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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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aaj apan pahle to review pelega........


To aate scene ke starting hoti hai apne Chester ke room ke baahar se to mughe laga pahle ki ju hamesha ki trah sidha scene aage badha doge lekin n ju ne ye nhi kiya kyunki flow jo khraab n Krna tha ju ko.......to jab door nhi khola kisi ne ander se yaa ye bhi Kahlo ki ander se awazz tk n aayi...... Khair jab koi response nhi aaya to itna confirm to krliya Mike ne ki something wrong inside.....aur tab veer ne aisi baat boli ki waha sabki najar veer pr eka ek tik gayi, wo log usse ghurne lage jo lajmi thi kyunki utna heavy door kisi se nhi tut sakta tha aur veer ne bola "Let's break it"......matlab yaar jara imagine hi krlo ki agar tumhe koi simple hi door todne ki bole to tum wo nhi tod sakte to itna heavy 🚪 door bilkul n..... ek simple door ko bhi todne me gaand fatt jaati hai ache acho ki to ye to ek heavy door jisse todne ka to sawal nhi paida hota......Mike ne tab bola ki atleast hame try to Krna hi chahiye kyunki 3:30 ho gaye hai aur NIGHTWALKER ka time hai ye .....aur tab Tommy,Mike,veer teeno ne door ko run-up lete hue 4-5 dhako me hi door ki toddiya aur ye to sabko pata hai ki Mike aur Tommy ke karan to door bilkul nhi tuta obviously bilkul nhi aur agar Werewolf bhaya likhte bhi nhi n to ye lagbhag sabko pata hi hota lekin ye likhna jaruri bhi tha ki veer ne akele ke dum pe hi door toda kyunki veer ke pass tha "bewolf blessings" jiske aur agar veer ye use bhi n krta to tab bhi door ko wo akela tod hi sakta tha itni to strength thi usme lekin still usne Tommy sur Mike ko issliye apne saath door ko todne ko kaha taaki unhe veer pr koi sakk yaa dout n ho.......

Aur sabse main line iss 1st scene ka kya raha pata hai wo hai
"Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye
Veer ne apni palke band kar lii."
Ye line matlab boleto kya hi bolu ek alag hi imagination pr le kr gayi ki usne apni wo laal ho rakhi aankhe kaise band ki hongi kyaa hi scenery yaa kaho view bane honge sabke saamne mtlab literally awesome........


Aur jab gate tuta to sabse pahle sabbka dhyaan farsh or gire hue hi bed pr gaya jaha wo so raha tha literally Chester so raha tha bahenchod gussa to sabko aaya hoga hi jise Tommy to gusse me usse sote dekh Gurate hue "MOTHERFUCKER" bhi bol gaya literally jara socho tumhe pure ghar me dhunda gaya bahar tk dhunda gaya lekin tum mile kaha bathroom me sote hue auur lajmi hai ki sabko gussa aayega hi aayega ......aur yaha to scene hi alag hai ek killer jo maut liye ghum raha hai piche sabke aur ye Chester mahasay yaha so rahe hai......

Lekin tab Mike ko smell aayi jo khun ki thi aur lajmi thi ki agar yaha khun hai kahi to Mike jo detective hai usse uske experience dhoka n de yaha aur uske experience ne usse dhoka bhi nhi diya.....


aur sabse main baat jab ju ne likha ye line maine padha tabhi mere dimag me ek baat khtk gayi thi

"Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha." Jab maine ye line padha n to mughe dout to ho gaya kyunki line chlo ju ne likha sahi lekin yaha ju ne "dala" word use kiya jo saaf saaf negative chis indicate kr rahi thi kyunki agar cheater sota to aap likhte

"Chester araam se bed par *pada* hua tha."
Lekin ju ne ye chis wo feel lane ke liye likhi ki "something is wrong there" aur wo hua bhi.......aur baat kre uske sarr pair jo bahar thi kambal ke to ispar utna dout n hua lekin itna confirm ho gaya puri trah se ki Chester beta tapak chuka hai lekin kaise ?? Aur iska jawab bhi ju ne de hi diya jab Chester ke uppar se Tommy ne kambal hataya to teeno ki rooh kaanp gayi matlab simple bhassa me bolu to unki atma bhi kaanp gayi ho gai ek pal bhar ke liye unke raungtey khade kya kaanp rahe honge aisa scene wo tha yaha tk ki Tommy ki to kya hi kahu bechare ki to Halat aisi ho gayi jaise bin badal pani aur jaise ju ne ye line likhi ki "uski atma ne uska sath chorr diya ho wo aise farsh or ludhak gaya" haa unn lines ka mtlab to yahi nikla lekin jo scenes veer ke saath hue jo hame Mike ke dwara ju ne feel krwaya yaa kaho to imagine hi krwa diya ju ne ki veer khauf se bhadi apni aankhe uss manzar pr hi gadaye hue tha uske ankho me ek chamak si ban gayi thi jo unn bund pani ki thi jo apne samne ke manzar ko dekh apne aap hi pnap se gaye the tabhi veer ko to ek alag si hi anubhati ho gayi thi jo pahli baar usse itna khauf me iss scene me ju nee dikhaya usse yaha tk apne saamne pade manzar ko dekh usse emit yaa kaho to vomit si situation create ho gayi thi lekin still usne control kiya haa usse vomiting nhi aayi thi ussne aisa manzar apne saamne deekh liya tha jisse wo bardas nnhi kr sakta yaa kaho to uske sense aur uska mind uss chis ko jyada der tk jhel nhi sakta tha jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki wo manzar hi aisa tha......veer ne jjaise taise khud or kabu paya


par tabhi pari jo shant thi usse veer ki halat dekhi n gayi aur wo bol padi jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki pari kabhi veer ko pareshani me nhi dekh sakti thi aur tab ju ne uss scene ko hamare samne laya jo uss samay se teeno ke liye pareshani si hogayi thi......samne Chester bed pr do hisso me bata hua tha boleto usko bicho bich se hi kaat diya tha kisine sorry aur kon hoga NIGHTWALKER......Chester ke wo andhruni jagaho se riste khun jo uss bedsheet ko lalam-laal kr rahi thi jo uski katte hisso se andhruni artariya aur manshpeshiya bahar aarahi ho ho ho bhai gajab yahi to chahiye apan ko ye feeling hi allag aati hai imagine krne me bloody wape moment that's I like it very much bhai very much iss scene ko tumne jiss trah se imagine krwaya n wo ek alag level ki thi ek Hollywood ka scene yaad agaya apan ko jab apan ne Alter's ke ek short movie dekha tha "PIECES OF ME" uska scene yaad agaya mai to kya hi bolu bhaya but ye scenes to abhi bloody gore's ki suruwat hai iss story ki abhi to aaur bhi bloodiest moment aayenge jo ander tk hila ke rakh dene wali hongi.......maine iss scene ko kamse kam 7-8 baar to pakka padha hi hoga bhaya lekin tab bhi man n bhara I just like this scene gajab ka moment hua ye

Ab baat kre uske bicho bich katne ki to bhaya ye to almost impossible hai kisi aam admi ke liye asal me jo scenes ham itni asani se dikha deta hai story me ki ye kaat diya wo kaat diya lekin ju ne to sidha bicho bich do part literally kitna strength use kiya hoga wo NIGHTWALKER just imaginable matlab boleto wo ek baar me to bilkul nhi kata hoga bilkul nhi lekin bhaya ju ke story padh kr jo realistic feeling aati hai n wo kisi story pr n aati kyunki ye story ju par tiki hai aur ju hi iske karta dharta ho...... Hatt's off man.......

Tab Mike aur veer ne Tommy ko lekr nikle uss room se jo abhi behosh tha aur usse wo log apne room me le gaye jaha Zoey aur Emma thi.....jab zoey aur Emma ne jab Tommy ko behosh dekha to tension me to aayengi hi aur unki wo tension dar me badal gayi jab unhe chester ki maut ki news milli unhe to.....wahi Emma to ro padi uskee dimag me aisa baith sa gaya tha ki ab wo n bachegi lekin apan yaha ek baat bolna chta bhaya ki ju ne Emma ke charecter ko kuch alag hi sa banaya hai matlab ju smjh rahe ho n ek alag sa boleto ek darpok kahna galat hoga kyunki uske jagah koi aur bhi hota to wo bhi darta haa usse pirit kah sakte hai NIGHTWALKER se kyunki ussnne to apne saamne live dekha tha Jacob ki maut haa utne wistar se nhi lekin jo bhi ussne dekha tha scene jacobb ke maut ke saath saath NIGHTWALKER ka wo roop jo kisi ko bhi ander tk hila dene ke liye kaafi tha aur yaha to Emma ne sab khud apni aankho se ye sab deekha tha to lajmi hai ki wo aise rahe aur baat kre Zoey ki to wo to apne par had se zyada hi conttrol krti hai haa usse dar lagta hai pr wo appne dar pe kaboo to paa leti hai pr it seems to be amazing to be saw her in future updates.......



Emaa aur Zoey bed pr ekdusre se chipk kr baithi thi wahi veer aur Mike bagl me ek dusre se khade the

Emma aur Zoey ko agar wo bata dete ki Chester kaise mara to Emma ki to abhi hi jaan nikal jaati yaha tk ki Zoey ki ruwai paka foot padti lekin Khair veer aur Mike ne nhi bataya unhe

Lekin uss samay jab veer ne bewolf blessings on kiya tha tabhi usse smell agayi thi ye baat mai bhul gaya tha lekin ju ke aage yaad krate hi apan ko yaad agayi

Tab Mike ne cigrate nikalte hue khud bhi liya aur veer ko bhi offer kiya to veer ne accept krliyaa kyunki uski wo ability on thi boleto detoxification on thi usne cigrate lete hue jalayi lighter se wahi Mike abhi bhi gusse me tha akhir wo ek detective jo tha aur woo yaha apne saath walo ko nhi bacha paa raha tha.....

Khair dono khidki ke pass khade bahar kdkti bijiliya aur bataate moti moti wo chamkti boonde jo khidki or pad rahi thi aur ander jo dhua uth raha tha ek alag hi feeling laarahi thi jo horror sai lagi jo mughe ek alag hi feeling laa rahi thi just chilling in this imagination but ander kuch to feel hui thi mughe jo ek alag hi feel de rahi thi ekdum alag sa

Khair veer ne chupi todi aur baate suru hui unndono me aur aakr ruuki ek bbaaat pr jo tha cameras ka jikr jo Conor ne kiya tha apne video me matlab ssab record abhi bhi ho rahe hai aur tab Mike ne shock wali baat veer ko batayi ki usse 4 cameras mill chuke hai jo veer ko jhtka to laga lekin tab Mike ne usse bataya ki iss room me fan matlab pankhe ke bicho bich bhi ek camera hai unn 4 me se tab veer ne udhar dekhna chaha to Mike ne rok diya jo sahi bhi tha

Ab baat aayi ki chester search time me kaise maara gaya to ye sawal apan ka bhi tha to ju ne bola tha ki agle Update me to apan ko jawab mil gaya to jawab likhna to banta hai to chester issliye mara gaya jo veer ko uss voice ki baat se yyaad kyunki uss voice ne kuch nhi kaha tha iss baare me ki search time me NIGHTWALKER ghumega yaa nhi inn logish ne to khud b khud new rule boleto new point bana liye the jo chester ke maut ka karan bhi bana......aur chester to idhar se udhar ghum bhi raha tha aur uss awazz ne ye bola bhi tha ki agar ghumte mile to gaye NIGHTWALKER dwara.......matlab saaf baat me NIGHTWALKER khel gaya firki le daali unnsabkki

Tab veer ne kah daala sidha ki mai bahar jaa raha hu tab Mike ne bhi bol diya ki tum nhi sirf....mai aur tum dono chalenge saath aur ye baat pr pari ne bola bhi ki wo saath nhi jaa sakte nhi thik bhi tha tab veer ne bola ke hame alag alag jaana chahiye ki taki ham jaldi kuch dhund sake clue aur unke pass walki talkie bhi tha to koi problem bhi nhi thi jaldi contact banega aur Mike maan bhi gaya akhir kuch socha bhi hoga ussne jarur veer ke baare me lekin tab wo nikle bahar Zoey aur Emma ko smjha kr Tommy to behosh tha aur jab jaate jate veer se Zoey ne bola ki tum jinda laute ge matlab usse pura yakkin to tha hi kyunki wo wo veer ko utna to bhanp gayi hi thi lekin Emma to puri dar gayi thi veer ke jaane se bhi

aur wahi baat kre jab wo rasta chunne ki aayi to apne Mike ne right chose kiya jo lajmi thi aur veer ko left bheja jab Mike chal diya right side tab veer bhi left side se u turn lete hue matlab wapas Mike ki wor chala gaya jisska karan pari bhi smjh gayi aaur apan bhi akhire NIGHTWALKER veer pr attack to bilkul nhi krega kyunki wo janta veer sidha bhidega aur wahi Mike uske liye asan target tha kyunki usne veer ko notice krliya tha lekin Mike ko nhi to wo uske piche jaayega aur gaya bhi

Lekin ek baat batao aaj kal ju mistake kr rahe ho yaa hame hint dene ke liye mistake krte ho jaise ki ye

"You take left. I'll take the right."

