Sach bolu to bhai pichle kuch updates to maine be man se likhe hai likhne ka man hi nahi karta jab 500 se jada pages ho gaye hai fir bhi vohi 5-10 review
Ab to maine bolna hi chhod diya hai jaisi support vaisi story chal jayegi
 

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UPDATE-159
Lucifer- i fucked anisha
Inaaya- well she loves you a lot to ye to hona hi tha

Lucifer- ashmita ko bhi pata chal gaya
Inaaya- usse bhi pata tha
Ab agla number kiska hai?

Lucifer- abhi to tumhra hi hai
Inaaya- anisha theek hai?

Lucifer- ha thoda bahut pain tha vaise theek hai
Inaaya- uski mom ko pata chal gaya to?

Lucifer- tab ka tab dekhenge
Uski mom se bhi to baat karni thi
Inaaya- pehle mujhe ye batao uski mom ka kya scene hai?
Kuch to hai jo sirf tumhe pata hai

Lucifer- vo apni galtiya sudharne ki kosis kar rahi hai
Inaaya- ye to achi baat hai

Lucifer- lekin galtiya kabhi sudhari nahi ja sakti
Inaaya- bilkul ja sakti hai
Agar sahi direction me kaam kiya jaye to

Lucifer- you're too kind inaaya
Inaaya- nahi lucifer tum straight nahi soch rahe ho
Galtiya har koe karta hai lekin important ye hai ki hum unse kya sikh rahe hai aur uspar kaise amal kar rahe hai

Lucifer- she have to pay the price
Inaaya- and who are you to decide the price?

Lucifer- anisha
Anisha ab part hai humari life ka
Inaaya- to let her decide na
Usse sach batao aur usse hi decide karne do

Lucifer- vo ashmita aur tara ka matter theek kar le to bata du
Inaaya- etni jaldi nahi hoga ye

Lucifer- pata hai mujhe lekin uske upar ek ke baad ek chhije dalna bhi to sahi nahi hai
Inaaya- baat sahi hai tumhri
Lekin decision uska hona chahiye lucifer tumhra nahi
After all priyanka uski maa hai aur jo kuch usne kiya nahi kiya aur uske sath kya hona chahiye ye sirf anisha ko decide karna chahiye

Lucifer- theek hai main kuch nahi karunga
Inaaya- thats like my good boy

Lucifer- vaise anisha thodi thodi mere jaisi hai vo etni jaldi maaf to nahi karegi
Inaaya- ye uspar chhod dete hai
Tum mujhe shekhar ke bare me batao

Lucifer- kya batao uske bare me?
Inaaya- kya kiya tumne uske sath?

Lucifer- maine kuch nahi kiya
Inaaya- let me rephrase it
Kya karvaya tumne uske sath

Lucifer- maine kuch bhi nahi karvaya
Sab kuch bas ho gaya
Inaaya- ma'am ko pata hai?

Lucifer- na hi pata chale to jada better hai
Inaaya- to fir usse jaldi se mukti de do
Humara kaam khushiya lana hai dard dena nahi

Lucifer- mukti word ka matlab samjh aata hai tumhe?
Inaaya- jo haal tumne kiya hoga uske sath uske liye ye word hi sahi hai

Lucifer- kya karu fir?
Maar du?
Inaaya- vo sahi rahega
Ab uske jinda rahne par usse kya hi milega?
Mar jayega to shanti mil jayegi

Lucifer- vo shanti deserve to nahi karta na
Inaaya- lucifer peace is what can make this world a beautiful place
Mujhe pata hai tumhe en sab me time lag raha hai lekin tumhe es bare me bhi sochna chahiye

Lucifer- mujhe nahi sochna ab
Jaisa chal raha hai vaise chalne do
Inaaya- es se rasta aur kharab ho jayega Lucifer
Agar hum ek percent bhi khud ko badal paye to bahut badi jeet hogi humari

Lucifer- humari es bare me pehle bhi ek conversation hue thi na?
Result tumhe pata hai uska?
Koe fayda nahi hai inaaya
Inaaya- humari pehle baat hue thi tumhre badlne ki lekin ab baat ho rahi hai logo ko maaf karne ki
Ye to hum kar hi sakte hai

Lucifer- main nahi kar sakta
Ant me aakar mujhe bhagwan nahi banana main devil hi theek hu
Inaaya- apno ke liye to kuch socho
Unka kya hoga?

Lucifer- main jab tak hu tab tak vo khush rahenge
Inaaya- aur uske baad?

Lucifer- uska baad me dekhenge
Inaaya- baad me kaise dekhoge jab tum honge hi nahi yaha to?

Lucifer- bhookh lag rahi hai chalo kuch kha lete hai
Inaaya- theek hai lekin ye conversation abhi adhuri hai****

Eda- maate ab aage kya hona hai?
Kab tak aisa hi chalta rahega?
Maa- lucifer ka ya tumhra?

