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बेहतरीन समीक्षा। रागीनिजी का झलक देखने मिला, कुछ दूसरा तरीका से मत सोचिएगा प्लीज। आप लेखनी के माध्यम से बहुत कुछ अच्छा तरीके से समझा सकती है और लिखती भी है। बहुत कम समीक्षक इतना बिस्तार से समीक्षा कर पाते है। आपका आभार। धन्यबाद।I'm back again...
Mistake search karne ka try kiya bohut par spelling mistakes ke alawa mujhe aur kuch nahi mila. To ab main apni bhadaas nikalne wali hu.
Matlab jo sari baate mann me thi wo likh rahi hu.
1) Sabse pehli baat sir ye... Ye kya kar diya h sir??Main apne balo ki rubber band nikal k kahi rakh deti hu toh 5 min baad usko bhul jati hu. Aur aap? Update 2 me veer ka khareeda hua woh flower vase. Usse aap update 85 me waapas leke aaye? Jaan loge kya sir?
Itni minute minute details aap kese yaad rakhte ho? Aur fir uss scene ka jo impact pada tha... Mujhe yaad h I got goosebumps... Who does that?
2) Koi bhi character faltu nahi h. I repeat... Koi bhi character faltu nahi h. How??? Aapne veer ko sonia ki car se bhidwaya jiska peecha Aatish ke goons kar rahe the. Fir unke goons Aatish se connected the. Aatish sonia ke peeche tha kyuki usse Kaera chahiye thi. Kaera is a childhood friend of Sonia. Aur Aatish ko wo order Slogan deta hai who is again related to Kaera's father for past reasons. Aur fir uske upar se Slogan ko bhi koi peeche se uss se bhi bada villain dara raha h. What is this interconnectivity Sir????I'm mindblown already.
3) Uske baad the story of three best friends. Sonia, Kaera, Ava. Can we take a moment to appreciate just how beautifully this segment is written? Ye teeno hi childhood friends h. Par issi me hume Kaera ka past dekhne ko milta h. Fir sonia ka past jo issi se connected h. Upar se suhana ka past nahi dekha humne jisme shayad Pushkar ka zikr mile hume. Uske baad guru jii aur unka chela jo nazar aate h issi me. Uske baad slogan ka past issi me. Aur abhi toh Ava ka humne dekha hi nahi. Kya kar rahe ho aap ye?Aur to aur kishor ka bhi kuch raha hoga. Kaera ki mom Archana alag. Fir slogan ki wife ka alag. Kishor ke yaha kaam karne wala wo aadmi Madhav alag. Mind boggling h sab.
4) Aur ab sabse wonderful cheez jo mujhe lagi h ab tak. The conversations. Main pichle 2 saal se lagatar stories padh rahi hu. Par mne ye almost har stories me dekha h ki characters kuch samay ke baad apne characters se hat jaate h thoda. Wo aise dialogues keh dete h jo unke according rehte hi nhi. Unki personality se ekdum differ karte h. Par main pichle 2 mahino se ye story padh rahi hu. Aur mujhe abhi tak, Abhi tak aisa kahi bhi mehsoos nahi hua ki kisi character ne differently behave kiya ho. Nidhi reserved thi, wo abhi bhi wesi hi h. Shreya aloof thi wo wesi hi h. Ha pyaar ki waja se unme badlaav aa raha h. Par unhone apne characteristics nahi khoye h.
Amazing sir.
5) Aur shock dena to koi apse seekhe. Updates ke end me jo aap thrill aur suspense dete ho. Kya kahe sir uske baare me? Curiosity itni zyada badh jati h ki main office hours k beech me bhi kabhi kabhi forum check karne baith jati hu. Kahi update to nahi aa gaya.Mne kabhi nahi socha tha ki main iss tarah ki stories ki bhi deewani ho jaungi. Marvelous work Sir!
6) Uske baad perfection. Aaj aap mujhe bata hi do please. Aap update likhne ke pehle aisa kon sa jadu tona karke baithte ho???Har ek update masterpiece kese h? Kese??? Jawaad do! Janta jawab chahti h.
Mne kitni hi stories padh lii, par aisa aaj tak kahi nhi hua jaha har ek update itna behtar mila ho. Aap bata do aap kya karte ho?
Yadi evil practice bhi h koi to bata do wo bhi. Main bura nahi manungi. I swear.
Har update quality me itna consistent kese ho sakta h??
7) Ek baat inform bhi karni h. Mujhe nahi pata aap forum me baaki thread visit karte ho ya nahi. Par aaj kal system wali stories badh rahi h ab.Aur toh aur blue text with big size bhi kayi sari stories me dekhne ko mil rahe h??? Xforum k Influencer ban gye kya sir aap peeth peeche??