"right" ke pahle "the" laga kr ju ne uska hint de diya hame ki Mike ne pahle bhi kha tha ki wo hamesha right hi krta hai yaaa leta hai ju to bohot Tezz ho rahe ho


Mike jab basement me pohoncha to waha usse pani ka level jyada badha dikha satah or jo mughe ajjib laga bohot jaise laga kuch plan sa ho ye lekin uss ko maine padhte waqt side rakh diya Khair aate ab veer par to wo pari ke kahne pr shoes utaar chalne laga aage ki wor aur wahi jab aage dhua utha aur NIGHTWALKER saamne aaya hath me hasiya liye aur face pr darwana mask liye lekin ju ne to uske mask ko sunder bataya tha to ye kya likha ju ne but isse related kuch to.......Khair aage badhta mai

To jab mike ne jab usse dekha to wo apni hand gun nikal point out jaise kiya waise hi NIGHTWALKER waha kalti mara lajmi thi uske hath me gun thi jo aur wo NIGHTWALKER bhaga aur ek alag side ghus gaya aur wahi jab kuch dur Mike aaya hi tha ki uske sar pe kuch laga jo bohot joro se laga aur wo gir pada behosh ho kr wahi bagal me NIGHTWALKER khada abhi uski mundi udane wala hi tha ki veer ne bottle fekk ke maari jisse uska hassiya gir gaya dur auur ye kamal Hawkeye ka tha

To ab kamal suru hua bewolf blessings ka jisse veer tezzi se uski wor badha jisse dekh wo pani waale satah or aagaya lekin ab mughe pura dout hogaya ki ye NIGHTWALKER ka plan to nhi kah haa kah sakte hai chalak bohot hai ye isne sayad se soch liya tha ki mai isse nhi jeet paunga to isse bijli wali wire ko pani me chor usse maar dunga yaa behosh kr sakta hu lekin ye chis uski fail gayi jab aisa hua to veer jaldi se NIGHTWALKER jaise boxes wali jagah pr chadh gaya jisse wo unn bijliyon se. Jhunjhnati hui pani se bach gaya aur bhid gaya NIGHTWALKER se aur dono ek dusre ko girane ki koshish kr e lage lekin yaha haar gaya NIGHTWALKER aur pani me gir gaya aur uski chikh ke saath wo behosh ho gaya krkarati hui bijli bhari pani se

Lekin jab ju ne NIGHTWALKER ki pahli baar awazz sunayi tab veer ne usko kya hi tease kiya ki "heh, so you can talk !!"

Jisske baad usse bandh ke rassiyo se veer usse wahi chor diya lekin jo reward system ne usse diya ye mere pale n pada sirf 1000 points mile usse aur 500 fame points ye kuch gadbad laga kyunki system hamesha kisi jaruri mission pr jyada points reward me deta hai lekin ye mission to bohot jaruri bhi tha lekin nope kuch gadbad hai system isitrah itne kam points may be ye sab jo ho raha ho NIGHTWALKER ka mamla kuch aur hi indication ho khair dekhte hai aage ju kya naye twist laate ho yaa mai hi galat hu saayad. ....

Lekin jab wo chester ke room se guzra to ussne kuch notice kiya saayad se ussne bed sheet ko notice kiya jo saayad side para hoga thoda aur uss bed ke ander koi jagah hogi may be tabhi to pari ne kaha how did he?? Matlab uss samay jab wo teeno ander aaye the tab saayad NIGHTWALKER ander hi chupa hua tha uske aur may be unke jate hi nikal liya.....

To iska saaf matlab hai kuch to hua aur veer Zoey ki traf gaya aur unn dono niche jaane ko kaha aur sayad se ussne bed sheet hata kr wo takhta Utha ke dekha bed ka but but wo sound jo create hue "Craaaaaassshhhhh" matlab koi kaanch tutne jaisi awazz yaa kaho to koi vase tutne ki awazz may be but it may be true......

Lekin jab veer jhep gayi jaise uuske aur veer ke bich kuch baat hui aur usme pari koi baat galat saabit ki ho aur wo baat abhi sach hogayi aise jhep gayi wo lekin jab veer ne bola jis tone me uska saaf matlab nikla ki wo jaan gaya ki ye sab kisne kiya ya krwa raha tha sabka krta dharta and I guess ye sab wo Connor kr raha tha I am sure about this but may be ki ye galat ho but I think ki uski dead body ka bhi to sayad jikr n hua to fir aur usse marta hua dekha bhi n gaya matlab ye sab ussi ka kiya dhara tha aur pahle wala murder jo hua tha Daniel ka wo bhi ussi ne kiya and I am damn sure about this dekhte kya hota hai aage

Aur ju ne to scene hi shift kr diya aage copter tk jab sab wapas aagaye aur tab suhana to bohot khus thi aur wahi divya ne bhi uska welcome uski to Muniya jal bhun gayi hogi lekin wo bhi khus thi may be mai kya uska dimag padhu ab but ju ne kya hi scene dikhaya aur imagine krwaya man mai to aur likhna chahta hu review me pr wiram dete hai akhiri paragraph se

Jab last me veer ne sabko photo dikhaya sayad se kisika and wo Connor ka hi hoga meri imagination seriously nhi lene ka lekin mai sure hu wahi hai inn sabke piche and ek baat batao ye Tommy kaha se agaya yaha wo to waha tha veer ke saath mansion me to ye Tommy yaha kaise kahi galti se to nik ki jagah nhi likh diye ju ne......

That update was just a marvellous I say just fucking creativity of realistic you done in this.....ju ne kya hi likha har scene me har line ki ek alag hi matlab aur maza aaraha tha feeling saaf bhar aarahi thi I just think ki ju Rihanna sahi to nhi ki tum kahi jadu tona to nhi krwate Werewolf sach batana Khair update was such marvellous I say....... Hatt's off man


Waiting for next one.......
Take care......

I'm back! 😁
Mene kaha tha raat ko review dungi. To ye lo... Pesh h mera review aapke saamne... 😁

Sabse pehle to hats off!!! 💫 Ab aur kitni baar mujh se bulwaoge aap ye? Aap ek alag level pe jaate jaa rahe ho yaar... 😖 Don't raise the bar too high. Warna sabhi writers se mujhe iss level ki writing ki expectations hone lagengi... :sad: fir kya hoga mera??? 😨

Aapne kaha ki ye update 6k words k bhi upar ja raha tha. Par aapne isse divide kar dia do parts me. Ab aapne aisa kia h to obviously kuch soch samajh k hi kia hoga aapne... Aur main sure hu ki next update poora justify kar dega ki aapne aisa kyu kia. Aur daave k saath keh rahi hu ki next update sabhi k dimaag k taaro k saath khelne wala h... :what2:

Aapne ye update wahi se continue kia jaha se left kia tha. You were talking about scene shifting. A change in scene shifting as you mentioned earlier to Xabhi And, you showed it right here in this update. :applause: :claps:
what a flex!! :flex1: :laughclap:

Narration again... Top notch!!! 💫
Splendidly put into action. 💫

Humne dekha Chester k saath kya hua...

When I read this... I got goosebumps... 😶
yadi aapne isse thoda sa aur describe kia hota to pakke se mujhe nauseating feeling aa jaati... Aur vomiting jesa mehsoos karti main... Shukriya aapka jo aap zyada detail me nahi gaye yaha... 😬

Kitni khubsoorti se aapne Mike ko importance diya hai. Wo ek detective h... To uski analysis skills obviously high hogi... Tabhi to wo investigation field me job kar rha h... Usne easily 4 cameras search kar liye the... Aur Mike ka gussa hona ki Nightwalker uske saamne se hi uski team ko maarta ja rhaa tha... Ye sab dikhane ki zaroorat nahi thi. Par aapne dikhaya...

it shows that how much importance you are giving to each and every character. Sirf Veer ko hi aapne limelight me nahi rakha kyuki wo hero h... Yaha tak ki Mike ko gun k saath Nightwalker se interaction bhi karwaya apne... And then Veer ko limelight mili... What a beautiful way to do justice with the characters. 💫

Ab itne saare questions aa chuke h...
1) Nightwalker ka real face aur real name kya h?
2) What did Veer see in Chester's room?
3) Where's the real gold?

4) Why did Veer go to Zoey's room? Is there any gold in her room? If yes? Then how? How veer came to know about it?
5) Emma's secret which she's hiding.
6) Divya is hiding something? If yes then what?
7) What about those paintings?

8) Why Veer got more goosebumps here than facing Slogan earlier? Even Pari went silent.
9) What about those cameras?
10) Who's the next killer? How Nightwalker is related to Jim? And what happened to the app which Niharika installated in Veer's phone??? What did Veer show in the projector?


These questions are left unanswered. Inke jawab main abhi jaanne k liye betaab hu. Kyuki yahi sabse zyada confuse kar rahe h mujhe... 🤔

Ab main wo point out karna chahti hu jo cheeze mne notice ki... Ho sakta h main kuch cheeze miss kar jau par jitna notice kia utna likh rahi hu... And believe me, inn points ko kisi ne notice ni kia hoga...

1) Ye to notice kia hoga logo ne. The detailing... Ufff... Ye nahi bhi likhte aap to chalta. Par aap scene me poori tarah se ghuse hue the. Beowulf active hone k baad Veer ka appearance, specially uski eyes me change aata h... So to hide that, he closed his eyelids. Wowwwww!!! 💫


2) Wowww! Just woowww!!! 💫
The Beauty of this sentence. Baahar se sheese par baarish ki boonde padna aur andar se dhua. That little imagination... Ufff... I visualised this when I read it.


3) I bet ye kisi ne bhi nahi notice kia hoga... 😬
Iss sentence me ek cheez hidden h... Update 100 me hum ne kya dekha tha? Jab veer aur Mike upar floor par jaa rahe hote h... Veer Mike se puchta h kis raaste me jana h aur mike answer karta h...
I always do the things right.
What a way to tell the answer...

aur iss update dekh lo aap sab firse... 😁

Mike ne firse right me jana choose kia... Ufffff!!! :applause:
uska previous sentence justified ho gaya.... What a in- depth detailing... I'm mind blown already... :nocomment:

4) My brain cells are about to explode. 🤯
Pehle floor par paani tha.
Mike ko aap jaan boojh k paani se alag leke gaye so that if wo behosh hua to pani me rehne k karan jaldi uthega nahi...

Uske baad aap Nightwalker ko waapas se pani wale area me laye to make him use the current in it... 🤯🤯
I have no words left..


5) Nightwalker k first words...

You wrote them in capitals on purpose. Because they were his first words. Kitne gusse me hoga woh... Kitni bhaari aur terrifying awaaz hogi uski...
wo dikhane k liye small letters kaha kaam aate... So you used capital ones.... Just Wooooowwww 💫 main abhi sirf inhe hi pick kar payi hu. Na jane aur kya kya hidden hoga previous updates me...

There are no mistakes... I'm saying it blatantly... Fucking ZERO MISTAKES....

Ye sab main raat me likhne wali thi... Par aapka reply aa gaya. Aur aap mujh se naraaz nahi ho... To main khushi k maare abhi likh di... 🤣🤣🤣🤣


The story from 100th update is going on another level. Mujhe dar h kahi ye aage chal k logo k dimag se upar hi na nikal jaye... 🤯 Aur ek baar... 100 k upar updates nikal gaye and there's not even a single mention pf the main villian... :afraid: wo kesa hoga?? I'm getting chills just thinking about him....

I'm ending it here. 😁😁😁 Thank you Werewolf Sir for providing us this masterpiece... 🙏 You are a gem... 🖤
🤔......Kon hai Ye log kaha se aate hai ye log 🤣🤣🤣

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Update - 101 ~ Exposed (1)
[Note : Contains gore and blood elements.]


Ab tak...

Mike : Where is he?

Tommy : He told me he will look outside.

Mike : Let's go and check his room!

Woh sabhi Chester ke room me pohuche toh Chester ka room band tha. Matlab koi andar tha. Chester hi toh tha.

Unhone darwaaza peeta aur awaaz lagaayi.

Par...

Andar se koi awaaz na aayi!!!!


Ab aage...

"Cheeessssstttteeerrrrrrrr!!!!!!"

"Open the goddam door!!!!"

*Baaammmmm* *Baaammmmmm*

Darwaaze ko Veer, Mike aur Tommy baahar se peet rahe the. Par andar se abhi bhi koi jawaab nahi aaya.

"Shiiiittttt!!!"

Woh teeno door pe haath maarte rahe. Lekin koi halchal hone ki awaaz bhi nahi sunaayi dii unhe bheetar se.

Mike (bauhe sikodte hue) : Something is wrong.

Tommy : If the door is locked from the inside. Then it's obvious someone is inside. And who else could it be other than Chester?

Veer : Let's break it!

Tommy : Wh-Whaaaattttt??? Are you kidding me?

Veer : No! I'm not! Just help me out.

Bas yahi ek upaay bacha tha unke paas. Andar koi na koi toh maujood tha. Warna darwaza apne aap kese band ho sakta tha? Toh upaay yahi tha ki darwaaze ko hi tod diya jaaye.

Tommy ne Veer ko hairat-angez me dekha. Jese woh kisi bewakoof ko dekh raha tha. Itna bhaari door, bhala dhakka dene se kese toot sakta tha?

Mike : We don't have any other option. We can try at least. It's 3:30 already. Nightwalker's time has started. We should hurry up.

Wo ye nahi jaante the ki Veer ke paas kya tha. Isliye unhe ye darwaaza todna asambhav sa lag raha tha. Unhe nahi pata tha ki Veer ke akele me kitne logo ka bal tha.

Par wo sare aam akele darwaaza nahi tod sakta tha. Aisa karne se uss par kayi sawaal khade ho jaate. Ek aadh lene ki zaroorat thi usse. Aur isliye, Veer ne unn dono ko bhi dhakka dene kaha.

Mike ko lagega ki Veer aur Tommy ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Tommy ko lagega ki Veer aur Mike ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Par sach toh yahi hai ki...

Veer ke akele ke hi vaar se darwaaza khulna tha. Unki madad lena toh keval apni kaabiliyat ko chhupaane ka ek zariya tha.

Woh sabhi jese hi dhakka dene ke liye taiyaar hue,

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON]

Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye Veer ne apni palke band kar lii.

Uske sang Mike, Tommy peeche run leke daude aur teeno ne saath milkar zorr se darwaaze par dhakka maara.

*Baaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

Kuch toh hua. Darwaaze ka ek hinge dheela pad gaya.

*Baaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Iss baar darwaaze ka pehla hinge poori tarah se nikal gaya.

Aur,

*Baaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmm*

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

4-5 aur dhakko me poora ka poora darwaaza hi hinge se ukhad gaya. All thanks to Beowulf's Blessings and Veer's stats.

*Dhadaaammmmmm*

Teeno hi kamre ke andar dhakka dene ke kaaran floor par gir pade. Unn sabki nazre sabse pehle bed par gayi.