Eda- hum dono ka maate
Maa- lucifer ka to khatam hone wale hai

Eda- aur mera? Humara?
Maa- tum dono ka bhi

Eda- aur mera?
Maa- tumhra kabhi khatam nahi hoga beti

Eda- aisa na bolo maa
Kya main humesha aise hi rahungi?
Maa- tum bade kaam ke liye bani ho beti

Eda- mujhe nahi karna koe bada kaam
Ya to mujhe mukti de do ya...
Maa- ab tum lucifer ko nahi maang sakti tumhre pass raaj hai

Eda- aap sab ne mere sath acha nahi kiya maate
Bilkul acha nahi kiya
Maa- tumne mujhse jo manga tha vo maine de diya

Eda- lekin aapne mere pyaar ka kalank lagva diya maate
Maa- tumhra pyaar pavitra tha

Eda- tha nahi maate hai
Lucifer ka khoon bhi es pyaar ko nahi mita paya to aap eske sath tha kyu laga rahi ho?
Maa- raaj ke sath rishta banana tumhra khud ka decision tha

Eda- mera nahi tha maate
Aap sab ne mujhe manupulate kiya uske liye
Aapko pata tha main kabhi aapki aur supreme ki baat nahi talti esliye aap sab ne mere sath khel khela hai
Maa- aisa nahi hai beti
Raaj tumse pyaar karta hai

Eda- ye bhi juth hai
Yaha par kisi ko sayad pyaar ka matlab hi nahi pata esliye har dusri chhij ko pyaar ka naam de dete hai
Maa- to kya hai tumhre aur raaj ke bich?

Eda- aap sab ek aur lucifer nahi chahte the esliye mujhe uski taraf feka aapne
Maa- lucifer to ek hi hai aur raaj bachpan se ek shant aur susheel ladka tha

Eda- ye bhi juth hai bilkul juth hai
Vo lucifer ko apna ideal manta tha aur aap sab ko dar tha ki vo bhi us raste na chala jaye jis raste par aap sab ne mil kar lucifer ko dhakela
Lekin aap jante nahi ho ki aaj nahi to kal aap sab mil kar bhi raaj ko nahi rok paoge
Vo lucifer ka dard me apna dard dekhne laga hai aur ye aapko pata hai bilkul acha nahi hai

Maa- usse sambhalne ke liye tum ho na
Eda- main nahi hu
Aaj ke baad main kisi ke pange me apna pair nahi dalungi
Lucifer ko dunia tabah karni hai karne do
Raaj ko lucifer banana hai banane do
Aap dono ko sabki life ke sath khelna hai khelte raho
Main aaj ke baad kisi ki life me koe interfare nahi karungi

Maa- tumhre upar es sansaar ka bhavisya tika hai
Eda- vo to lucifer ke upar tha na kal tak?
Main ab en sab ka hissa ban kar nahi jee sakti aur ab mujhe na heaven me rahna hai

Maa- tum yaha se nahi ja sakti
Eda- ofcourse main ja sakti hu
Kon rokega mujhe?

Maa- tumhe rukna padega
Eda- nahi maate ab aur nahi
Mujhe yaha se jana hai to matlab jana hai
Maate main aapki bahut izzat karti hu aur lucifer se bahut jada pyaar main us izzat aur pyaar ki kasam kha kar bolti hu agar kisi ne mera rasta katne ki kosis kari to heaven ko khoon se nahla dungi main
Yaha etni laashe bichegi ki logo ko eda me lucifer dikhne lagega
Main abhi ja rahi hu
Aapko jisko bolna hai bol do main eda aaj sab ko dekh lungi lekin yaad rakhna jisko aap bologi vo dobara kisi ko dekhne ke layak nahi rahega***

Tara- ashu teri baat hue kya anisha se?
Asmita- hmm hue to

Tara- mani thodi bahut?
Ashmita- apko kya lagta hai?

Tara- nahi mani hogi
Ashmita- hmm nahi maani

Tara- koe nahi hum usse etna pyaar denge ki usse manana hi padega
Ashmita- lekin hum usse force to nahi kar sakte

Tara- force se agar pyaar mil bhi gaya to bhi kya hi matlab hai
Ashmita- vohi to
Dekhte hai lekin jaise pehle the vaise hi rahna uske samne specially office me nahi to usse lagega ki special treatment mil raha hai aur vo bhag jayegj

Tara- office me to tum hi dekho
Main konsa tumhre office me rahti hu
Ashmita- dekh rahi hu vaha main

Tara- uski mom se baat kare?
Ashmita- main soch rahi thi agar pehle anisha hi samjh jaye to jada better hai

Tara- hai ye to hai
Kyuki agar direct family ke pass gaye to usse acha nahi lagega
Ashmita- aap bilkul vaise soch rahi ho jaise mere liye sochti ho
Aisa kuch nahi karna jiski vajah se ashu ko dukh ho aur ab aisa kuch nahi karna jiski vajah se anisha ko dukh ho

Tara- ab etni pyaari pyaari behane hai meri to kya karu main?
Unhe dukh nahi de sakti na
Ashmita- ye to hai hi vaise bhi ab to meri bhi chhoti behan ho gaye hai

Tara- khud order jamana
Ashmita- pehle order jamane ka hak to de fir dekhenge

Tara- samjh jayegi vo
Usse thoda waqt do bas
Ashmita- hope aisa hi ho

Tara- aisa hi hoga
Usse realize hoga ki jo bhi kuch hua usme humari koe galti nahi thi
Ashmita- mujhe uske gaal khichne hai jaldi se aisa ho jaye bas

Tara- jaldi hi hoga fir uske gaal bhi kheech lena aur vaha bahut sare kisses bhi kar lena
Ashmita- my little one
Tara- our little one my little one
Our little one...
 

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Ham TU krty Hain comment bhaya :sad:
 
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