8) Mein baar baar Koshish karti hu ki kahi koi mistake mujhe mil jaye. Par jitna aur deeply padhti hu utna samajh me aata h ki ye kitni high level jaa rahi h story... Apne bar itna high set kar diya h sir... Ki ab... Baki stories me wo baat hi nhi lagti... (No hate to any writer) Wo bhi accha likhte h, par mere liye aap ki writing bohut jaldi connect hoti h. Mne try kiya ki kuch alag stories padh saku... Par... wo starting ke kuch updates me thik lagti h par uske baad...
9) You have a very unique writing style sir. Yadi bina naam se apki koi story post ho rahi hogi. Mujhe bakiyo ka to nhi pata par main zaroor apko recognise kar lungi ki ye werewolf sir ki writing h...
10) Pranajal ka character kitna dimaag se likha h aapne... Kitni yareef karu? Jitna main usse hate karti hu, mujhe ye baat maanni padegi ki uska character bohut hi kamal ka likha h apne... Aur mujhe dur dur tak nahi laga tha ki karunesh ek bura insaan niklega... What a twist...
11) Aur wo pahad wali ladki... Shayad mein janti hu wo kon ho sakti h. Kuch naam soche h mne...
Julia aur Ruchika... Julia kaera ki maid. Aur Ruchika kaera ki secretary. Kishor itna overprotective person h... Ho sakta h usne inn dono me se kisi ko secret agent ki tarah rakha ho kaera k liye? Ya fir madhuri ya priya? Dono bas ek baar hi nazar aayi thi... Shayad wo slogan se related ho? Kyuki swati toh mar chuki h... Wo nahi hogi... Yahi sawal sabse bada h ki wo ladki veer ke saath ki thi ya uske khilaaf????
12) Aur ek khaas baat. Writing relatable hona. Ladkiyo ka conversation. Beech beech me English ka use karna. It's so modern. Aisa lagta h main story dekh rahi hu. Hum colleagues bhi aapas me aise hi baat karte hai. Hindi ke saath saath English bolte rehte h... Uske baad ladkiyo ka 'hmph' karna.Why is it so accurate? We do that a lot. Jab hamare man ka kuch nahi hota to ham bhi 'hmph' karte h...
13) At last, jo aapko tang karte h daily updates dene k liye ya update time se na aane par gaali dete h... To unhe ignore kariye sir... Wo nalle h...Main job karti hu... Mujhe pata h... Job me aadmi ko kitna chooste h...
Aap aram se likhiye aur fir post kijiye... We'll wait.
Thank you so much... Once again...
Mne bohut baate likh daali...
Ho sake toh padh lena sir...
Love your work.Be safe sir!!!
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I'm back again...
Mistake search karne ka try kiya bohut par spelling mistakes ke alawa mujhe aur kuch nahi mila. To ab main apni bhadaas nikalne wali hu.
Matlab jo sari baate mann me thi wo likh rahi hu.
1) Sabse pehli baat sir ye... Ye kya kar diya h sir??Main apne balo ki rubber band nikal k kahi rakh deti hu toh 5 min baad usko bhul jati hu. Aur aap? Update 2 me veer ka khareeda hua woh flower vase. Usse aap update 85 me waapas leke aaye? Jaan loge kya sir?
Itni minute minute details aap kese yaad rakhte ho? Aur fir uss scene ka jo impact pada tha... Mujhe yaad h I got goosebumps... Who does that?
2) Koi bhi character faltu nahi h. I repeat... Koi bhi character faltu nahi h. How??? Aapne veer ko sonia ki car se bhidwaya jiska peecha Aatish ke goons kar rahe the. Fir unke goons Aatish se connected the. Aatish sonia ke peeche tha kyuki usse Kaera chahiye thi. Kaera is a childhood friend of Sonia. Aur Aatish ko wo order Slogan deta hai who is again related to Kaera's father for past reasons. Aur fir uske upar se Slogan ko bhi koi peeche se uss se bhi bada villain dara raha h. What is this interconnectivity Sir????I'm mindblown already.
3) Uske baad the story of three best friends. Sonia, Kaera, Ava. Can we take a moment to appreciate just how beautifully this segment is written? Ye teeno hi childhood friends h. Par issi me hume Kaera ka past dekhne ko milta h. Fir sonia ka past jo issi se connected h. Upar se suhana ka past nahi dekha humne jisme shayad Pushkar ka zikr mile hume. Uske baad guru jii aur unka chela jo nazar aate h issi me. Uske baad slogan ka past issi me. Aur abhi toh Ava ka humne dekha hi nahi. Kya kar rahe ho aap ye?Aur to aur kishor ka bhi kuch raha hoga. Kaera ki mom Archana alag. Fir slogan ki wife ka alag. Kishor ke yaha kaam karne wala wo aadmi Madhav alag. Mind boggling h sab.