Tommy : Ugghh!!! What the fuck? This motherfucker is sleeping here???

Tommy gusse me gurraaya. Itni chinta liye woh sabhi paagalo ki tarah usse pukaar rahe the aur woh tha ki yaha chenn se so raha tha? Himmat kese hui uski?

Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha. Ek kambal odhe. Baahar se uska sarr, perr aur haath hi dikhaayi pad rahe the kambal ke.

Tabhi Mike ki bauhe kass uthi, maathe par silvatein chha gayi. Shayad kuch...

Mike : I smell something...!?

Par iss se pehle ki woh apni baat poori rakh paata, Tommy gusse me uth ke apne dost ke upar se kambal hata diya,

Tommy : You fucker, get up this insta-- huhh???

*Flllllaaaaaaaapppppppp*

Kambal jese hi hata...

Saamne ka manzar dekh teeno ke badan thande pad gaye. Shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Dil ki dhadkan aisa laga jese pal bhar ke liye wahi ruk gayi. Ghutno me kamzori aa gayi,

Tommy ke andar jese aatma ne shareer ka tyaag kar diya. Woh toh dekhte hi bechaara ussi pal ladkhada ke behosh ho gaya. Wo peeche ludka,

Mike : Shiiitttt!!!

Aur idhar, Mike ne fauran aage badh usse apne haatho se pakad sambhaala. Aur usse side me deewaar se tikaaya. Usne sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha,

Mike : Veer! We must- huhhh???

Par jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bhaanpa ki Veer ko usne aise pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Veer khauf ke maare saamne nazre gadaaye hue tha. Uski aankho me ek chamak nami ke kaaran janm le chuki thi.

Achanak hi usse akbakayi aayi. Muh par ek haath rakh woh turant hi peeche muda aur deewaar par apna dusra haath tikaaye lambi lambi saansein lene laga.

*Badump* *Badump* *Badump*

Dil itni zorr se dhadak raha tha ki Veer ko khud dhadkano ki awaaz sunaayi de rahi thi.

Mike : V-Veeeerrr???

Veer : It's... It's okay!!! I'm fine! J-Just give me a second.

Mike : Alright! But make it quick. Only you and I can do this. Together!

Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!

[Maaaasttttteerrrrr~]

Aisa kese ho sakta tha ki Veer pareshani me ho aur Pari ko chinta na hoye? Beshaq! Veer ke iss ravaiyye par turant hi Pari uske mann me usse pukaarne lagi.

'It's okay Pari!!!'

[It's not... :angrysad: ]

Pari jaanti thi Veer kin halaato se guzar raha tha. Kyuki bed par...

Bed par Chester laita toh hua tha. Par...

Uska shareer...

Uska shareer do hisso me bata hua tha. Poori ki poori tarah se kata hua tha. Pait se uski atadiya baahar ko nikli hui thi aur poora bed neeche lahu luhaan ho chuka tha. Andhruni maas aur ango ko aankho ke saamne dekh acche se acche insaan ko ulti aa jaaye aur uske perr ladkhada jaaye. Koi hairat ki baat nahi thi.

*Sccchllliiiiinnnnggggggg*

*Kllliiiiinnnngggggggg*

Veer ko Nightwalker ki woh haath me pakdi hasiya yaad aayi. Na jaane kese kaat ke alag kiya hoga usne Chester ko. Aari se lakdi ki tarah usne Chester ko kaata hoga. Soch ke hi Veer ke badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Par uss se bhi badi baat thi. Woh kuch aur thi. Veer ko woh manzar yaad aa gaya. Woh bhi toh kuch issi prakaar maara gaya tha na?

Golu!!!! Uski maut bhi behad dardnaak thi.

Aur ab Chester. Ye pehli baar tha jo Veer Nightwalker ke dwara bichhayi gayi laasho ko apni aankho ke saamne dekh raha tha. Koi insaan itni darindagi se kese maar sakta tha kisi ko? Veer ko jo baat sabse zyada darra rahi thi woh ye thi ki,

Nightwalker ne ek shan bhi nahi socha kisi ke badan ko do tukdo me kaatne se pehle. Seedha kaat daala. Jese insaan nahi, koi sabzi ho.

It was an absolute brutality.

Mike : Veeerrrr?

Mike ki punaah awaaz se wo apne hosh me aaya.

[Maaaasttteeerrrr~ don't worry. I'm with you!]

Pari ki baat sunn, aur apni himmat waapas baandh woh palta, Mike ko dekh usne haami bhari. Aur unn dono ne Tommy ko thaama. Veer aur Mike usse apne room ki orr le gaye. Chester ka room unhone wese hi chorr diya. Woh kuch bhi nahi kar sakte the iss maamle me.

Idhar Zoey aur Emma ne room khola aur Tommy ko behosh dekh woh dono tension me aa gayi. Jab Chester ki maut ki khabar unhe mili toh Emma toh poori tarah se ro padi.

Ek darr baith gaya usme. Ki jese ab woh nahi bachegi. Agla shikaar jese ab wahi hone waali thi.

Woh chillaane lagi, jese tese Veer aur Mike ne usse shaant kiya. Zoey khud andar tak hili hui thi. Par antatah woh chup thi.

Aur Mike gusse me. Ek detective tha woh. Chester ke room me ghuste hi jo dhaas usne hawa me soonghi...

Loha!!! Yaani iron. Jo hamaare khoon me maujood hota hai. Itne saal kaam karne ke baad Mike ko kaafi tajurba ho chuka tha. Khoon ki gandh vatavaran me jo faili hui thi, usne ek baar me pakad lii thi. Yaha tak ki Veer ko bhi pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Jese hi usne Beowulf activate kiya tha. Andar se khoon ki gandh usse pehle hi aa gayi thi.

Par ab jo ho chuka tha usse badla nahi jaa sakta tha. Unke beech se, ek aur shaks maara jaa chuka tha. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...

"Damn it! Damn it! Daammnmn ittt!!!"

*Baaaaaaammmmmm*

Mike ne gusse me aake deewaar par zorr se haath maara. Ek detective hoke, uski naak ke neeche se Nightwalker uske bando ko maar raha tha aur woh yaha haath par haath dhare baitha hua tha.

Veer aur woh ek dusre ke bagal se khade hue the uske hi room me. Tommy behosh haalat me bed par wall se tik ke baitha tha. Aur uske hi bagal se Emma aur Zoey jo ek dusre se chipki ek dusre ko sambhaalne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Zoey toh fir bhi theek thi, par Emma ka haal behaal tha.

Mike ne jeb se cigarette nikaali,

*Kliinkkk*

Lighter se cigarette jalaayi aur ek kash lagaaya aur cigarette ka packet Veer ki taraf aage badhaya,

Mike : You smoke?

Veer ne packet ko dekha aur ek cigarette usme se nikaali,

Veer : I can!

Detoxification ON thi. Veer ko koi tension nahi thi.

Lighter se cigarette jalaate hue wo dono khidki ki taraf pohuche, jiske sheeshe par baahar se baarish ki badi badi boonde pad rahi thi. Aur andar se cigarette ka dhua. Saath hi Bijli ki chamak sheeshe se hote hue kamre me aa rahi thi.

Unhone dono ladkiyo ko ye nahi bataya tha ki Chester kis tareeqe se marra tha. Ye maut alag thi. Isme sarr nahi kata tha. Balki poora ka poora pait hi cheer diya tha Nightwalker ne. Aisa rooh jhanjhor kar rakh dene waala kaam kiya tha.

Idhar Veer ne Mike ko bagal se dekha,

Veer : Chester got killed.

Mike (kash lagaate hue) : Yes!

Veer : What now?

Mike : We must find the killer. Before dawn. Otherwise we will all die here.

Veer : Senior Connor mentioned something in his video right? The cameras! We are being recorded.

Mike : Found 4 of them.

Veer : Huhhh??

Veer ne hairat me Mike ko dekha. Stabdh hona swabhavik tha. Connor ne mention kiya tha video me ki yaha par logo ki activities record kari jaati thi. Iska matlab kahi na kahi cameras lage hue the. Aur Mike ne seedhe seedhe hi Veer ko jawab de diya ki usne 4 cameras already dhundh liye the.

Veer : Where?

Mike : Found one on the ground floor, Second in my room, third one in the corridor, and fourth one...

Veer : ???

Mike : ... is right above our head. Between the fan.

Uske shabd sunn Veer ko ek jhatka laga. Ek camera upar pankhe ke beech me laga hua tha. Veer ne khud iss par gaur nahi kiya tha. Woh abhi dekhne hi wala tha upar ki,

Mike : D-Don't!!!! Don't look.

Mike ke kehne par usne sarr jhuka liya.

Veer : But Chester was killed when the room was locked from the inside.

Mike : Yes!

Veer : How is that even possible?

Mike : That's what I'm not getting.

Aisa kese ho sakta tha? Andar aane jaane ka raasta ek tha. Toh jab kamra andar se locked tha toh Chester marra kese bhala? Dono Veer aur Mike ka dimaag ghoom chuka tha.

Mike : Did you notice one more thing?

Veer : That he got killed during the search time?

Mike : Exactly!

Aur Chester ki hatya bhi kayi sawaal khade kar rahi thi. Banda search time me maara gaya. Akhir kaise????

Veer ne ek lambi aah chorri par tabhi uske mastishq se ek jhakjhor kar rakh dene waala vichaar hoke guzra. Jiske chalte uske haath se cigarette phisal kar neeche gir gayi.

Mike : ???

Veer : N-Noooo!

Mike : What?

Veer ne Mike ko dekha,

Veer : The voice!!!! The voice told us that search time will be allotted to us. But... But it never said that Nightwalker won't kill us during those hours.

Mike (jhepte hue) : That's... N-Nooo... But Nightwalker's time is different then how can he...!?

Veer : You forgot one thing!!

Mike : Huhhh?

Veer : It also said... If the Nightwalker saw you roaming, he will kill you.

Toh ye baat thi. Veer ki baat jab Mike ne suni toh woh andar se hil gaya. Veer ne ek raaz se parda utha diya tha.

Uss awaaz ne ye zaroor kaha tha ki search time diya jaega. Par awaaz ne aisa toh kahi nahi bola tha ki uss search ke dauraan Nightwalker kisi ko bhi nahi maarega? Ye toh Veer aur uski team ne apne aap assume kar liya tha ki iss time Nightwalker nahi maarega.

Awaaz ne toh sirf yahi bataya tha ki Nightwalker apne time par ghoomega. Par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki woh search ke time me maarega nahi. Beshaq, woh uss dauraan ghoomega nahi. Par uss dauraan chhipega bhi nahi.

Dusre shabdo me, Nightwalker ne unn sabhi ko chutiya banaaya tha. Apne shabdo ke istemaal se.

"Daaamnnn itttt!!!! This baastaardddd!!!!"

Aur Mike ka gussa aur bekaabu ho gaya. Ye toh laazmi tha.

Iska matlab saaf tha. Chester ne ghoomte waqt Nightwalker ko zaroor dekha hoga. Nateeja? Uski maut!!!

Par sawaal jo unhe sabse zyada pareshan kar raha tha woh tha room ka andar se band hona.

Veer : I'm going out.

Veer ne ek taq jawaab diya,

Mike : "WE" are going out Veer. YOU and ME. BOTH!!!

[Maaasteeerrr ~ Hum Mike ke saath nahi reh sakte. Hume Nightwalker se akele me bhidna hoga. Mission khatam hone ke liye bhi zyada samay nahi bacha hai.]

'I know Pari!!!'

Veer : We will go seperately. We both have our walkie talkie. If something happens, we can just call each other out.

Mike ne kuch shan tak Veer ko dekha aur fir haami bhari. Woh Veer ki baat se sehmat tha. Bhale hi ye tareeqa risky tha par yahi sahi approach thi.

Alag alag hone se Nightwalker ki talaash jaldi hone waali thi, aur Nightwalker akele aadmi ko dekh zaroor khud ko baahar nikaalne wala tha. Yahi sahi tareeqa tha.

Mike, Emma aur Zoey ko jata ke waha se baahar nikla,

Mike : You take left. I'll take the right.

Veer : Alright!

Aur woh daayi corridor ki taraf chal diya.

Idhar Veer ne bhi Emma aur Zoey ko jab jataaya ki woh bhi jaa raha hai toh dono vyaakul ho uthi,

Emma : Nooooooooooooo~ You can't!!! He will kill you. He will...

Zoey : Th-That's right... You shouldn't go out there. It's dangerous. We all can just spend the night here in one room. Then we can leave tomorrow.

Veer : Do you really believe he will let us leave? Just like that?

Veer ke sawaal par Zoey ki bolti band ho gayi. Zoey ka kehna tha ki wo sabhi ek hi room me saari raat ruk jaaye aur subah hote hi woh nikal jaenge. Par... Par kya Nightwalker waqai unhe jaane dene waala tha?

Veer : I'm going.

Emma : Nooooooooooo~

Zoey : S-Stay safe... And...

Veer : ???

Zoey : You will come alive...

Veer (smiles) : I will!

Aur ek akhiri baar unn dono ko peeche mud ke dekh Veer waha se palta, Zoey ne room andar se lock kiya aur Veer corridor me aa gaya.

***

Ab aar ya paar ki ladaayi thi. Aankh micholi, aur lukan chhupaayi ka ye khel boht ho chuka tha. Ab seedha bhidant thi.

Ya toh Veer sahi salaamat nikalne wala tha ya fir Nightwalker.

Veer ke kadam badhne toh left corridor ki orr chahiye the, par wo right corridor me jaane laga,

[Huh? M-Master?? O-Ohhhhhhh!!!! I see~]

Pari bhi pal bhar ke liye confused reh gayi. Par Veer ke mann me usne jab jhaank ke dekha toh wo sab samajh gayi.

Nightwalker Veer se bhid chuka tha. Woh jaan gaya tha ki Veer ko yadi usne firse face kiya toh Veer seedhe ladaayi par utar aaega.

Toh aise me jab 2 insaan, Mike aur Veer akele akele mansion me ghoom rahe ho toh kis par pehle hamla karna theek rahega?

Jawaab saaf tha.

Mike!!!

Aur isliye,

Veer ne apni raftaar badhaayi, tezz kadmo ke saath wo Mike ka peecha karne laga.

Beshaq, uska anumaan ekdum sateek tha.

Mike upar ke floor se chhaan been kar jab basement ki orr badha. Basement me ghuste hi uski bauhe chinta me sikud gayi.

Zameen par pehle ke muqaable paani kuch zyaada hi tha. Mike ke talwe paani me doob chuke the.

Aur Veer theek uske peeche tha.

[Master~ Apne shoes utaar dijiye, paani me chalne se awaaz kam hogi aise me.]

'Alright!'

Shoes ko utaar Veer peeche peeche Mike ke chalta raha aur abhi kuch hi dur tak woh aaya hoga ki...

Saamne basement ke hallway me se andhere me halki roshni aayi, dhuaa uthne laga...

Aur dhue me se...

Ek daraavna mask nikal ke aaya... Fir ek haath dikhaayi diya... Jisme khoon se latpat hasiya thi...

Nightwalker!

Mike : So it's you!!!!

Mike ne apni kamar se ek handgun nikaali aur saamne Nightwalker ki orr aim kii,

Mike : Drop your act now. You have been charged under the violent commitments of brutal murders. Raise your hands, drop your weapon, and hand yourself over.

Ye tactic kaam nahi aane waali thi. Mike bhi ye jaanta tha. Aur wahi hua,

Nightwalker suddenly, bagal ke hallway me ghusa...

Mike : Shiiittttt!

Mike usse pakadne aage dauda,

*Chhappp* *Chhhappp* *Chhhhaapppp*

Paani me uske daudne ki awaaz basement me goonjne lagi,

Peeche se Veer bhi dabe paav liye aage badha.

Par jese hi Mike uss hallway me aaya, usse Nightwalker kahi nazar nahi aaya.

Mike : Fuckkk!!! Where did he go?

Woh gun ko dono haatho se pakad aage badhta raha. Ab neeche paani bhi khatam ho chuka tha. Iss area me sookha tha.

Aur abhi woh dhundh hi raha tha jab,

*Thud*

Achanak hi uske sarr par ek zorr ka phatka aake laga.

Mike ke muh se kuch bhi nahi nikal paaya aur woh behosh hoke wahi gir pada. Uske bagal se, Nightwalker apni hasiya liye khada tha.

Hasiya ko hawa me utha wo Mike ke shareer ko dekhne laga. Pehle kaun sa ang kaata jaaye? Mundi? Ya pait? Ya haath perr? Ya jeebh? Ya fir kaan?

Uska haath zorr se neeche aaya hi tha Mike ki mundi kaatne ke liye ki tabhi,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

*Cllllllaaaaannnnggggggggg*

Haath par zorr se kuch aake laga aur uske haath se hasiya chhooth ke dur jaa giri.

Fauran hi usne mud ke aag baboola aankho se dekha...

Saamne Veer khada hua tha. Aur ussi ne ek bottle fek ke uske haath se hasiya girayi thi.

Veer bhaaga... Nightwalker ki taraf... Full speed me...

Hawkeye ne apna kaam kar diya tha. Ab baari thi...

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Veer ko tezzi se apni orr aata dekh Nightwalker dusri disha me bhaaga. Woh waapas se uss area me aa gaye jidhar floor par paani maujood tha.

*Chhappp* *chhapp* *chhappp*

Basement me unke kadmo ki awaaz goonjne lagi.

"I'm gonna catch you bastard!! Iss baar tu kahi nahi bhaag paayega."

Veer gurraaya aur ekdum Nightwalker ke peeche pohuch usne haath aage badha ke pakda hi tha ki,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Nightwalker achanak palta, usne apna haath ulta kar Veer ke chehre par chalaaya. Aur idhar reflexes ke chalte Veer ne turant duck kar liya.

*Swoooossssssshhhhhh*

Dono aamne saamne the ab.

Aur bina kahe hi,

*Chhap* *chhhapppp* *chhhappp*

Unn dono ne daud ke ek dusre ki mutthi aapas me kassi, Nightwalker ne laat bhi uthaayi saathi hi, Veer ke pait par maarna chaaha par...

*Deflect*

Veer ne apne haath se uski laat deflect kar dii.

"One inch punch!!!!!"

Aur Veer ki fist Nightwalker ke apne pait par aake padi.

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Kya hi impact tha. Hawa me uchhalte hue woh peeche ki orr jaa gira,

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

Paani me uske kapde geele ho chale.

[Nice one Master!!!]

Nightwalker ki aankhein ekdum gusse se laal ho chuki thi. Par eka-ek woh utha, aur wahi rakhe lakdi ke boxes par chadha. Uska haath peeche gaya aur usne kahi se ek wire kheech ke nikaala,

[Maaaasttteerrrr~ N-Noooo!!!! Jump on the box!!!!! Quick!!]

Aur woh wire Nightwalker ne seedha neeche paani se bhare floor par fek diya.

*Zaaapppppp* *zaappppp* *zapppp*

Bijli aur paani ka jab milan hota hai toh kya hota hai ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Ek tezz current poore paani se bhare floor me fel gaya. Kya hi shaatir tha saala ye Nightwalker.

Par Pari ne Veer ko pehle hi sachet kar diya tha.

*Thud*

Back flip maar ke Veer khud ek box par chadh chuka tha.

"Youuu fuckkerrr!!!!" Veer zorr se chillaaya aur,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Usne Nightwalker ke paas maujood boxes ki orr chhalaang lagaayi.

*Baaammmmm*

Aur shuru ho gayi unki haathapaayi. Ek dusre ke kapde pakad, dono hi ek dusre ko current se bhare paani me fekne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Veer stats ke according zyada strong tha. Aur isliye,

Nightwalker Veer ko dhakel nahi paa raha tha. Veer ne usse dhakka dete hue box ki edge tak kiya aur,

Nightwalker : I WON'T FAIL... NEVER...

Veer : Heh~ So you can talk huh?

Nightwalker ne Veer ko apne sang uske kapde pakad kheecha toh Veer ne ek jhatke apne shareer se woh sweatshirt hi nikaal dii,

Aur...

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrgggghhhhhhhhh"

Poore basement me ek zordaar dard se bhari cheenkh goonj gayi. Nightwalker uss current se fele paani me dhapaak se jaa gira.

Current itna nahi tha ki uski maut ho jaaye par itna zaroor tha ki aadmi behosh ho jaaye.

Current lagne ke kuch hi seconds ke andar Veer ne wire kheech liya. Aur Nightwalker behosh udhar hi paani me dala raha.

[Phew~ We did it Master!]

Veer lambi lambi saasein lete hue khud ko durust karne laga. Uske gaal pe ek cut laga tha jis se halka khoon beh raha tha. Baaki aur koi kharoch nahi aayi thi usse.

Akhir kaar, Hatyaao ke iss khel ko virhaam lag chuka tha.

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]

*Ding*

[Mission : Capture The Nightwalker has been completed.]

[1000 Points have been rewarded.]

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

Points kam the. Waqai! Par Veer ka interest abhi kisi aur cheez me hi tha,

'Check!!'

*Ding*

Veer ne Nightwalker ko check kiya. Par kuch khaas na mila usse. Jo jaan'na tha woh toh nahi mila.

Nightwalker ko usne rassi dhundh poori tarah se baandh diya ki woh kahi bhi bhaag na paaye. Mike ko usne apni peeth par uthaaya.

Aur woh chal diya upar ki orr,

Usne ek kamre me Mike ko litaaya. Aur abhi woh Zoey aur Emma ko jataane hi jaa raha tha ki ab sab kuch surakshit hai ki woh Chester ke room ke baahar se punah guzra...

Neeche darwaaza pada hua tha wesi hi haalat me, aur andar Chester ki laash jo dekhi tak nahi jaa sakti thi. Woh sab wese ka wesa hi maujood tha.

'Hmm?'

Veer ne kuch akasmat hi notice kiya,

'Ye... Wait a minute... Pehle toh ye aisa nahi tha? Then why is it...'

Aur fir uski nazar kahi aur gayi...

'Huhhhhh???????'

[Maaasssttterrrrr!!!!!!!!!!]

Uske baad... Veer ke raungte aise khade hue ki woh ladkhada ke wahi zameen par gir pada.

Aise goosebumps toh usse Slogan se ladte time bhi nahi aaye the.

Yaha tak ki Pari ka dimaag bhi kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Woh khud jese sadme me jaa chuki thi. Aur maun reh gayi.

Veer ka toh jese astitv hi hil ke reh gaya tha.

'N-Noooooooo!!!! I-It can't be!!!!! H-How did he...!!????'

Woh dauda, Zoey aur Emma ki orr. Apne kamre ki taraf. Usne unn dono ko baahar nikaal neeche ground floor par jaane ko kaha.

Aur fir woh bhaag ke Zoey ke room me gaya. Jese woh kuch talaash raha ho...

Aur agle hi pal,

*Craaaaaaasssshhhhhhhhhhhh*

[This... Mastterrrrr!!!!!]

Pari jhep gayi.

'So I was right!!!!! That motherfucker...!!!!'

***

After few hours...

Mansion me ho raha ye maut ka nanga naach khatam ho chuka tha. Subaah ho chuki thi, baarish tham chuki thi aur aasmaan se baadal hatt chuke the. Aisa lag raha tha waqai buraai par acchai ki jeet hui thi.

Mike, Veer aur anya ko lene investigation department se copter aaya hua tha.

Woh sabhi usme baith waha se ravaana huye aur waapas pohuche.

Helicopter jese hi land kiya, Veer ko utarte hi dur khadi Suhana aur Divya nazar aayi.

Yaha tak ki Nik bhi khada tha.

Suhana achanak se daud ke bechaini me aage aayi. Pal bhar ke liye Veer bhi hairat me reh gaya.

Lekin achanak hi Suhana ko jese dhyaan aaya aur uske kadam dheere ho gaye. Woh Veer ke paas pohuchi, aur jo haath woh pehle uske gaalo par rakhne waali thi woh haath uske seene par jaake tik gaya.

Suhana : T-Tum theek toh ho na?

Veer (surprised) : Well! Hmm!

Suhana : Th-That's good!!!

Pehli baar Suhana ko iss qadar dekh Veer sach me dang tha. Aisa usne pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha. Fir aaj kyu?

Wahi Divya ko jhatka sabse bada tab laga tha jab usse ye khabar lagi thi ki Veer ne poora ka poora case solve kar daala hai.

Aur ab usse apni aankho ke saamne dekh wo duwidha me thi.



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Ab toh aur 100 sawaal uske mann me uth chuke the. Filhaal unhe side me rakh woh aage badhi,

Aur usne muskuraate hue Veer ko welcome kiya,



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Divya (smiles) : It's good to see you return.

Veer : ...

Divya : Department wants an explanation.

Veer : Alright!!!

Kuch derr baad...

Investigation department ke office me ek bade se room me woh maujood the.

Sab ke sab. Nolan se leke Mike, Zoey, Emma, Tommy... Sab! Sab udhar maujood the.

Aur saamne projector ke liye badi si screen lagi hui thi.

Veer ekdum saamne khada hua tha. Aur usne bolna shuru kiya,

Veer : I have decoded everything!!!

Tommy : Okay! Tell us!

Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,

Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,

Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?

Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
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Dhanyavaad! ✨
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Ab tak...

Mike : Where is he?

Tommy : He told me he will look outside.

Mike : Let's go and check his room!

Woh sabhi Chester ke room me pohuche toh Chester ka room band tha. Matlab koi andar tha. Chester hi toh tha.

Unhone darwaaza peeta aur awaaz lagaayi.

Par...

Andar se koi awaaz na aayi!!!!


Ab aage...

"Cheeessssstttteeerrrrrrrr!!!!!!"

"Open the goddam door!!!!"

*Baaammmmm* *Baaammmmmm*

Darwaaze ko Veer, Mike aur Tommy baahar se peet rahe the. Par andar se abhi bhi koi jawaab nahi aaya.

"Shiiiittttt!!!"

Woh teeno door pe haath maarte rahe. Lekin koi halchal hone ki awaaz bhi nahi sunaayi dii unhe bheetar se.

Mike (bauhe sikodte hue) : Something is wrong.

Tommy : If the door is locked from the inside. Then it's obvious someone is inside. And who else could it be other than Chester?

Veer : Let's break it!

Tommy : Wh-Whaaaattttt??? Are you kidding me?

Veer : No! I'm not! Just help me out.

Bas yahi ek upaay bacha tha unke paas. Andar koi na koi toh maujood tha. Warna darwaza apne aap kese band ho sakta tha? Toh upaay yahi tha ki darwaaze ko hi tod diya jaaye.

Tommy ne Veer ko hairat-angez me dekha. Jese woh kisi bewakoof ko dekh raha tha. Itna bhaari door, bhala dhakka dene se kese toot sakta tha?

Mike : We don't have any other option. We can try at least. It's 3:30 already. Nightwalker's time has started. We should hurry up.

Wo ye nahi jaante the ki Veer ke paas kya tha. Isliye unhe ye darwaaza todna asambhav sa lag raha tha. Unhe nahi pata tha ki Veer ke akele me kitne logo ka bal tha.

Par wo sare aam akele darwaaza nahi tod sakta tha. Aisa karne se uss par kayi sawaal khade ho jaate. Ek aadh lene ki zaroorat thi usse. Aur isliye, Veer ne unn dono ko bhi dhakka dene kaha.

Mike ko lagega ki Veer aur Tommy ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Tommy ko lagega ki Veer aur Mike ne zorr se dhakka diya hai. Par sach toh yahi hai ki...

Veer ke akele ke hi vaar se darwaaza khulna tha. Unki madad lena toh keval apni kaabiliyat ko chhupaane ka ek zariya tha.

Woh sabhi jese hi dhakka dene ke liye taiyaar hue,

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON]

Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye Veer ne apni palke band kar lii.

Uske sang Mike, Tommy peeche run leke daude aur teeno ne saath milkar zorr se darwaaze par dhakka maara.

*Baaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

Kuch toh hua. Darwaaze ka ek hinge dheela pad gaya.

*Baaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Iss baar darwaaze ka pehla hinge poori tarah se nikal gaya.

Aur,

*Baaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmm*

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmm*

4-5 aur dhakko me poora ka poora darwaaza hi hinge se ukhad gaya. All thanks to Beowulf's Blessings and Veer's stats.

*Dhadaaammmmmm*

Teeno hi kamre ke andar dhakka dene ke kaaran floor par gir pade. Unn sabki nazre sabse pehle bed par gayi.

Tommy : Ugghh!!! What the fuck? This motherfucker is sleeping here???

Tommy gusse me gurraaya. Itni chinta liye woh sabhi paagalo ki tarah usse pukaar rahe the aur woh tha ki yaha chenn se so raha tha? Himmat kese hui uski?

Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha. Ek kambal odhe. Baahar se uska sarr, perr aur haath hi dikhaayi pad rahe the kambal ke.

Tabhi Mike ki bauhe kass uthi, maathe par silvatein chha gayi. Shayad kuch...

Mike : I smell something...!?

Par iss se pehle ki woh apni baat poori rakh paata, Tommy gusse me uth ke apne dost ke upar se kambal hata diya,

Tommy : You fucker, get up this insta-- huhh???

*Flllllaaaaaaaapppppppp*

Kambal jese hi hata...

Saamne ka manzar dekh teeno ke badan thande pad gaye. Shareer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Dil ki dhadkan aisa laga jese pal bhar ke liye wahi ruk gayi. Ghutno me kamzori aa gayi,

Tommy ke andar jese aatma ne shareer ka tyaag kar diya. Woh toh dekhte hi bechaara ussi pal ladkhada ke behosh ho gaya. Wo peeche ludka,

Mike : Shiiitttt!!!

Aur idhar, Mike ne fauran aage badh usse apne haatho se pakad sambhaala. Aur usse side me deewaar se tikaaya. Usne sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha,

Mike : Veer! We must- huhhh???

Par jab usne Veer ko dekha toh bhaanpa ki Veer ko usne aise pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Veer khauf ke maare saamne nazre gadaaye hue tha. Uski aankho me ek chamak nami ke kaaran janm le chuki thi.

Achanak hi usse akbakayi aayi. Muh par ek haath rakh woh turant hi peeche muda aur deewaar par apna dusra haath tikaaye lambi lambi saansein lene laga.

*Badump* *Badump* *Badump*

Dil itni zorr se dhadak raha tha ki Veer ko khud dhadkano ki awaaz sunaayi de rahi thi.

Mike : V-Veeeerrr???

Veer : It's... It's okay!!! I'm fine! J-Just give me a second.

Mike : Alright! But make it quick. Only you and I can do this. Together!

Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!

[Maaaasttttteerrrrr~]

Aisa kese ho sakta tha ki Veer pareshani me ho aur Pari ko chinta na hoye? Beshaq! Veer ke iss ravaiyye par turant hi Pari uske mann me usse pukaarne lagi.

'It's okay Pari!!!'

[It's not... :angrysad: ]

Pari jaanti thi Veer kin halaato se guzar raha tha. Kyuki bed par...

Bed par Chester laita toh hua tha. Par...

Uska shareer...

Uska shareer do hisso me bata hua tha. Poori ki poori tarah se kata hua tha. Pait se uski atadiya baahar ko nikli hui thi aur poora bed neeche lahu luhaan ho chuka tha. Andhruni maas aur ango ko aankho ke saamne dekh acche se acche insaan ko ulti aa jaaye aur uske perr ladkhada jaaye. Koi hairat ki baat nahi thi.

*Sccchllliiiiinnnnggggggg*

*Kllliiiiinnnngggggggg*

Veer ko Nightwalker ki woh haath me pakdi hasiya yaad aayi. Na jaane kese kaat ke alag kiya hoga usne Chester ko. Aari se lakdi ki tarah usne Chester ko kaata hoga. Soch ke hi Veer ke badan ke raungte khade ho gaye.

Par uss se bhi badi baat thi. Woh kuch aur thi. Veer ko woh manzar yaad aa gaya. Woh bhi toh kuch issi prakaar maara gaya tha na?

Golu!!!! Uski maut bhi behad dardnaak thi.

Aur ab Chester. Ye pehli baar tha jo Veer Nightwalker ke dwara bichhayi gayi laasho ko apni aankho ke saamne dekh raha tha. Koi insaan itni darindagi se kese maar sakta tha kisi ko? Veer ko jo baat sabse zyada darra rahi thi woh ye thi ki,

Nightwalker ne ek shan bhi nahi socha kisi ke badan ko do tukdo me kaatne se pehle. Seedha kaat daala. Jese insaan nahi, koi sabzi ho.

It was an absolute brutality.

Mike : Veeerrrr?

Mike ki punaah awaaz se wo apne hosh me aaya.

[Maaaasttteeerrrr~ don't worry. I'm with you!]

Pari ki baat sunn, aur apni himmat waapas baandh woh palta, Mike ko dekh usne haami bhari. Aur unn dono ne Tommy ko thaama. Veer aur Mike usse apne room ki orr le gaye. Chester ka room unhone wese hi chorr diya. Woh kuch bhi nahi kar sakte the iss maamle me.

Idhar Zoey aur Emma ne room khola aur Tommy ko behosh dekh woh dono tension me aa gayi. Jab Chester ki maut ki khabar unhe mili toh Emma toh poori tarah se ro padi.

Ek darr baith gaya usme. Ki jese ab woh nahi bachegi. Agla shikaar jese ab wahi hone waali thi.

Woh chillaane lagi, jese tese Veer aur Mike ne usse shaant kiya. Zoey khud andar tak hili hui thi. Par antatah woh chup thi.

Aur Mike gusse me. Ek detective tha woh. Chester ke room me ghuste hi jo dhaas usne hawa me soonghi...

Loha!!! Yaani iron. Jo hamaare khoon me maujood hota hai. Itne saal kaam karne ke baad Mike ko kaafi tajurba ho chuka tha. Khoon ki gandh vatavaran me jo faili hui thi, usne ek baar me pakad lii thi. Yaha tak ki Veer ko bhi pehle hi pata lag chuka tha.

Jese hi usne Beowulf activate kiya tha. Andar se khoon ki gandh usse pehle hi aa gayi thi.

Par ab jo ho chuka tha usse badla nahi jaa sakta tha. Unke beech se, ek aur shaks maara jaa chuka tha. Yadi aise hi chalta raha toh...

"Damn it! Damn it! Daammnmn ittt!!!"

*Baaaaaaammmmmm*

Mike ne gusse me aake deewaar par zorr se haath maara. Ek detective hoke, uski naak ke neeche se Nightwalker uske bando ko maar raha tha aur woh yaha haath par haath dhare baitha hua tha.

Veer aur woh ek dusre ke bagal se khade hue the uske hi room me. Tommy behosh haalat me bed par wall se tik ke baitha tha. Aur uske hi bagal se Emma aur Zoey jo ek dusre se chipki ek dusre ko sambhaalne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Zoey toh fir bhi theek thi, par Emma ka haal behaal tha.

Mike ne jeb se cigarette nikaali,

*Kliinkkk*

Lighter se cigarette jalaayi aur ek kash lagaaya aur cigarette ka packet Veer ki taraf aage badhaya,

Mike : You smoke?

Veer ne packet ko dekha aur ek cigarette usme se nikaali,

Veer : I can!

Detoxification ON thi. Veer ko koi tension nahi thi.

Lighter se cigarette jalaate hue wo dono khidki ki taraf pohuche, jiske sheeshe par baahar se baarish ki badi badi boonde pad rahi thi. Aur andar se cigarette ka dhua. Saath hi Bijli ki chamak sheeshe se hote hue kamre me aa rahi thi.

Unhone dono ladkiyo ko ye nahi bataya tha ki Chester kis tareeqe se marra tha. Ye maut alag thi. Isme sarr nahi kata tha. Balki poora ka poora pait hi cheer diya tha Nightwalker ne. Aisa rooh jhanjhor kar rakh dene waala kaam kiya tha.

Idhar Veer ne Mike ko bagal se dekha,

Veer : Chester got killed.

Mike (kash lagaate hue) : Yes!

Veer : What now?

Mike : We must find the killer. Before dawn. Otherwise we will all die here.

Veer : Senior Connor mentioned something in his video right? The cameras! We are being recorded.

Mike : Found 4 of them.

Veer : Huhhh??

Veer ne hairat me Mike ko dekha. Stabdh hona swabhavik tha. Connor ne mention kiya tha video me ki yaha par logo ki activities record kari jaati thi. Iska matlab kahi na kahi cameras lage hue the. Aur Mike ne seedhe seedhe hi Veer ko jawab de diya ki usne 4 cameras already dhundh liye the.

Veer : Where?

Mike : Found one on the ground floor, Second in my room, third one in the corridor, and fourth one...

Veer : ???

Mike : ... is right above our head. Between the fan.

Uske shabd sunn Veer ko ek jhatka laga. Ek camera upar pankhe ke beech me laga hua tha. Veer ne khud iss par gaur nahi kiya tha. Woh abhi dekhne hi wala tha upar ki,

Mike : D-Don't!!!! Don't look.

Mike ke kehne par usne sarr jhuka liya.

Veer : But Chester was killed when the room was locked from the inside.

Mike : Yes!

Veer : How is that even possible?

Mike : That's what I'm not getting.

Aisa kese ho sakta tha? Andar aane jaane ka raasta ek tha. Toh jab kamra andar se locked tha toh Chester marra kese bhala? Dono Veer aur Mike ka dimaag ghoom chuka tha.

Mike : Did you notice one more thing?

Veer : That he got killed during the search time?

Mike : Exactly!

Aur Chester ki hatya bhi kayi sawaal khade kar rahi thi. Banda search time me maara gaya. Akhir kaise????

Veer ne ek lambi aah chorri par tabhi uske mastishq se ek jhakjhor kar rakh dene waala vichaar hoke guzra. Jiske chalte uske haath se cigarette phisal kar neeche gir gayi.

Mike : ???

Veer : N-Noooo!

Mike : What?

Veer ne Mike ko dekha,

Veer : The voice!!!! The voice told us that search time will be allotted to us. But... But it never said that Nightwalker won't kill us during those hours.

Mike (jhepte hue) : That's... N-Nooo... But Nightwalker's time is different then how can he...!?

Veer : You forgot one thing!!

Mike : Huhhh?

Veer : It also said... If the Nightwalker saw you roaming, he will kill you.

Toh ye baat thi. Veer ki baat jab Mike ne suni toh woh andar se hil gaya. Veer ne ek raaz se parda utha diya tha.

Uss awaaz ne ye zaroor kaha tha ki search time diya jaega. Par awaaz ne aisa toh kahi nahi bola tha ki uss search ke dauraan Nightwalker kisi ko bhi nahi maarega? Ye toh Veer aur uski team ne apne aap assume kar liya tha ki iss time Nightwalker nahi maarega.

Awaaz ne toh sirf yahi bataya tha ki Nightwalker apne time par ghoomega. Par iska ye matlab nahi tha ki woh search ke time me maarega nahi. Beshaq, woh uss dauraan ghoomega nahi. Par uss dauraan chhipega bhi nahi.

Dusre shabdo me, Nightwalker ne unn sabhi ko chutiya banaaya tha. Apne shabdo ke istemaal se.

"Daaamnnn itttt!!!! This baastaardddd!!!!"

Aur Mike ka gussa aur bekaabu ho gaya. Ye toh laazmi tha.

Iska matlab saaf tha. Chester ne ghoomte waqt Nightwalker ko zaroor dekha hoga. Nateeja? Uski maut!!!

Par sawaal jo unhe sabse zyada pareshan kar raha tha woh tha room ka andar se band hona.

Veer : I'm going out.

Veer ne ek taq jawaab diya,

Mike : "WE" are going out Veer. YOU and ME. BOTH!!!

[Maaasteeerrr ~ Hum Mike ke saath nahi reh sakte. Hume Nightwalker se akele me bhidna hoga. Mission khatam hone ke liye bhi zyada samay nahi bacha hai.]

'I know Pari!!!'

Veer : We will go seperately. We both have our walkie talkie. If something happens, we can just call each other out.

Mike ne kuch shan tak Veer ko dekha aur fir haami bhari. Woh Veer ki baat se sehmat tha. Bhale hi ye tareeqa risky tha par yahi sahi approach thi.

Alag alag hone se Nightwalker ki talaash jaldi hone waali thi, aur Nightwalker akele aadmi ko dekh zaroor khud ko baahar nikaalne wala tha. Yahi sahi tareeqa tha.

Mike, Emma aur Zoey ko jata ke waha se baahar nikla,

Mike : You take left. I'll take the right.

Veer : Alright!

Aur woh daayi corridor ki taraf chal diya.

Idhar Veer ne bhi Emma aur Zoey ko jab jataaya ki woh bhi jaa raha hai toh dono vyaakul ho uthi,

Emma : Nooooooooooooo~ You can't!!! He will kill you. He will...

Zoey : Th-That's right... You shouldn't go out there. It's dangerous. We all can just spend the night here in one room. Then we can leave tomorrow.

Veer : Do you really believe he will let us leave? Just like that?

Veer ke sawaal par Zoey ki bolti band ho gayi. Zoey ka kehna tha ki wo sabhi ek hi room me saari raat ruk jaaye aur subah hote hi woh nikal jaenge. Par... Par kya Nightwalker waqai unhe jaane dene waala tha?

Veer : I'm going.

Emma : Nooooooooooo~

Zoey : S-Stay safe... And...

Veer : ???

Zoey : You will come alive...

Veer (smiles) : I will!

Aur ek akhiri baar unn dono ko peeche mud ke dekh Veer waha se palta, Zoey ne room andar se lock kiya aur Veer corridor me aa gaya.

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Ab aar ya paar ki ladaayi thi. Aankh micholi, aur lukan chhupaayi ka ye khel boht ho chuka tha. Ab seedha bhidant thi.

Ya toh Veer sahi salaamat nikalne wala tha ya fir Nightwalker.