4) Aur ab sabse wonderful cheez jo mujhe lagi h ab tak. The conversations. Main pichle 2 saal se lagatar stories padh rahi hu. Par mne ye almost har stories me dekha h ki characters kuch samay ke baad apne characters se hat jaate h thoda. Wo aise dialogues keh dete h jo unke according rehte hi nhi. Unki personality se ekdum differ karte h. Par main pichle 2 mahino se ye story padh rahi hu. Aur mujhe abhi tak, Abhi tak aisa kahi bhi mehsoos nahi hua ki kisi character ne differently behave kiya ho. Nidhi reserved thi, wo abhi bhi wesi hi h. Shreya aloof thi wo wesi hi h. Ha pyaar ki waja se unme badlaav aa raha h. Par unhone apne characteristics nahi khoye h.
Amazing sir.
5) Aur shock dena to koi apse seekhe. Updates ke end me jo aap thrill aur suspense dete ho. Kya kahe sir uske baare me? Curiosity itni zyada badh jati h ki main office hours k beech me bhi kabhi kabhi forum check karne baith jati hu. Kahi update to nahi aa gaya.Mne kabhi nahi socha tha ki main iss tarah ki stories ki bhi deewani ho jaungi. Marvelous work Sir!
6) Uske baad perfection. Aaj aap mujhe bata hi do please. Aap update likhne ke pehle aisa kon sa jadu tona karke baithte ho???Har ek update masterpiece kese h? Kese??? Jawaad do! Janta jawab chahti h.
Mne kitni hi stories padh lii, par aisa aaj tak kahi nhi hua jaha har ek update itna behtar mila ho. Aap bata do aap kya karte ho?
Yadi evil practice bhi h koi to bata do wo bhi. Main bura nahi manungi. I swear.
Har update quality me itna consistent kese ho sakta h??
7) Ek baat inform bhi karni h. Mujhe nahi pata aap forum me baaki thread visit karte ho ya nahi. Par aaj kal system wali stories badh rahi h ab.Aur toh aur blue text with big size bhi kayi sari stories me dekhne ko mil rahe h??? Xforum k Influencer ban gye kya sir aap peeth peeche??
8) Mein baar baar Koshish karti hu ki kahi koi mistake mujhe mil jaye. Par jitna aur deeply padhti hu utna samajh me aata h ki ye kitni high level jaa rahi h story... Apne bar itna high set kar diya h sir... Ki ab... Baki stories me wo baat hi nhi lagti... (No hate to any writer) Wo bhi accha likhte h, par mere liye aap ki writing bohut jaldi connect hoti h. Mne try kiya ki kuch alag stories padh saku... Par... wo starting ke kuch updates me thik lagti h par uske baad...
9) You have a very unique writing style sir. Yadi bina naam se apki koi story post ho rahi hogi. Mujhe bakiyo ka to nhi pata par main zaroor apko recognise kar lungi ki ye werewolf sir ki writing h...
10) Pranajal ka character kitna dimaag se likha h aapne... Kitni yareef karu? Jitna main usse hate karti hu, mujhe ye baat maanni padegi ki uska character bohut hi kamal ka likha h apne... Aur mujhe dur dur tak nahi laga tha ki karunesh ek bura insaan niklega... What a twist...
11) Aur wo pahad wali ladki... Shayad mein janti hu wo kon ho sakti h. Kuch naam soche h mne...
Julia aur Ruchika... Julia kaera ki maid. Aur Ruchika kaera ki secretary. Kishor itna overprotective person h... Ho sakta h usne inn dono me se kisi ko secret agent ki tarah rakha ho kaera k liye? Ya fir madhuri ya priya? Dono bas ek baar hi nazar aayi thi... Shayad wo slogan se related ho? Kyuki swati toh mar chuki h... Wo nahi hogi... Yahi sawal sabse bada h ki wo ladki veer ke saath ki thi ya uske khilaaf????
12) Aur ek khaas baat. Writing relatable hona. Ladkiyo ka conversation. Beech beech me English ka use karna. It's so modern. Aisa lagta h main story dekh rahi hu. Hum colleagues bhi aapas me aise hi baat karte hai. Hindi ke saath saath English bolte rehte h... Uske baad ladkiyo ka 'hmph' karna.Why is it so accurate? We do that a lot. Jab hamare man ka kuch nahi hota to ham bhi 'hmph' karte h...
13) At last, jo aapko tang karte h daily updates dene k liye ya update time se na aane par gaali dete h... To unhe ignore kariye sir... Wo nalle h...Main job karti hu... Mujhe pata h... Job me aadmi ko kitna chooste h...
Aap aram se likhiye aur fir post kijiye... We'll wait.
Thank you so much... Once again...
Mne bohut baate likh daali...
Ho sake toh padh lena sir...
Love your work.Be safe sir!!!