Veer ke kadam badhne toh left corridor ki orr chahiye the, par wo right corridor me jaane laga,

[Huh? M-Master?? O-Ohhhhhhh!!!! I see~]

Pari bhi pal bhar ke liye confused reh gayi. Par Veer ke mann me usne jab jhaank ke dekha toh wo sab samajh gayi.

Nightwalker Veer se bhid chuka tha. Woh jaan gaya tha ki Veer ko yadi usne firse face kiya toh Veer seedhe ladaayi par utar aaega.

Toh aise me jab 2 insaan, Mike aur Veer akele akele mansion me ghoom rahe ho toh kis par pehle hamla karna theek rahega?

Jawaab saaf tha.

Mike!!!

Aur isliye,

Veer ne apni raftaar badhaayi, tezz kadmo ke saath wo Mike ka peecha karne laga.

Beshaq, uska anumaan ekdum sateek tha.

Mike upar ke floor se chhaan been kar jab basement ki orr badha. Basement me ghuste hi uski bauhe chinta me sikud gayi.

Zameen par pehle ke muqaable paani kuch zyaada hi tha. Mike ke talwe paani me doob chuke the.

Aur Veer theek uske peeche tha.

[Master~ Apne shoes utaar dijiye, paani me chalne se awaaz kam hogi aise me.]

'Alright!'

Shoes ko utaar Veer peeche peeche Mike ke chalta raha aur abhi kuch hi dur tak woh aaya hoga ki...

Saamne basement ke hallway me se andhere me halki roshni aayi, dhuaa uthne laga...

Aur dhue me se...

Ek daraavna mask nikal ke aaya... Fir ek haath dikhaayi diya... Jisme khoon se latpat hasiya thi...

Nightwalker!

Mike : So it's you!!!!

Mike ne apni kamar se ek handgun nikaali aur saamne Nightwalker ki orr aim kii,

Mike : Drop your act now. You have been charged under the violent commitments of brutal murders. Raise your hands, drop your weapon, and hand yourself over.

Ye tactic kaam nahi aane waali thi. Mike bhi ye jaanta tha. Aur wahi hua,

Nightwalker suddenly, bagal ke hallway me ghusa...

Mike : Shiiittttt!

Mike usse pakadne aage dauda,

*Chhappp* *Chhhappp* *Chhhhaapppp*

Paani me uske daudne ki awaaz basement me goonjne lagi,

Peeche se Veer bhi dabe paav liye aage badha.

Par jese hi Mike uss hallway me aaya, usse Nightwalker kahi nazar nahi aaya.

Mike : Fuckkk!!! Where did he go?

Woh gun ko dono haatho se pakad aage badhta raha. Ab neeche paani bhi khatam ho chuka tha. Iss area me sookha tha.

Aur abhi woh dhundh hi raha tha jab,

*Thud*

Achanak hi uske sarr par ek zorr ka phatka aake laga.

Mike ke muh se kuch bhi nahi nikal paaya aur woh behosh hoke wahi gir pada. Uske bagal se, Nightwalker apni hasiya liye khada tha.

Hasiya ko hawa me utha wo Mike ke shareer ko dekhne laga. Pehle kaun sa ang kaata jaaye? Mundi? Ya pait? Ya haath perr? Ya jeebh? Ya fir kaan?

Uska haath zorr se neeche aaya hi tha Mike ki mundi kaatne ke liye ki tabhi,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

*Cllllllaaaaannnnggggggggg*

Haath par zorr se kuch aake laga aur uske haath se hasiya chhooth ke dur jaa giri.

Fauran hi usne mud ke aag baboola aankho se dekha...

Saamne Veer khada hua tha. Aur ussi ne ek bottle fek ke uske haath se hasiya girayi thi.

Veer bhaaga... Nightwalker ki taraf... Full speed me...

Hawkeye ne apna kaam kar diya tha. Ab baari thi...

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned ON.]

Veer ko tezzi se apni orr aata dekh Nightwalker dusri disha me bhaaga. Woh waapas se uss area me aa gaye jidhar floor par paani maujood tha.

*Chhappp* *chhapp* *chhappp*

Basement me unke kadmo ki awaaz goonjne lagi.

"I'm gonna catch you bastard!! Iss baar tu kahi nahi bhaag paayega."

Veer gurraaya aur ekdum Nightwalker ke peeche pohuch usne haath aage badha ke pakda hi tha ki,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Nightwalker achanak palta, usne apna haath ulta kar Veer ke chehre par chalaaya. Aur idhar reflexes ke chalte Veer ne turant duck kar liya.

*Swoooossssssshhhhhh*

Dono aamne saamne the ab.

Aur bina kahe hi,

*Chhap* *chhhapppp* *chhhappp*

Unn dono ne daud ke ek dusre ki mutthi aapas me kassi, Nightwalker ne laat bhi uthaayi saathi hi, Veer ke pait par maarna chaaha par...

*Deflect*

Veer ne apne haath se uski laat deflect kar dii.

"One inch punch!!!!!"

Aur Veer ki fist Nightwalker ke apne pait par aake padi.

*Baaaaaaaammmmmmmmmm*

Kya hi impact tha. Hawa me uchhalte hue woh peeche ki orr jaa gira,

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

Paani me uske kapde geele ho chale.

[Nice one Master!!!]

Nightwalker ki aankhein ekdum gusse se laal ho chuki thi. Par eka-ek woh utha, aur wahi rakhe lakdi ke boxes par chadha. Uska haath peeche gaya aur usne kahi se ek wire kheech ke nikaala,

[Maaaasttteerrrr~ N-Noooo!!!! Jump on the box!!!!! Quick!!]

Aur woh wire Nightwalker ne seedha neeche paani se bhare floor par fek diya.

*Zaaapppppp* *zaappppp* *zapppp*

Bijli aur paani ka jab milan hota hai toh kya hota hai ye bataane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Ek tezz current poore paani se bhare floor me fel gaya. Kya hi shaatir tha saala ye Nightwalker.

Par Pari ne Veer ko pehle hi sachet kar diya tha.

*Thud*

Back flip maar ke Veer khud ek box par chadh chuka tha.

"Youuu fuckkerrr!!!!" Veer zorr se chillaaya aur,

*Whoooooosssshhhh*

Usne Nightwalker ke paas maujood boxes ki orr chhalaang lagaayi.

*Baaammmmm*

Aur shuru ho gayi unki haathapaayi. Ek dusre ke kapde pakad, dono hi ek dusre ko current se bhare paani me fekne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Veer stats ke according zyada strong tha. Aur isliye,

Nightwalker Veer ko dhakel nahi paa raha tha. Veer ne usse dhakka dete hue box ki edge tak kiya aur,

Nightwalker : I WON'T FAIL... NEVER...

Veer : Heh~ So you can talk huh?

Nightwalker ne Veer ko apne sang uske kapde pakad kheecha toh Veer ne ek jhatke apne shareer se woh sweatshirt hi nikaal dii,

Aur...

*Chhhapaaaakkkkkkk*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrgggghhhhhhhhh"

Poore basement me ek zordaar dard se bhari cheenkh goonj gayi. Nightwalker uss current se fele paani me dhapaak se jaa gira.

Current itna nahi tha ki uski maut ho jaaye par itna zaroor tha ki aadmi behosh ho jaaye.

Current lagne ke kuch hi seconds ke andar Veer ne wire kheech liya. Aur Nightwalker behosh udhar hi paani me dala raha.

[Phew~ We did it Master!]

Veer lambi lambi saasein lete hue khud ko durust karne laga. Uske gaal pe ek cut laga tha jis se halka khoon beh raha tha. Baaki aur koi kharoch nahi aayi thi usse.

Akhir kaar, Hatyaao ke iss khel ko virhaam lag chuka tha.

*Ding*

[Beowulf's Blessings has been turned OFF.]

*Ding*

[Mission : Capture The Nightwalker has been completed.]

[1000 Points have been rewarded.]

[500 Fame points have been rewarded.]

Points kam the. Waqai! Par Veer ka interest abhi kisi aur cheez me hi tha,

'Check!!'

*Ding*

Veer ne Nightwalker ko check kiya. Par kuch khaas na mila usse. Jo jaan'na tha woh toh nahi mila.

Nightwalker ko usne rassi dhundh poori tarah se baandh diya ki woh kahi bhi bhaag na paaye. Mike ko usne apni peeth par uthaaya.

Aur woh chal diya upar ki orr,

Usne ek kamre me Mike ko litaaya. Aur abhi woh Zoey aur Emma ko jataane hi jaa raha tha ki ab sab kuch surakshit hai ki woh Chester ke room ke baahar se punah guzra...

Neeche darwaaza pada hua tha wesi hi haalat me, aur andar Chester ki laash jo dekhi tak nahi jaa sakti thi. Woh sab wese ka wesa hi maujood tha.

'Hmm?'

Veer ne kuch akasmat hi notice kiya,

'Ye... Wait a minute... Pehle toh ye aisa nahi tha? Then why is it...'

Aur fir uski nazar kahi aur gayi...

'Huhhhhh???????'

[Maaasssttterrrrr!!!!!!!!!!]

Uske baad... Veer ke raungte aise khade hue ki woh ladkhada ke wahi zameen par gir pada.

Aise goosebumps toh usse Slogan se ladte time bhi nahi aaye the.

Yaha tak ki Pari ka dimaag bhi kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Woh khud jese sadme me jaa chuki thi. Aur maun reh gayi.

Veer ka toh jese astitv hi hil ke reh gaya tha.

'N-Noooooooo!!!! I-It can't be!!!!! H-How did he...!!????'

Woh dauda, Zoey aur Emma ki orr. Apne kamre ki taraf. Usne unn dono ko baahar nikaal neeche ground floor par jaane ko kaha.

Aur fir woh bhaag ke Zoey ke room me gaya. Jese woh kuch talaash raha ho...

Aur agle hi pal,

*Craaaaaaasssshhhhhhhhhhhh*

[This... Mastterrrrr!!!!!]

Pari jhep gayi.

'So I was right!!!!! That motherfucker...!!!!'

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After few hours...

Mansion me ho raha ye maut ka nanga naach khatam ho chuka tha. Subaah ho chuki thi, baarish tham chuki thi aur aasmaan se baadal hatt chuke the. Aisa lag raha tha waqai buraai par acchai ki jeet hui thi.

Mike, Veer aur anya ko lene investigation department se copter aaya hua tha.

Woh sabhi usme baith waha se ravaana huye aur waapas pohuche.

Helicopter jese hi land kiya, Veer ko utarte hi dur khadi Suhana aur Divya nazar aayi.

Yaha tak ki Nik bhi khada tha.

Suhana achanak se daud ke bechaini me aage aayi. Pal bhar ke liye Veer bhi hairat me reh gaya.

Lekin achanak hi Suhana ko jese dhyaan aaya aur uske kadam dheere ho gaye. Woh Veer ke paas pohuchi, aur jo haath woh pehle uske gaalo par rakhne waali thi woh haath uske seene par jaake tik gaya.

Suhana : T-Tum theek toh ho na?

Veer (surprised) : Well! Hmm!

Suhana : Th-That's good!!!

Pehli baar Suhana ko iss qadar dekh Veer sach me dang tha. Aisa usne pehle kabhi nahi kiya tha. Fir aaj kyu?

Wahi Divya ko jhatka sabse bada tab laga tha jab usse ye khabar lagi thi ki Veer ne poora ka poora case solve kar daala hai.

Aur ab usse apni aankho ke saamne dekh wo duwidha me thi.



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Ab toh aur 100 sawaal uske mann me uth chuke the. Filhaal unhe side me rakh woh aage badhi,

Aur usne muskuraate hue Veer ko welcome kiya,



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Divya (smiles) : It's good to see you return.

Veer : ...

Divya : Department wants an explanation.

Veer : Alright!!!

Kuch derr baad...

Investigation department ke office me ek bade se room me woh maujood the.

Sab ke sab. Nolan se leke Mike, Zoey, Emma, Tommy... Sab! Sab udhar maujood the.

Aur saamne projector ke liye badi si screen lagi hui thi.

Veer ekdum saamne khada hua tha. Aur usne bolna shuru kiya,

Veer : I have decoded everything!!!

Tommy : Okay! Tell us!

Veer ne haami bhar seedhe ek picture dikhaayi projector ke jisse dekh waha baithe sabke maatho par silvatein confusion ke maare aa padi,

Tommy apni jagah se uth khada hua,

Tommy : Are you kidding me??? Is this a joke?

Par Veer ne usse koi jawaab na diya.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Moderation hua firse yaha par. Ye update 6k words ke upar jaana tha. Par mene isse do bhaag me vibhaajit kiya hai. Kyuki next part me mein do matter aur samaapt kar sakunga. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.
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Ab tak...

Fuuuccckkk thisss shhitttt damnnn you fucking systemm....'

[Mujhe bhi tumhara secret pata chal gaya.]

'???'

[You are just like Suhana hehe~ Keep hitting the cushion.]

'Fuccccckkkkk youu pariiiii!!!!!!'


Ab aage...

Sunday | 2:32 PM
Outside xxxxxxxx hotel...

[She hasn't shown up.]

'She will!'

[Kuch zyaada hi confidence nahi hai tumhe?]

'Of course! Itna toh jaan hi gaya hu unko.'

[Well! Let's see~]

Aaj wo din aa chuka tha jiska Veer ko intezaar tha. Aaj shaam ko mirror gallery ka sheher me udhgaathan hone waala tha aur pehli 50 entries ekdum free thi logo ke liye. Naye saal me jese ye naya tohfa tha public ke liye.

Veer ko nahi pata tha waha kya hone waala tha par jese usne kuch apne mann me pehle se hi soch ke rakha hua tha.

Aur iss baar Pari ko usne apne mann ki baat padhne se mana kar ke rakha tha. Khaaskar Pari ki iss personality ko. Kyuki, Veer ki kuch sahi nahi jamti thi iss personality se. Dono ka hi jese 36 ka aakda rehta tha. Aur din-ba-din unke jhagde badhte hi jaa rahe the.

Aaj Veer ek simple white shirt with sleeves folded aur navy blue denim jeans daale ek hotel ke baahar khada hua tha. Aur wo intezaar kar raha tha Kaera ka. Yahi uska pick-up spot tha.

Ab wese toh mirror gallery ki entries shaam 7 baje se shuru hone waali thi par Veer shayad Kaera ke saath aur samay bitaana chaahta tha. Khud se vaada bhi jo kiya tha usne ki chaahe jo bhi ho jaaye, wo puraani Kaera ko waapas laa ke rahega.

Kaera ke khayalaato me wo dooba hi hua tha jab uske saamne ek luxurious car aake ruki aur uska door khula.

Andar se Kaera ek chamakti hui black dress me baahar aayi.


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Wo behad kamaal ki lag rahi thi. Aur pichli baar ki tarah iss baar bhi uske chehre par mask tha.

Veer aur Kaera dono hi ek dusre ko dekh aage badh ke aapas me sameep aaye.

Veer (smiles) : Harr baar ki tarah, aap behad khubsoorat lag rahi ho.

Kaera : Am I? Thank you! You are looking handsome as well.

Veer : Mein? Haha~ Naah!

Kaera : I really mean it.

[Ab itna kya show off kar rahe ho. Yadi wo bol rahi hai toh kuch soch ke hi boli hogi na? Bhulo mat ki usne dherro tumse handsome handsome ladke dekhe honge. Uske baad bhi tum ho ki...]

'Yeah yeah!'

[Ek toh aadmi tareef kar raha hai aur fir tum...]

'Fuck! I get it. Okay? Chill!'

Veer : Umm... Well... Thanks!

Kaera : Then? Shall we?

Veer : Sure!

Aur fir dono hi Kaera aur Veer car me peeche ki orr jaake baith gaye. Iss baar bhi saamne ki do seats par Raghu aur Jassi hi baithe hue the.

Veer : Aapko thand nahi lag rahi? I mean shaam tak thand badh jaegi.

Kaera : Hmm? I have a blazer.

Kehte waqt Kaera ke hontho par ek ajeeb sii muskuraahat thi jo Veer na dekh saka. Kyuki Kaera ne mask jo pehna hua tha.

Veer : Okay!

Kaera : What about you? You only have a shirt.

Veer (smiles) : Ye kaafi hai mere liye.

Kaera : Okay! So? Kaha chal rahe hai hum?

Veer : Aapne Lunch kiya?

Kaera : No, I didn't.

Veer : Perfect! Then pehle hum lunch karenge.

Kaera : Okay! As you say! Kaha chalna hai fir?

'Haha~ Yadi Suhana mujhe harr baar ki tarah waha le jaati toh shayad waqai mein muh banaata. Par aaj Miss Kaera ke saath waha jaane ka jese khud mera mann kar raha hai.'

[Huh? Don't tell me you...]

'Oh! Yes! Yes! Haha~ I'm taking her there only.'

Veer : Aaj hum xxxxxxxx hotel chalenge. Aapko pata hai?

Kaera : Hmm? Actually! No! But I will try yadi tum kehte ho toh.

'She doesn't even knows it. Haha~'

[Umm... Well...]

Raghu ne Veer ki baat sunn gaadi ko seedha bataayi gayi hotel ke raaste mod diya. Wo jaanta tha hotel ke baare me. Kaera keval badi badi 5 stars hotels se hi familiar thi. Aur iss kaaran, usse Veer ki bataayi gayi hotel ke baare me koi jaankari nahi thi.

Fir bhi, Veer ki khatir wo jese aaj iss naye hotel me khaana try karna chaahti thi. Wo jaanti thi ki yadi Veer ne chuni hai ye hotel toh kuch khaas baat hi hogi.

Aur kuch derr ke antraal ke baad hi wo sabhi ek hotel ke baahar khade hue the.

Kaera : Hmm? Mene iss hotel me kabhi dine-in nahi kiya.

Veer (smiles) : Toh aaj mein aapko karwa dunga.

Kaera : Hmm~

Kaera, Veer aur Raghu-Jassi sabhi aage badhte hue hotel me pravesh kiye toh waha receptionist unhe dekhte hi samajh gayi thi ki party paise waali hai.

Kyuki sabhi acche kapde pehne hue the. Kaera ko hi dekh kar receptionist bhaanp gayi thi ki ye ladki koi aam ladki nahi thi.

Receptionist : H-How can I help you ma'am?

Kaera (frowns) : Hmm? Shouldn't you address him first?

Receptionist : Ah!??

Receptionist bechaari toh Kaera ko dekhte hi usse hi leader samajh baithi aur uss se hi puchne lagi. Par shayad ye baat Kaera ko zara bhi pasand nahi aayi thi.

Veer uske aage khada hua tha par uske bawajood uss receptionist ne Veer ko ignore kar uss se sawaal pucha. Bhala wo aisa kese bardaasht kar sakti thi? Aaj Veer hi yaha par usse laaya tha.

Kaera ke chidhe hue expression dekh ke bechaari receptionist darr gayi aur usne forun hi khud ke behaviour ko sahi kiya.

Receptionist : I-I am sorry Ma'am! I'm sorry Sir! Ahem! Sir? How can I help you?

Veer : A table for four please?

Kaera : Two! Only two, Veer! Raghu and Jassi toh alag baithenge. Hai na?

Raghu : Heinnnnn?

Jassi (Raghu ko kohni maarte hue) : J-Jii Miss bilkul!

Raghu : Ughh! J-Jii! Miss! Ahaha~ A-Alag baithenge hum log. Hahaha~ Koi dikkat nahi.

Aur Kaera ne unn dono ki baat sunte hi apne mask utaar diya. Jese hi uska chehra saamne aaya toh saamne khadi receptionist usse dekhte hi chillaa uthi.

Receptionist : Miss Kaeraaaaa!????

Kaera : Mm?

Receptionist : A-A-Aap?? Y-Ya-Yaha??? H-Hamari hotel me?

Kaera : Hmm? Can I not come here?

Receptionist : No No No No!!!! Haan! Nooo! I mean Haan! Shit! Kya bole jaa rahi hu mein. M-Mera matlab, you are always welcome. A-Always!

Kaera : Ohh! Thank you!

Receptionist : P-Please! Aaiye na!

[She has a huge fan following.]

'Yeah!'

Aur wo receptionist khud aage badh ke Kaera aur baaki sabhi ko right side ki entrance me le gayi.

Ye VIP logo ke liye hi thi.

Veer keval mand mand muskura raha tha. Wo yaha Kaera ko keval ek hi purpose se laaya tha. Aur jese usse agle hi pal wo nazar aa gaya jiski wo talaash me tha.

Ya yu kahe ki wo log nazar aa gaye.

Shweta aur Bhumika.

Jii haan! Veer aaj Kaera ko unki hi hotel me laaya hua tha.

Dono Maa beti VIP guests se baat kar rahi thi jab receptionist ne unhe awaaz laga ke apni orr bulaaya.

Aur entrance pe jaise hi Shweta aur Bhumika ne dekha ki kaun aaya hai. Pehle toh unke chehre par thoda confusion nazar aaya, fir jese aashcharya, fir ekdum khushi se chehra bhar gaya par uske baad hi unki bauhe sikud gayi.

Kaaran? Kaaran tha ki unhone pehle Kaera ko dekha, usse pehchaante hi dono hi Maa Beti khushi se jhoomne lagi mann hi mann. Par fir unki nazre bagal me gayi, jidhar ek jaana maana chehra nazar aaya unhe.

Veer!

Aur bas, usse dekhte hi dono hi prashno se ulajh gayi aur duwidha me doob gayi.

Unke mann me yahi chal raha tha ki Veer yaha kya kar raha tha? Wo bhi Kaera jaisi hasti ke saath? Maano sawaalo se sarr chakraane laga tha unka.

Dono hi aage badh ke unn ke nazdeek aayi.

Shweta : It's such a pleasure to have Miss Kaera in our tiny hotel. Please welcome!

Harr baar ki tarah bhi iss baar bhi wesa hi hua. Shweta ne Veer ko hawa ki tarah hi treat kiya.

Par shayad uski beti ke iraade kuch aur hi the.

Bhumika : Welcome! Miss Kaera! Welcome, Veer!

Veer ka naam apni beti ke muh se sunte hi Shweta ekdum achraj me apni beti ko dekhi ki jese puch rahi ho akhir tumhaara dimaag sahi toh hai na?

Kaera : Hmm? You know her?

Kaera ne Veer ko dekhte hue pucha.

Veer (smiles) : Yes!

Kaera : Ohh! Are you guys related?

Bhumika : I-I... I am his step sister.

Bhumika ne akhir iss baar jawaab de hi diya. Jaha wo pehle khud ko Veer se sambandhit hone par nakaar deti thi. Aaj wahi khud se upat ke bata rahi thi ki wo Veer ki step sister thi.

Par Shweta ko apni beti ke aaj ke haav bhaav kuch raas nahi aa rahe the. Wo chhup chhup ke Bhumika ko aankh dikha rahi thi. Bhumika fir bhi bina kuch kahe apne mann ki hi karti rahi.

Kaera : Ohh! Step sister. I see! Anyways, Veer come.

Kaera Bhumika aur Shweta ko chorr Veer ko table ki taraf le gayi.

Wahi Raghu aur Jassi thodi dur kisi aur table par jaa ke baith gaye.

Shweta Bhumika ko leke side me aayi aur usse hairaani se dekhte hue boli.

Shweta : Ye sab kya tha? Tum kab se Veer se baatein karne lagi Bhumi?

Bhumika : I... Miss Kaera aayi hai hamari hotel me. Toh bhala mein unse jhooth kese bolu? Aur jhooth bolna sahi bhi toh nahi Maa.

Shweta : Arre toh ye bataane ki zaroorat kya tha ki Veer tumhara bhai hai. Bas keh deti ki hum jaante hai ek dusre ko. Baat khatam!

Bhumika : Aap bhul rahi hai ki Miss Kaera Veer ke saath aayi hai yaha. Matlab wo Veer ko acche se jaanti hai.

Shweta : Wahi toh meri samajh nahi aa raha ki ye Veer bhala Kaera ke contact me kese aaya? Kismat toh dekho uski. Anyways, mein ek client se milne jaa rahi hu. Tum yaha dekhna sab sahi rahe. Okay?

Bhumika : Hmm!

Aur Shweta jaldbaazi me nikal gayi.

Wahi Veer aur Kaera apne apne lunch me lage hue the.

Veer : Kesa hai? Khaana?

Kaera : Not the best but bura bhi nahi hai. It's good! I like it. A little bit oily.

Veer (smiles) : By the way, thanks for coming. Mujhe nahi laga tha aap aaogi.

Kaera : Umm... Yadi aur koi din hota toh waqai aana thoda mushqil hota. It's Sunday today. So, I postponed my Sunday's work.

Veer : Huh? Sunday work se aapka kya matlab hai? Sunday bhi work karti ho aap?

Kaera : Yes! Every day! Including sundays.

Kaera ki baat se Veer shocked tha. Harr din kaam karna toh jese naamumkin tha. Uske bawajood Kaera ne itni asaani se jawaab de diya. Aur dukhad baat toh ye thi ki Kaera ko ye sab normal lag raha tha. Veer chup chaap Kaera ko dekh raha tha jo apne khaane me busy thi. Sach kaha jaaye toh iss waqt Veer ko Kaera par bada hi taras aa raha tha. Iss ladki ke paas sab kuch tha bhi aur nahi bhi.

Koi dekh ke kahega ki ye itni sundar sii ladki roz kaam karti hai? Kisi robot ki tarah? Bilkul nahi!

Veer : Mein puchne wala tha aapse par bhul gaya tha. Aap toh Delhi me thi na? Toh aap yaha kyu aayi? Mumbai me?

Kaera (khuspusaate hue) : I came for you.

Veer : Hmm? Mujhe kuch sunaayi nahi diya.

Kaera : I... I had some work. That's why...

Veer : Okay!

'I think I can check her now. Right?'

[Yes! Of course!]

'Alright then. Check!!!'

[Name : Kaera

Age : 26

Bio : Kaera, Kishor ki eklauti beti hai. xxxxxx company me as a CEO work karti hai, jo ki uske hi pita ki company hai aur worldwide famous hai. Aaye din wo iss country se uss country travel karti rehti hai. Company ki backbone Kaera hi hai. She's like a queen who knows how to rule. She's well versed in languages, literature, business, fashion styling, etc. Kaera ko phool behad pasand hai. Inn sab ke bawajood, there's a part of her which is lost somewhere. Kuch emotions hai jinhe wo mehsoos nahi kar paati theek se. Jald se jald yadi iska upaay nahi nikaala gaya toh Kaera ko iss daldal se nikaalna boht mushqil ho jaega.

Favourability : 48
Relationship : Good Friends.]

Kaera ka status padhne ke baad Veer ke muh se bas yahi nikla tha.

Veer : Wow!!

Kaera : Hmm?

Veer : No! Nothing!

Veer bechara status dekh ke hi blown ho chuka tha. Jaha Kaera itni talented thi, wahi dusri orr uske saath kuch gadbad bhi thi. Jiska samadhaan Veer ko jald se jald nikaalna tha, warna dikkat ho jaane wali thi.

Kaera : I know now.

Veer : Hmm?

Kaera : You told me some things that day. Right? Uss raat. When we were in club. Remember?

Veer : Ah... That...

Kaera : Tumne kaha tha ki... Jitna iss zindagi se dosti karna chaahoge, ye utna hi dur bhaagti hai. Kuch logo ke paas kaabiliyat hoti hai toh wo apni zindagi badal lete hai. Kuch ke paas kaabiliyat hoti hai par halaat unhe apni zindagi na badalne par majboor kar dete hai. Aur jinke paas kaabiliyat nahi hoti wo bas kismat ke liye baithe rehte hai. Ki kisi na kisi din unki kismat chamkegi.

'Did I say that? Mein kab se itni philosophy bhari baatein karne laga?'

[Tumne hi kaha tha, you idiot.]

'Shut up Pari! Fine! I remember now.'

[Hmph~]

Veer : Jii! Toh?

Kaera : I think I know now. Ki kyu mujhe wo relatable laga tha. Kyuki I'm the same Veer.

Veer : ??

Kaera : I'm the same. Kuch logo ke paas kaabiliyat hoti hai par halaat unhe zindagi na badalne par majboor kar dete hai. Ye mein hi toh hu na Veer? Look! I'm... I'm skilled. But uske bawajood... I don't know what's life? Why do people live like this? Pyaar karna, shaadi karna, kids and then earn karna aur fir iss world se chale jaana. What's the meaning behind it?

Veer : Toh aapke hisaab se kya karna chahiye?

Kaera : I... I don't know. But kya yahi hai? Is this life? I don't understand. Aise me toh I have Money, I have Power, par uske baad bhi... Why do I feel incomplete?

Veer (smiles) : You need to find love. Family love too.

Kaera : Love? What is it?

Veer : Jab aap dil se kisi ke liye care karo aur uske bina na reh sako. Then that means ki aap uss vyakti se pyaar karne lage ho.

Kaera : Hmm? Okay! Toh how can I find this love?

Veer : Umm... Ye toh aapko khud karna hoga. You can date someone.

Kaera : Hmm? No! Mujhe proposals aate hai on a regular basis. But I don't like any of them. So, I don't date.

Veer : Umm... Then, intezaar kariye. Koi na koi aapko wo khushiyan dene zaroor aaega.

[Aur wo mein hi rahunga hahaha~]

'Shut up! Tumhe lagta hai she will fall for me? Kaha wo... Aur kaha mein... It's impossible.'

[Tum bhul rahe ho ki tumhaare paas mein hu.]

'Ohh! Are you hitting on me? Haha~'

[W-Wh-What!? Y-You! That's... N-Nooo! Hmph! Stupid.]

Pal bhar ke liye Veer ko aisa laga jese Pari sharma rahi thi.

'Hey? Are you blushing? Don't tell me...'

[Ah?? W-Wh-What? N-No wayyyyy! Stupid! Idiot! I hate you! G-Go to hell. Hmph~]

'Hey!! Chill!!'

Kaera : Okay! I'll see. I don't understand much though.

'Inhe samjhaana boht mushqil hone waala hai.'

Kaera (mann me) : Koi aisa jiski mujhe parvaah ho? Hmm...

Veer ka lesson kuch khaas toh nahi tha par Kaera ke dimaag me kam se kam ek baat toh baith gayi thi. Yahi ki usse apna pyaar khojna padega.

Dekhte hi dekhte, aaj ka lunch ka samay bhi beet gaya aur shaam hote hi Veer aur Kaera Mirror gallery ke sthaan par pohuch chuke the.

Ground tha basically, jisme poora set-up kiya gaya tha.

Bilkul wese hi jese aksar sheher me circus ke tents laga karte the.

Bada sa hoarding bhi laga hua tha, kayi saare banners jo invite karne aur advertisements ke liye lagaaye gaye the.

Aur toh aur dekhte hi dekhte itni saari bheed jama hone lagi thi ki lag raha tha aaj ka ye silsila derr raat tak chalega.

Kaera : Too much crowd.

Veer : Well! Bheed toh hai. Kya aapne pehle kabhi mirror gallery dekhi hai?

Kaera : No!

Veer (surprised) : Waqai? Mujhe laga aapne toh dekhi hi hogi. Kyuki ye foreign me rehta hi hai. Aur aap toh foreign jaati rehti ho na. So I thought...

Kaera : Nahi! I haven't seen it.

Veer (smiles) : Aaj aapke saare first timers karwa raha hu mein.

[Sex bhi first timer karwa diya tha. Hahahaha~]

'Fuck you!!!!'

[Hahahaha~]

Kaera : I guess so.

Ye sabhi baatein kar rahe the jab announcement hua aur line lagna shuru ho gayi.

Andar jaane ke liye ek baar me do se zyaada entries allowed nahi thi. Ya toh akele jaiye ya toh kisi ek jan ke saath. Luckily, Veer aur Kaera do hi the. Aur Raghu aur Jassi bhi.

Veer line ke second last me khada hua tha Kaera ke saath aur Raghu aur Jassi theek uske peeche.

Wahi last the. Unke baad dusri line alag se bann rahi thi par tabhi waha ka jo sab kuch manage kar raha tha wo aaya aur usne announcement kiya.

"Dekhiye! Bas! Ab iske baad aaj ke liye aur koi entries nahi hoengi. Yahi 50 entries bhar jaengi. Paid waali entries kal se shuru kii jaengi. Maafi chaahta hu. Dhanyavaad!"

Aur uske itna kehte hi, logo ki gaaliya shuru ho gayi. Jo apna samay nikaal ke aaye the, unka maatha thanka aur wo manager se waha gaali galoch karne lage. Par jese tese ye maamla nipta toh thodi shaanti hui.

Dheere dheere line aage badhti jaa rahi thi. Aur Kaera bas curious sii nigaaho se sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Aas paas ke log usse hi taad rahe the. Kyuki, aam public me wo kisi model ki tarah lag rahi thi waha.

Yadi Kaera kile peeche do bade bade bodyguards na khade hote toh pakke se ek aad aadmi ne aa kar line zaroor maari hoti usse.

Kaera : It's taking too long.

Veer : Wo isliye, kyuki ek baar me ek ya do hi log enter kar sakte hai aur jab tak wo baahar nahi nikal jaate tab tak baaki log enter nahi kar sakte.

Kaera : Strange!

Veer : Yeah!

Kuch samay ke baad jese hi Veer aur Kaera ka number aaya toh Veer andar jaane se pehle bas ek baar palta aur Jassi ko dekh dheere se bola,
"Jese hi call du, andar aa jaana."

Aur itna bol Veer aage badh gaya.

Par Jassi jo wahi khada hua tha, wo ye sunte hi wahi jamm gaya. Aur jese hi usse samajh me aaya,

Jassi : Raghu! Support ke liye call karo. Abhi!

Raghu : Huh? Kya hua?

Jassi : Jesa keh raha hu wesa karo. Sawaal mat pucho.

Raghu : Ek minute! Iska matlab...??

Raghu kuch sochte hi aage badhne ke liye hua toh Jassi ne usse pakad kar wahi rok liya.

Raghu : Jassi?

Jassi : Usne kaha hai... Call karu toh andar aa jaana. Abhi mein jo keh raha hu wo karo.

Raghu : O-Okay!!

Idhar Veer jese hi Kaera ke saath andar jaane ke liye entrance par aaya. Usne bagal me baithe ek ladke ko dekha.

Aur usse dekhte hi Veer ne usse check kiya. Check karte hi, Veer ki aankhein felti chali gayi.

Ladka : Jaiye andar!

Andar jese hi Veer aur Kaera aaye. Peeche ka gate band ho gaya.

Aur andar, ek lamba corridor tha jaha aage jaake ek mod tha right me. Par poore corridor ke agal bagal bas sheeshe hi sheeshe lage hue the.

Poori zameen par ek laal carpet bicha hua tha aur lights bhi keval laal rang ki madhham madhham jal rahi thi.

Maano jese Mirror gallery me nahi, kisi horror gallery me aa gaye ho.

Kaera ne apna perr aage badhaaya badhne ke liye par tabhi uski kalaayi peeche se kisi ne pakad lii.

Peeche mud usne dekha toh paaya ki Veer tha. Par...

Par Veer ke chehre par koi bhaav nahi the. Uske muh se bas ek hi vaakya nikla aur wo bhi itni gambheer awaaz me ki Kaera kuch bol hi na paayi.

Veer : Stay with me!

Kaera ki naazuk sii kalaayi Veer ke mazboot haath ki giraft me thi.

Kyuki Veer jaanta tha. Wo sahi tha.

Idhar aane se kuch din pehle hi...

Jis din usne apna dhandha shuru kiya tha. Uss din hi Mirror gallery ka advertisement karne ke liye truck nikla tha.

Pehle toh Veer ne usse aisa hi samjha tha par uss raat usne truck ko check bhi kiya tha. Aur check karte hi usse uss raat ye jaan'ne ko mila tha.

[Mirro Gallery Advertising Truck.

Bio : Fake announcement by the Buyer. Mirror gallery currently is not being held by the owner.]

Ye padhte hi Veer ko ek jhatka laga tha. Owner hi jab ye nahi karwa raha hai toh kaun karwa raha hai ye?

Aur uske baad hi uss din hi usse kuch aur bhi dekhne ko mila tha. Kyuki truck ke nikal jaane ke baad hi...

*Ding*

[Mission : Take Kaera to Mirror Gallery.

Reward : ??? Points.
Mission Failure Penalty : 1000 Points Deduction.]

Yahi toh kaaran tha. Ki aaj Veer yaha Kaera ke saath tha. Aur usse jese abhaas tha ki kuch gadbad thi.

Aur usse ye bhi abhaas ho gaya tha ki shayad inn sab ke peeche uss aadmi ka haath tha.

Slogan!!!!

Keval itna hi nahi, yaha aane se pehle hi veer ki baat subah Suhana se bhi hui thi.

Veer : Aaj mein free nahi rahunga. Maybe shayad kayi din nahi rahu.

Suhana : Ohh accha! Ab jab free hoke mein aur Sonu tumhaare paas aana chaah rahe hai toh nakhre toh dekho zara. Itne bade aadmi nahi bann gaye tum abhi Veer ki mujhe mana kar sako. Samajh gaye.

Veer : It's not that... Baat kuch aur hai.

Suhana : Ohh accha!? Kya baat hai bhala?

Veer : SLOGAN!

*Silence*

Suhana : H-Huh??

Veer : Shaam ko yadi meri taraf se speed dial aaye. Then samajh jaana I need help. Police! I'll leave them to you. Aur yadi koi aur madad kar sako toh wo bhi... See ya!

*Call ends*

Suhana : What? Wait! H-Hello??? V-Veer??

'Damn it! Call cut kar diya. Damn you!!! That idiot fucker...'

Wo gusse me aate hi bagal me rakhe Teddy ko peetne lagi.

'What does he think he's doing? Paagal hai kya? Idiot!!! Damn him! He'll get killed. Slogan? Isse pata bhi hai kaun hai wo? This fucker... Ugh!!!'

Subah Veer yahi keh ke aaj apne iss mission par nikla tha. Aur yahi kaaran tha ki wo points ikhatta karne ki bharpoor koshish kar raha tha.

Sadly, uske 200 points barbaad ho chuke the. Aur bache hue 100 points wo stats me laga sakta tha par... Wo unhe quest ke liye bacha ke rakha hua tha.

Aur abhi abhi andar aane se pehle bhi...

Veer ne jese hi uss ladke ko check kiya toh usse ye dekhne ko mila tha.

[Name : Bhavesh

Age : 28
Bio : Just a local resident. Today working as a fake employee. Paise ki tangi hai.

Favourability : 0
Relationship : Strangers]

'Fake employee' shabd padhte hi Veer ka shaq yakeen me badal chuka tha.

Kaera ka haath thaame wo peeche hi tha uske. Ekdum nazdeek.

Kaera ki kuch samajh me nahi aaya. Par usne Veer ko apna haath pakde rehne diya.

Wo ek kadam chalti, rukti aur bagal me lage sheesho me apni chhavi dekhti.

Alag alag prakaar ke sheeshe the. Kuch me unki chhavi lambi dikhaayi deti toh kuch me choti. Kuch me wo mote prateet hote toh kuch me patle.

Kaera ne apna mask nikaal Veer ko thama diya jo usne apne jeb me rakh liya.

Aur kaafi samay baad wo muskuraayi.

Mirror par haule se haath ferr wo usme apni chhavi ko dekh rahi thi.

Kaera (smiles) : We look thin in this one.

Par bechara Veer iss waqt mirror gallery me least interested tha. Uska poora ka poora dhyaan aas paas ke vatavaran me tha. Uski nazre baaj ki tarah jese koi harqat pakadne ko dhund rahi thi.

Aur tabhi...

Achanak se hi harr jagah dhua dhua sa hone laga.

Aur Veer ki pakad Kaera ki kalaayi par aur mazboot ho gayi.

Usne Kaera ko aur bhi apne sameep kheench liya.

*Ssssssssss*

Ki awaaz se waha dhua hi dhua bharta jaa raha tha.

'Check!'

[Smoke.
Bio : Just the normal smoke, emitting from smoke machine.]

'It's not poisonous.'

Smoke toh poisonous nahi thi. Par jese Veer ko kisi aur baat ki tension lene ki zaroorat thi.

Kyuki tabhi uss smoke me hi neeche zameen ke side kuch harqat hoti hui nazar aayi. Maano jese kayi saare perr chalte hue aa rahe the.

Aur ye dekhte hi uske shareer ke baal khade ho gaye.

Kaera ko usne forun hi apne peeche kiya aur uske saamne uski shield bann ke khada ho gaya.

[Be prepared! Kuch gadbad hai. I think they are people.]

'Let them come...!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
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And sorry for the wait. Thoda baahar aaya hua hu.
Mirror gallery ke liye veer ne kaera ko mana liya. Kaera ke sath lunch bhi krne gya Hotel me jahan uski step maa or sister jiski malkin hai. Banda janta hai kahan chot dena hai dukhti ragg pakdna Sikh gya hai humara veer, Dono maa beti ko jhatka de diya. Start toh receptionist se hi kr diya kaera se dekha na gya veer ko avoid krna bechari receptionist bhi Kya kre jb malkin hi aisi ho. Pari ka bich -2 me bolna ek alag hi tadka lgta hai maza ajata hai. Akhirkar mirror gallery me entry maar hi liya kaera ke sath lekin pehle jassi ko Alert kr gya har trh ke situation ke liye prepare rhe usse pehle veer ne ye bhi pta lgaya liya ki ye fake hai jiske tehat usne suhana se bhi help ke liye bol diya ke jb call kre madad bhej de. Veer ko shq tha ke kahin slogan toh nahi insab ke piche jiska shq yahan yakin me badal gya. Ab shayad agle bhag me action dekhne milega . Amazing mind-blowing update
 
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